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Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
I know that this retelling was from a third person. But I do not understand where the connection is and why the reader should believe in it.
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
This is a retelling of her words to Vlad. This need not necessarily be true, even if it is in the format of a third party.
In films, people also retell the situation and the viewer can show what happened in the past time, and then someone tells a different version and the viewer shows the same picture, just a different version.
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Good day. There is no third person narration in this story.
Thanks for your feedback! I read all the reviews, but I do not rely on recommendations. It's important for me to see how readers are involved in stories and whether they excite them. This is inspiration :)
Comment on publication: Fuck it I'm ready. Part 3
10 points! The story is excellent and painful. In the first part I noticed it for myself. There is a certain youthful charm :)
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10 points
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
I read your reviews! It's great that so much readers can dive into the story.
About the number of comments. Personally, I have slightly different goals, this is an opportunity to monetize and increase the number of readers (views), for future more worthy works than this.
Under current conditions, with a huge loss of audiences, starting from that year, I still manage to collect 50k views. And one story collected 100k. Now this is a super difficult task, with the most readable incest now only for registered users.
All the balls until the middle of 2017 could be screwed up and almost all the stories were screwed up, but I don’t know the comments, so it’s possible. I have stories before the update site, when I did not really know how to write, collected 50-60k views. Voices, you can see, at 70-100 maximum dialed. Stories with the same number of views, or even less or more by 20k, which are in the top 250, collected 250, 500, and even 800 votes each. I doubt that it was my readers who preferred to abstain, and there readers willingly voted that way))) certainly, I’m Gifu, Lena, and the little-known Siberian, no match, but I think you can update the site again by choosing the jury that will create a section with selected " good "and" selected "stories.
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
By the way, I read the story about which you spoke repeatedly from sex_master, although only the first part, there was no time.
I do not want to offend the author, but this is an exact muffled copy of the story of my acquaintance of a colleague, which it is better not to mention here once again, and whose works were removed from here.
Perhaps the rights have been redeemed for this story, but this is more like plagiarism.
The most amazing thing is that after the complaint of sex_master, the administration issued me an impeachment about my old stories with a paid sequel. But at the same time, the author of sex_master "borrowed" just the same story from that very site from this person. Therefore, considering that sex_master thought that that site belongs to me, I can conclude that he does not know the owner of the site and the author of the story, which is duplicated for sex_master.
Before your review did not have time to get. A little later, I look!
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Honestly, until you said, I didn’t think that the same scenario was rolling :) It seems to me that there is a difference and Katya really loves her husband. It was a case, but in general she was always worried and did not think that everything would turn out that way. They found a way out, they live on, Vlad doesn’t really know that this was part of her idea. She did not spoil the relationship with him and they gradually came to harmony.
That's all. Adults, however, agreed.
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
I do not quite understand what you are writing. "Bo" is where this jargon come from? Moldovan or Ukrainian? I do not know what this word means. Rl? Real life?
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
So psychologists call the cops, when at the moment nothing threatens anyone now? An interesting version. And what exactly is the psychologist saying wrong? Did he have to tell her husband everything? Like his patient - Kate. Usually, people rarely turn to shrinkage in a rashka, preferring to decide everything themselves, and if they do, it is too late, when a lot of firewood was broken. How exactly should psychologists behave in such cases? Hand over the traitors and destroy the marriage?
What is sirye? Raw in the sense? Well, look how readers are worried about the “stupid” Vlad. There are more comments than the story itself. Really 4 parts read without experiences? Then I would not even read the second part if I spat like characters :)