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Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 2
Alex, I will answer this way: in order to enroll in a music college, you must at least finish a music school as a minimum) And there you need an instrument. But if the school interests you directly - the instrument is MANDATORY both at the college and at the conservatory. This is a companion subject, obligatory for any musician, as well as musical diploma, and music theory. And much more) So, I have 22 years of experience in piano, whereas there is only 12. There are 12. The instrument is necessary for the singer - rehearsing, he accompanies himself, and also acts as an accompanist in classes with other students. This is a mandatory practice.
There will be a continuation, it has already been partially written, and it was not difficult for me, as the author, while there remained a thread of reality that connects me with this story. But as soon as it broke off - the question arose of how to continue. I'm in thought. But the sequel will certainly be.
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 1
No, Alex, you're wrong. Not always for a woman, the main thing in a man is his material viability. It should be common - personal, professional, and as a result - material. But women are different, like men. I’m sorry if, as an author, I couldn’t reveal the images of heroes in this part in such a way that you have such an opinion. This story is completely different, and it is certainly not tied to self-interest) A woman chooses the strongest man, and his material security is only a piece by which one can judge how strong he is. Genetic flair is strong, you are right, but it is much wider for a woman than you can imagine - how are lieutenant wives, who then become generals? It is necessary to choose not the one who already has everything, but the one who is able to achieve this is not always a wealthy man - worthy of attention. In any case, this is my life position. But I am probably one of those “dinosaurs” who live by some far-fetched ideals, are looking for some higher values, trying in vain to satisfy them in our such not elevated world.
Comment on publication: Cerberus
And why is there something difficult - to write porn)))) Sit yourself and describe) Just do not always want, I still closer to romance, sensuality and tenderness. But we are all multi-faceted, and some of our faces sometimes correspond to the above))))))))))))
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 1
Perhaps you are right about something. There is a category of men from a certain environment, creative, cultural, who love to emphasize their full weight in this environment, to demonstrate authority, and at the same time they are vulnerable, like children, naive and ridiculous. However, this does not detract from their high level of intellectual and cultural development, good breeding and good manners. In our time, men suffer from a lack of these qualities, in any case, my peers and a little older. Therefore, this type of men turns out to be in a winning light - much can be forgiven, if you simply have something to talk with a person, talk pleasantly, and feel in his company LADY, and you don’t understand who)))
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 1
Oh, thank you for the feedback!) It's great that you understand me - for me the charm and charm of just such stories are much more attractive than what you can think of))) Thank you for your rating, not in the sense of a point, but in sense of opinion)
Comment on publication: New year's passion. Part 1
I do not know what it is they) I myself know what it is and how difficult it is sometimes to be worthwhile to degenerate) I understand that the work done was worth the time and effort and tension in the muscles of the face and head)
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 2
“Do not be afraid of love. Otherwise, she will not forgive this. ”- That's right. However, feelings are not always stormy, and in this story they rather have a gentle, calm flow. Based not on passion, from which blows the roof) This is something more subtle, not having a clear outline. This also happens.
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 2
How impatient you are))) Sooner!)))) What is it, like this with a swoop yes?)))) But you didn’t wait literally a bit, the prelude was completed, but you shouldn’t expect a brisk development - however, I warned reader about it immediately, in the first part. I will not break the intrigue, as to whether the heroine will accept the hero’s feelings) Indeed, wait and see)))))
Comment on publication: The last dance. Part 2
I agree about the second part. I myself think so, and the plot has its main development, in fact, only with the beginning of this part.
And the poem - well, what are you so critical?) Yes, our world is ugly and cruel, but there are corners of purity and faith in higher ideals in it far-fetched greetings from the past, dusty skeletons. And I do not protrude outside, although I perfectly see from the window what is happening there, outside ...
Comment on publication: New year's passion. Part 1
Well, wow, this is the scale) What work they did, how much time they probably spent to display such a banal and, alas, a common history of corporate random rendezvous. I do not know why, but only I had a feeling of some mockery of what was happening. Although, maybe this is just the influence of my subjective attitude to this topic - we are all so moral on PT))))
It really can not be called a poem, this poem is a long poetic story. Zhenya, you are well done, inspiration to you to continue)