- With my wife at my friend's cottage. Part 1
- With my wife at my friend's cottage. Part 2: Hunting in the mountains
- With my wife at my friend's cottage. Part 3: Perfume Dungeon
- With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
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and he nodded, as I once again guessed.
Vlad had to be seen. He breathed deeply, flushed all over with paint, his palms were terribly red and sweaty. “Yeah-hh, he is fantasizing about a possible affair now in his head,” I concluded. There could be no intrigue, Gena is not my type, though eloquent, and with his colleague Vlad. We do not need conversations at his work or so that Seryozha and Vika think something.
Gene thanked our offer, but declined. I was even happy about this, because I didn’t want to oppress Seryozha with Vika, and he would have had to lay him in our bedroom, and how would the events develop there, I couldn’t build a plan in my head. Everything, as always, is a matter of spontaneity, but this is too much.
Having laid Vika and Seryozha in the hall, I went to the bedroom, and Vlad was not there. Passing along the corridor, in the toilet and in the bathroom, too, the light was off. Vlad continued alone to sit in the kitchen and drink vodka.
- What are you sitting here drinking? - I asked, surprised. - I thought you were already in bed or in the shower. Eka what is it started, drink one!
- That ... still translate. - husband dismissed and looked at me. - Maybe due to the fact that he ate well during the feast.
His eyes were red, blood vessels on the squirrels burst.
“Let's go to bed,” I sat down next to her and put a pen on his pants. In addition to the expected riser, I felt how hot the pants were. - I'll make you happy there.
- But we have guests? - He said, lowering his gaze, watching me massage him through my pants.
- So what? - I answered my husband cheerfully.
Vlad poured himself another glass of vodka, drank it in one gulp and stood up.
- Let's go! - shortly said, taking me by the hand.
...
In bed, I decided that it was time to talk a bit with my husband and partially try what Vladimir Sergeevich advised.
Vlad was lying on his back, I sat on his lap in front of him and sucked him. During the blowjob, I spoke to him.
- Mmmmmuaaa ... do you like the way I suck? - I asked, spitting on his trunk and continued to masturbate.
- Yeah ... - quietly, through groans, the husband answered.
- What else do you like? - I continued to ask my husband.
- How do you spit on him ...
- And what else?
- How to masturbate ...
- And more?
- How do you lick eggs ...
- Mmm, do you like how I lick eggs? - I asked Vlad, although I didn’t do that to him like Oleg. Apparently he liked how I licked eggs to Oleg and everything under them. - do you want me to put them on now? - I asked, plunging lower, licking his eggs and lower.
“Yeah ... like this ...” answered Vlad.
I turned to him in the 69 position, and Vlad, pushing my panties away, began to lick me there.
- Do you like it when I sometimes behave very badly? - I continued my blitz survey, nadrachivaya spat upon his dick and massaging his second hand under the eggs.
- Mugummm! - the husband agreed with me.
- Do you like me licking?
- Mugummm ...
- I know what you like! Do you like looking at me so lustful?
- Yeah ...
- Like to watch me flirt with others? Would you like me to have sex with someone in front of you? - daring, I asked my husband, nadrachivaya him even faster.
“Oo-oo-oo-ooh ...” her husband groaned, but did not answer.
“Silence is a sign of consent!” She concluded in her mind, continuing to snatch the whole truth from her husband.
- Would you like to lick my pussy after someone? Would you like to fuck me with someone in two bows? To someone fucked me hard in the ass while fucking me from the bottom? - I did not stop asking my husband, bringing him to orgasm. - Yeah ... imagine how I would have finished on you! How would you sit and masturbate on how I fuck with someone! How he fucks me in another room while you're here! I am your seksvayf ...
- oooooooooh! - Vlad began to cum and shoot his liquid sperm on my face.
I gently lowered the pace, licked my head, and lay down next to my husband.Sweaty body and happy smirk, I was glad that finally we had sex two months after that incident.
With this, I decided to end our present fantasies and revelations and closed my eyes.
- I did not understand, but what the fuck was that? I would like you to have sex with someone in front of me? With someone to fuck you, lick after someone, so you fuck with him in another room? - suddenly asked soberly husband, menacingly and without hesitation.
"Well, that's finished" - I thought. Vlad did not give any consent that he likes this.
- Well, as you yourself said that you like. You've finished. - I tried to get out, while answering a little unintelligible, so that it seemed that I was sleepy.
- I finished from your blowjob. - said Vlad.
“Well deceiver! After all, it was not only from this that you finished, I know! ”- I thought to myself while I was looking for what to say to him.
- Well, okay, I just asked different things. I just asked, now I got an answer.
- But why did she ask? - asked her husband.
I did not know what to answer for a long time.
- Cach! - Vlad called me.
- And what? I fell asleep, what are you saying? - decided to pretend to fall asleep.
- Ok, then. - replied displeased husband.
I calmed down and began to fall asleep.
- Katya ... - Vlad called me again, but this time it seemed to me that he wants to confess something to me.
- What is it, honey? - Immediately I joined the conversation, as if there was no sleep.
- I love you. - said Vlad.
- And I love you. - I answered my husband and hugged him tightly.
...
Then we gradually restored our intimate life. For a change, for some holidays, we went to nightclubs or even strip clubs. We are increasingly practicing together different experiments in sex, except for punitive devices and golden rain, Vlad did not recognize this. But on the whole, I was satisfied with how my sex life progressed with my husband. The older we get, the more fetishes loomed.
It happened that I spent the whole day at work going with a cork in the ass and sent reports to my husband, taking pictures of myself under the table. Once it was so frantic that I forgot to put on the silent. My colleague, Maxim, even once looked at me strangely at this moment.
In any case, this is another story, which is only indirectly related to what happened to us.
The end!
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It is directly felt that the author tried to please everyone. I pleased exactly, the ending is worthy, 10 by itself. I waited for a denouement with Gena, but from a literary point of view it would be really redundant, so that's right. Thanks to Alex, I will wait for your new works)
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Maybe not so much to please as to find a way to finish the story.
And then you could still cheat and cheat. In such a denouement there is logic. Although Oleg could give her a pig and tell Vlad everything, but the author did not follow this path. His right.
Well, by the way, about the escape she did not tell and their behavior. Well, so it was a game, and maybe it already was not against the escape was. Well, in general, the story is good. Only for four months the publication was delayed. It happens much longer.
And of course new stories are always desirable.
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Thanks for the feedback! It's nice that someone my filter letter like 10 points :)
It was a kind of stage for a small upgrade and "vision of the conduct" of stories. I constantly took on RPG stories, which is very difficult for narrating literary cross-genres of “excited / literary logical. More and all hated Seksvayf chose. Phew you! Maybe fellow writers have already noticed that when they encroach on this genre, they seize a pack of stakes.Now look at the lesbian tales - no matter the story, then 9-10 points.
And if you write RPG, then, for example, Pickup will go much easier, changing women partners, without having marriage morals, humiliation of the husband and other justice. Some can peretrakhat the whole world, while others can not change it once or twice. And if they change, it is only quiet, so that no one will know! And so that her husband was not laid as slaves, blasphemers! And only men can change women!
In the near future I will definitely enjoy new stories, but with the seksvayf until time out :) And with RPG - even more so!
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Well, the epilogue, he is the epilogue. All answers are received, the dots above i are mostly placed. Another plot twist with Katya is rather good. From the main assumptions, the difference is that it initially conceived everything. And no sacrifice ever. Well, Vlad turned out to be the main victim, although he probably got what he wanted inside himself and fantasized about. Well, that did without the platitudes. I didn’t quite catch it, but it seemed like they had full-fledged sex with Vlad in the basement. And at the top, they already fucked after that. The author also dispelled the influence of grass. It is rather good. In principle, the first parts were not clear Katya's motives, since everything went from the point of view of Vlad, and therefore he could not notice everything.
In general, some guns, hung in the previous parts, fired as expected, some not. There was a fear that Katya would fuck with the doctor, but the author correctly left it. It's too much. Oleg lost a friend, but apparently made a choice. To him, there can be no sympathy. Well solved the issue with a mysterious woman. Thin happened. At Katya did not immediately think.
Probably lovers seksvayf / kakold got their. Fans of plot and intrigue, too. Although you can scold the author for turns, which turn the story on its head and vice versa. Because of this, inconsistencies climb, but we will not. This does not make history worse.
Well, the last thing I wanted to mention.
Sex_master, and how do you format the revelations by a sexologist? After all, you wrote at the end of the story that the heroes of the story were with a specialist. Vika could also tell her version in therapy format. To tell where she lost her head, how things got out of control. It might not take up much space and easily skip the episodes described in the main story.
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From the moment when I decided to change the plot of the third part, everything went according to the scenario, which was then conceived into 3 and 4 parts. I planned to turn this story upside down, twice, and return the reader to the ground, to realism :) Therefore, I did not reveal the cards.
In part, everyone guessed a little. I hope reading was fascinating!
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With these turns it just happened that the performance is both the second part and the third. But more realism. But in general, the story is good. The first, second parts are very strong. The third reduces the pressure, but it is inevitable. And the fourth simply closes the holes and removes the possibility of something special to think out. If you have a picture of Kati’s guilt in everything that happened, then in principle this is seen in her behavior and Oleg. He was impatient at once, as they appeared at the dacha. Now I understand why. The idea with a cacold unfinished looks. It seems that they accidentally thought that Vlad would like it. And so what prevented them from just getting fucked behind his back? It is not clear when she liked more. With a husband or without. Well, Vlad resisted, and when he saw already, then it flooded. Well, a demonstration of the good old truth that if a friend's wife is beautiful, then he is not a friend. Sorry true. Ce la vie
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What is truth and does the reader need all the answers? :)
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Yes, in general, yes. The motives of the heroes are clear, and the memories are unreliable. Maybe she didn’t remember something in her story, or maybe she thought of it. In any case, Katya is the instigator, Oleg accomplice, Vlad victim. Classic. Well, that's what the resource and topics are relevant.
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It is unlikely that in this way you can make a person a kukoldom, rather, more likely that in this way you can send him to a mental hospital. Everything that happens looks like a horror movie.
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Very interesting plot twist, but, again, after the first part of the overall degree and the atmosphere of the heat of the story decreases. At certain points, the behavior of the characters rather causes rejection and rejection of thoughts.
In this whole story, it’s a pity the protagonist, given the sexual inclinations of his wife, this kind of behavior on her part, speaks of selfishness, as has been noted, and of her undisguised desires. With the same Vlad, psychologically, this kind of experiments were broken.
For the author as a whole, for the series, a strong 9 out of 10, but specifically the last part, as a full epilogue, 7 out of 10 maximum. The denouement is beautifully literary, but psychologically difficult to focus the story.
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Thanks for the feedback! Psychology - she is so :) not everyone likes it.
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psychology of men ... I do not understand and do not want! Not so much Oleg as Katya turned out to be Satan and went dry from such a criminal history and again made a nest on the chest of a decent but broken Vlad! Good this is not going to end ... she realized that he was already broken ... and dammed him to the end
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Well yes. There is no justice. Vlad broke. From the police talked. Very high, he was tormented. I tried for her, and she lacked the acuteness of sex. So, in order to absolve herself of responsibility, she decided to awaken Kakold as her husband, although that prevented her from simply having to be smacked and be a whore. But she decided to embroil him, and he considered her kind and deceived. Well, Oleg, apparently, the feeling of guilt does not allow her to be brought out to clear water, because he went for it all. And it seems no doubt, even though he was aware of the consequences.
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It's nice that the female half also reads my stories! I thought I could not wait for such a gap, after Roskomnadzor ousted half of the old guard.
I went through your comments. It is a pity there is no auto-signature, they could have entered there “if only not for the Kukold!”))) This is not the psychology of men, but the truth is mother. Man or woman, they change not all, but many. In the days of ancient Greece, before our era, betrayal and homosexuality flourished.
The institution of marriage and truth in many developing cities of the golden billion is bursting at the seams. Divorce proceedings are increasing. You are categorical or not, but this is human nature. We are good, but there are also bad ones, everything happens from time to time. Many change, though not all. Someone hides, and then everything pops up. Someone changes and everything remains a secret. But life, an interesting thing, sometimes it returns us to the former places. And somewhere mutually go on sexual adventures. Everywhere a different policy.
In any case, someone will say "kicks, jerk off," and someone will say, "Fu, husband chmoshnik!". This story is an overtone window for me.
I once thought to write, and even somewhere there is a draft of 2-3 A4 pages about cuckqween (a mirror - when the wife is lower, and the husband is having fun with others), but the same story with the dacha, which belonged to the wife’s friend. Friend alpha, wife beta.
Wait for new stories in other genres :)
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Cuckquean, to be exact. Suddenly, someone wants to google
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Yes, play on the feelings of people, and even close it is very dangerous. It was all relatively well in the story, and in real life it could have ended horribly. Vlad in general, instead of leaving quickly, could lock Katya in the basement, wait for Oleg and kill him.
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where did u Vlad video?
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I thought about the assessment ... On the one hand, “the end is the cause of the crown” - it is necessary to give an estimate for the whole work But in general, the story turned out to be a cut above what is printed here.
On the other hand, the author was in a great hurry to send the story and decided to entrust the spelling to the Word. Or maybe just Russian is not native. But the abundance of mistakes (mostly with endings) suggests that he did not bother to read his creation. I do not remember that in the first parts it was so conspicuous.
As for the story itself, the idea is excellent with a plot reversal. Although for my taste in every part there should be an increase in degree. Or at least just one full act. And it did not happen. How to put it? - Not enough drochibelno, in!
In general, just to highlight the story from the crowd put 10, but I agree with the average rating, which is sensitive below the first parts. And thank you Alex_R for the work done.
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Mistakes hurt the eyes, but in the course of it is haste. In the comments, the author correctly writes, without such errors. But it is better not to pay attention, because this is free content, so it is worth making a favor and evaluate the plot.
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Thanks for the feedback, Mig, and for your time!
Russian is not native, but, really, I managed to reread only half of the story, alas. There was not enough time, I was writing straight for the morning and was going about my business. So full of reviews that delay with the sequels.
But what is not enough jerkiness is yes. I have not yet decided to end the dilemma how to keep the same degree without losing the logic.
Such successful work I have seen only a few authors in this genre.
But I was very inspired by the litigation between the sexwifters and the kukoldonnavistnikov :)
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I want to answer the litigation. I think I need to write what I like most. So say your vision to transmit. And adapting to everyone is almost impossible. And experimenting a little towards the Overton windows so that the story is not too cloying.
And about kukoldonavistovnikov: in the comments and the truth kukold hard smear. Type not to face the peasant to be lower. But when you dig deeper in a personal conversation, the percentage of kukolddolyabiteley suddenly rises. Maybe they are not so little. And as they have already said; Reading a story is a way to safely try the situation on yourself. Kukoldonavistnik in life may well be an amateur in fantasy and happy to read these stories. And after orgasm, hating himself, put units for their weakness.
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Many men probably in their hearts dream that their wives fucked with them. But in real life it is very dangerous for a man if he respects himself a little. Because the attitude of others around him is clearly changing, and obviously not for the better. And there is no guarantee that, over time, the wife who loves him, and who herself dreamed of such a situation, will not despise him because of all this.
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He also tried to find the third part “my wife with a stranger on the train” - but alas, he found only the paid version. Upset and half the night crying in the pillow.
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This part of the story is hopelessly flawed - forgive my frankness. A very dynamic third part - with an unexpected denouement, very unexpected for this subject, and such a sluggish ending, it is unclear why the psychologist is not clear the place of this character, the false role of a woman, except irony over the main character is relevant - such a strong macho and in reality - kukold, that's just not clear where he took the video with his wife - another, burned blinn - false. No need to rush to complete, if only the very story in a dead end irremediable.
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Thanks for the feedback! Directness is good :)
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Oh. Well.To say that I am disappointed with the epilogue is to say nothing. No, there are no complaints about the quality of writing. But this is a turn. And was he at all. After all, Alex wrote in the comments that there was an idea that Katya and Oleg had arranged everything. And he sort of changed the plot. And in fact nothing has changed. Alex, what was the third part before, was there also a dungeon with a cage or something else? Very interesting. Well, I'm disappointed in ... Kate. Yes Yes. So she was a victim, and now ... Bitch, whore, fucking. Here are just the easiest epithets that I want to reward her. And the saddest thing in this whole story is that she absolutely does not love her husband. Although it claims the opposite. Judge for yourself. At first he talks with Oleg about intimate, then enters with him in frank correspondence. Interestingly, Vlad did not burn her. In my opinion, all husbands check on the sly phone and mail of their halves.))) Then fantasies appear in her head. It does not seem to change, but at the same time builds a plan. Apparently she wanted to fuck with Oleg in the bath, in the presence of her husband, he was not ready for this, and then everything got out of control, and Vlad, having received a blow on the head, lost consciousness. He did not fall asleep, as she tries to present to the psychologist, namely, she lost consciousness. Actually, this is the first sign of a concussion. And Vlad had to be taken to the hospital. Instead, he is chained to a cage. A person needs bed rest, at least for several days, and he is kept in an uncomfortable position. Care, however. She says that she was angry at Oleg. Nevertheless, she allowed her husband to be shackled and had sex with Oleg without waiting for Vlad to come to his senses. Remember he woke up at the moment when Oleg fucked her in the mouth? So she seeing that her husband has come to his senses, she also portrays herself as a victim.
- * Ghlob-ghlob-ghlob-ghlob * ... - I heard the familiar mooing.
I opened my eyes.
- David ... - Oleg groaned menacingly.
- Hmmm ... we know ... do not nadoo ... - Katya pronounced. After all, it is for her husband. Alibi, so to speak. Then it turns off again. Similarly, he has a concussion. But my wife does not care. She continues to fuck with Oleg, and no longer hides that she likes it. When it was over and Oleg came out, he calls his wife, and she asks if he can fuck her? He knows perfectly well that he is chained and cannot practically move. Well, after that, it embodies in reality its fantasies that arose in her correspondence with Oleg. Whip, golden rain and other fuck. And all with her husband. After executions, when her husband calls her suddenly pretends to be surprised that he saw everything.
- Vlad? It's you? - asked Katya in surprise. - you saw it all?
- Yes ... - I was glad that my wife came to her senses and began a normal dialogue with me.
- Bozhiee ... - Katya suddenly whimpered.
This is hypocrisy. And then, at the top, gentle sex with Oleg, and more than once, and on her initiative, while the husband, who needs the help of a doctor, suffers from below and worries not for himself, but for her. And it turns out not at all under the dope she says to him:
“I want to continue to be with you, and he said that by the end of our holiday, you will be offended and we will leave both satisfied. Now releasing you will lead to collapse, and when you see that he trusts me so much that he gave me the key and left me with you, and enjoy our sex with him, then you will calm down and we will quietly leave, without scandals and quarrels. ” Ghd Yes, even a psychologist said that she would not sleep with Oleg without Vlad. And what about the blowjob in the bath? By the way, what is the correct description. In the first part, on behalf of Oleg, it seems like he seduced and deceived her, and in the fourth, she herself practically asked for it. And by the way, why does she need a psychologist, he does not need her at all, Vlad needs him. And she was not going to run anywhere, then Vlad was just very lucky. And she howled in the car not at all from hysterics, but realizing that everything would be revealed soon. For her happiness, Vlad turned out to be a mattress, though not quite finished. Explained all the grass. Probably because, unlike Kati, he loves her. Further not quite well. Husband watching porn and jerking off, and even in the headphones. In the headphones Carl !!! Who is watching porn in headphones when there is no one at home !!! His wife is scorching for this, and he watches porn with her and Oleg. From where Yes from Oleg this porno, nowhere else.Obviously, he managed to explain with his friend, and told him about the role of his wife. I do not know whether Vlad forgave him, it seems yes, because the lawsuit was withdrawn. Maybe not enough to meet again, but he did not send him to prison either. Nobly from his side. Well, he loves this bitch, can not do anything with himself. Summing up.
I liked the story in principle, although in my opinion, if Katya had remained a victim, I would have liked more. There was such an erotic detective story, but it was reduced to a simple goddamned wife. In the end, she tells Vlad that she loves him. I DO NOT BELIEVE! With the assessment of a long time found it difficult. It seems everything is written well (I did not pay attention to grammatical errors). But something is gnawing, something is not right. And yet decided to put the top ten. In gratitude to the author for the work. Good luck in the future.
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It looks like Anfisa has a competitor. Strong reviews, mnogabukav, references to the text ... There are not enough quotes of philosophers or songs ...)))
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Well, you compared God's Gift with scrambled eggs))). I am up to Anfisa, as to Beijing in reverse)))
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Thanks for the review! It is very commendable for me that I was so hooked on the story, even emotionally, rather than agitating :)
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And yet, Alex, tell us what was in the destroyed third part. Do not be like Gogol with the second volume of Dead Souls, satisfy our curiosity!
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Well, I put a plus sign to you. I'll try to add my vision. Sexologist is for us first. Otherwise, it is difficult to make Katya talk. If it were a dialogue with Vlad, there would be little truth left. And so we see everything. Although it is attracted. Vlad needs a doctor.
Porn in Vlad is a plot hole. Or Kate seemed.
The performance of the second and third parts of a banal lie. We saw everything on behalf of Vlad. For him, the picture was initially distorted, although he sees Oleg tackles immediately upon arrival. He was impatient because he knew what he would get.
Gentle sex with Oleg and hard is the realization of fantasy. At this point, Ostap suffered.
She does not like Vlad. She needs a dominant, but Vlad is comfortable at home and a good father. Oleg is not the type. Alpha, top, but not the father of the family. Here Kate got everything she wanted. Selfish.
Vlad does not know his wife. Lust blinded her so that the health of her husband poboku, even her voice changed when transferred him. Her behavior in the second and third parts is her husband's perception. She is different. It was clear in the morning, in the forest and especially in the bath. The basement is only the culmination. To identify earlier, Vlad could well not have the opportunity. She could and delete the correspondence.
The quality of the last two parts is related to the speed of the output. Yet the first was in November, the second - in February. The third and last in March. Apparently, Alex needed more time, but our pressure affected.
Regarding the remake of the third part, probably the most important thing is to find out how Vlad's imprisonment was arranged and how Katy's behavior differed greatly during the first contact in Vlad's eyes, as well as escape, if he was there. Perhaps the loss of consciousness was not planned in this form, otherwise the behavior of Katy and Oleg pulls into criminal action. Of course, to fuck with a person with a concussion (this is clearly noticed), who is like a beloved beloved husband and the best friend of childhood, this is an obvious search, even if you really want to. Well, all the same boundaries should be. And then, if it was so easy to do it: give it to the head, you could not pull it. So it appeared when changing the third part. And so the story is good, at least in that it evokes emotions and feelings, which means that Alex did not try in vain. For that and thanks to him
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Yes, about the psychologist, then everything is clear, for what he is. To podpodotkryt us some moments that Vlad did not see. About the behavior of Katy. I’m saying she was a hypocrite and played in Vlad’s eyes, making herself a victim. It is not clear what she expected.What he likes to watch her fuck hard? So despite the excitement, Vlad did not like the fact that his wife was being raped. (raped from his point of view). Now, if their original plan had succeeded, and they would have brought everything to “random” sex in the bathhouse with Oleg, Vlad would probably not have objected, and in the future there would be similar meetings. But the key fact is that she does not love her husband and does not care much about his feelings. This is the main result of the story.
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Alex didn't succeed in convincing us of her love for her husband.
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he didn't seem to try. Katya is so rotten that even in front of herself and a psychologist, she cannot help lying, exposing herself to be better than it actually is. The fear that the lover has hurt her husband too much is the fear of a criminal case and the loss of a comfortable rear, and not a manifestation of concern for her husband (not to mention love). Her words about the love of her husband - this is her, used as excuses, and not the truth on behalf of the narrator.
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It was immediately clear with the blow that there could not be any other woman there, since after the previous part, where she calmly gives Oleg it was clear that everything was arranged by her with Oleg. It’s a shame for a husband that he didn’t sell himself favorable conditions in this family, proving his wife’s guilt.
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Vlad is different in parts 3 and 4, it either breaks or makes stronger, at the end of part 3, it was obvious that he did not break, but it turned out the opposite. and yes fantasy and real is different, many fantasize on the topic of adultery, but would never go to it ever.
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I noticed your comment! Kalash, you practice seksvayf?)
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It was, but from the side of my lover I met with couples.
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Disgusting ending in terms of text quality, and in terms of plot. Writing from a woman's face is not a thankful business. And you also did not succeed. It can be seen that they wrote in haste, so to say, “stand aside”. Why - it is not clear. It is also noticeable that you, as the writers of the suddenly prolonged series, sucked the background from the finger. Rude and stupid. As if in general another person wrote. But trying to please everyone has never ended in anything good. And in this case, you too messed up
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Who told you that I was trying to please someone? I wrote that I myself wanted :) very few people liked this ending;)
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Not surprising, given the quality of writing. And about please, this is the background to the conspiracy, and the continuation of Vlad-Kukolda
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I assure you, I wrote to please myself)))
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It seems that dissatisfaction is caused not so much by the quality of the story as by unjustified expectations. But remembering one famous chip nut, “these are our problems”.
We do not like (well, it seems so at least) that evil is not punished. Evil in the face of Katie. Also, after the first parts, I wanted Vlad to win. At the end of the third part, everything went to this, but it didn’t work. Behind the scenes remained communication Kati and Vlad at the expense of what happened. And we will not know how he himself justified all this. But then again it has nothing to do with the plot. It is logical, if we consider it in the chronology of events.
So, there is Kate and Vlad. It looks like a happy couple. Apartment, car, work promotion. But. It turns out that Katya is not happy with sex. She casually speaks about this to Oleg. And by coincidence, it turns out to those who need it. This is an accident, of course, but a plot is built on them, otherwise why bother to write at all.
Further, correspondence is fastened, the content of which is hidden, but can be imagined, especially if you have experience of such communication. It brings them together, they share fetishes and fantasies. Oleg, after all, knew what she needed when he showed all that harshness in the basement. And she unwittingly had a desire to try, but so that it was not treason in its pure form, that is, hotels, rented apartments, delays at work. So it means you need to pull in Vlad, who will not go for tin, for he loves her.
Oleg, having desired Katya, is nevertheless against the involvement of Vlad, because he is interested in kakold, but suddenly Vlad is not like that. And that's fine. As far as I understand, a kakold relationship is a man’s initiative, since a man receives an additional stimulation of his own desires. Wives in this case either go on about or not. For them, plus a variety of sex, as well as an additional pleasure. But this is always the man who offers. If the initiative is from a woman, then it is different. Seksvayf, for example. And maybe the variation femdom.
In our case, everything is turned upside down. This will lead to undesirable consequences, as will become clear from the third part. Oleg is a libertine, a lover of other wives. It may be immoral, but not a crime. He doubts, but Katy's perseverance gives fruit, because the appetite comes with eating. And she wants more, a new man, a new member, humiliation and submission.
Draw a trip to the cottage. It seems that for Vlad the situation is natural, because they have spent time so many times already. But there are differences. He sees them immediately. Oleg is excited, excited, excited. Katya is calmer, because she is not sure that everything will work out. The plan, so that Vlad went to the pantry or asked, was thought out. No wonder Oleg called them to the bathhouse. Note that everything is logical. Everything is consistent with the motives of the characters. You can not find fault.
Blowjob during the massage is the first puncture. But alcohol and relaxation provoked the conspirators. With that, Vlad saw that Kate is well. Then he will write it down on aphrodisiacs, and in fact, in fact, she just started getting what she wanted.
Then talk in bed. Tears, lies. Everything within the plan and contingency that Vlad saw them. But he loves her so much and is so trusting that he hangs everything on Oleg. It is more convenient for him. Attempt to escape is stopped awkwardly. Perhaps Oleg foresaw Vlad's impulsiveness, if what is going on is not to his liking. This is one of the crutches of the plot, because what prevented Vlad from insisting on the return of the battery. The worm of doubt about Katy settled in it.
Next morning. Vlad excited sleep, jerking. Overton's window opened slightly, but he fights. Then Katya breeds him. Although Oleg may have a diagnosis. Why not? We, readers, like Vlad are guessing. This, by the way, is the strength of the story.
Going to the forest. Everything is pretty straightforward there. Katya herself has poor control. Sticks to Vlad, sticks to Oleg in the water, allows himself to jerk off. All again according to the idea and quite logical.
Scene in the bathhouse with the revelation of Vlad and Katy's congress performance. Vlad sees her excitement. She is in anticipation. For a long time wants, long suffered. Vlad leaves them alone, they think that the hour has come. But no. Vlad again wants to escape. At this moment, Katya and Oleg cross the line. There is no question of love. There is a fear of consequences, yes. But not love. They carried Vlad down, taking care of him, putting him to bed. Applied a bandage. They made sure they were alive.
And then everything is according to plan. Forward and downward, to the realization of the most lowly thoughts. Noticing that Vlad woke up, Kate tried to play coercion. Then it will not be. Again a lie, an attempt to play down the turbidity, the action of the dope. To rest from the performance, go upstairs, relax. From this point on, Katya is a complete thing, because now she’s fucking Oleg, not for Vlad, for herself. Rebirth took place.
Vlad writes off all on the dope, but the window is ajar even wider. He is excited. Do not hide it. Oleg and Katya decide that the plan has worked, they relax. Oleg leaves, Katya is self-confident. But Vlad finds an opportunity to escape. Katya is hysterical, because in the worst case, a divorce, a prison. In the best disassembly with Oleg. But for Vlad the window is wide open.
Behind the scenes it remains, how he came to this, how he accepted Katya’s explanations and beliefs that he shouldn’t take out the dirty linen in public. We do not know and how he went to Oleg. What they talked about, how to get the record. Maybe Kate and it seemed, maybe not. Unclear. But it is quite logical.
Next meeting with friends. Katya showed herself, Vlad herself. Blowjob, revelations Katie - all this is the final touches. But Vlad resists. By the way, from the last paragraphs it does not follow clearly that they have kakold.They experiment, Katya gets hers, Vlad gets hers. But there is no complete tin. No conflicts with logic.
In fact, if you take into account the motivation of the characters: Kate get extreme sex, Oleg - fuck someone else's wife, Vlada - to rest, everything is in order. Vlad was doomed, but this is the idea of the author within the framework of the concept of Overton windows and acceptance of himself as heroes.
And discontent and frustration are connected with the fact that we associated ourselves with Vlad, as there are three parts of his face. But we saw a distorted picture, like him. We did not know until the end what Katya wanted. She and the victim, and the instigator. We did not understand the role of Oleg. He is a rapist and an accomplice. And for this reason, the final outcome is not pleasant, because Vlad does not want to be. But the author drove him by the nose, just like us. In my opinion masterfully. What do you think? ;-)
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Serious analysis! Honestly, I did not think that so many caring people would get together.
Regarding the video - I noticed this moment of discontent here many times. He left a lot open for the reader to finish drawing himself. One could imagine that Vlad actually took video evidence when he was in the basement, but hid it in the story, and from his wife, so that the materials would not have to be handed over to the police or destroyed, but to enjoy himself, since he is a latent fan of it. One could imagine that it was Oleg who had persuaded him to talk with Katya in the water park, and the blow was rigged (for the third time, to turn everything upside down), and in fact all these videos were made for him, knowing that Katya would not voluntarily go on such a venture with mzhm and sex with another man. Therefore an opportunity for the reader to imagine
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It can be explained like that. But I wanted to show that causes discontent of individual readers who are entitled to it. And also to demonstrate that the plot does not contradict your idea, what you wrote about. For me, the main complaints that can be made to the authors are the unmotivated characters and the illogical nature of the plot. When it is, the narrative falls apart. Here it is not. There are prerequisites, motives. The plot follows this logic. Another question is that you had a fig in your pocket. Well, no one has canceled the unreliable narrator. Intentionally or not, but you led us by the nose. This is not a story about the evil whore Katya or the fetishist-libertine Oleg. This is a story about Vlad, for whom Overton's window has opened in kakold, albeit partially. From this point of view, the author's intention was a success, and this is the main thing. And the rest is taste.
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Exactly! :)
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How many letters Midas, I think you can take up your little story ...
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There are not a few stories published in short than the reviews in my stories
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You read my analysis Wives sex_master rent. It touches more than even here. Innuendo more.
Regarding my story, there is an inconvenience that I read and comment from a smartphone, and it is inconvenient to write from it. And of course, thoughts and ideas were. Well, maybe someday.
Yes, and I try to be intelligible, so as not to receive empty accusations of bias or haitterism of certain categories. And I criticize constructively. Well, I hope at least
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And explain, if you understand what was the "cunning" plan for the involvement of Vlad? And I did not understand nichrome. Well, they arranged for him to see the basement. Well, he saw, then what? Did he himself, in their opinion, have to jump into that cage? Where are you then saw the logic, please share.
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See the basement is a provocation. The reaction is important. Could rush to find out, could leave and pick up his wife. Well, in general, reveal to him the secret side of Oleg. For him, it's a shock, then a blowjob. An even bigger shock. I had to run. And he joined the process.And then they were going to act according to circumstances. Kate wanted to realize fantasies, Oleg - to fuck someone else's wife. They needed Vlad so that Katya did not feel like a traitor. But everything turned out even worse. Before the strike, she was ready to leave, and then the line was crossed and you can feel free. In Alex’s interpretation, the basement is the opening of the Overton window. Well, it seems at least.
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See the basement is a provocation. The reaction is important. Could rush to find out, could leave and pick up his wife. Well, in general, reveal to him the secret side of Oleg. For him, it's a shock, then a blowjob. An even bigger shock. I had to run. And he joined the process. And then they were going to act according to circumstances. Kate wanted to realize fantasies, Oleg - to fuck someone else's wife. They needed Vlad so that Katya did not feel like a traitor. But everything turned out even worse. Before the strike, she was ready to leave, and then the line was crossed and you can feel free. In Alex’s interpretation, the basement is the opening of the Overton window. Well, it seems at least.
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I still do not see the logic. The husband received the blow, and the wife starts to fuck from it. First sex with her husband, only her husband is unconscious. If she realized in her bath that her husband was not ready, how could a blow provoke her? And before that, after the blowjob, he made clear to her that he was totally against it. In my opinion, if a woman wants to keep her family, at least she should have thought. There is no logic in the story. More precisely was the first three parts, and after the fourth has disappeared. This plot reversal killed all the logic.
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No. She wanted to fuck right away, but at the same time preserve a decent look, as if Vlad himself wanted it under the influence of either grass, or the situation, or his own perversity. The basement (according to Kati and Oleg's calculations) was supposed to contribute. Well, the behavior provocative of Katie. But Vlad resisted, though not without difficulty. He jerked several times. And Kate said that in the bath, when he wanted to leave, then she was ready to stop. But Oleg, by his intervention with a blow, did not give them a chance. And he made it clear to Katya that now all the same he finished her off, though not without her desire and consent. And then the line passed, - and spun. Well, that is, she could of course yell at Oleg, send a fuck, call an ambulance and get the hell out of Vlad. But the author decided differently. And it turned out how it happened. So everything is logical, if we take into account that she wanted new sensations, and Oleg firmly decided to fuck her.
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Yes, all the same strange comes out. At the beginning of the fourth part, she is straightforwardly panegyric to Vlad, who says how wonderful he is, etc. And worries about their marriage. And when they gave Vlad to Kumpol, did not worry? Clearly, she understood that he was opposed to not receiving approval. Was there really no thought of what would happen after the fuck? After all, Vlad could have sent such a wife away. Yes, even when she tells a psychologist that she was sure that she would have sex with Oleg in the bath with her husband, could she have expected that he would like it? And what confidence arose? On the fact that Vlad has a strut? Funny He is a young, healthy man, in front of him is his wife in a seductive bathing suit. Clear stump he will be. Oleg, he also had to be, it does not mean that he wanted to see how his friends fuck. My IMHO, it would be better to present the whole story as a matter of chance and violence on the part of Oleg, it would be more logical, and certainly there would be no such contradictions. And so the last part came out very weak. And with this psychologist too. She comes to him in the n + 1st time, and this one, if I may say so, the doctor again tortures her, as everything was. Masturbating something, then on her story))) And it turns out that she is walking with her friends, drinking wine, going to events after work. Yes, she and her husband should do this, not with her friends. Well, with the guests it is already too much. Not at all realistic in my opinion.
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A strange epilogue.Wife betrayed Vlad, and he do not care for it. Obviously not so expect after the end of the previous part. Freak in jail, wife divorce. And then some kind of game in the epilogue, my husband turned into a fool-kukolda. It’s so clear that wherever I climb into porn with my logic, but still, for such a rather big story, this is a sad ending.
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I agree with you. I basically wrote about the same thing. In general, it seems to me that this was a small provocation from Alex’s side, so to speak, in the comments, that he changed the plot. Like before it was all arranged by his wife and friend, but I did not like it and I changed everything. And we fell for this bait, arguing whether Katya could be the same, what her actions were under the influence of drugs, and what not, etc. In fact, the author did not change anything, everything was intended. He has sown false expectations in us. Hence the rejection of the epilogue. Tricky move. Appreciated! Yes, for the male consciousness it would be better if Katya remained a victim. It is not easy to realize that a person close to you is capable of betrayal. In the case of the main character, staying with such a wife is still a pleasure. Although I had this idea. It was not he who came to Oleg, but Oleg to him. Judge for yourself, a lawsuit was filed against Oleg. He faces a decent time. It is unlikely that he will play nobility. And in the investigation everything will be clear. That there was no rape, the benefit of the evidence he had is enough. The same correspondence with Katya. And she, by the way, understands this perfectly, persuading her husband to withdraw the lawsuit. And thinks that she succeeded. But Vlad’s forced retention in the basement did not disappear anywhere. And Oleg faces punishment for that. And only Vlad can solve his problem. Therefore, he comes into contact with him, revealing the true causes of the incident. Well and sends proofs, correspondence and video. So Katya is mistaken. The husband knows everything, it just suits him. He, oddly enough, continues to love her. It is she who thinks that controls him, in fact, the opposite is true. He allows her only what he likes. Why is he so pointedly jerking off? Yes, they changed places and now he provokes her, as she provoked him in the forest at one time. It is not clear where such relationships will lead them, but this is a completely different story.
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Well, there above Alex with this version I agree. He has bred us. It has the right, by the way. Well, then it's just the details. Who came to whom. Who started earlier. At least, there is a motivation, a start, a peak, a denouement. What is said, Oleg's version is interesting, but that is already an addition to the existing one. You can think of it, you can do without it.
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Yes, I managed to compose with this “provocation” ending in my head, and then there was such a turn))).
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Thank you very much for the next sequel, a very unusual turn of events, although of course it is a pity for the husband, rather tough with respect to him, about the completion, you may not need to put a point where you can put a comma. Thank you very much.
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I didn’t like the story very much, from the first part it becomes clear who is who: Katya slut, Vlad is a stupid idiot, Oleg is a dominant. The characters are somehow worried about them, Vlada is not sorry, Katya is a bad actress and I want to say I don’t believe. First of all, a strange psychologist he should have called the cops, then he says bullshit, Kati’s story clearly shows that she doesn’t like Vlad, she is his own and a good psychologist should help her understand her feelings and understand that she’s just used to her husband He does not love him and she needs someone similar to Oleg and divorce is the best way. One thing is not clear why Oleg needed it, to attach a childhood friend.
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So psychologists call the cops, when at the moment nothing threatens anyone now? An interesting version. And what exactly is the psychologist saying wrong? Did he have to tell her husband everything? Like his patient - Kate.Usually, people rarely turn to shrinkage in a rashka, preferring to decide everything themselves, and if they do, it is too late, when a lot of firewood was broken. How exactly should psychologists behave in such cases? Hand over the traitors and destroy the marriage?
What is sirye? Raw in the sense? Well, look how readers are worried about the “stupid” Vlad. There are more comments than the story itself. Really 4 parts read without experiences? Then I would not even read the second part if I spat like characters :)
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Well yes. Stories, for the characters that have no sympathy, just do not read. So such attention and great discussion signal that the story was a success. But dissatisfaction with the denouement is more questions to themselves than to the author. And you have no plans to complete sports life and night adventures? Well, in the first case, everything is already clear there, but in the adventures of sex did not it seem?
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Even as it came. By the way, yes, Alex, are you planning to continue these stories?
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A psychologist could call the cops there, there was a threat to Vlad's life and who knows or willn’t it in the future, that is, Katya will want to scratch one place with that, and her husband will be over)
A psychologist should help a person understand who he is and what he really wants and what to do next. “Kati’s story clearly shows that she doesn’t love Vlad, she’s his clean and good psychologist should help her understand her feelings and understand that she’s just used to her husband, but doesn’t love him and needs someone like Oleg and a divorce is the best way”
I’ve had raw ones (Sori rus is not my native language)
Maybe readers are worried about Vlad bo in rl themselves are such in their eyes lions, but in fact rabbits))) IMHO
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I do not quite understand what you are writing. "Bo" is where this jargon come from? Moldovan or Ukrainian? I do not know what this word means. Rl? Real life?
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Bo is for Ukrainian. In this case, "because." The commentator has a Ukrainian native, it seems, and the Russian taught himself most likely. Many ukrainizm and some letters in the meanings for the Ukrainian language
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Rl Real Life = Real Life
Bo-because: D
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Gray in this case means lonely, helpless.))) Apparently sandro meant it.
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In short, Alex is brilliant, since such a re-cut and so many comments, continue this story further
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Yes, in this story, all the dots above it already placed. Although the epilogue was banal, there is nothing left to continue. In general, it is interesting, the author in the commentary to the 3rd part wrote that in the initial version his wife and a friend had arranged everything, and it all came out dry and trite, which is why he changed the plot. And he himself returned to this as a result.)))
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Either he got us off, or the difference was in the behavior of Katy in front of Vlad. And the truth is Alex, what was the difference?
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Honestly, until you said, I didn’t think that the same scenario was rolling :) It seems to me that there is a difference and Katya really loves her husband. It was a case, but in general she was always worried and did not think that everything would turn out that way. They found a way out, they live on, Vlad doesn’t really know that this was part of her idea. She did not spoil the relationship with him and they gradually came to harmony.
That's all. Adults, however, agreed.
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Alex, just do not be offended, but in my opinion, you did not succeed in showing Katya's love for her husband. Even though she repeats it all the time, you don’t believe her. Correspondence with Oleg on intimate topics behind her husband, lies and hypocrisy in front of his eyes somehow do not convince of the sincerity of her feelings.
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In case of not like. Long preparation. And the idea with the cottage. With Katya it seems harder to me. Maybe he loves himself, but he certainly is more. I got exactly what I wanted. I did not try to stop.It’s just incomprehensible, if the content was different, and Vlad understood the arrangement and premeditation, then how was all of this resolved?
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To the author - a wish, if you do not doubt your own mastery - write a sequel. That's right - the story is not finished, Oleg's very bright figure is not revealed, and the psychologist is exactly the continuation of the storyline from him, isn't it? A woman and two men would be appropriate, but not by any means, but a drama. The drama is that in this “sitcom” everyone should suffer. Think, but it will be really difficult ...
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There would be a spin-off about Oleg. Offered to the author. Maybe he will. There is where to roam. Offered already.
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By the way, I read the story about which you spoke repeatedly from sex_master, although only the first part, there was no time.
I do not want to offend the author, but this is an exact muffled copy of the story of my acquaintance of a colleague, which it is better not to mention here once again, and whose works were removed from here.
Perhaps the rights have been redeemed for this story, but this is more like plagiarism.
The most amazing thing is that after the complaint of sex_master, the administration issued me an impeachment about my old stories with a paid sequel. But at the same time, the author of sex_master "borrowed" just the same story from that very site from this person. Therefore, considering that sex_master thought that that site belongs to me, I can conclude that he does not know the owner of the site and the author of the story, which is duplicated for sex_master.
Before your review did not have time to get. A little later, I look!
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There, the second part of it is original, and the first one too. General outline, but the sex master did everything more interesting. Read it. And the comments to the second is the song. More than 150. You are so far away from such a record ;-)
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I read your reviews! It's great that so much readers can dive into the story.
About the number of comments. Personally, I have slightly different goals, this is an opportunity to monetize and increase the number of readers (views), for future more worthy works than this.
Under current conditions, with a huge loss of audiences, starting from that year, I still manage to collect 50k views. And one story collected 100k. Now this is a super difficult task, with the most readable incest now only for registered users.
All the balls until the middle of 2017 could be screwed up and almost all the stories were screwed up, but I don’t know the comments, so it’s possible. I have stories before the update site, when I did not really know how to write, collected 50-60k views. Voices, you can see, at 70-100 maximum dialed. Stories with the same number of views, or even less or more by 20k, which are in the top 250, collected 250, 500, and even 800 votes each. I doubt that it was my readers who preferred to abstain, and there readers willingly voted that way))) certainly, I’m Gifu, Lena, and the little-known Siberian, no match, but I think you can update the site again by choosing the jury that will create a section with selected " good "and" selected "stories.
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Well, I wrote about the comments not to the need to strive for them. This is so an indicator of interest. I did not know that Incest is the most readable category. Curious. And the estimates basically serve as a filter. Well, the category is natural
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What else would you like to say at the end? The final of course was not very good. In my opinion, an attempt to imagine that everything is normal with them, they say, adults agreed unconvincing. Trying to reduce everything to a happy ending, it's like sticking an owl on a globe. Remember, in the movie “The Pokrovskie Gates,” Velor says to Soyov, “Soy, I respect your spouse, appreciate her taste, but watch the final.”Here, of course, no one calls on the author to change the final. He saw this story, so he told us. Personally, I found such a way out for myself. Gif had a story, he was called Mongol Shuudan. So, I personally liked the first two parts, and then I went to trash, where my wife fucked everyone in a row, including the youngsters. So I struck out for myself the continuation, leaving only the first two parts. And in the case of this story, I generally wrote an alternative ending for myself. It's easier for me. In principle, anyone can do so. Alex, no offense! Thanks to all.
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And share the alternative, well, at least wide strokes.
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Is it worth it? In principle, anyone can write something. Yes, and about what he wrote, I am somewhat exaggerated. Well, that is, I started writing, changed the ending of the third part, started the fourth, and then I thought, why the heck did I do it. I'm not going to post anyway. And threw. No, well, in my head, the whole story was completed, but I did not transfer it to the media. And the finale came out tragic. (((
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Well, this is also interesting. Purely speculative. What is the tragedy? What about the main characters? It is possible to reflect in a couple of sentences ;-)
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The pair will fail. I'm just at work now (lunch). I can only say that I moved away from the fact that my husband is excited by what is happening. You see, in all the stories, similar in subject, there is this unmotivated in my opinion arousal of the husband. Everything is clear with my wife, with her partner too. But my husband is not. There is never any explanation for his excitement. Just got excited and that's it. I also can not come up with this explanation. Therefore, it is removed. If you are very interested, I will try to describe in the evening.
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And let's. It will be interesting to look. If necessary, we will wait
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Eh was not, I will try. I will describe the strokes. Somewhere they will be big, somewhere smaller. Do not blame me, I am not a writer, I have always been hard at work essays at school. So, let's begin. We have to go back to the third part. By the time Oleg threw Vlad food. Vlad by that moment began to think about what was happening. The following is a description of the execution, when Oleg whipped Kate with a whip, and then roughly fucked. So at this moment Vlad's anger does not subside, and excitement does not occur. He still sees the victim in his wife, and all the anger is directed at Oleg. Oleg fucks her for a long time, but Vlad looks at it without excitement, periodically falling through his mind. (a blow to the head is affecting) Yes, he cannot eat either, the food does not fit in his mouth. Further, like Alex, there is a description of Katya’s sex with Oleg, asking him to pee in her mouth. He sees that she does it voluntarily, that she likes, and then he realizes that there is no datura. It takes a couple of days, Katya comes to sleep down, but she doesn’t speak to Vlad, Oleg continues to fuck her in all holes, Vlad is becoming more and more convinced that there is no dope. Finally, the day comes when Oleg leaves. Vlad is trying to talk to his wife. I recall that dialogue.
- Vlad, stop it. Oleg said that I will let you out anyway when I see that you are not threatening him and me. He explained everything to me, as it should, and you will not convince me. He is right, if I let you out now, then you will do quite a few troubles, but I still want to be with you, and he said that by the end of our holiday, and you will lose weight and we will leave both satisfied. Now releasing you will lead to collapse, but when you see that he trusts me so much that he gave me the key and left me with you, and enjoy our sex with him enough, then you will calm down and we will quietly leave, without scandals and quarrels.
And here Vlad angrily asks her why she decided that he would get it, and they would leave satisfied. Katya is surprised by the question, because she saw Vlad a standup, saw him jerk off (at the beginning) and concluded that he liked everything.Vlad replies that this is not the case, he cannot look at everything that happens, he becomes agitated, his voice grows, he starts to hear a buzz, he starts screaming even louder, the cry goes into a hoot, and he loses consciousness. The last thing he hears is a metal gnash and creak. At the third part ends. Go to the final. Let's call it Overton Window))). The story continues from the face of Vlad. He wakes up in the house, in the bed. Opening his eyes sees his wife. He asks how he got here. She replies that he lost consciousness and he and Oleg brought him here. She supposedly called him and he came back. To the question, where is he now answering that he is in the house, but does not want to appear to Vlad on his eyes. Vlad demands an explanation from his wife. She tries to get away from a direct answer, to blame everything on the case and on Oleg, but Vlad insists, saying that he already understands so much. He learns about their correspondence with Oleg. Here Alex has everything written in detail in a conversation with a psychologist, only the conversation is on behalf of Vlad, more rigidly. When he learns about the correspondence, it requires a truthful answer about the blowjob on the first day. Well, here again, I will refer to the original, there is nothing to add or subtract. In the end, he makes her tell you about sex with Oleg at the top, in his absence. And Katya, broken by his pressure, tells everything about the first time and about the subsequent ones and about the fact that she wanted Oleg in the bath. Vlad is shocked. While he was suffering there alone, worrying about her, she drank wine, watched movies, soared in the bath and fucked, fucked, fucked. He understands that in front of him is not the Katya whom he knows, but a complete stranger to him, a stranger. He is trying to get up, his wife says that he can not, that he had a hypertensive crisis, and he needs to lie down. He does not listen, gets up, gets dressed. He needs to get out of this house, where he was cruelly humiliated and betrayed by the people closest to him. Overcoming weakness, he goes to the car. Katya follows, cries, tries to stop him, saying that he cannot be behind the wheel. Calls for help Oleg. He comes, but can not look former friend in the eye.
- That brother, Vlad addresses Oleg, this time without a baton. And without a gun. Oleg mumbles some words of regret, Vlad does not listen to him and continues.
- You have a large collection of whores collected. Added there one more! And how do you like it, - nods at his wife. From these words, Kate shrinks. Indeed, she is one of the many whores Oleg. She makes another attempt to talk to Vlad, but he does not listen to her, starts the engine and leaves. Next comes the description of the third person. It tells how Vlad goes home. A familiar rumble appears in his head. He recalls how he met Kate when she was still a student, how he invited her for the first time, and was afraid that she would not come. As they walked at night holding hands, ate ice cream, went to the movies and kissed, kissed, kissed. He remembers their first sex. Everything was awkward, but so cool. The frequency of the hum in his head is increasing. Suddenly he sees Katya in the basement with Oleg. They fuck without paying any attention to him. He sees lust and passion in the eyes of his wife and realizes that this is not the girl he once loved. The pain and hum in the head become unbearable. It seems to Vlad that he is hanging over the precipice, and is holding his hands on some branch. Suddenly, the solution comes. There was nothing of this. Just when he ran out of the bath, he stumbled, hit his head and lost consciousness. He lay in bed all this time, unable to move, speak, think. Delusional vision captured his mind and replaced a real life, convinced him that only they are life ... Suddenly, he hears Katya's voice.
- Fourth day. That is, he is the fourth day unconscious. Now there was no doubt, nothing of this was there, his Katya was near, you just need to hug her and this nightmare will end.
- Kate, says Vlad and lets go ...
Next come the dry lines from the police report.On such a date, at such and such a kilometer of the *** highway, the driver of the Toyota Camry car drove into a lane intended for oncoming traffic and collided with a KAMAZ vehicle. The driver of the car Toyota died from his injuries on the spot, the driver of the truck got off with light bruises. Experts believe that, judging by the lack of a brake track, the driver fell asleep at the wheel. Overton window closed. And Vlad? Vlad went to the Land of Flowers, in which there is no place for hypocrisy, lies, betrayal and treason.
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Well, actually very good. Harsh, but Vlad defended himself. He could no longer live with Katya, and he didn’t want to live without her. And such a result. You see. Good story after all. There are many possible options for the development of the situation. That is all ambiguous.
My thoughts were more trivial. After the release, the investigation is choked and goes down on the brakes, because Katya did everything voluntarily. He breaks up with Oleg, divorces her. Oleg as a whole continues to live as he lived. Katya wakes up and realizes that she has lost. Well, Vlad still suffers, because he loved her. Your version is more dramatic.
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Yes, I did argue, the story is really good. hooked, as if Oleg himself weed smoked))). Just the denouement was really very banal. In the vast majority of stories such. And you want something unusual. Glad my version liked.
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Well, then, and the author's intention. Alex reduced to what the story began with and what Katya planned. And your version is punishing criminals, because you can call them that. And they live with it.
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Zhestko but more like the truth.
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What others did not like? cool story. Exciting and well written))). Maybe when they read in parts, they were expecting the same from each part as at the beginning, languor, new discoveries in the story. I read at once everything and everything as it should))) after the third part I was very worried and waited for a denouement, I was very afraid for a couple. Everything turned out very real!
And Katya is not a whore. Chauvinists-xenophobes gathered here! Go on the women themselves, change yours, call everyone around whores, you can also merge intimate photos of the former when parting. In life, everyone happens and girls are no worse than guys. All beautifully painted Alex
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Yes. If you read everything together, knowing the outcome, then everything looks logical and consistent. According to the author.
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Yes, Katya is certainly not a whore. But you can't call her a loving wife either. This is described in detail above. How can a truly loving woman treat such a damn disregard for her beloved man. You know, I had one case in my life. Nothing special there. My wife and I were going to visit. These were her guests, her company. And she was all in anticipation of meeting with her friends. I prepared for a long time, chose a dress, did a haircut ... Well, I don’t have to tell you how this happens. And on the eve I felt bad. The pressure jumped. Never before was and after too (pah pah). So, I really feel bad, but I am awake, I tell her they say go alone, I lie down. So she called me an ambulance. Those came, made some kind of hammer, but I hardly understand this, it became easier for me. Well, not so much to go, but I could even get up, the ground from under my feet stopped. I tell her, go. I feel better. And she patted me on the head and said: "Fool, how can I go to have fun, if I know that you feel bad." And I did not go anywhere, although I know for sure what she really wanted. You know, I am not a very sentimental man, but then I wanted to cry with the happiness that next to me is a woman who loves me. And only mine. All this is true, nothing is overpowered. And compare this with Katie's behavior. Let it be fiction.And draw conclusions. You really think they can have a happy future. You think that Vlad is such a naive simpleton that he will attribute everything to the action of this grass. Yes, he understood everything. Therefore, they have not had sex for two months, and virtually no relationship. And nothing can be fixed here. A terrible end is better than horror without end. Something like this.
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Wahmurka, I agree with you, but Katya is not only a false whore who says that she loves only her husband .... this is a fiend!
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Well, I would not be so categorical. The man is weak, and Katya is no exception. She lacked something with her husband. She would talk with him frankly, in bed for example, to share her fantasies, you see that something happened. In any case, she would know how her husband relates to them. Instead, she enters into correspondence with Oleg. A stranger is closer than her own husband. Well, she does not love him. Rather, the power of habit. And Oleg is a professional seducer. He is not the only one dragged into his bed. By the way a replica that he does not extend his fetish to friends does not correspond to reality. After all, it was he who started talking to Katya about intimate topics and threw the bait. And Katya got into his network. And in the country she just revealed in all its glory. She does not love her husband. After all, what is easier, go to the cage and ask, do you like it? No, she is busy only with herself. And the husband wants to tune for themselves. And he is not. Therefore, I do not believe that everything can be normal with them. If the author had left her a victim, as it seemed after part 3, then yes. And so, like the family and saved, but you know who betrayed once, betrayed the second.
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Well, it's still a story. Without Katina, there would be no mistake. There and in the plot were enough places to stop everything and clarify the relationship. But this did not happen, and therefore the result. Well, Vlad is not who we wanted to see him. Because of this, insulting. And if Katya stopped, then there would be no story. Well, after the strike, it was worthwhile to accurately round out and take him to the doctor. She believed Oleg and thought that he would not take her by force. So there were chances, but the author chose a different path.
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And he did not take it by force. She gave herself to him. She just wanted to be rude, but he told her about it in a correspondence. So she tried it on herself. I can see that while Vlad is unconscious and locked in a cage, Oleg paws her, removes her swimsuit from her, lets you put on those rags, she lies down on the bed, he chains her, voluntarily notice, and starts to fuck in her mouth. This is where Vlad came to. And seeing this, she portrays violence.
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This is me to the fact that it was the last chance to stop everything. Katya's wines are immeasurable, but Oleg beat him, which means he is no better. Vlad was not lucky that his childhood friend and wife turned out to be such people. He believed them all the same. And they betrayed him. Let's say so, without hitting this, the perception of the situation would be simpler. The author could continue to unwind the episode in the bath - and the three of us would have had sex, just the idea was completely different.
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So she understood in the bath that her husband was not ready. But this understanding did not prevent her from doing what she did. If she really had a love for her husband, she would have stopped. And so ...
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Well, then what about the story? After all, what is the site here? I, frankly, waited for Kati and Oleg's sex from the first part. And in general, not disappointed. Only an element with golden rain and licking Katya of the anus is not very, but this is a matter of taste. And the eyeliner to sex through the cutting down of Vlad is also not to their liking. For the rest, what is stated is received.
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Readers took the story very closely. In fact, Vlad did not know his wife. Well, all the same to notice that she is missing in sex something could or ask to talk.And Oleg turned up - and spun. Well, Overton's window with a cacold is purely for the plot and for sharpness. So you could just fuck. But the author has his own handwriting, with peeping, with the observation of betrayal. In all the stories the husbands see their wives fucked. Alex has such a feature. Well, here he went a little further. Make kakoldom the one who in fact was not.
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Yes, this is Alex’s style, I agree. Just some kind of stereotype can be traced. Yes, he himself seems to understand, since he says that the stories will be on a different subject, but with this one he takes a pause. It seems that soon we will not wait for the continuation of sports life and adventures with the boss. Alas.
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Well, sports can not continue. And with the boss, the topic of Edward's revenge can go to the reader. And style and stereotypes are inevitable. Every author is strong in his genre. Someone treason is good, others - peeping, the third - incest. Well, we, as readers, are free to choose. I don’t recall an author with different genres of comparable quality.
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The case when the comments read interesting story. I will try to explain what went wrong. The author himself admits that his Russian is not his native language. From here the error also has gone. Now I will explain what I mean. This story is about how the train first went one way and then switched to another. But for this there is an arrow on the train. And the author has removed this arrow. What I mean? The key point in the story is the description of a blowjob. This description is found twice, and in different interpretations. In the second part, Katya tells her husband what happened, and in the fourth part she tells this episode to a psychologist. The stories are different. And everything would be fine, because you can always say that Katya lied to her husband, reducing her guilt, and told the psychologist the truth. But that's the thing. If the author in the second part continued the description of Oleg's actions from Katya’s mouth, everything would be all right. But the author describes the actions of Oleg from a third party. Describing the action of a third party, you somehow planted an independent observer who impartially records what is happening. Point. Now you can not change the picture. And it turns out that his wife told Vlad the truth. And it is fixed on the subconscious by the reader. Wife victim. Everything, another interpretation can not be. Consequently, there was no collusion, correspondence, etc. Hence, the illogicality of the entire fourth part, which is obtained sewn with white thread to the story, climbs. Having described a third-person blowjob, the author set boundaries for which he should not have gone. From here and all comments with assumptions after the 3rd part. Especially distinguished Midas and Vakhmurka. Their assumptions were quite logical, they flowed from the logic of the whole story. The author unwittingly confused them, and not only them. Hence the disappointment of the last part. And one more thing. In the stories of this genre there is such a pattern. The wife fucks with her lover, her husband likes it. Depending on trashiness, everything is either limited to observing (like Alex has in most stories), or to the complete humiliation of the husband (spermolysis, sprinkling, etc.). So in this story, allowing violence against Vlad, the author went in principle, a strong peasant, as they say, with eggs, who did not accept the role assigned to him, but with honor got out of an unpleasant situation. And then, in the 4th part, the author tried to push the narrative into the framework of a certain standard. It turned out to be honest not. Actually, I liked the ending that Vakhmurka proposed as a script. Yes, it was tragic, but it is more consistent with the logic. Alex, if you are reading this, note the explanations about the third person. After all, you, as I understand it, write some serious thing. Take care of this. Sincerely.
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Good day. There is no third person narration in this story.
Thanks for your feedback! I read all the reviews, but I do not rely on recommendations.It's important for me to see how readers are involved in stories and whether they excite them. This is inspiration :)
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- Yeah ... your face is good ... you are a good bitch - Oleg pronounced sternly, shaking Katya's mouth.
- * Ghlob-ghlob-ghlob * - Vlad's wife choked on saliva.
- You also like to suck me, excites all this? - He asked, roughly putting his hand between her legs.
Katya stopped for a moment. Oleg's fingers began to penetrate her hole, and he gently prodvalivat them. Kate closed her eyes, shifted a little, and took them deeper into herself, pleasantly feeling how he was cheering on her.
- Yes, like this, well ... - Katya said, having bent her head under herself, then continued to gnaw Oleg's cock.
She never took his penis in her hand and never touched him and did not take any initiative in sex. She just became his thing and took caresses men.
- Suck, suck, suck, girl. Since you are so good, I want you to know that all I just said was a lie. But it will remain our secret. Are you alright with me? - Oleg stopped, waiting for a reaction.
Kate got! She lamented and was ready to run away, but suddenly realized that it would be very difficult for her husband to explain how she could suck his friend, especially since he lied so convincingly, she could continue to lie and complicate everything. She did not want to lose her beloved husband, and, of course, least of all wanted him to know about it.
Meanwhile, Oleg continued to masturbate Kate between her legs and the excitement did not subside. Katya hesitantly continued to suck, before she had time to think things through.
After some time, Vlad's voice was heard.
Here is this fragment.
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This is a retelling of her words to Vlad. This need not necessarily be true, even if it is in the format of a third party.
In films, people also retell the situation and the viewer can show what happened in the past time, and then someone tells a different version and the viewer shows the same picture, just a different version.
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That's right, but there is no speech on behalf of the announcer, for example. A pier was so and so. There someone tells, and on the basis of this story is a video series. That is, this is a story from the first person, not from the third. Then another person can tell the same story differently, and this will again be a first-person story. If you continued to describe everything with Kati’s words, it would be a first-person story. But you describe the process from the outside, and this is already a third person narration.
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I know that this retelling was from a third person. But I do not understand where the connection is and why the reader should believe in it.
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cool!! excites and stirs)) pity there was no sex in the last part with the gene
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I probably do not know how to explain))). This is how the narrator in the film. He voiced the events that occurred in reality. Well, for example, "Stirlitz was returning to Berlin." And yet, there can be no other interpretation of this phrase! She goes from the third person. And when you describe a scene from a third person, this is the same. For example: He said. She said. This is from the third. But I said He answered - from the first. Then we can assume that the one who tells tells the version he needs. A third-person fact is just stated. Like here it was.
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It's not obligatory. In this case, the story in the third person to return the reader to those events, as if changing the picture and memories are, but they can also be false. Nowhere are such rules stated that this should be a fact. In the fourth part there is no narration in the third person, because the story went on behalf of Katy and there was an explanation of what actually happened and the dotting of points over i.
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Well, in fact, if the memories are coming, it means they are coming from someone's face. That is from the first. In the fourth part, Katya tells the psychologist what was going on. This is a story from the first person, and in fact she can lie or embellish. Why should we believe her? And when telling from a third person, you do not convey the words of someone, but describe events as they happened in reality. That's what I wanted to say. Believe me, I do not find fault, just for example, I immediately had a feeling of truth. It is because of the third person narration. Well, that is, if someone is standing and watching, and transmitting to us.
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I will support In theory, memories should come from the first person, the same memories, and not objective reality. Memories convey emotions, they may be erroneous or distorted. And here it is written as if it were a statement of facts, and not someone's subjective opinion.
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About that and speech. The author in the second part calls black black, and in the fourth, black black white. And it turns out that the whole ending is far-fetched. The author obviously tried to please everyone, although for some reason he denied this in the comments. Here you have a happy ending, the family is preserved, and the husband seems to be a rag, but on the other hand, he did like it. Although, if you liked it so much, then pulled out of the cage at the first opportunity. Sit, jerk and rejoice. And the situation when the husband jerks almost at a party, generally nonsense. The author smeared the whole story with a final.
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I, frankly, completely mastered this story. She immediately seemed to me far-fetched. I was led to high marks and many views, but it was not that cruel, but a little disappointed.
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Yes, it was an interesting idea, too. There, in the comments after the second and especially the third part of Midas with Vakhmurka, trying to understand the motivation of the characters expressed quite interesting and sensible thoughts about what was written and about the direction in which to move. But the author did not listen to them, which in principle is his right, and finished the story as he wanted. It’s a pity that a good story could have gone out, but a banal tale turned out, because the author did not go beyond the boundaries of the stereotypes given by the name of the genre.
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About that fragment from a third party is forced to agree. Reread several times. It turned out that Katya lied to Vlad, then she told the truth about Oleg, precisely on the basis of the message that she was an outsider. As if just hears and sees what is happening. The psychologist has this moment different, completely different. I acquitted Alex by the method of an unreliable narrator, though not very skillfully used. And in general, the moment of transition from observation to active actions is very clumsy. This is confusing. I thought, well, put it to sleep. Let Kate continue to play the victim. And why did Oleg humiliate him then? In general, there is a flaw. But overall not bad. Against the background of what is usual here. And the Procrustean bed of the genre has not been canceled.
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You see, you also understood this. As if in a bath there is an independent observer, he sees everything and tells us. This is the author's mistake, which I wrote to him about, but he does not want to admit it. He says that the story on behalf of Katy is an epilogue, where all the dots over i are placed in the dialogue. And why should we believe Kate? She can lie, for example, in order to shield Oleg. Maybe she suspects that the psychologist is working for the police. She says that she loves her husband, and with Oleg, just a passion. Or maybe the other way around, It's just her words. Maybe she fell in love with him, and is afraid that he will suffer. She says her husband is jerking off. Again, these are just her words. From the first person! No one has seen and can not confirm or deny. But if the author wrote from a third party, such as Katya came into the room and saw ..., then it would be true.But he wrote: I walked quietly near and saw there WLA, who had watched it. He watched it all, where I was thrashed by Oleg. Everything. These are only Katy's words, not supported by anything. We can believe them, but we can not believe. And in the scene in the second part there is no reason not to trust the narrator, he “sees” everything from the outside. Why am I writing in such detail? Alex said that he wrote a longrid on this subject. Honestly it would be interesting to read, but I would not like to see such bloopers there. And about the Procrustean bed of the genre. Well, maybe so, but here Vakhmurka in the comments above departed the same, and it seemed to work out quite well. No need to be held hostage to stereotypes. Yes, I agree, in general, it turned out well. The first three parts are so just fine, but the ending pumped up.
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Nobody has canceled the Procrustean bed of the genre, this is true, but one should not think in stereotypes either. Vaughn In the comments above, Wahmurka departed from them, and it seemed to work out well.
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So few movies you reviewed. The story, even in a third-person film, even with a speaker, can be false. Roughly speaking, the scene changes and the viewer is returned to that situation, then, as it turned out, it was all a lie. And the story on behalf of Katy is an epilogue, where all the dots over i are really placed in the dialogues.
If I did not live up to the reader's predictions, then this is even great! :) unpredictability is better than orders and wishes.
And if the outcome is stunned, outraged, that's good. So hooked;)
I once watched the Sleeping Beauty movie. So, she led a normal life there and earned that she was pumped with sleeping pills and put men under her, but she did not know about that. One day she woke up and a dead man was lying next to her, and she was frightened. The end, the whole movie. I was waiting for the whole movie, and at the end "what was it?"
Or, for example, performance! There is an advertisement in the city that there will be a performance, but it is very crumpled to inform that there will be on this performance. Everyone is asked to bring along an extra pair of aphid shoes, even two. You enter a large hall, white walls everywhere, and in the middle, at the end, there is a thug, and next to it is a shoe-cleaning machine. And nothing else, the whole room, like a large football field, is empty! You bring out the champagne, you communicate with the guests while standing in line to clean shoes, and share the reaction.
This was not, I am telling it as an example. Perhaps you were expecting something else, but what you got was your emotions.
The presentation of art can be in any form, much less a form of narration. You only say "little story", but I do not believe you. You read four parts, registered and from thirty thousand stories you chose mine to criticize and no one else!
Very familiar, and I explained from where the roots grow :)
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Then the legs))) Legs grow. You see, Russian is not native to you, as you yourself have reported. Therefore, you do not see the difference between the narration from the first and from the third person. The third person narrative is always objective. It is like an independent observer who sees the whole picture, and tells us what is happening. The third person narrative cannot be false. If, as you say in the film, one is shown first, and then we are returned to the same place, but with a different interpretation, then in the first case there was a first-person narration, and in the second, from the third. For example, the suspect tells the investigator his version. And we are shown how it all happened. This is a first person narrative! And then they show how it really was. This is from the third! Understand that. And about the "criticize." I just pointed out the error to you, nothing more. Yes, I did not like the last part, but the first three "went." Yes, I registered to write to you and be able to communicate. I hope that when you add your longrid, you post information about it so that we can read it. This is really interesting.And it will be annoying if there are such bloopers in it. I hope I have not offended you. Thank you for answering.
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Feet grow! You see, Russian is not native to you, which you yourself reported. You do not see the difference between the first person and the third person narration. The third person narration is always objective. It is as an independent observer, telling us what is happening, while the first-person narrative shows the opinion and thoughts of a particular character. The movies are the same. And I do not criticize your story at all, only the last part, which I did not like. The first three are called. I hope I have not offended you. Thanks for answering.
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Your criticism is fair. It was necessary that the blowjob only through the eyes of Oleg show. Then we would not know. And from the third person it looked like Katya told in the second part. But Alex is right. Judging by the attention of readers, the story does not leave indifferent. And this brings the author to the level of Gifted Writer and Lena_V
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No, not with Oleg’s eyes, but with Katy’s eyes. After all, she told her husband what happened. It was she who lied to him. And then everything would be logical. And because of the description from the third person, it turns out that Katya told her husband the truth, and she turns to a psychologist. What for? I don’t know, maybe he wants to shield Oleg, because he has fallen in love with him and is afraid that the psychologist will tell the police everything.
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The thing is that when Kati's words are interspersed with a description from a third person, it seems that this is from Oleg. And then it is clear that from a third party. And that description coincides with the story of Katya from the beginning of the second part. And the episode is differently described by the psychologist. And so the option with the description on behalf of Oleg would have helped out. And the option chosen by the author is confusing. And here you are right that it is possible that the Russian is not native or something else. But if you read the story first, knowing about the intentions of Kati and Oleg, then these rough edges are smoothed out. And our perception is largely due to the fact that readers (in many respects I and Vakhmurka mostly) came up with ideas for development, based on the author’s hints after the second and especially the third part. And the denouement is different, completely different. And here, of course, we burst out with a huge amount of comments, although Alex didn’t leave his plan. Just at the first reading, Katya seemed to be under hypnosis, a dope, and then a coup. But the second time you read, everything is in its place. But you treat it differently. But this of course does not alter the fact that the author admits inaccuracies that affect perception.
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Midas, just managed to read the dialogue. Thank you for such flattery - I am really pleased. Gifted Writer, I think, still writes much better than other writers, and several levels above Lena V. I almost want to belittle her level, no doubt her stories from the female face are interesting and piquant and four years ago I re-read her stories enthusiastically, but This is a different format of stories.
Giftedu can write books and publish them, and maybe even film them, and we share stories, fantasies that excite us. The two volumes of Christina, the dissolute wife of Eldar, are a masterpiece. Mongolian, Second Mother, Vicious Wedding, unwillingly Swingers - excellent work.
I still reread his works; this is the highest level of the writing craft of ST.
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