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Comment on publication: Watch. Second day. Part 1

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Comment on publication: Vacation. First days

Thinking of learning something for yourself in real life? ;) Thought is good, it would really be interesting to implement it. But I am afraid that I will not be able to describe this situation in the near future.

My initial goals are to finish the “Vacation” until the end (despite the fact that I improperly delayed the output of the next part), and then implement another small series of stories, some of which have already been written and are breaking into the pages of this site.)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. Day fourteenth

Yes, unfortunately, real life is always different from fiction and fantasy, so the analogies with real life are in any case irrelevant. But I am glad that you also noticed that I am trying to recreate an atmosphere of realism in the story. Let it be for everyone and their own.

And in terms of "coincidence" of vacationers from one city, I would say the following: Moscow is still a very big city, so it is not surprising that both Liza, Katya, Gennady, Nikolai and Sasha, and the businessman turned out to be "neighbors." Plus, I introduced this “coincidence” into the story not accidentally, but in order that the story could always have the prospect of continuing in another “location”, but with previous participants. In the event that readers will convince me that they want to see the new adventures of the main characters after the end of the holiday. ;)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. Day fourteenth

Another thanks!)

I meant that even reading the story written yesterday, I don’t like him 100%. How to make sure that he “hooked”, interested or aroused at least himself, I do not know yet.)

The situation with Dima is just not the most, so to speak, strange. Many couples who lack sexual impressions and sensations are beginning to look for happiness in the so-called sexwife and cuckold relationships. And here, Dima was also offered to have fun with Katya and Sveta, young, sexy and accessible, in exchange for a bored wife. Of course, he could not resist.))) Well, and publicity, too, a very specific thing.)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. First days

Thank!

Do you mean a more detailed presentation of the first part of the protracted story? If I had originally written it in more detail, then, most likely, it would not be so hooked by readers. And so, everyone was given a good soil for fantasy, where everyone conjectured something and was satisfied with the result)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. Day fourteenth

Elena, thank you very much for such a nice and volumetric review! I will answer you in order: I really consider myself an incompetent writer, if only because I myself feel, as it is sometimes difficult for me to describe this or that action or nuances of feelings. There is a lack of perseverance, mood, vocabulary and hundreds of different trifles. Some readers (to whom I am very grateful) pointed out the main shortcomings and shortcomings of my story. I completely agree with them, I try to work on myself, but I myself understand that so far it turns out badly. Again, not enough plodding and free time.
When I re-read my stories and sketches myself, then in 99% of cases I don’t like them. But fundamentally change them and rewrite I lack neither talent, nor, again, assiduity and time. This can be very annoying.) Sometimes it is even difficult to check the written part for errors and inconsistencies.
I agree with you that no one expects great literary works here and most readers on this site are interested in one or two page stories on the topic “this is a 18-year-old virgin nympho childish look with a 6th breast size, so she got to 8 blacks in captivity, etc., etc. ” But since I took to writing a long and original story, I want to keep it “on the level” and not to go down to the mere enumeration of sexual partners and platitudes.
That the story evokes a gamut of emotions is wonderful! He was originally conceived precisely for this. And not all the manipulations of the heroes of the story are pleasant, and to me, a rather experienced BDSM player. Even my wife said that she did not expect that I would describe such rude and somewhat perverted things, because in life they do not attract me.)))
In terms of the fact that some of the actions of the main characters - this is too much, I also agree. But each has its own concept of "busting". For someone, sex other than missionary posture is overkill. For someone, golden rain is the norm and just a game. Someone easily tolerates a hard whipping and may experience an orgasm from her, and someone has tears from their eyes from pinching their skin.)
Alexey is conceived in the story as a character who brings the theme sexwife and cuckold into it. His character should contrast sharply with Gennady. I will make a “spoiler” and say that it will remain in the story until the end of the “holiday”. ;)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. Day fourteenth

Are you sure that he needs her?)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. Day fourteenth

Thank! The last days of the "vacation" will be even more saturated with various events. ;)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. Day fourteenth

I think you, as a fan of Liza, will enjoy the following series;)

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Comment on publication: Vacation. Thirteenth day

For me, it is interesting that the characters in my story evoke different feelings and emotions in everyone. Someone more interesting to watch the adventures of Katie, someone for Lisa, someone from the first part fell in love with Natasha. Someone likes a flimsy and brutal World, and someone like you are happy for her care.

Nevertheless, I will try to increase the "level of porn", yet we have here ero - porn - site;)

Thanks for the feedback!

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