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Comment on publication: Don't be born beautiful
It seems to me that this is more visible to the author himself))) In any case, if it is overdue, you need to try) And then how it goes)
Comment on publication: Don't be born beautiful
I am glad to each your new story, as a holiday! Thank you for being among this ...
Put ten, as always!
Comment on publication: My lady. Part 2: Bedside Table
Wow, Jura! Continuation was not long in coming)))
In general, this thing is somewhat different from the rest of your work. And the point is not in the plot, but of course, in the language of narration.
I wish you creative success and inspiration for the sequel)))
And most importantly - that the characters did not begin to live their lives, tired of the plot.
I am also pleased with a certain context of psychological motives, a background of feelings. Probably, many think - WHY? Why does this happen to people?
I hope you will explain everything to us)
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
Thank you, Ildar))) Especially for noting the subtlety of the transmission of male feelings) It’s not always possible for a woman to understand a man, not always a man can understand a woman) For an author, it’s important to be able to enter the image of any person. I am glad that the reader considered that I managed it)))
Comment on publication: My lady. Part 1: Love or adoration?
"That ended all our fears ..."
Yura, it was a parade of allegories))))
The topic is certainly not mine - it seems to me unnatural female nature desire to subjugate and humiliate the man. It is she who is a female, she must master it, subdue her, take it.
But how could I get past your story?))))
I don’t know if the idea was in a hidden mockery, but I spotted it between the lines. Well, you could not so simple and trite to draw seriously)))
This Stepa, this Stanislav Vladimirovna, this fountain of urine without undue delay, beating from the caster's bucket ...))))
In general, there was something to grin)))
And the question, of course, is it planned to continue the torture of Stepan?
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 3
Why did you decide that he has been living without sex for twenty years?))) This was not mentioned at all, there was no reference to this fact. Divorced does not mean a monk. This is the private life of the hero, and it was not necessary to disclose it in the story)))
And about the auctions - in Soviet times doctors of science were well provided, and the family of the hero, although I did not describe this in the story, was always well-off. It’s probably indecent to ask “where the money is from”. So they were)))
I'm glad you read and left your opinion.
Comment on publication: A machine that has known love. Part 2
Great))) Do not disappoint! I wish you success in your further work. You obviously have the potential)))
Comment on publication: A machine that has known love. Part 1
Continue))) I will observe with interest)
Comment on publication: A machine that has known love. Part 1
So what is next? To be continued?
In general, it is inconceivably far from the theme of the army, science fiction and everything that is described in the story. But I read in one breath, a very, very interesting picture, right images floated before my eyes. And of course, I want to know what will happen next. I very much hope that the author will not let you down and will publish a sequel with the development of the plot)))
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 3
And do not say it ... Sometimes the eyes would not open, so as not to plunge into it)