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Comment on publication: On the beach with my wife and my friend. The first day

Well, thanks for spitting in your face! ;) Oh, I remember this is the first or second story that I wrote. I do not remember what I wrote here, but thanks for taking the time to my stories. I plan to write different things, but for the time being I finish writing what I started.

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Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Part 3: Perfume Dungeon

Thanks for the tip, Vakhmorka! I know your every word :) It is commendable for me to read such reviews.
Estimates are really not as important to me as readability and reviews, it's only a pity when they try to influence the general ball and wind up the colas, but what to do. For today, one of my stories has reached the mark of one hundred thousand views, and taking into account the decrease in the audience flow on this site, for me this is a great achievement :) Now it seems like only that is considered to be I-AI, and that's great :)

I moved away from the topic.

So, the fourth part will really be and it will be more interesting, perhaps, of all three previous parts. I will not tell you when you read something about what you have guessed or suggested, it inevitably becomes less interesting.

The hard, dirty sex I wrote is the overtone window of this story. I wanted to draw into the story those readers who love other genres, even a small part of them ...

Now I will sign some details of the creation of the story, as promised. Sorry, that is so messy in one message.

The prototype of Oleg's character is two personalities. One is a former starley who was removed from service for having hit a conscript from his personnel, now working in security. The second sensational photographer, who took this kind of activity to lay under the girls. The first in fifty, the second in forty.
Kati's prototype is an interior designer, who is really a very kind and sweet woman, but not as simple as it seems at first glance, now she is about thirty-five.
Vlad's prototype is a young man, a type that many like, mostly as a friend and personality. Bright character with well-established solid psychylogy and good manners behavior.He is learning German, he is tall, and quite young. About twenty three.

The last location is taken together with a cell from one swing club, Adam and Eve.

The motive of this composition is several books, somewhere I took a contradiction, as in Anna Karenina (but do not look for a common story), somewhere an antihero, somewhere a consequence.

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Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Part 3: Perfume Dungeon

Thanks for the feedback!
The previous version - the wife was in the know and they all arranged together with Oleg and previously had a relationship. When I re-read everything, it turned out dry and corny, it does not cling at all. And here there are victims, motives, self-esteem and a girl who traveled in love for her husband and not all family values ​​were lost.

Be sure to wait for the fourth part;)

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