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Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
These are probably the best words to convey the recognition of the reader. Thank! ***
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
I'm glad, Yura, that this story turned out to be for you not just a picture from the side, but a warm memory, which is nice to return to. As you correctly noticed, the story is really simple in its plot, but for me it also means something. No, I have never had such a wonderful adventure in my life, but there were prerequisites, these views, omissions, when I really wanted the man I had chosen to read these signals and take the courage to go. But there were no such))) However, this is a very pleasant game, and if not on the physical, but at the level of my fantasies, I also often lived this experience with someone, with a significant exchange of views, gestures, smiles.
I didn’t know whether to exhibit or not, because the story was my very first, and I used to write from a male face, because I was very embarrassed to give my fantasies from a female))) I thought to rewrite from a female face, but it would not be that .. So I rushed. But in the end - the story here it is!)
Thank!)
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
These words compensate for the fact that this is impossible) Thank you.
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
But why are you, the right word ... From the very first lines, everything is clear that Genia herself chose this particular man, that there was no need to mollify and conflict anyone. Simply, apparently, there was a desire to leave exactly this review. Well then ... Let him)
And you were more attentive than me)
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
So kiss, kiss)))))) “I love this) Bésame mucho!)))
And the former, of course, in the work) There is nowhere to go) But rather, something new will come out, similar to this story, but he is still languishing in long processing. There it is necessary to think, head ... Not other parts)
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
Well, in general, yes ... Sorry.
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
After such a comment, my favorite reader, what kind of sleep?)))) Thanks for the feedback, and for the rating)
And with the heroine ... khmmm ... you, as it were, are already a little familiar))) Here)
It will be chaotic ...))))) Apparently, you liked the story))))
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
Thank)
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
It is very strange, even without having read the story to the end, to leave such an ambiguous comment under it. First, why should I prove something? What makes you think that the girl broke down? This story is not about the girl being shot on the street and she does not know whether to go or not. Two people attracted to each other, between them there was a mutual attraction. Why extra crookedness, if according to her glance everything was immediately clear?
I wanted a conflict ... you? I do not. In this story, I did not want any conflict, here it is completely different. And the fact that you want a conflict is very noticeable, especially in your contradictory statement: Where is the realism? and then: I do not argue, this is possible.
Comment on publication: My beautiful lady
Here you gave it !!!)))) I was not too lazy, I went in to answer, although I was already going to sleep!))))))) Thank you for the verse, and by the way, I repeat with an invitation to our hacks)) ))
You know, this is my very first story written in this genre. For some reason I love him very much, although later I wrote a lot of things. Although he is unpretentious, and simple in the plot.But he is somehow special to me. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!)))
In connection with the final - I wanted to rewrite it, to show some development of relations between the characters. But then it began to seem to me that this was unnecessary, and I returned to the original understatement, the possibility of choice. If someone wants to imagine that everything has continued, it can be drawn. And if someone is more down to earth views, then most likely this is the point. I decided not to impose my feminine romance on the reader, let him decide how to be heroes)))
Thanks again!) You surprised me. I will say that this is your best comment under my stories!))) And if you have not yet decided whether to copy this story or not, then I have already copied your verse)