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Maxime

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  • December 25, 2017 23:47

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 10

    Everything almost happened. “He is tortured” - a check, “he still manages to escape” - a check, “finds Muller and smears it on the wall” - a double check.

    • Rating: 0
  • July 27, 2016 0:01

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 12

    Tell it to Tolstoy when he wrote “War and Peace” :)
    In this chapter, you learned about the effects of the drug, how girls are being sucked in. It is important to understand what options the hero has to achieve the goal.

    • Rating: 2
  • July 26, 2016 9:30

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 12

    I will write now. Yesterday it was too late. Here is:
    “Roskas shit. You can be better than Maxi. ”

    • Rating: 2
  • July 18, 2016 20:48

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 11

    Really. From Wikipedia: "The combination of the posts of the Secretary General and the Chairman of the Presidium of the Supreme Council was observed in 1977-1985 and 1988-1989."
    But not for Gromyko.
    And you, Cat Scientist, apparently, the old school. :) Thanks for the attentive reading.

    • Rating: 0
  • July 11, 2016 21:22

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 10

    Physiology does not allow. But “deep throat” is a well-known trick.

    • Rating: 1
  • July 11, 2016 21:15

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 10

    But how does the hero save Angela, if the Klyuchnikov sect got to power? It is not known who else of the higher-ranking officials has to do with this. No, our hero will now have to think in a different direction.

    • Rating: 1
  • July 11, 2016 10:28

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 10

    Dear Myrumyr. Scenarios for your favorite TV shows have long been written. But you are thinking in the right direction, “Distributor” can be filmed, make a series of him.
    What about erotica. The site has a category "Erotic tale." I think you go there.

    • Rating: 0
  • July 11, 2016 0:48

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 10

    But it was so. Brad is when:

    March 23, 1994, Colombia
    18-year-old Ronald Opus decided to commit suicide. Climbing onto the roof of a 10-story building, he scrawled a suicide note and rushed down.
    When the guy flew past the 9th floor, a stray bullet fired from the 8th floor window hit his head. Death came at once. It turned out that at the time of the jump in one of the apartments there was a quarrel between the elderly spouses. When all the arguments were exhausted, the husband grabbed a shotgun and fired at the spouse. And missed! The shot charge flew into the open window and hit the suicidal loser in the head.
    The most interesting thing is that Ronald would not have died after the jump.
    At the level of the eighth floor, the “safety net” was stretched. It was installed to protect pedestrians below from accidentally dropping objects from the roof during repairs.
    The case was closed as suicide ...

    • Rating: 5
  • July 3, 2016 23:29

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 9

    Climbing Everest "Jackpot" choked half-way. I chose a dead-end ridge that led me to a cleft. We must go back to the moment before Italy and remind the hero that more than anything in the world he wants to be happy with Anya.
    In the "Distributor" is also a temptation to forget about Angela and the promise to save the girls from slavery. Everything can trite roll to the "scavenger".
    Write a novel is very, very difficult. Especially me, especially considering that there are so many temptations on the way.
    Thank you for the “best HBO series” :)

    • Rating: 2
  • July 3, 2016 10:29 PM

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 9

    Fantasy hand does not turn to put. Fantasy is goblins, orcs, hobbits ... I have everything on the verge of a foul.
    Outcast - from her point of view. Or so the hero thinks she still thinks ...

    • Rating: 1
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