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Maxime

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  • June 30, 2016 20:44

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 7

    That's right. And our hero calls Angela and says:
    - I'm going to the prosecutor's office. Are you with me?
    The reaction of the big girl plunged into shock.
    - Dimochka, are you out of your mind? You thought it all up, she began gently. - Well, we had sex a couple of times, but this does not mean that I should meet with you now. Can you not calm down? You chase me, call at night, watch over the porch. You're crazy, look at yourself - she theatrically raised her voice to a nasty squeal. - Invented some kind of lock. And then what? Handcuffs, chain, doghouse? You know what they do with such perverts in prisons? Do you want me to write a statement to you? - and hung up.

    This is the next chapter of the appendage ... That is, the hero is afraid to go to the trackers, because it may turn against him:

    “It’s only one of them to give a hint how they will immediately take me into circulation,” I submitted, as an investigator for particularly important cases, summoning me his line for questioning and oppression:
    “Why did you decide to hang citizen A. on the vagina?”
    For the same reason, I didn’t want to tell my brother. After all, if Zlata or Angela is taken to the clinic for examination and suddenly it turns out that the castle is really hanging or jolly and that the applicant’s brother, not the company's director, is to blame, then they will sue me as a particularly dangerous maniac pervert. And there is a prison article cock. After all, no one will believe me, no one.
    “I need proof, not empty words,” thought contritely, tormented by doubts.

    Such is the logic. A test purchase, audio, video recordings - all this is not a ride. After all, the hero happened to be in the workshop under the table. In all other moments, the girls act on the plan "BDSM". And they will even show a finger on the Hero, just that.

    • Rating: 0
  • June 30, 2016 20:36

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 8

    Dear reader, and all readers. You really forgive me if the plot is not good. But the plot plan is already painted to the end and I do not want to change it. There will be no homosyatin, there will be no unexpected change of roles ... Chernukh ... Well, I don’t know, depending on what I mean. I'll tell you honestly why I'm writing this shit. Because it excites me - once, and because I learn to write a novel - two. A novel is 300+ thousand printed characters with spaces or 50+ thousand words. For me, it's like climbing Everest. The higher, the less oxygen and the more temptation to turn back. The main goal of the hero - to release the slaves and beloved Angela, to achieve her favor and be happy. I will strive for this goal together with the Hero ...

    • Rating: 2
  • June 30, 2016 8:14

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 7

    That's right. Only girls and Muller at the same time. They are ready to make the hero crazy to hide a secret. No one will examine them. And even if they appoint an examination, they will take off the locks temporarily and everything will be chiki-kick. A hero put on a pencil and sent to the army for a violent fantasy. Same with brother. Of course, you can tell. Only who will believe? Thank you for your comment. I will add a small paragraph of this reasoning to the text to explain the hero’s behavior.

    • Rating: 0
  • June 27, 2016 23:09

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 7

    And how would you have acted on the site of the hero, if you did not have the opportunity to ask the police for help? Would you go save the girls yourself? :)

    • Rating: 0
  • June 27, 2016 0:47

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 6

    According to the plan, the lock cannot be opened with a pin. This is a serious Japanese mechanism. It can only be broken, a snack, for example, special nippers.
    Girls wear locks not because they cannot be removed, but because there are other circumstances forcing them to obey, not to go to the police, lie to guys, have sex for money under the pretext of network sales.
    I repeat, we do not know how the Master looks after the girls. But, judging by the way they masturbate, when there is half an hour free, everything is serious.

    • Rating: 1
  • June 27, 2016 0:23

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 6

    I assure you, everything is much simpler. It is only called “barn lock” or “padlock”. They are very small - with a nail size. As for hygiene, consider all personal belongings as an ingenious piercing. There are no problems with piercing? It is inconvenient to urinate, but in principle it is possible.
    Menstruation, hygiene - we do not know how the girls communicate with the Boss there. Maybe he frees them in the evening, in the morning he gets hooked again.
    The design of the spring ... Imagine that the spring bends and does not straighten. Those. she can be given a convenient form. Or it is initially slightly arched.

    • Rating: 1
  • June 26, 2016 19:28

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapter 6

    I hope so too :)

    • Rating: 1
  • June 23, 2016 20:46

    Comment on publication: Distributor. Chapters 1-4

    This is not the end. Total planned 9 chapters. Now I will send to moderation 5th. At the end of the story I will write the word "End" :)
    Thanks for the nice words.

    • Rating: 1
  • March 31, 2016 9:25

    Comment on publication: Changed story evaluation rules

    Absolutely right. But there is a different motivation. If the stakes are put in order to harm, drop the "opponent", then dozens - usually their own - put in order to win the competition, for example. Or "by friendship."
    In short, I propose to make the estimates completely open: who, when and how much has set. So that for each user there is a list of ratings he has been given, so that for each story there is a list of ratings with an indication of who gave a rating. So that the people know their heroes. Who wants to put a rating, let it be registered. His story on this site is his face. In any soc. networks can not even fart, but what to say, even sniff someone else's bunch without registering. And we have a democracy. Carousel in the elections.

    • Rating: 0
  • March 30, 2016 23:21

    Comment on publication: Changed story evaluation rules

    "Favorites" can vote a maximum of one time. And those who simply read often do not just read, but regularly put one (1) big healthy orange in the author's basket. Moreover, in the same basket. And here two dozen opinions consist of one dozen “mere mortal” oranges, i.e., “dead souls” and one dozen opinions of the “chosen”. Further worse: some "favorites" do not want to be so. They regularly perform the rite of reincarnation, turning into a legion of "dead souls." The Legion rages, settling in the poor soul of the "chosen" and easily leaving it. From this, the "chosen ones" are further strengthened in the awareness of their "chosenness."

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