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Comment on publication: Group Chapter 3
You see, all the plots have long been predictable. Therefore, the point is not in the plot, but in the characters and in what the author wants to show, say. I do not take offense at you for your opinion. On the contrary, it is very pleasant that you openly express yourself. Most comments come down to "cool, waiting for the product."
Comment on publication: Group Chapter 3
Ha! “Weak-willed characters” :) Do you really think that the story (which threatens to turn into a novel) is called “The Group” just like that? Not "trying to rebel"? Does it bother you that Dasha called again and invited her to the gallery now, where will the lead singer of the group “GG” come to?
Comment on publication: Group Chapter 3
OK. I will answer your question with flashback in the text deployed. In a nutshell: Lisa is influenced by her mother, who really wants her daughter to marry successfully. Anton, in her opinion, the best candidate. (He himself also dug in confidence in the future mother-in-law).
Comment on publication: Group Chapter 3
What you Lisa did not please? :) She forcefully pulled under the crown. Groom is a goat, can't you see? Decided to cut the guest list, because the miser. She, of course, is also not a gift, but at least she tries.
Comment on publication: Daughters-mothers. Chapters 15-17
The following part did not pass moderation: (Official reason: “Break the publication into equal paragraphs.” The text does not differ in formatting from my other stories (in the amount of 121). I still have no conclusions.
Comment on publication: Group Chapter 3
I'm not used to it :) Units and colas are all my friends.
Comment on publication: Group Chapter 3
Thank. "Group" still shoot. There (here) is very correct in all respects the plot. With the first doors, escalation, the moment of "mirror", the outcome (second doors). Plus sex as a necessary tool for the development of the plot, and not as a by-product.
Comment on publication: Daughters-mothers. Chapters 15-17
Thank you, Venguard. I’ve just gone to moderation chapters 18-23. Enjoy reading.
Comment on publication: Chill out Vasya!
I fasten everything, I fasten. I just can not tie. Thanks for the beads. You are already the third person who writes me about the same in the comments.
Comment on publication: Molotov cocktail
I had a case: four pairs of young people celebrated DR in a sauna. Girls in bikinis, boys in swimming trunks. They drank champagne and beer, it seems. All decently passed. There was not even a hint of erotica: - (Once upon a time it is not necessary, and depends on the company.