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Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Midas, just managed to read the dialogue. Thank you for such flattery - I am really pleased. Gifted Writer, I think, still writes much better than other writers, and several levels above Lena V. I almost want to belittle her level, no doubt her stories from the female face are interesting and piquant and four years ago I re-read her stories enthusiastically, but This is a different format of stories.
Giftedu can write books and publish them, and maybe even film them, and we share stories, fantasies that excite us. The two volumes of Christina, the dissolute wife of Eldar, are a masterpiece. Mongolian, Second Mother, Vicious Wedding, unwillingly Swingers - excellent work.
I still reread his works; this is the highest level of the writing craft of ST.
Comment on publication: New sensations ..
D. I. Do not pay attention to the negative, it will always be enough, especially if your story is integrated into the main page.
Objectively I will tell you that a very good and interesting description. At first it’s hard to write long stories - I understand! Go on, if it carries it to this steppe, in series. Advance put 10. Thank you!
If the goal is to continue to excite, then regardless of your real life, you need to continue to raise the degree in Irina's life, but at the same time as close as possible to the logical reality, that is, the motives, the origin of thoughts, ideas.
“This story is based on real events” - far from everyone will be affected if it is not enough jerky.
Comment on publication: My wife is with a stranger on the train. Part 2: The night goes on
Good day. Contact the site administration, each site has contact information. I write stories, but I am not responsible for the mechanisms of sites.
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
I noticed your comment! Kalash, you practice seksvayf?)
Comment on publication: My wife is with a stranger on the train. Part 2: The night goes on
Dear readers.
I am glad to inform you that I recently created a telegram channel where you can follow the news of my work, chat with me, and also in the future leave feedback in the chat that I will create! If you wish, you can keep your anonymity and I will not recognize your contact details;)
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Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Part 1
Dear readers.
I am glad to inform you that I recently created a telegram channel where you can follow the news of my work, chat with me, and also in the future leave feedback in the chat that I will create! If you wish, you can keep your anonymity and I will not recognize your contact details;)
Link to my telegram channel: https://t.me/alextales
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Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
Dear readers.
I am glad to inform you that I recently created a telegram channel where you can follow the news of my work, chat with me, and also in the future leave feedback in the chat that I will create! If you wish, you can keep your anonymity and I will not recognize your contact details;)
Link to my telegram channel: https://t.me/alextales
There is no advertising for third-party resources.
Comment on publication: Magic masseuse
Dear readers.
I am glad to inform you that I recently created a telegram channel where you can follow the news of my work, chat with me, and also in the future leave feedback in the chat that I will create! If you wish, you can keep your anonymity and I will not recognize your contact details;)
Link to my telegram channel: https://t.me/alextales
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Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
So few movies you reviewed. The story, even in a third-person film, even with a speaker, can be false. Roughly speaking, the scene changes and the viewer is returned to that situation, then, as it turned out, it was all a lie. And the story on behalf of Katy is an epilogue, where all the dots over i are really placed in the dialogues.
If I did not live up to the reader's predictions, then this is even great! :) unpredictability is better than orders and wishes.
And if the outcome is stunned, outraged, that's good. So hooked;)
I once watched the Sleeping Beauty movie. So, she led a normal life there and earned that she was pumped with sleeping pills and put men under her, but she did not know about that. One day she woke up and a dead man was lying next to her, and she was frightened. The end, the whole movie. I was waiting for the whole movie, and at the end "what was it?"
Or, for example, performance! There is an advertisement in the city that there will be a performance, but it is very crumpled to inform that there will be on this performance. Everyone is asked to bring along an extra pair of aphid shoes, even two. You enter a large hall, white walls everywhere, and in the middle, at the end, there is a thug, and next to it is a shoe-cleaning machine. And nothing else, the whole room, like a large football field, is empty! You bring out the champagne, you communicate with the guests while standing in line to clean shoes, and share the reaction.
This was not, I am telling it as an example. Perhaps you were expecting something else, but what you got was your emotions.
The presentation of art can be in any form, much less a form of narration. You only say "little story", but I do not believe you. You read four parts, registered and from thirty thousand stories you chose mine to criticize and no one else!
Very familiar, and I explained from where the roots grow :)
Comment on publication: With my wife at my friend's cottage. Epilogue: Katya
It's not obligatory. In this case, the story in the third person to return the reader to those events, as if changing the picture and memories are, but they can also be false. Nowhere are such rules stated that this should be a fact. In the fourth part there is no narration in the third person, because the story went on behalf of Katy and there was an explanation of what actually happened and the dotting of points over i.