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Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
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Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
Answered you in BOS.
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
I wrote you the contact information in a personal message and in the correspondence on the forum. Placing contacts here is not welcome.
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
You are not the first to tell me or write like that. Unfortunately, it is almost impossible to implement.
Thank you very much for the very nice words;)
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
They will definitely not be able to live as before;)
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
If readers insist so much, the story will continue. But after 2 months, I want to write one or two series of other stories, with other actors.
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
I want to please: it was the penultimate day. The last day will be presented to you in one and a half to two weeks.
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
Honestly, in my opinion, everything is logical. With a step-by-step description of actions, how Gennady advises Sasha on carrying out certain manipulations, the narrative will look a bit clumsy. In fact, he gave him instructions and the boy executed them.
I haven’t met such wonderful water, of course, but I have heard about other non-narcotic substances, creams, and liquids. In nature, there are indeed many potent substances harmless to humans that cause the sensations I have described. They are mostly distributed, of course, in Asia, to which I gave a reference in the first parts of the story.
Different substances of action act on men and women differently, I will not go into details. In addition, it is necessary to take into account the amount drunk (a quarter of a bottle by Gennady and everything else Lisa) and different body weight of a man and a woman. But I myself got to the bottom of the details of my story.
I will consider your opinion and try not to overdo it with such unusual, seemingly unrealistic, nuances.
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
Thank you for the nice feedback, although I am rather skeptical about the results of my work. I realized my percent and 70% of my ideas and ideas. It’s all because of the lack of time and conditions for writing better stories. My literary part is very lame and the flaws in describing various nuances are very vividly noticeable: feelings, sensations, intimate scenes and so on.
From the advantages of my story, I can only mention the ornate scenario of the plot development (thanks to my sick fantasy)), its size and duration. Among the variety of one or two page stories, some readers lacked a big porn story.
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
The main characters are at such a crossroads, that in the continuation of the story their fate can be turned anywhere. From the departure to the monastery, to the sale to the Arabs in sexual slavery. But I exaggerate it, of course. Just the “location” of their adventures grows dozens of times, in the metropolis there are more opportunities and secondary heroes.