Just once again be near
Wrap yourself in the caress of your brocade.
Under the intently-passionate look of embarrassment,
And in the dark irises read "I want."
In the arms of tenderness to pass the border,
Open love, dissolve in it.
Lips that taste like honey with cinnamon,
Get drunk before stupor, to hell.
Under the pressure of the hands to turn lioness
That fiery passion whip lash,
Biting kisses, groaning to beat,
Breathing to choke, swimming to burn.
Weave under the weight of the blanket,
To beat the beat of your chest,
With the dawn, read on the face, which is little,
Hear "Stay, don't go."
Nothing could be more honest, higher.
Broke, lost, and not return ...
Under the starry sky roof
Both of us, but separately, we draw a path.
Rejected stretches suite
Cold mist melted away the heat.
Already nothing, no one needs ...
No, you were not the best. Loved - was
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Well done, Emily. I do not give a rating. Not porn is so.
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10!
Although it would be necessary to lower the ball for the third line knocked out at the beginning of the size))))
Emilia be simpler: “Look at the embarrassing glance ...”))))
And I would wake up again, next
Warm and blissful wrapped with saffron
From your eyes come up out of the ocean
And unstable shame change on nirvana
Feel the jelly form again
The mountains of sweat in the distance
I want to touch my thunder with my lips
With wormwood bitterness paintings by Dali
My dandelion wine, drink it
Shoe hair touch the belly playfully
And then let me in there again
Love will be hellishly beautiful.
And the evening comes on a new
We go to bed again
We have a deal, again a new one
That no one can take away from us
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Well, well, I take my words back and see that my verse was written in two minutes Kurguz. I just wanted to answer rhyme)))
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Thank you, Zhenya, for the "excellent" rating. The opinion of a person doing the same thing as me is always important and especially valuable) The content may not always be interesting for everyone, in this case, this verse is very personal, and reflects only my inner feelings, therefore, it is significant in content In principle, for me alone, and, probably, also for the one about whom it is written. But since I imagine myself a bit talented, I certainly tried to give these highly personal experiences a high-quality cut in the form of a poetic form, so that the reader could appreciate it from the side, detachedly. And I am very pleased to hear that I succeeded. Thank you !: - *
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I do not know what the men rushed with criticism, probably did not share you, Emilia. In size do not find fault. With the content is always more difficult, it is subjective. But I admire when a woman speaks so directly about her desire. And in this case, also so beautiful, poetic. A bit sad ending, but I heard you and understood what they wanted to say. Desire will return with the right person. Good luck, honey!
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Thank you, my TOO FAVORITE jealous READER)))) Thanks for the wishes, thanks for the support!))) But it’s not that the criticism was ardent, do not bite ***
I think that not only did you understand what I was talking about, I did not specifically encrypt it for imagery))) Yes, some wrote there about tigers that they fight day by day, while having in mind the same notorious love, This is not the case))) You emphasized the final, there really was the main conclusion of this mood, and if you could really feel the author in these lines, in fact - thanks!
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Forgive me, dear, but if you swallowed the pink substance of incomprehensible content and purpose, then I see this as an unjustified pickyness. There is nothing incomprehensible in your verse; both the meaning and the mood are completely clear. Imagery must be present in poetry, otherwise it is not poetry but rhyme-nesting. Regarding the size of an unjustified cavil, but I see that they have already taken the words back, so everything is ok. And you be more attentive. Council
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Configured to dialogue? My comment is addressed to Emilia. Nobody taught anyone, not everyone has eyes, or rather not always. The latter is simply absurd. It smells of delusions of grandeur. What does it have to do with you? You are not the author, but you have already answered everyone. Who are you threatening to leave? They came and lit up the conflict situation under the verse.
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My apologies to Emilia for the answer above. I did not want to crap under your verse.
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Thanks to all readers who liked this verse. It is important for the author. Special thanks to the one who thanked me for this work!)
P. S. I pretended that I did not notice those comments that were not addressed directly to me, as the author.
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Zdarou Oksana! again you fucking mess? Enough to let your snot here, you need to mate, it will be more useful. Put on your red underpants and prepare your cap, I will find her a job!
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You again? For a long time you were not. In the hospital were? But seriously, you are not quite a moron, some glimpses of adequacy in your previous comments were noticed. Why are you doing this? If you want to parry, this is how there are a lot of texts over which it is not a sin to scold.
And, by the way, before proposing to wear red shorts, it would be nice not to distort the name, or, if you forgot it or don't know it at all, then you would use at least a neutral "pussy". And I was really interested in you. In vain, apparently. I'm not Oksana, not Oksana ...
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I read it and I liked it at + 10. Bribed sincerity - a woman described her feelings. Here I am now conducting a contest "Declaration of love", so this poem could participate in my competition. That is the most true declaration of love. Written by the heart.
Well done, Emilia!
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Thank you very much))) Yes, this is the most frank confession))) Honestly, from the depths of my soul))) I put a part of myself into these lines. I'm glad that I found a response))) Thank you!)
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No, I go to bed on Monday. I was busy. "Pussy" if I honestly associate something dirty with me, and I am a romantic, I wouldn't even call a cat like that. Why don't you like Oksna? Do you know how to dance?
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Oksana was called the neighbor prostitute. Not romantic.
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When compared to pussy, it is very romantic. A prostitute prostitute strife. They are from all managers, writers, and so on. no different, the same people. Tomorrow you will also become a prostitute if the country starts propaganda for prostitution and free relations. And the day after tomorrow you will be proud of it. Once the prostitutes have been seen in those who have the pussy brothel, but now everyone there brothels the whole polls and so do you. (intuition)
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No, from the principle, from one only stubbornness I will not become - I am against propoganda and mass character. I will be a social outcast who does not share the “fashionable” free rules imposed on society. And die a virgin. True, with a shaved pussy.
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It's boring here, no one to even talk to.“I’m not going to become one of stubbornness alone - I’m against the propaganda and the mass.” Of course, the stereotype of such behavior is now fashionable)))) and you don’t flatter yourself, you will not die a virgin.
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So are you here with me from the melancholy and hopelessness sharpen the lyasy? I will die ... From divorced expectations, unjustified hopes (((
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Well, what does not suit you? Is it really necessary to talk for a good reason? I now thought that you could capture your poems in your pubic area for a PR move. And the fact that you can’t fit on the members of those who admire you. And then if you put it all together you can finish it. And your work will go to the people, his generations will be remembered. Can you imagine how everything is healthy and rosy for you?
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Little baby, don't you want to hold hands and sing together?
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Or maybe we’ll go through the dance in the salon, angry aggressive guy?
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What makes you think that I'm angry and uncle? I am still young, kind and peaceful. In what city do you live?
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What did you get? From the comments of your rough and obscene, not only under my stories, but in general. Thought - this is what moves a person who pretends to be a moron and purposefully systematically visits the site and sows his malicious seed in the fields of literary pornography? While sometimes revealing glimpses of intelligence, adequacy, not inherent in juvenile half-idols and anxious onanists. I came to the conclusion - boredom and life dissatisfaction, hence aggression.
But I will not write the city - I’ll tell you here, and all my fellow countrymen will go crazy, looking for a writer of erotic stories in the crowd, in the hope that in life she will gladly draw it all.
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Do you have a town there with 30 inhabitants?))) It is a shame that it’s not like everyone else, but wrote that it’s ready to become a social outcast))) Fortunately, your brain works correctly and you managed to make a conclusion for yourself. Now your little head will not be busy with this global issue. But if honestly, then I am moved by a smile, inner freedom and faith in good people. When you kiss your neck, chest, and other parts of the body, do you silently get pleasure or moan?
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We have a town here with particularly concerned residents, obsessed with everything that is at least somehow connected with sexual freedom and women's emancipation. Becoming an outcast is not as scary as the victim of apes, who are only beautiful women of the Slavic type with the presence of intelligence seen in the movies.
This is too intimate a question for a modest person like me.
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Any country, area? And what was the point of changing real anxious residents to virtual ones? Although I probably understand, you think that you are at least at risk of becoming a victim of sexually concerned Cheburashek. Communicate in a more relaxed atmosphere do not mind?
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Not here. I'm not talking about personal here.
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