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Comment on publication: I played. Part 1
Thank you for the nice words and valid criticism. You can on "you")
Comment on publication: I played. Part 1
No, I do not like tin and other extreme)
Comment on publication: I played. Part 1
Then I will please: there will be at least 4 parts in the story. 3 of them are ready. ;)
Comment on publication: I played. Part 1
Yes, I agree, thanks for the comment!
Comment on publication: I played. Part 1
Thanks for the feedback. Courtesy for the courtesy: however - the introductory word, is comma from two sides.
Comment on publication: Point. Part 4: Bet
Great story and narration style! I was pleased to read the first parts, and at the end of the last I was even glad that the ending of the story turned out to be more “vital” than in 90% of other stories of similar subjects.
In my stories I try to add a maximum of realism, so it is very nice that there is an author who shares my point of view.
I am pleased to get acquainted with the new works of the author.
Comment on publication: Vacation. Seventeenth day
https://eroticspace.info/story/2016-11-28/otpusk-den-shestnadtsatyy.html
Comment on publication: Vacation. Seventeenth day
I did not disappear anywhere, here is a link to it: https://eroticspace.info/story/2016-11-28/otpusk-den-shestnadtsatyy.html
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
It has not exhausted itself, it logically ends and in the originally conceived time frame.)
Comment on publication: Vacation. Twentieth day
Hey. Thanks for the honest feedback of a caring person. I will express my thoughts in order: I am also a fan of Clara Sagul's creativity, but I’m up to him, like the moon. I am writing without focusing on excellent writers and mediocre ones.
I will say this: the whole cycle of stories in terms of the ornateness of the plot and its “rolling down” to a rough chernukha was originally intended by me. Judge for yourself: the stories of the same Clara Sagul are rather big, but not as long as mine. In them he managed to convey all the nuances of feelings and it is quite logical to complete the plot. And the stories often ended not very well for the main characters. They either became impersonal sex dolls, or their families just fell apart.
My story describes 21 days of sex adventures of the three main characters. I tried to bring more reality into the story. Have you ever tried to live in such a sex mode as the main characters for at least 3 days? Here it is. And they live like this for 3 weeks. Liza and Katya, inexperienced in sex, have gone crazy about fallen adventures and they are every day sausage from desire and aversion to themselves, in physiological terms, everything is also not so easy and straightforward, you know. Gennady turned from an experienced and inventive Upper to a stupid and outraged perpetrator, who had lost his face. A large amount of alcohol consumed also negatively affected the heroes.
Readers have written me a lot of complaints about rudeness and dill. But I want you all to understand that such a life as the main characters in the first part of the stories can not be permanent. She sooner or later slip into vanilla sex (as they say: “inventive poobushki”), or to greater distortions and extremes.
You and other readers have only to “suffer” one day of the tough “Holiday”. The following adventures of GG will be even more diverse, inventive and certainly not so tough and inhuman.
Yes, and my other series of stories will delight you and readers. There will be no tin, though the emphasis will be on a lesbian-BDSM relationship.
P. S. Return to the post office.