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Comment on publication: Night of love
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Comment on publication: Night of love
Max, first of all, thank you for the feedback, so extensive and, in general, something laudatory))) With regard to flaws - yes, something I really made a mistake. Sometimes you know, it can be stuck on the elementary))) Do not judge strictly))) As one famous hero said, “Spelling mistakes are the privilege of highly educated people”))))) We will assume that this is the case in this case!)))) )) As you can see, I am also surprisingly modest)
Comment on publication: Humiliation
Thank you, Max.) The author’s ability to submit material in a different form, from a different person, in a different presentation is his main skill. Glad you appreciated)
Comment on publication: Night of love
I am very glad that you touched. I tried exactly to convey - as in the soul of the most ordinary bydlovatnogo man, delight and tenderness arise at the sight of the beautiful - in this case a woman.
Comment on publication: Night of love
Eva, I will be very glad to your attention))) I’ve been to this site quite recently, therefore, so far there’s really nothing to read from my creations, but everything is ahead))) By the way, I, too, overlooked it)
Comment on publication: Obsession or Farewell Passion
And I'm on it, with a crushed wing,
I want to forget a heavy dream.
I want to fall asleep and die.
And from shame in hell burn out ...
Familiar feeling. But ... but it would have gone to ...)))) If all the deed was at will, and with the desired person. I will not appreciate this work as poetry, because it is not a poetic site. So I appreciate the message and the inner content, not relying on the form. I, as a reader, was reached by the state of a hero (an author?), Emotions stirred up. Such direct frankness, like a cry from the heart. And a separate plus for such an unusual presentation - yet poetry!)
Comment on publication: Night of love
Oh, Eve, after reading your review, I immediately wanted to answer))) First of all, thank you for reading it all to the end, debunking the initial doubts, and seeing exactly what I, as the author, wanted to convey. It is always pleasant to realize that what you write touches the reader, and even brings to the wet eyes.
And about the rest ... Of course, this story is not autobiographical, and therefore everything in it is fiction and invention. And in the framework of fiction, everything is possible, including the careless naginosity of the heroine, who so thoughtlessly “substituted”, overwhelmed by a hormonal surge. About the fact that the ugly duckling has blossomed and prettier - this situation is often quite real, but the main thing here is that the main thing is how the hero looked at the heroine. For him, a stupid average teenager, she was a chmoshnitsa, and because for him it was such a sudden revelation that she really was a goddess inaccessible.))) I wanted to convey what was happening on behalf of the hero, to look at this situation by his eyes. It is unlikely that he was thinking about the moral and ethical side of what is happening, especially about the adultery of the heroine. If this story were written in the name of the heroine, then of course a lot would have looked in a different light, but as part of this story we can only guess about her motivation and interpretation of everything that happened.
I am certainly pleased that you appreciated my story, and he touched you. Thank you very much!)))
Comment on publication: Night of love
How pleasant is your review! As an author, I wanted to convey precisely the feelings and experiences of the heroes, to show a psychological pattern of relationships, without accentuating or centering intimate details.If you are hooked, then I managed) Thanks for the feedback!
Comment on publication: Night of love
Thank!
Comment on publication: Night of love
seliena, this is your subjective feeling))) The stories are written by the author, and the author uses images of fictional people, fictional situations, circumstances. Or do you, perhaps, assume that all stories are necessarily an integral part of the author’s life experience?))))