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Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Exactly! :)
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
There are not a few stories published in short than the reviews in my stories
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
I assure you, I wrote to please myself)))
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Serious analysis! Honestly, I did not think that so many caring people would get together.
Regarding the video - I noticed this moment of discontent here many times. He left a lot open for the reader to finish drawing himself. One could imagine that Vlad actually took video evidence when he was in the basement, but hid it in the story, and from his wife, so that the materials would not have to be handed over to the police or destroyed, but to enjoy himself, since he is a latent fan of it. One could imagine that it was Oleg who had persuaded him to talk with Katya in the water park, and the blow was rigged (for the third time, to turn everything upside down), and in fact all these videos were made for him, knowing that Katya would not voluntarily go on such a venture with mzhm and sex with another man. Therefore an opportunity for the reader to imagine
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Who told you that I was trying to please someone? I wrote that I myself wanted :) very few people liked this ending;)
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Thanks for the review! It is very commendable for me that I was so hooked on the story, even emotionally, rather than agitating :)
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Thanks for the feedback! Directness is good :)
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Thanks for the feedback, Mig, and for your time!
Russian is not native, but, really, I managed to reread only half of the story, alas. There was not enough time, I was writing straight for the morning and was going about my business. So full of reviews that delay with the sequels.
But what is not enough jerkiness is yes. I have not yet decided to end the dilemma how to keep the same degree without losing the logic.
Such successful work I have seen only a few authors in this genre.
But I was very inspired by the litigation between the sexwifters and the kukoldonnavistnikov :)
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
It's nice that the female half also reads my stories! I thought I could not wait for such a gap, after Roskomnadzor ousted half of the old guard.
I went through your comments. It is a pity there is no auto-signature, they could have entered there “if only not for the Kukold!”))) This is not the psychology of men, but the truth is mother. Man or woman, they change not all, but many. In the days of ancient Greece, before our era, betrayal and homosexuality flourished.
The institution of marriage and truth in many developing cities of the golden billion is bursting at the seams. Divorce proceedings are increasing. You are categorical or not, but this is human nature. We are good, but there are also bad ones, everything happens from time to time. Many change, though not all. Someone hides, and then everything pops up. Someone changes and everything remains a secret. But life, an interesting thing, sometimes it returns us to the former places. And somewhere mutually go on sexual adventures. Everywhere a different policy.
In any case, someone will say "kicks, jerk off," and someone will say, "Fu, husband chmoshnik!".This story is an overtone window for me.
I once thought to write, and even somewhere there is a draft of 2-3 A4 pages about cuckqween (a mirror - when the wife is lower, and the husband is having fun with others), but the same story with the dacha, which belonged to the wife’s friend. Friend alpha, wife beta.
Wait for new stories in other genres :)
Comment on publication: With my wife in a friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Thanks for the feedback! It's nice that someone my filter letter like 10 points :)
It was a kind of stage for a small upgrade and "vision of the conduct" of stories. I constantly took on RPG stories, which is very difficult for narrating literary cross-genres of “excited / literary logical”. More and all hated Seksvayf choose. Phew you! Maybe fellow writers have already noticed that when they encroach on this genre, they seize a pack of stakes. Now look at the lesbian tales - no matter the story, then 9-10 points.
And if you write RPG, then, for example, Pickup will go much easier, changing women partners, without having marriage morals, humiliation of the husband and other justice. Some can peretrakhat the whole world, while others can not change it once or twice. And if they change, it is only quiet, so that no one will know! And so that her husband was not laid as slaves, blasphemers! And only men can change women!
In the near future I will definitely enjoy new stories, but with the seksvayf until time out :) And with RPG - even more so!