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Comment on publication: Just once more ...

Thank you, my TOO FAVORITE jealous READER)))) Thanks for the wishes, thanks for the support!))) But it’s not that the criticism was ardent, do not bite ***
I think that not only did you understand what I was talking about, I did not specifically encrypt it for imagery))) Yes, some wrote there about tigers that they fight day by day, while having in mind the same notorious love, but This is not the case))) You emphasized the final, there really was the main conclusion of this mood, and if you could really feel the author in these lines, in fact - thanks!

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: Just once more ...

Thank you, Zhenya, for the "excellent" rating. The opinion of a person doing the same thing as me is always important and especially valuable) The content may not always be interesting for everyone, in this case, this verse is very personal, and reflects only my inner feelings, therefore, it is significant in content In principle, for me alone, and, probably, also for the one about whom it is written. But since I imagine myself a bit talented, I certainly tried to give these highly personal experiences a high-quality cut in the form of a poetic form, so that the reader could appreciate it from the side, detachedly. And I am very pleased to hear that I succeeded. Thank you !: - *

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

Thank you, one)

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

I read your story, this is my first acquaintance with you. It turned out this is the second part, I had to go back to the first. An interesting idea))) Unusual. I am very impressed when unusual scenes are taken on the ST, and they are wrapped in eroticism.
One could, of course, find fault with the fact that there are indeed elements of unrealism that give rise to doubts. But since from the very beginning of the story a certain symbolism was guessed (in my opinion, of course, maybe, I was rationalized through chur))), then everything was perceived allegorically.
After reading both parts, I can conclude for myself that the first one turned out to be more successful, somehow smoother, more consistent. The second seemed to me somewhat compressed, as if the author had taken some larger piece and nammed a demo version from it. Such an interesting idea, I did not have enough of its full disclosure.
But I gave you 10, if only because this work is very different from the majority of the monotonous plot presented here, to the nausea of ​​the bored story that has been so actively used by the authors lately, in pursuit of views or something else. Yes, and the text is very good, only in this part there were small flaws, perhaps, when editing a little overlooked)

And about the stakes, add separately - this is not in your garden, do not think. I also experienced and suffered at the same time - once the story comes out, they peck at it with colas. No, they do it with everyone, God forbid, get to the main page. The first wave of stakes, the second ... Everyone has a point. So don't worry about it. Most likely, your story is not even read, just poked count.

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: My beautiful lady

Thank you, Bird)) Well, of course, Zhenya is not so simple at all, like any real woman, who skillfully allows a man to take the initiative in her skilled hands, while directing these hands to the right place)))
The main character quite has a place to be in reality, I was lucky, I met such a type. True, it is a rarity, I agree) However, when such an instance occurs on the way, the main thing is not to miss the opportunity to give him a meaningful signal with the eyes)))) What Zhenya did and did))

• Rating: 2

Comment on publication: My beautiful lady

Thank you, colleague!))) Though not from a woman’s face, but through the prism of a woman’s eyes))) This is the most desirable image - a mature, experienced, knowledgeable man who can wait, and where you need time to push. This is one of the few my stories, which was written directly under the influence of my own preferences and fantasies. And I am glad that this feed pleased the reader))

• Rating: 2

Comment on publication: My beautiful lady

Oh, thanks, Nic! Such a detailed comment, thank you!)))
I am very glad that you liked this story, and you understood the main veil of the above) It is possible that such situations are also familiar to you, and maybe you know how to skillfully read their secret desires and fantasies on the faces of modest girls for any man, it seems to me)))
You absolutely correctly understood the heroine, she really likes to be defenseless, submissive in the capable hands of an intelligent partner) And what luck that such a man met her on the way)))
Thanks for the feedback!)))

• Rating: 2

Comment on publication: My beautiful lady

But then I would like to understand what you did not believe, what the heroes did not convince you. Or also think not realistic?

• Rating: 2