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and not starting.
Bugay Dima Matsur jumped into the font, hungry piglet pushed me away from the trough and began to greedily lick Lenin the clitoris.
I decided to take a timeout. In the end, my body has not yet departed from a crushing orgasm, tested in the dexterous hands of a fighting friend. I wanted to refresh myself, and I headed to the rest room, where, judging by the sounds, no less interesting things were happening.
The door was ajar, it was easy for me to slip in and go unnoticed. In any case, the participants of the orgy, arranged on a leather sofa, did not pay me the slightest attention. Olya was lying on her back under the fat man Denis Nechayev. He actively worked his hips, vkolachivaya sharp thin, like a pig, a member in Olin shave vagina. Andrei was sitting at the head of the bed and pushing a long sausage into her mouth. She, it seems, did not in any way conflict with the girls' complexes, completely devoting herself to depraved sex with two guys. Nechaev stretched out on her, pressing down with a soft belly, Olina's legs folded at the knees, dispersed in the pelvis. He gouged her brutally, drawing herself into a dance.
- Oh, Vitek! - shouted Andrew, noticing me at last. - And here we are with Olya, do you mind? - he broke into a stupid grin.
- Olya, are you alright? - frowning, I asked.
- Will you watch? She hissed, lifting her elbows.
“If you want, let's go home together now,” I suggested naively.
- Go to hell! - she exploded, turning over, kneeling. She put her ass to Andrew, she turned over to face Dona.
“You’d wear condoms or something,” I frowned.
“You don't trust us?” - grinned Andrei.
- Why does she need condoms? - poddnul Dony. They laughed, groaning, like draft horses. - She's on tablets!
- What pills? - The message shocked me.
- Contraceptive - Andrew winked, slapping his sister in the ass.
Olya, flying up in the back, moaning like an abnormal one. I think she worked for the public, that is, she tried for me. To annoy me. This her hers to do everything in spite of her parents, to get out of the care of her elder brother, led her through life. I could not imagine how far she could go in her efforts.
It remained for me to see that the guys did not make Ole hurt, to wait and hope that she would suddenly come to her senses, return to repentance, which invariably arose even in such a restless girl as she.
The guys came off is not a child. Having reached the passionate beauty, corrupted by wine and disagreement with the vicissitudes of fate, all three of them went to hell. That is, Olina's holes were scored with powerful longitudinal punches. Closing it together, they increased the onslaught. Slaps fell on the ass of my sister, who had only recently snooped around the school corridors in a brown dress with a white apron.
I poured into a chair, poured myself red wine into a glass, plunged into the contemplation of an eighteen year old harlot, who, according to the assurances of the boys, took the pill.
"How long? - I thought. “How long has this been going on?” All those boys she met with had sex with her too? When did she start? ”
When the moment was missed, I asked myself a parental question, why did my sister hide the adventures so carefully?
My experiences were diluted by the appearance of Lena.
- Oh, oil painting! She exclaimed, winking at me. - Spying on your sister?
- Now you can - I raised my eyebrows, we grinned at each other.
- Let's go take a steam bath, - she pulled me by the hand, and we went into the steam room.
Sveta and Nastya did not waste time here. Left alone with the omnipresent Dima, they entwined in a love triangle, satisfying each other in the best traditions of group sex.
I just managed to go nuts and plunk on the lower shelf, as Lena saddled me, sitting on top. Our heated bodies rubbed in the groin, I quickly felt a surge of sexual energy.A second later, my dick slipped into Lena's tender hot slit, and we started moving in a dance of love. Slammed the door, Satisfied Andrew, finished with his sister, joined the bacchanalia. Big-breasted Sveta, who was standing on the edge, met his molestation by arching her back, an invitation to action. All three couples competed in the selection of poses and the presentation of accessible love on display. We admired each other and enjoyed the action, which acquired a soft unhurried nature. The steam room was dry and not too hot, so we forgot in the dance.
It was drawn Olya with Denis. She was rosy and cheerful, like a pill of happiness swallowed. I didn’t accidentally flooded onto the bench in my walk, and, spreading my thighs to the sides, with a gesture, invited Dima to enter it. What she did was called a provocation. My sister decided to fuck all my friends in one sauna session. When Dima gladly responded, she spread her hips wider. Sitting on the second shelf, putting the vagina under the poking penis, she accidentally caught with her fingers the nacreous clumps of sperm that had flowed out of her. Our eyes met and, in spite of the pressing fuse of my father's daughter, that is, Lena, I did not miss the next lunge of the prodigal sister, that is, Oli. She put her fingers to her lips and licked them, showing how she likes to swallow cum. At this moment, Dima Matsur sealed her on a shelf. She continued to stare at me, twisting her lips, shaking Matsura in annoyance over his hairy ass, inviting him to move faster. She did not hold back in moans, the spirit of rivalry between the girls was picked up by her and turned out with a vengeance in a new capacity. Olga really kayfovala, exposing themselves as a naughty naughty sister.
If she thought about something that evening, then, apparently, this thought was the desire to revenge me for the years of humiliation, which she carried out, hiding from me at the doorways, when I allegedly watched her. But now all the cards have been revealed.
“Olya, will you forgive me?” I whispered to her with a look.
“Perhaps,” she replied with a mysterious smile.
I no longer blamed her for devilry, settled in brown eyes. In the end, I myself inherited the brown eyes of a dissolute father.
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Many words, little thing. And that "matter" that is - not convincing.
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It's hard to write to order. Two stories: one is garbage, the other is too short. And then it is molded "not convincing." We must tie with the order :) Thanks for the opinion.
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Cool story. Can I wait to continue?
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cool story
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Where did Olga come from?
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Initially, there were two stories on a given topic (the same plot, the perspective from the third person and from the first). Then I had to glue two stories into one. The name of the heroine was Katya or Olya. I apologize for this error of proofreading.
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Perhaps the truth of the reason for the “cruelty” of the story is that it initially consisted of two different ones. I was struck by the fact that the described character of the character Katya suffered. Mostly its description does not fit. I think I understood the author’s intention: to describe the heroine from different sides, to show her “quiet pool”. But I repeat - for me it did not contact. Maybe the "cherk" should appear more often and vividly in moments of "correct" girl's life? This, of course, only my opinion.
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So be it ... Now you can read all three versions of the story. Actually, the second begins in the middle of the ninth page of the ST, the third - in the middle of the fifteenth.
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CINEMA
Despite the inconsistency of individual parts and the general imbalance, the tale turned out quite nice. I read it with pleasure, and even ponastrated about those ancient times that were lost in the open spaces of my memory, from the nascent maiden sexuality in elementary school, to rampant debauchery in the senior class ...)))
The truth of such a wealth of magnificent forms, like that of the main character, I did not have during my school years, and in the third grade I could not even dream of making out the chest hillocks. It was flat as a board, right up to the seventh grade. In the lower grades, only a swimsuit was saved, and the posture attached to rhythmic gymnastics with lengthy training. We must pay tribute to the manufacturers of gymnastic swimsuits, they tactfully sew a sufficient amount of foam rubber into the right places, so in the gym, we undressed willingly and did it with pleasure, not without delight looking at our “embossed” reflection in the mirror ...
Well, and returning to the text of the story, it is impossible not to note the delicacy with which the author writes out his characters in the first third of the story. Oh, they are such he convex and relief turned out that she read and cried with delight. Here is a girl-schoolgirl (graduate-entrant), routinely in conflict with her older brother, and friends of her brother. And the fat man, the birthday boy, who failed the exams, and then attached to his daddy, the FSB, to work as a mentor, dreaming about service in the uniform, who dreams of committing a feat for the good of the motherland and secretly and tenderly in love with his friend Victor's sister.
And the situation is ordinary average, cinema-bar-sauna ...
In the cinema, girls are invited to entertain, to the bar to get slightly drunk, but why at the end of the evening the girls are called to the sauna, I find it hard to even imagine ...)))
Many times in my life I have observed how good people in essence are rapidly turning into cattle, depending on the environment and the environment. In the end, what can you demand from people. They are creatures weak, dependent, vicious ... And men and even more so animals are primitive.
I just read and could not understand, and my brother really didn’t imagine what the evening would end with or just pretended to be a felt boot ... And anyway, what is it like watching your little sister have friends for three people and & bout in the bath as a prostitute. But apparently, his status in this company is not very high, he is there like a duty nerd. But still, to assert itself by laying a younger sister under friends, this is beyond good and evil ...
Although, if to argue, so he selfishly privatized the only “accessible” girl of this evening in the pool, and consistently, he fed his dick into his mouth, then he stopped his pipy, the rest, the natural cavities of her body ... That is not very clear in which phrases he should have been outraged by the fact that the other boys used the remaining girl for their intended purpose.
The second question is the emotions of a charming fat man in love with a girl. For one thing, on your own, on occasion, tr @ whack a girl that you like, and another ... Watch as the subject of your erotic delight, charm and reverence are allowed in a circle, and you can patiently stand in line to add your portion of pure protein to “ Molotov cocktail. "
It is of course understandable that according to the universal male consensus, it is established that all women are bl @ di, but the girlish dreams of a prince on a white horse are simply nothing compared to the pink saliva of boys when they sunk into the girl ...
She herself and personally many times came up against such a deification of her image in boys' dreams of a beautiful girl, that it was even a shame that I could not completely correspond to the white marble sculpture that they carved in their dreams.
Of course, I don’t talk about it, but I wouldn’t even want to be in the place of this boy and watch personally the subject of your charm and lust, your friends put cancer in the sauna, feed them and… in a queue ...
Separately, it should be noted that this evening (at night), the girl Katya perfectly expanded her erotic range by tasting the delights of group sex. This is not to mention the fact that now she will know exactly why the girls are invited to the sauna.
I think there was nothing that happened in her life, it did not happen in the sauna. I believe that both Katya has already mastered sex and screamed and anal for final exams at school. It’s not a fact that I tried all this at the same time, but high school students are now advanced ...
On the other hand, judging by the ending of the story, a bath is a great opportunity for a girl to improve her financial situation. I went to the sauna, walked around in a circle, put up three holes, and you can run to the salon for a new smartphone ...)))
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Dear Anfisa T,
In this story there are two endings: author and reader. Here is how the reader responded (part-time customer) about the author’s ending (second story, starting from the middle of the 9th page, if you're interested):
“It is written very well, but somehow darkly (poor family, indifference of parents, etc.). the outcome is completely vicious. Pure household drama. I would certainly prefer a second, more frivolous, option in which Katya is gently but aggressively pushing for sex. Without violence, threats and humiliation. ”
After that, I wanted to write exactly this “frivolous version”. The result was a second story (starting from the middle of the 15th page). This second option turned out to be:
“Oooh, great !!!
Separate respect for the description of erotic scenes and dialogues !!! Very cool. (would be happy if you added a little more sex with Olya!)
P. with. Is there a possibility to attach a more similar (softer) ending to the first story (I really liked the image of Kati. Right at all ”
This wish, as you understand, finally finished me :):
“Throw out all dill from the first, shove everything pink from the second. Extend scenes of sex with Olga, add the perspective of Olya in sex. "
And then it turned out Venegret (first story, 9.5 pages).
Experience with the customer showed that I don’t understand a damn thing in the reader’s fantasies :) Your feedback is a confirmation of this. By the way, the final Venegret deserved a positive comment:
"Yes, everything is very even."
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I agree completely.
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CINEMATOGRAPH 2
Not lazy and read all three options for your story.
I was always sure of it, and today I was convinced once again that a compromise is always worse than any of the options.
But now it's even clear why the story is called “Molotov cocktail”, who is Masha Ostapenko and why the main character, in the first version was constantly Katya, then Olya, then Katya again ...))) Or, why brunette Katya had chestnuts hair...
The second, or as you call it the "Authors" option, somehow did not seem to me particularly gloomy. Rather, life ...))) And what do you have there is a poor family, the poor family, the indifference of parents, etc., so no horror, I did not see it, half of the country lives like this ...
But in fairness, the fact that the evening would end with the girl’s soldering and group violence was already clear from the description of the characters. Yes, and brother, it was clear that he is not a great defender for a girl. Apparently, if he was tangled under his feet, he would have been spoiled first and put to bed.
True to the middle of the story, I did not lose hope that the fat guy would use the position of an inviting person and easily feed the girl gallantly divorce her for sex “For Love” or at least, “By mutual agreement ...”, and treat the rest to a specially invited professional. But he turned out to be a character that is even more small and petty than even a girl’s brother. Probably training at the Cop Academy and the pedigree put a heavy stamp on the boy's worldview.
The girl Lena, in turn, didn’t seem to be a professional in the full sense of the word, since the amateur was so confused that occasionally fits into lusts like “Serve the boys in the sauna for the loot.” But with all her looseness and experience, she perfectly understood that with four guys who were hungry for sex alone could not cope with her, she simply won’t have it for ... But she asked to call another girl, but it seemed to her that the birthday boy would approach the matter so creatively, and instead of an ordinary whore, she invites her friend's sister to a schoolgirl, who is also so cute to him that he was even afraid to lick at her before.
Well, in general, everything that happened was very predictable, and I think that high school students still in the eighth grade should be taught on life support, why girls are invited to the sauna and what they do with them ...)))
It should be noted here that even such a penny and touchy as I already knew very well by the middle of the second year that if you were born as a girl, you were invited to the sauna and you agreed to go, then you should not even doubt you, but this is the law genre. And the whole question will be only that, according to the gentlemen’s agreement between the boys, you will be intelligently clowned, one person ... Or you will all have to be turned into a faint-hearted state.
As in the early student years, my cousin, who is ten years older than me, was staying with me. And I was just preening, like a manicure, pedicure, epilation, depilation. My sister looked at my attempts for a long time, then she asked that I was going to see you on a date ... I did not hide that we were going to the sauna with the girls ...))).
The sister in turn politely asked if we were lesbians.
I had to honestly admit that the boys will be there too, with the majority. To which my sister thoughtfully remarked:
- And what did you forget there?
And when I found it difficult to answer and muttered something like
- Well, just interesting, let's talk in an informal setting ...
My sister laughed heartily, and said, “Hu @ mi, they will feed you there to the heels of a girl, and then they will be in an informal setting & you will be seen by each other’s friends, so as not to be too shy and complex ...
I will not tell you the details, but in fact this is what happened as the sister predicted. Without excessive tin, which the author describes in his story, but on the whole, I experienced a culturological shock from a joint visit to the sauna ... I was glad that it was still someone else’s company, because I cannot imagine that later it would be possible to communicate normally with people who saw me in such an obscene animal state.
And the main conclusions that I made from going to the sauna:
1) All His people ...)))
2) You can not believe anyone ...)))
3) Older sister need to listen ...
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I had a case: four pairs of young people celebrated DR in a sauna. Girls in bikinis, boys in swimming trunks. They drank champagne and beer, it seems. All decently passed. There was not even a hint of erotica: - (Once upon a time it is not necessary, and depends on the company.
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in the in :)
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DRY STEAM
Something tells me that in your case it was about existing couples and almost family relationships in each pair. I believe that in this situation, if people did not initially agree on the fashionable swing format now, then not only for erotica, but for a carnivorous look at another girl, you can easily get kicked off from your own passion or wife.
For example, I am a very tolerant person, but if my spouse in a situation like this would have been able to publicly paw someone else’s spouse or girlfriend, he would have received it in full. Like, if the unbearable without fresh girls, then invite female students with low social responsibility, go with them to the bath and get up all you want. Though girls change, even each other tr @ haite.
Well, if you came with your wives, even to the restaurant, even to the sauna, or to the country club, then behave yourself, and pretend that you don’t notice anyone except your faithful ...)))
The same thing happened if someone from her husband's friends started pawing me, would get backhand, even if the person is nice to talk to and personally like me. Like, if you have a little man, such passion has kindled to the spouse of your friend, then you are not putting her to glue at all and discredit in the eyes of her husband and others.
Achieve quiet, show secret signs of attention. Capture the breadth of the soul and humility in front of fate. If you are persuasive and consistent, and the woman responds to your favor, then take a room in a hotel, invite you to a secret meeting, undress and do everything you wanted to do in the bath ...)))
But in general, I personally am to a negative adultery. And then, as I wrote at the beginning, you even have it, not a sauna, as such, but a variant of holding a pajama party. And here are completely different rules and social stereotypes ... But I would be better in such a situation with such a company in a spa center went. Therefore, as people sitting in a sauna in bathing suits and swimming trunks, I involuntarily cause sympathy.
At one time, I constantly went to the fitness center at the Europe Hotel in the center of St. Petersburg. As elsewhere, the locker rooms are separate there, and the sauna and relaxation area with sun beds and a pool are common. And no one ever bothered swimming trunks and swimsuits. So, a bikini area will be covered with a towel out of courtesy to others and they sit quietly basking after a workout. This was even a special chic to sit in the sauna with topless men. And from the sauna came out robes threw and sit yourself a tea or sipping juice, talk about the weather.
But there have never been a lot of people there, the hotel is five stars, it’s not a rocking chair in the business center, where it’s been like 18:00, you have to stand in a queue to enter and undress. And in the hotel there are expensive tickets, but as a fitness room, I wouldn’t say very much Ah ...
So, warm-up for charging and keeping fit at the hotel, but warm-up is good and the atmosphere is sincere. There, the crowd is mostly in the morning, before breakfast, and during the day and in the evening you can be alone for several hours in this complex. So in the sauna there, even a naked jump ...
Well, or lying on a shelf on a bed sheet without a single thread on the body, someone will drop in, see that the girl is in negligee ... Say litter, close the door and tactfully wait by the pool until the girl warms up and releases the sauna. There is not taken to stick in principle. If you like the girl, invite her to dinner, or order dinner in the room ...)))
But here it is necessary to make an amendment that this is a fitness room and a sauna that is accessible to all residents of the hotel. I suppose that in the basement VIP saunas, which are bought out overnight by the company, other rules apply. And as soon as the door to the shekold was closed, the invited girls are quite helpless before the local mores. What do you actually write in the author’s version of the story?
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You would write books, the head)))
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Estimates of the site does not give, but 10 and 3 "yes."
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