- Necromancer. Chapter 6
- Necromancer. Chapter 7
- Necromancer. Chapter 8
- Necromancer. Chapter 9
- Necromancer. Chapter 10
- Necromancer. Chapter 11
- Necromancer. Chapter 12
- Necromancer. Chapter 13
- Necromancer. Chapter 14: Introduction
- Necromancer. Chapter 15
- Necromancer. Chapter 16
- Necromancer. Chapter 17
- Necromancer. Chapter 19
- Necromancer. Chapter 20
- Necromancer. Chapter 21
- Necromancer. Chapter 22
- Necromancer. Chapter 23
- Necromancer. Chapter 24
- Necromancer. Chapter 25
- Necromancer. Chapter 26
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I'll start to fuck and use, her lips were shaky, she had no choice.
- Open your eyes. - I said quietly, not moving, she slowly and hesitantly lifted her eyelids. And her eyes are brown, beautiful, they no longer have that hatred that I noticed earlier, now she is so defenseless, broken, and this pain at the bottom of endless lakes, why don't I give a damn anymore? Unexpectedly for myself, I kissed her, gently, gently, gently touching her lips and sharing one breath.
Such things act very strongly on girls, a kiss for them is something significant, and now she unwittingly leans forward, just to not interrupt this new feeling for her. Veririra gasped softly when I entered her, slowly, slowly, trying not to cause pain and discomfort, yet I was a little greedy with the size of my penis, not every girl can calmly accept him in her bosom. Her hands wrapped my neck, I felt the tension of her thighs, her breathing lost and not in a hurry to accelerate. It was pleasant to move in it, the hot and slippery walls of the vagina firmly hugged my penis and massaged it, forced it with obvious resistance to move in front, stretching and adapting. Veririra quietly oyknula when I went too far and touched the head of the cervix, I immediately realized my mistake, but did not hurry to get out soon, but on the contrary, he stopped and began to move very carefully inside to get used to these sensations. pleasure. For me, this was also a novelty, for my short stay as a “great magician,” I used to take women roughly, abruptly, with a jerk to go to the very end, not really worrying about someone else’s feelings except my own. It hurt, made women scream and beg, but I was agitated and made my heart beat faster, adrenaline spilled into my blood, and now, now everything is different. Now a young girl is under me, she is wholly owned by me, for once she will not dare to say no to me, she will obediently spread her legs, even if I tell her that I am going to completely break her, it is because of this that feeling is gone ... I do not know how to explain it when you take a woman, press her to the bed, feel how she tries to escape, feel her sense of hopelessness, her protest and pain, this is what the primitive instinct awakens and creates bliss, now it is not ... Now there is humility and willingness to endure, now we are about The ba is aware that her life and destiny are in my hands ... Having made her take an oath to me that I tied her hand and foot, I personally threw a huge burden on my neck. Now she is not just a girl, which I hold in submission under the fear of reprisal, now she is mine, now she belongs to me, and I no longer see joy in hurting her, on the contrary, I want to make her happy, how difficult it is sometimes understand myself ... She read it in my eyes, understood everything at once, slowly relaxed and exhaled, now everything is in my hands. Romantics can talk with ecstasy about the kinship of souls and community of views, they can talk about love, but now I'm in it, I feel the walls of her vagina compress, I feel her heart beating, I feel her breath on my lips, and I do not see more intimacy. She gave herself to me, for the first time, gave herself truly and I could make her believe that everything would be fine. At such moments I don’t recognize myself, all the problems disappear somewhere, bitterness to the whole world disappears into a short world, I become a different person, and I like this person a little more than myself.
Veririra flared up, billions of pulses ran through her body, she moaned softly, and her hips moved, giving way to meet me.I smiled, for once I smiled, purely and sincerely, how does this smile not look like a familiar smirk. I began to move faster, I already heard such an exciting squelch, her vagina was already filled with juice and asked not to stop, and I had no doubt. How much pleasure such a primitive process can bring, and how crushing a female orgasm can be when a man manages to bring her body to a peak. There were no screams, there were no pretentious moans, she clung to me with her whole body and shook, everything squeezed inside her, my cock seemed to try to bother me, I with great difficulty resisted not to end in her bowels. When Veririra opened her arms relaxed and closed her eyes, I slowly pulled out my penis and at the same time burst out with several hot, powerful streams that settled on my slender tummy with beautiful streaks.
- I'm in the shower, join. - I said hoarsely in my voice and slowly got out of bed, my knees trembled a little, and in my head it was easy and empty, some new state ...
- Don't tell anyone about this. - I asked Veririra when we were reclining in the hot water bath.
- I will not tell, Sir. - Quietly, without opening her eyes, the girl answered me. I smiled again, gently and gently massaging her breasts, stroking her nipples. She immediately and unmistakably understood what I was talking about; it did not require words or unnecessary explanations, in some matters women are extremely insightful. I myself was not completely clear what came over me. Apparently, a few days of reflection did not pass without consequences, I asked myself too many questions and found too many answers ...
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I had to wait a long time, but it was still a long time ... and it was incredibly pleasant
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URAAA !!!
Damn and we waited a long time for the release of the chapter ...
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Tears from the eyes. Thanks author.
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Author. I hope this part is so short because we are bored with you, and not for other reasons)
When to wait for the next one? And I understood correctly. What did Nastya and Larvinu the magician killed in the lock with Veres?
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The volume is quite normal, most of the authors on the resource sculpt no more than 3-4 pages per chapter, it was me who suffered something in the wrong steppe and now the usual volume seems “short”.
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Subsequent parts will also be 5 pages? (((As they say, it is necessary to be equal to the best ;-) let the rest catch up in volume)
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No, in subsequent articles I will try not to mess like that.
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And what about Nastya and Larvinoy? He still killed them with the hands of a magician?
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He got rid of them.
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Dark Chekich throw off please 11 and 12 parts pliz without them nothing is clear
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Pay it. Cost a penny. you will not lose anything and the author is pleased. In the comments to before. Parts of the author promised to make 13 free. And so all the parts are paid. All honest.
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Not everyone can pay - for example, I - I have no wallets of all sorts, not grown up. And hi Chekich! And yes, I remember what you said without a soft sign to write, but then it sounds pretty bad.
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What does it mean - not grown? What are you doing here at that age?
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Years are not far from the majority, but as the father says - not mature enough. But in general - I'm reading here, I read more interesting. And by the way, I don’t understand - what a stupid question is “What are you doing here at that age? “- In my opinion, everything is simple - I READ.
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The question is not stupid, it all depends on how much you are, because the law of the Russian Federation prohibits the distribution of erotic / pornographic content among persons under 18 years of age.
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It is very nice to see the continuation of this story, so get your deserved 100 rubles.
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Eh, if I had 100 rubles to my account, I would have already become hasla and not steamed about anything))
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Newremo I can not my country is not in the list
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What the ... Author, first, how are you? All OK? If good, then that's great. If not then good luck with your endeavors. And yes, I read komenty, what the hell can I remove them? Is there any bans on this site? If not then this is bad. I have a lot of things that I want to write so I will throw the pieces.
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Secondly, did you read the novels ?! Or decided to go to the lyrics? Or fell on your chest? What kind of garbage? No, everything was good at the beginning, he took up his mind and all that (although I didn’t understand what personal guard he was talking about, or he decided to train their skills and loyalty on his own or mock me). The question is, what the hell happened with his behavior and tastes? What the... !? He loved violence! One had the impression that he literally pulls the manna of suffering and pain from all of them, getting a buff to strength and, in addition, pleasure as if from drugs. Now he is an ordinary person again, and not a fucking necromancer and demon worshiper of what he should be. Seriously, it feels like I got to the wrong site. Wrong a little and got on some novel (I DO NOT READ them).
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Why did you lose Nastya? Why again, I emphasize, again pulled up to Mr. Veririu? Nastya is just a great developmental character and whose story I would love to observe. Moreover, her story was already there, she had a family of aristocracy (to which GG wanted to look, thereby obtaining land, title, gold, and a castle), she had a background, she had motivation, she had character and a highlight distinguishing it from others. Yes, emaeo her body gg himself sozolol so that would just zashib was. But nooo, she is slightly insane, but completely faithful to me and ready to learn and develop herself, I invested in it in full creating almost from scratch; I would be glad and agree myself) to give myself oaths, aaaaaa ... I will kill. Just like that. Yeah. And who instead of you ask. The broken girl is worse than Nastya, who sold me for 5 coppers to the nearest magician, circling me like a sucker, after which I broke her and subdued her. And from now on, since now I own not only her body but also the soul, in general now it’s for me a “heavy burden” and not an item like an umbrella, or 100% of a faithful slave seeking to do my will not only an oath, but also my own desires), it is not a “heavy burden” and to be under my protection. Why under protection? Why can not I find the beautiful and subordinate her if this one suddenly gets bored or I decide to donate it to someone? HZ, I'm fucked. Yes, now I again, I emphasize THE BITCH AGAIN begin to play nobility and forever sad, like "I do evil, but I am sad, so that I am not evil."
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That's about Nastya completely agree. The temper, though not the most appeasable. But true and without oaths. Why kill? ... Why kill freebie cook. Which nafig do you can also touch?
This is not clear to me ...
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“For a few days later, she found out that I could not only torment and suffer, and even give me a pleasant and pleasant feeling of pleasure. “- and what is this crap? Like before she did not know? And what about those people that read everything? BUT? To those people who know that before betraying, they were almost partners and spent a lot of time delivering to a FRIEND TO A FRIEND, MUTUALLY BLEYIIIN "a pleasant feeling of pleasure." Before writing, it would be worth re-reading what was written, in my opinion, you “slightly” forgot the plot.
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We go further, there are no events from the word "in general". Seriously, you just took everything away and started from scratch (Those who watched the anime Life from scratch where yy on 18 episodes from 25 finally started everything from scratch will understand me). And I have a reasonable question: “WHY?!” 12 episodes of 10 pages each, and everything is empty. Fuck? If I’d already started this way, I would have continued from the suburbs, ala, the game “overlord”. He built his dark fortress and seized land. Or captured Nastya family or something else udumal. But no, I will fuck up on all my achievements and send the demon to three letters (the house) and go back to where I was told to leave. At the same time, I did not bring any actual benefit, but I continue to become impudent as if I am the navel of the earth. But even without this, there were no events at all, he spat stupidly, changed his passport, took two slaves and a magician instead of two slaves and went to the capital. DI-BE-LESM.
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Let's go back a little and remember the motivation of our GG. What he wants to strive for. The answer is simple: HE WANTS TO RETURN HIS MOTHER AND IMPROVE SO THAT WOULD THE DEMONS AND BLACK BOOKS WERE BEARED! He firstly wants to return his mother. Now he sent it fuck. Let him there alone without money, relatives and with 3 zombies will live. It's dangerous here. All point. Fucked up
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Regarding belonging to the genre. I did not get up. And no, I'm fine with that. Here the fact is that if writers were banned for not pulling the “norm” in the story, then you would be 100% banned. Because even this is almost not there. It was more accurate, but only one hook, mixed with the description of the new philosophy of GG, which only angered, but did not excite. I had to go to another site. In general, it is not.
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Additionally, I add that he sent all his plans and ideas, ideas and achievements fucking. I already wrote but I will repeat, as just fucked up. Honestly, I agree to pay money if the material is the same as before, but not this (...), you probably wrote and threw it quickly, such as it wasn’t long ago, so hurry up. But it only got worse. More precisely it turned out crap. There is no desire to read further, and if the next story is the same, I will probably give up this case. You can say that this is a personal matter, and personally you do not care if I give up or not, but I do not threaten. Just saying that before you wrote on 8 out of 10, and this is a maximum of 3-4 points. I have everything in my opinion, although it was possible to write more, but I have already sold something.
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Smiled, you are not sickly bombs))) Do not worry, it was just the mood, the moon, the weak wind and the night lights of the sleeping city under the window ... I will try not to snot on the saucer anymore))
As for the deletions, the GG needs to start all over again, and do everything correctly.
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Check, please rewrite this part. Basically, I agree with Nylon, although I have not read parts 11 and 12, but my intuition is not the worst, and I understand just who it is from. But the trouble is - you decided to play the offended boy GG again now and say - “And let’s how you all will listen to me and fulfill my desires, and I’ll give you in exchange for it”. Like that. And the question is - with what fig the hero darted off and went to the capital? Why would he not just take and first make himself a safe rear and a comfortable base somewhere near the capital or even in it (which is dangerous, but it is possible, although everything is in your hands), but no - we will go there IMMEDIATELY Give us all the risks if magicians find us. Just part of the meaning is lost and at least a few of your chapters can be safely removed to hell and their grandmothers :). But in general, it was rather funny, it would have been possible to make a meme from this somehow - it was a super author - and after a couple of months he just died as an author. Well, so good luck to you, good night and nightmares (hello doters!).
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He does not have one) my thoughts were similar.But you can't do much with the phone (((author, are you sure you have to start all over again? Did he finish and burn the castle? And what about the land grab, the peasants? A very good plot emerged. Think again about whether such a turn?
If you have already planned everything in advance, and so it was conceived. And not a fleeting desire to change the vector. That is ok.
And if the latter ... Then you can rewrite it?) And then Nastya is a pity))
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I wanted to write the same amount today having already read the story normally, and not like last time. But the rest and so agree with me, but in my general idea is clear, so I will not.
I like this project, and therefore it was painful for me and I was probably bombed out loud for the rest of the evening, when after almost every day I came to check if the story came out, they give me this.
I liked this story and I do not want it to roll. The GGs who are consciously on the side of evil and darkness are very few, most of them just like you just described them. I have not yet met a book where he cuts out a village, makes zombies for himself, hides only his desires, spits on freedoms, and so on. Without snot and any such garbage. Most of the "type of evil" is actually even more kind than full full waffles. I really want him to change, and if he does, he will become a big supporter of darkness. Because it is so rare that I had the feeling that I found a ruby in a pile of stones. If anyone knows such books then throw (forgive me for such a request, but I'm really interested, suddenly I did not read something).
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I understood the message, and this is important for me, I will try to listen ... And as for the books, there is a cycle “the path of the demon” of the author I don’t remember exactly, it seems Glushanovsky, there are four books, the first three years he lives, finds friends, and at the end The third book is killed by his “type for good purpose”, he rises from the dead and takes revenge on the whole state, and as a result, he turned everyone into meat and half the world remade as hellish dominion. You should like it, where he deliberately kills everyone, and even the pregnant girl is the queen.
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I agree with you, Chekich. Read more about King Shelar, by this name can be found, but if that - he is invulnerable to ALL magic, but at the same time he has no emotions. I don’t remember the author, but there are 11–13 books somewhere. quite interesting to read, and indeed - the plot goes in 3 worlds, two main ones and ours (in the future) is secondary, but also important. Get involved, but, damn it, hellishly comical events are taking place among them ... There they even tried to make a world capture. Already two times ...
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Interesting, I will, thank you.
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I forgot to add - in the books about Shellar there are two dark ones from the heap of main characters of the book. One of them is called a demon and he himself agrees with this, and the other is a deceased dark magician of one world, but having revived in another form of archilich or something like that. But you learn about this book in 4-6, and maybe later, I do not remember, I read it long ago (in general, my mother read it like a bedtime story at night before, although this book is in theory for people 30+).
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I know the way of the demon by heart. But there is not exactly what is needed, although the book is really good. In the first 3, it is not dark, and it uses the demon's abilities as additional forces when it cannot cope on its own, no more. And in the latter he has no choice, although it is read in one breath and really like it, but there is not exactly what is needed. Let's just say he had no choice. And this is not exactly what you need. But the book is cool, I do not argue.
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Although I add that the plot branch with the boy and his mother, I also really liked. I really wanted to see how he would break and make his both of them putting pressure on the most painful and luring the ala to the demon gradually squeezing their souls in their hands.Yes, and there was no such eroticism for a long time, his mother is somewhere in another world, and sex with an adult woman who gradually breaks and becomes your soul and body excites me personally. I do not see anything stupid, the guy is a potential magician, and his mother is a potential woman with whom it will be quite interesting.
What infuriates me is homosexuals. I hate blue. Well, right at all, ready to kill. I personally had no experience, and I have not seen one yet, but if I see, I will kill you. But this is personal, here everyone has their own tastes, which, as we know, do not argue.
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Nylon, I have a question - if my brains are turned on slavery (already I have even invented a few plans for starting my journey in this direction), but at the same time, fucking, does the body VERY much react to the digressions? How would you react to this?
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Meet and sleep, even know what it is. Just do not climb to the veterans of the gay movement, the best age for this is up to 25 years.
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Sorry, I did not write to myself (there is such a person, at least one). But in general, I will not even try to advise him anything, he is worse than me because of such desires. He is now even difficult to communicate normally - many prank him or they openly laugh at him.
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I have nothing against slavery, But I simply can't physically stand fag. If this is another person, he tried to limit communication with him to a minimum, and if he began to molest he answered in a rigid and categorical form. I can understand a lesbian, it reads and looks pretty good, but I can’t, and I don’t want a fag. But if this man was my friend, I would put an ultimatum with me not to talk about it, I need to be treated here, if you cannot control yourself. Any perversion in my opinion can be considered normal if it is controlled by common sense and does not go from the category of “passion for rest” to the category of “obsession”. Fapat can be anything, but control is necessary. Although there are certainly exceptions, but I will write a book like this if I don’t put an end to it now.
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ATP that answered. Good luck and good days. And about the control - it seems he still controls himself, but here xs.
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We waited a long time. I hope it will go now without such interruptions, even if they are paid.
But, not quite understood. He added the castle and left someone there, or just sealed it?
All except the mage and Veriira killed?
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He took a slave and a magician and burned the fortress from the inside, killing all those who did not let go, at the same time hiding the traces of his stay. And yes, it is not logical to finish building the castle, and then burn your allies in it and dump it. But that is what it is.
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And I agree with Nylon, why cross out everything?
As a last resort, it was possible to leave the castle as a “backup option” and leave there someone to take an oath from, that would supervise and keep a small economy. The same poverikha with Zombik .: (
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Over time, paid chapters will be free?
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Do not rain.
Totally insolent. Ale, 40 rubles per chapter is less than two trips on the bus.
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The author, remember how giant states were made during the beginning of the industrial revolution in England. Weaving machines, cloth. Blast furnaces and metal production, pudding. Maritime trade, which allowed to bring spices and sell them for all gold. The distillation process - the production of alcohol even from a stool, it is not for you to prepare the wine once a year. See the Ethics Specialist Harrison.
Finally, there is the issuance of loans to the public, that’s where the hell is on earth. And with the contract.
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Hardly our yy read this article. Something like this can come up with, but he does not have a tablet with an Internet or something like that.
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But if you pohimichit with magic and a demon, as well as the space between the worlds - then it will be, but here the conditions of extraction must be difficult - if I am simple, then this is a complete collapse of history. It will be just uninteresting.
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When to wait for the continuation?
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A week, maybe two, trying to clear my head and return to the sources of inspiration, so to speak ...
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When I first began to read, everything was beautifully written (well, we can except for moments, but these are trifles). When the author scribbled about gays (it seemed like 9 or 10 parts to “search for scrap”), frank nonsense went, but it seemed to be rewritten. Then I made 2 parts paid, well, we’ll skip this moment since I already wrote about it somewhere. And so, the thirteenth part came out, after reading one page I was in shock. From the city, they either made a rag or a tearful idiot "and Down with a capital" D "." (And it looks like it all happened in those paid parts. That's why they were paid, because there one nonsense.) (And I didn’t understand by what description it fits best), I almost burst out. It’s a feeling that someone else’s continuation is writing. In general, as usual, tupism did not bypass this author and he degraded (no offense), like most other more serious writers. A pity you gave good hopes but ... it’s not yours. And, I n I repeat "no offense."
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I already realized that I was a moron. I sit writing the 14th part and try to make it cool, without unnecessary snot and similar "Exotics."
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People like violence and cruelty. Although, IMHO, the idea that violence is annoying is true. These are only frostbitten bastards with an inferiority complex or evil heroes in any fantasy universes can torment non-stop and they are cool.
I advise you not to pay attention to negative comments of those who have not even read the paid parts. How can you judge without seeing the whole picture?
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If you do not like what you describe. It seems that the story called “School of Magic” could not be found visible, deleted because of such turbidity (about the two guys who were offered studies and it was like this “Well, you’re just learning and we’ll teach you and help you”) or somehow so, there the sky in the pink color is all so kind and fluffy, all that is lacking is a rainbow pony.
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I did not say that you are a “moron” but described what is happening. I noticed a long time ago that the more you write, the later the story becomes delusional. Undeniable fact. Especially if you take a break. Take as an example (Series / Animated Series / Anime / Movies with the Continuation).
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The author does not listen to this "man." Just if you want to write in a similar style, then you probably should start the hotel cycle. For example, for a non-main character or something else. This style is not bad, but what you wrote before is completely different and cannot coexist with what you wrote now. It is like water and fire. But I am sure there will be lovers of this style. I have seen many stories with “the moon, the stars, the night sky, the light autumn breeze,” and so on. Romance in general. Only here there was not even a hint of it, and even if it were, it would be superfluous in my opinion, from such a reaction.
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Than paid parts did not suit you? Judging by your comments you have not read and paid. Toad 40p crushed? And these two paid parts are awesome.Yes, in this part there was a sharp turn both in the characters and in the plot. But to smear the author, especially for paid ones that you have not even read - this is real dibilism. "I did not read, but it seems like shit there" - do you hear yourself?
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This is my opinion, you can do what you want, these stories are enough, and I read here just out of variety. I have over 5,000 full-fledged ones (this means not 300 kilobytes, but 1.5 megs at least “one part / volume / story / book” (from the series)), stories.
And the point is not that I feel sorry for something, but the fact that once I already went bankrupt on this (by the way, about the paid story, though I was given to read after payment, one friend, so there was such nonsense that I abandoned after that it), and I will not repeat it again and will not make such an error. I don’t know whether the author gives access or not, I’m not even going to check. I will repeat a bit “somewhere I already wrote about paid chapters”. There I said that even if it cost ten kopecks, then I would, and, did not give them. Once burned, the second time you will not get your hand "if you are not down." So here, only after I “try / see / feel / sniff / lick / leaf through / look / etc”. Only after that I could pay for it, although it is unlikely.
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Your logotype is approximately as follows:
Judging by your pre comments. In which you judge the paid parts without reading them, you are an idiot. So the collection is your shit. And you yourself are a fool. I have seen these before. And never again. If a person writes 1 unintelligible comment. So he down.
About the payment. Do not want not pay. But then leave your opinion to yourself. Let me give you another example. It's like saying that the car has poor handling. When you didn't even sit behind her.
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Yes, you leave him, still his words are not the basis, everyone has their own opinion, but this is only an opinion and has no special meaning in global order.
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About the collection. She says shit, then read Ganz and the sequel to him. This is so for small / light seed, and then compare it, and then, and answer honestly what you liked more (and I have over a thousand such stories, I collected more than one year, and not five years). So shut your nasty mouth. I, too, "specialist."
Here's another for you, "The Tamer" Or "The Hitman in Futanari"
True, this is a little bit wrong, but compared to this ...
And you didn’t read it carefully, I’ve outlined a paid version in parentheses.
And about the car, just that you are wrong, before you buy, you will examine it all clap and roll.
If the reference will be on the previous chapters, like you read before the paid ones. Then I will answer this way, but you went in the cars. And the fact that you buy a fucking Zaporozhets of 1975 in a rusty condition, but it’s on the move and you can ride it, so what difference does it make to you.
Immediately before the paid chapters everything was fine, but after that, it sucked. So what's the point of paying for an unknown shit, which is not even described in a short description of what happens in this chapter, at least in brief.
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Well, the car is not something else a couple of examples. It's like surfing the Internet and stumble on a virus and because of this completely abandon Ineta. Or how to buy ice cream, open it and find that it is spoiled and now there is no ice cream at all. Or how to buy a watermelon cut and find that it is not sweet and now do not buy watermelons at all. Examples are the darkness and in all of them it is clear that this is stupid.
Paid chapters are one of the best and you can’t even talk about anything, just vanguing and building yourself as a specialist with 10 years of experience is nonsense.
And by the way where is my koment? Big and beautiful. In my opinion, I sent it all the same. Did not go? Or banned? Strange ... I don't write from the phone anymore.
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In order.
1) I can easily remove this virus, and special prog clean the consequences "for free."And if your hands grow from the wrong place. Then call the paid master who will tear you to the fullest. In the internet you can find everything how and what to do if problems with the computer. If something more serious, then an elementary reinstallation of Windows, while preserving important things on another hard drive, will decide anything.
2) When buying a food industry, I always look at the date. Since they are constantly trying to shove something either overdue or already appropriate by this time. (People be attentive, especially in shopping centers). "And here is your example, I did not understand."
3) Regarding watermelons, well, this is how it will fall, but mostly in 98% of cases, they were good. Also, like the second application, I do not understand what you are for.
4) Those people whom I helped edit books, and working as a beta, will not agree with you.
So, from all of the above, neither of which falls into this category with payment.
5) By the way, too, I occasionally do not see my comments. Or a glitch or admins something khimchat.
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Dude, just don't read. Take and leave me behind my story, what are you getting at it? I don’t like it - there’s the door, the lock isn’t locked, pull over, yet it’s extremely simple.
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We do not shake. We do not insult each other, and share their thoughts. And the point here is not in the story itself, but in the fact that paid stories are evil. What I personally categorically disagree with. The 13th series is good for the “romance” genre or something similar. The problem is that before this 12 episodes in a row this was not even a trace. Do you want to write in this style? We'll have to write a separate story otherwise you will not understand. No offense only, I wrote more about this, but my koment disappeared.
1) Yes, of course, the virus can be removed, and the Windows restart after saving everything important. But there is a possibility when, due to the virus, all the data, like the Windows itself, flies to the underworld and you are left with nothing. This is possible, but if this happens you will not give up on Ineta, and you will become more cautious when downloading files from trusted sites. These stories are verified by good reviews and the free stories that were before them, letting us know what to expect next. And to buy or not it already depends on whether you like it or not. And not from the fact that all purchase stories are evil.
2) I also usually see the food that I will buy later. But let's be objective, have you really never come across spoiled products despite all your precautions? If this is so you are very lucky. But this is nothing more than luck because milk can be sour despite the fact that yesterday's date, and canned food spoiled despite the fact that all your experience (and seller) suggested the opposite. Nevertheless, you do not shout that all sellers and their products are evil. You can reinsure but the chance that you are stupidly unlucky always remains. And you should not go to extremes because of this.
3) I agree that spoiled watermelons are extremely rare. But he is sweet or so-so, ripe or not, sugar or not, you will know this only by buying it and trying it. You can tap on them or something else there, but I consider it all to be shamans dancing under mushrooms. You can take watermelons at the end of the summer and then the chance to stumble upon a tasty watermelon is higher. But still not 100%. And if you do not get a tasty watermelon, you do not say that from now on all the watermelons are shit and the more you will not buy them. You shrug and say you're out of luck. Here everything is much less random because there were several paid ones without paid ones giving you a chance to familiarize yourself with creativity, so you can already decide whether or not to pay. But this is already your decision. If you haven’t bought and tried all the same, then you have no right to talk about taste.
4) I can say that I am a writer who has written several good books. I can say that I have been helping many beginners for 7 years and not only a writer in their work. And I can say that I am a black cat who sits at night while everyone is sleeping. In fact, I can say anything and everyone will not care, because no matter how you confirm or deny anybody (including me) it can. And the maximum that I can say is, “Well, trust me, I am tied up, I’m really a cat!” Maybe someone will believe, and someone won't. But it is impossible to verify.
5) Everything just fits and, if necessary, I can cite a bunch of similar examples. Do not like it - do not read, if you have something to say on the case - say. But just to come in and say that “I just read for nothing, and the author rolled off and paid stories of shit, although I did not read it, but I can smell it in the ass, and in general all paid stories are not a prerogative and the author’s right to ask for payment for the work he has done, but complete crap and evil in its pure form ”- I will not allow that to say that. Anyone who writes something more than 100 pages can sometimes go away, or be in a good mood, or change the general branch of the script, considering the old one not suitable. And to say that the author “slipped” only because of one episode, the general style and the amount written was strikingly different from what was expected, on the condition of long abstention from the work of the writer - nonsense.
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1) I always duplicate the necessary things on a removable disk, I specifically bought two terabytes for this, besides it there are five more, just for video and music collections (six PCs stationary on the computer, also two tera each, and one for the system). So, I'm not afraid to lose anything. It’s just an hour of reinstalling that “sometimes it infuriates”. Once a year and a half, I reinstall it, regardless of the norms, it works or it's buggy.
2) About spoiled goods. If something is not very expensive such as cheese or sour cream for 20p. I will not even soar. But if the caviar is red (just as an example), for 400r. or something equivalent to this, check with me, and walk to the store 100 meters, easy to exchange.
3) By and large about watermelons are not particularly worried. By falling is not very sweet, well, and FIG, when you get out of the refrigerator, that thirst perfectly removes. It was a couple of times that was a nice one. But again, it will not be difficult to change it (well, only if it will be inconvenient to bring it), and again 50 meters away from the house. Only time is spent.
And all this is "Free"
4) Regarding writing, if you want, I can throw off those who helped, and who is grateful to me.
5) Good. Then let him read Hisp's third finished book. Sergei Kim with his series about the "Evangelion" Neon Genesis Evangelion: To survive. the sixth book, and the sequel. Or Bubella "Lucky" 3 book. And the series about Alex, the continuation of the 7th book, and I have all this bought and gathering dust, since there is no continuation at all.
The list can go on and on.
It is for this reason that I have the right, and I say that many simply degrade, become stupid and blown away, disappear, and even do not want to unsubscribe in the comments.
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1) Well, you give. Hmm, I have not grown to such a lvl, only one medium per terabyte, and a couple of flash drives in half. You are cool if all this is occupied by something useful.
2) A story costs 40 rubles. And belyash 30 rubles. The fare is 30 rubles. Sausage dough 45 rubles. Milk 35 rubles. In my opinion, all these things belong to the category of "I will not even be soared."
3) What? Watermelons can be changed? Seriously?! Have you ever tried to change the watermelon? If yes, and if you managed to negotiate with the non-Russians that sell them - you are cool. Or not. It doesn't matter, it's unbelievable anyway. Or not possible, but this is the same thing. But in my opinion it does not work that way. Or you are not from Russia. However, I think the meaning of the example is clear. If you get a bad watermelon or any other not very expensive food that can not be changed, especially you will not bathe.
4) No, I do not want. To be honest, it’s not particularly interesting to read unfamiliar (or familiar) names. Yes, and I still will not believe. You hate writers who sell their work and the work themselves, and I tend to not trust people. Everyone has their own side questions, although in my opinion mine is more reasonable.
5) Well, this author is clearly not blown away, degraded, and so on. Just a slight deviation after a long break. Yes, and our komenty he answers very willingly. So to say so in this case is not correct. Indicate a mistake, express your adequate opinion without going to the person and voice your expectations and ideas. But do not shout that the author slipped, and his stories that you did not even read shit. 40 rubles is not so much, about the same is ice cream or a small bottle of tea. Perhaps not a masterpiece, but here they ask only 40 rubles.But if you are not interested in the story, do not read by itself ...
Nevertheless, I think my examples are quite understandable. 40 rubles is not the money for which it is worth so rave. In addition, the stories there are very good. At least if you liked the previous ones. Being afraid to spend money on crap is right, but not right when it becomes a phobia ...
And indeed, many authors sell their books. What's the big deal? There are as many as 10 chapters in the preface that you would definitely decide whether to buy or not. If you can not pay this is another matter, but if everything is because you are not paying the principle, then this is your problem. The author himself can set the price for his work and I do not see anything wrong with that. If not right, then correct ...
Okay, since you understand the books then advise me something. Not to prove, but to share, as I am now in search of good fiction with an adequate and preferably dark year. Well, or with an interesting plot, or boevka or a system of magic or a description of landscapes. I ask only one, preferably without snot and romance, the latter is possible but so that I would not be bombed. And preferably a fantasy genre. I know that I am one-sided and miss a lot, but for now I’m trying to read only stories in decorations of sword, magic, dragons, demons, moschnts and so on. Anyway, the argument ends. Yes, and we have already written. Of course, I don’t mind further discussion, but in my opinion there’s nothing to do with it. Although you can certainly convince me otherwise.
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Throw you a personal read there.
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Quote "Although you certainly can convince me otherwise." I can elementary, but it also annoys me. So as one character said, "I Looooom."
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Well, here I am already tired too.
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People, yes, you forget about this story, how many can you already fight?
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Why immediately shit. Just a little discussion, and others may be interested.
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Don't tell me what's stopping you. Or that you stop writing. I do not want to forget this story as I like it. And protect what you like is normal. And in general, Hisp is right, this is just a discussion. And in general, I just like to lead a reasoned argument with an intelligent person whose opinion is different from mine. It helps to self-develop something, well, or at least either strengthen your opinion or think about the fact that you are wrong, which can also often be written as a plus. Well, or at least just to kill time. Yes. As it does not sound good "to kill your time." I should think about the idea, but everything suits me, so don't care ..
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No, I will not leave writing, now I’m a little Zapar with debts in the university, I will quit the course with the teachers and sit down by the pen.
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When you take off the "quits", then do not hit your feet strongly, and do not arrange the dark. And then the ratings will be bad.
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I meant to go on teaching and systematically hand over heaps of debts for the past semesters.
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Wow. The beginning of the year, and already problems. Although anything can happen, good luck with your problems. As one of my friends said: “There is no person — no problem.”
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There is no teacher - there will be a different teacher, and perhaps much worse and more intractable, I have already thought about this issue. But problems from the past, usually in the semester, I do nothing, grab my head in session, suffer for a week, then I spit on everything with the words “Next term will be rented”
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I paid the story, how to get access to it?
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What did you pay for? Where did you pay? Why the question to me and not to the site administration? I am the author, I am not in charge here, I am not the one deciding all organizational issues.
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Posted in topic because:
1) Administration of the site by email indicated on the contact page “More: https://eroticspace.info/help/": and does not react either.
2) And you, as the author who receives a fee for the goods sold, are also responsible for the fulfillment of monetary obligations.
You yourself wrote:
“Dear reader, on the right side of the title, you see a green currency symbol so unpleasant for many users. Why is he standing there? How can such a thing be tolerated? How can I claim for the reading of the next opus blood-earned? "
I want to read, you demand your hard-earned money, I gave them to you and now I demand a story paid in blood, but not “I am not me and the cow is not mine”!
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I am me, and my cow, in general, everything that is, everything mine - I will not give to anyone.
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Thank you for the capacious and deep answer filled with age-old wisdom. Immediately you can see the author is worried about his reader ...
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Yes, not for that, please.
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Specify the method and time of payment.
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Just about, to it and it is necessary.
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