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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

And where is the opinion? Opinions I did not see. In your comment, only a rough exaggeration and a statement of the fact that there is no development and the bottom has been reached.

Do not be so upset with the "minuses". I am not upset about the story to the story. Only a little saddens the lack of constructive criticism of my work. Albeit not the most successful, but still I spent time and energy on him.

You haven't guessed with prostitution and female abusers.) Although the idea is not bad. It would be possible to bring it to life, but after my other ideas. However, as I already wrote, I don’t see any sense to continue the story and the continuation is unlikely.

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

This part of the story was not meant as “plot development”. The fall of Arina reached what was described in detail. Perhaps most readers really expected that there would be some kind of development in this part, as in the previous ones, but I had a different vision.

About the “slaughter of a slave” I can say the following: either you have a bad imagination or you just troll. Immediately I can name a dozen topics on which the "fall" can continue without going into details. Take at least banal incest and prostitution (not just fun sex contests for money, but real prostitution). And do not need any BDSM and sex with elephants to humiliate a woman even more.

In any case, to continue the story of no interest. The site has become a collection of trolls and those who for some reason something the authors need. There is almost no constructive criticism. There is only exaggeration of the facts and comments in the style of KG / AM.

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

Dont need it, thanks. If there is time, I will write to you.

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

This is the completion of a certain stage of the emerging relationship. Perhaps I wrote it really badly, but the gradual fall of Arina should have ended.)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

Thanks for the feedback. I would also like to continue this “Holiday” with pleasure, but for this I need to have hours 26-28 hours.)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

I believe that the space "for escalation" is always there. So far, only the completion of a certain stage of the emerging relationship has been described. The idea and the idea of ​​further narrative is. But less time and desire to implement it.

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

Gorgeous said)

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

The idea of ​​the customer of the story was different. And I didn’t see any special trash

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Comment on publication: I played. Part 4

What is "not beautiful" written? In a literary syllable or plot? If in the plot, then by tags and genres it should immediately be clear what kind of story it is.

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