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Comment on publication: I played. Part 2

Mental torments are different. Not only from cheating on her husband with his boss, but also from eating extra cutlets before bedtime. Everyone has their own cockroaches in their heads.

Judging by the rating and reviews, the story seemed to many readers not quite boring. Everyone saw something different. It is personally interesting for me to express my thoughts in this style, describing various trivial matters more, even if they do not have special meaning, and not in a laconic transition from one exchange to another.

In each message you owe someone something. The second part should be such and such, the writer owes something to someone. People do not post their stories because they should or they are forced.

Thank you for your thoughts and criticism, but we have a very different understanding and desire for what we want to see. Although, looking at your comments under other stories you are hard to please)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 2

I am not offended, but I sharply replied because I did not see the constructive criticism in your (I suggest “you”) comments. Just an indication of how "should be."

I have no high intentions and cannot be. I try to write interesting and most original. Sometimes it works, sometimes not. I know my main shortcomings, and this is clearly not a boring statement, but errors and inconsistencies.

I have no goal to "develop action", "describe a specific action." There was an idea to describe the mental agony of the main characters. Apparently, from your point of view, this was not possible to implement. Or it was possible in such a way that the story turned into an "office romance." But to each his own.

The description of boring sex of lovers tired of each other in the sauna - the scene is so non-key that it was given two paragraphs. She did not have to develop the action, but only to put an end to a certain point.

As for the example comment, I do not want to offend anyone, but it is expected that the girl writing daily on the forum for 500 posts will not read all 7 pages, but will go straight to the action.)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 1

Judging by your comments on the forum (sometimes I read it, but I haven’t communicated for a long time), you will like the further action;)

Thank you for rating)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 1

Thank! Interesting thought about competitors;)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 1

Thank. I would be very grateful if you directly point me to errors. Typos and other inaccuracies - this is my sore point, you need to deal with it.

"Holiday" stories have not gone away. They can be found on the author's page. Here are direct links to these parts:
8 (part one) - https://eroticspace.info/story/2016-08-25/otpusk-den-vosmoy-chast-pervaya.html
8 (part two) - https://eroticspace.info/story/2016-08-30/otpusk-den-vosmoy-chast-vtoraya.html
9 (part one) - https://eroticspace.info/story/2016-09-02/otpusk-den-devyatyy-chast-pervaya.html
9 (part two) - https://eroticspace.info/story/2016-09-09/otpusk-den-devyatyy-chast-vtoraya.html
14 — https://eroticspace.info/story/2016-11-01/otpusk-den-chetyrnadtsatyy.html

If you want, I will send you a story in one file. Write mail address in lichku

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 1

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Comment on publication: I played.Part 1

Thanks for the feedback. The continuation is already written and will be posted in the near future.

What would you like to see in detail?)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 1

The author’s inattention is not to blame. There is such a well-known thing called "humor". So this is about her.

Dear reader, probably not familiar with the fact, as the love of women to underestimate their age. So, this phrase was written in a joking context.

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 1

I said that the Holidays will continue after several other series of stories. Unfortunately, I have very little time to write. But I am still planning to write a sequel to “Vacation”.

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