- Vacation First days
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- Vacation Day four
- Vacation Fifth day
- Vacation Sixth day
- Vacation Seventh day. Part one
- Vacation Seventh day. Part two
- Vacation Day ten. Part one
- Vacation Eleventh day
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- So-so. Experiencing, almost all the time silent.
- To be angry with you, or only at me?
- To the whole world. - Said Dima, pouring the remnants of brandy in glasses.
After finishing the bottle, the men were silent for a long time.
- Is there some more? - Gennady nodded at the empty tara.
- Yes, look in the locker. And then I'll fall now, if I get up. Yes, and my heart aches a bit.
- Let's spend it.
Dima did not resist and argue. Silently he got up and, clutching at the shoulder of a friend who, after what had happened, could hardly have been called such, walked towards the bedroom. Having fallen on a made bed, he passed out for some few moments, having had time to say before this:
- Natasha in the hall, do what you want, I'm tired.
Gennady first returned to the kitchen, drank one full glass of brandy, winced at his cheesy taste and, taking a bouquet, went to the woman.
He found her sitting on the couch in front of the TV on, where some depressive foreign music channel was quietly whimpering.
- Hello. - He gave her a bouquet, which she almost did not pay attention, putting next to you.
- Hello. - Natasha answered without raising her eyes on the guest. She knew he would come.
- How do you feel?
- Better now, thanks.
“I want to apologize to you for dragging you into all this.” - Yes, everything is fine. - Suddenly answered Natasha. - Alive, healthy, and all right. It is my fault, you had to think with your head before contacting you.
- For Sveta's actions too, forgive me. I could not control it and lost sight of the fact that it can bring it. I punished her, kicked out. And now she has problems with her husband.
- You ruined their family? In this business you are a master.
- I did not break up their family, they tried. And what, do you have everything bad with Dima?
- I do not know. But it will not be exactly the same as before. Why is he like me?
- And what are you? But no, do not answer anyway, say some nonsense. And, by the way, do not forget that Dima was originally not against your “sex education” on the side. And, believe me, what ended it all, was a shock even for me. I have never brought the matter to such an absurdity and did not let it out of control.
- You have interesting "affairs." But I no longer want to have a relationship with them. I do not hold on to you evil, just go.
- Don't chase me right away. I want to make sure that you are fine. Show me what Sveta did to you. May need help.
- I ask, go ... All is well ...
- And I do not ask. Show me! - The man could not mumble, and he did not know how. He habitually switched to his usual demanding and domineering tone.
Sighing heavily, the woman rose from the couch and, coming up to Gennady, untied the belt by the silk robe. Hands down, she made it clear that she didn’t care what happened to her. She closed her eyes and waited for the man’s actions. He looked it up and down. His eyes were swollen with tears from his face, a tense neck, bare chest hemispheres, a prominent navel and shaved white pubis.
- Take off your robe. - Gennady said softly.
After a couple of seconds, with a flick of the wrist, Natasha dropped the robe from her shoulders. He immediately fell under her feet, leaving her completely naked. Carefully looking her in front for signs of Sveta’s mockery above her, he again ordered:
- Turn around!
The woman obediently turned, trampling down her robe. There were no special marks on her back and on her back. Gennady breathed a sigh of relief.He was not one hundred percent sure of Natasha, Dima, or Sveta with her husband. Offended, humiliated, beaten up and offended, one could expect anything from them, even to go to the police, and, therefore, Gennady had to provide all the nuances, including taking into account evidence and evidence of sexual manipulations.
- Satisfied? - Quietly asked the woman.
- Appearance, yes. A psychological state - no. - The man got up and took a step, coming close to Natasha.
Unexpectedly for her, he put his arm around her shoulders with one hand and placed the other on her belly. At the touch of a man, she, surprisingly, became calmer, and her skin even became covered with goosebumps. Then, he gently unfolded her, bent down, and dug into her lips with a tender kiss, which became more and more passionate with every second. Sensing that she was beginning to melt in a close embrace, Natasha responded to the kiss. Half a minute later, Gennady, without apparent effort, grabbed her in his arms and took a few steps to the sofa, sat down on him, carefully placing the woman in his lap. She tucked her legs under herself and, like a few days earlier, completely surrendered to the man.
At that moment, she did not think that this man had brought her a lot of pain, suffering and humiliation. She was pleased with his hands, his gentle touch and his attention to her person, whose self-importance fell below the plinth. The woman did not even think that her husband could sit somewhere in the next room, while she naked herself and gave herself to her lover. The head was spinning from nervous experiences, alcohol and rolling excitement.
Gennady stroked her feet, hips and breasts, forcing him to forget about all the unpleasant experiences of the last days. With his other hand, he penetrated under her hair, massaging her nape sensitively. Bringing the woman to the extreme degree of excitement, he put her next to him on the sofa, and he got up and immediately spread her limp legs.
Natasha did not have time to lift her head in surprise, when she felt the hot tongue of a man on her smooth labia. He, as it follows, walked through these bulging tubercles, and then penetrated between them, feeling the pleasant taste and the return heat of her bosom. He smoothed his guilt in his own language, knowing it well, not only during pegovory. Deeply penetrating the wet excited vagina, he made the girl moan with pleasure. His movements were gentle and confident at the same time. Skillful tongue penetrated deep into the hole, causing the woman to tremble from pleasant sensations.
Natasha forgot about all her terrible adventures and, relaxing, stretched out her hand to the clitoris to enhance these gorgeous sensations. But the man firmly intercepted both her hands, pressed to the hard surface of the sofa. From the desire that grows with every second, the bead of the clitoris appeared from its hood and longed for caress. Having tortured her with his inattention, Gennady still eagerly attacked her and, having licked his tongue, pulled his lips hard.
If Dima didn’t sleep, he would definitely have heard a loud cry of pleasure that his over-excited wife had published. Gennady began to strengthen and accelerate the movement of language, forcing the clitoris to appear as far as possible towards his caresses. Having merged his mouth with the crotch of a woman, he brought her to the strongest orgasm, forcing her to squeeze the man’s head with her legs during the peak of pleasure.
Half a minute later he opened her legs, feeling his air running out. Pulling away from the girl, he wiped his face from saliva and female discharges and went to the bathroom unit. Soon, Natasha caught up with him. She came up, got up on her socks and kissed the man on the lips.
- Thank! - Smiling, she said.
The woman wanted to continue, but Gennady put his index finger to her lips, making it clear that he did not want to hear other words from her. He turned to the sink to wash his face, and Natasha stepped back, sat down on the toilet and began to relieve himself. She almost did not hesitate to a man after all that happened between them. Gennady turned around when she was already washing away. He unbuttoned his pants and eyes showed the woman in her place.
Quickly realizing that they want from her, Natasha got on all fours right by the toilet and the meter separating her from the man, she overcame in this form. Kneeling down, she pulled the pants down with her underpants and licked the head of a man's cock. From this touch, he swayed and began to straighten, gaining strength. Taking it into her mouth, Natasha began to carefully suck, not forgetting to periodically lick the large eggs of a man.
Having enjoyed a diligent, but not very skillful mouth, Gennady raised his mistress to his feet, unfolded it, forced him to lean on the bath and without preparation for the full length of the penis entered her excited vagina. The woman shook her head sharply and closed her eyes in pain mixed with pleasure. Grabbing her hands on her sides, he not only began to fuck her, but began roughly to stick her on his dick. A minute later, Natasha was already trembling with all her body, not feeling him from this furious intercourse. All her feelings were concentrated around her crotch, which I would send and squelched loudly from the quick movements of a skilled member.
The woman had finished even before her rude lover, she literally went limp in his hands and exhaustedly leaned her stomach on the edge of the bath, hanging on it. Gennady also wanted to finish, because he continued to fuck her, crouching a bit and bending her knees. Beating a member into the vagina of an exhausted woman, he enjoyed her moans, turning into some kind of animal scream. Loud slaps of eggs in her crotch complement the overall range of accompanying sounds. Soon the man also finished, taking out his penis and filling the hot back with sperm and Natasha's ass.
Without waiting for her reaction, he quickly washed his dick in the sink, went to the kitchen, immediately waved another glass of cognac and went back to the room.
After lying on her stomach for another minute, the woman got up and washed her face with cold water. She had the feeling that a jackhammer had been in the crotch. The hole still ached and missed the subject inside itself. On shaky legs, Natasha turned off the lights in the bathroom and went further along the corridor. Sticking to the wall, going up to the room in which her husband was sleeping, she opened the door and immediately heard his loud and annoying snore. The body itself, unconsciously lying on the bed, did not inspire her either. Closing the door, she reached the last room. There, on her sofa laid out with her eyes closed, her lover lay, he was completely undressed. A naked woman, without any hesitation, lay down beside her, resting her head on his chest and wrapping her arm around her body. The hand of the man in response lay on her back and, smiling, Natasha quickly fell into a dream.
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I read only in order to monitor the development of characters, and not as a porn story.
The whole series turned out to be very interesting and not predictable, which is actually an unusual thing for porn stories.
It is very interesting whether it will be described later on why Gennady suffers from unrequited love (and that he suffers was understandable from the first part of the story).
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Thanks for the feedback. Initially, the story was just thought of as a long series of adventures of a certain circle of people. I wanted to create a full-fledged adventure, rather than 1-2 page miscarriages to collect high marks. What actually turns out. I look at the site and am surprised: 1-2 page stories appear on the main page and gain high ratings, and some long parts of the stories, like mine, stopped spreading there, and a few people steadily in the first days put a few stakes. Funny But I am writing not for the sake of ratings, but because there is a purpose and feedback from other readers is interesting.
I'm afraid that you didn’t understand Gennady’s character very well (or I didn’t present him that way). He is a lone wolf, trying to take everything from life and sex. Although, perhaps, they become such when they strongly disappoint in someone in life.
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It is possible that it strongly depends on the contingent and the genre of the story. Many do not like long stories and this kind of porn stories. As an option, perhaps this is the case
And about Gennady? In the first parts there were short reflections on the topic “what a good hero he is a lover and yes he has a wife and love,” honestly I don’t remember a part but it’s like 2 or 3. Although of course this is probably my idea of him.
In any case, the series is not very bad.
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In the first place, in the story, there are relations of rakhny characters, by the will of fate, who have appeared together. Porn goes into the background. And this is good. This only raises the story above the porn site level. Minus those who use the site to jerk off. And there are many drochibelny stories. This is not one of those. We are waiting for the continuation.
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Thank you, I agree with your opinion. Although the level of porn should also be kept in good shape)
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Actually ahrenevayu ... A very serious story that puts pressure on the psyche ... I don’t even know the PDA will further develop ... But I was totally sorry for me ... What to do with this kind of self-inserting hole put my daughter under the stick to be fucked ... On Asya's head man ... Sex is voluntariness ... In any form of its manifestation and what kind of bolt did the mother create this with the swift committed summer daughter is ... This is your mother's chaos ... then I am pleased with everything in the story, but here the author is clearly overdone on all counts
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The site sometimes podglyuchivaet and fails to respond purposefully to a review. I answered you a little lower.
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Broke eyes, but read your review. Sex is voluntary, but what is the connection between sex and whipping in this case? I am glad that you like the long series of my stories, but since you follow her, you should have noted that the main genres of the story are connected with BDSM, and all the main characters are universal perverts in one way or another. Therefore, it is not surprising that the story turned out to be a cynical scene of hard whipping, without sexual additions.
Justifying Lisa, we can say that she did not expect such cruelty and such an effect from the planned execution.
My fault, as an author, is that trying to make the story as close to reality as possible, I wrote one part that was out of the general style of narration, at least in terms of manipulation and more depressive than the rest.
And if you go back to the fact that, according to your words, the punishment of her daughter is a lawlessness, then I will not agree. I myself love this element of SM in real life. It is quite real and common (of course, not in the context that I described). For me, incest looks wilder in life, for example, (even without coercion, pedophilia, and other perversions), and our website is sorry to be teeming with stories on this topic. Everyone has their own preferences and vision of the situation. Although, again, I agree, that part of the story came out too stark and “negative”.
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I will answer you a little bit later)))
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Hello! I enjoyed reading the entire series of stories. I liked it very much, only for some reason it seems to me that the author early deduces from the story of such a character as Light. Based on what I read, for example, Sveta could play a little more with Lisa. Suppose to go with her, to a shopping center, then to a cinema, to a cafe, and in her own style to force Sveta to perform tasks in public, and for example, witnesses, and a group of unfamiliar young girls could be participants of this session. Sveta could easily have attracted them to play together with Lisa in public, or in public places. In fact, even more corrupting Lisa, and bringing some confusion in her seething thoughts.I think over time, the same fate of Light could have been prepared for Natalia. After all, Natalia's husband does not mind. And Sveta's husband will be busy with Katya. I also think that a new acquaintance (neighbor) of Liza could, along with Gennady, bring up Liza. And as an option, Gennady and Natalia's husband Dmitry could hold a joint session with Natalia, where she would perform all Gennady's teams in public, and Dima would suggest the situation and the form of implementation to Gennady in the presence of Natasha. As an option, it is possible to reduce almost all the characters in one closed club, where on the stage Katya, Lisa, and Natalia will arrange competitions among themselves. And they will get as a prize for one night guests of the institution. Lisa or Natasha to a group of some rich women, Katya to Sveta's husband. I Sveta again will spend time with Gennady! And from the story just need to remove other incomprehensible characters, such as one-time Alexei, Sasha, and so on. And besides, the vacation will end sometime, therefore there should be more in the remaining period of events. Again, I apologize for giving you advice, it's just that the story is really interesting, and I don’t want it to end quickly and somehow. The author is waiting for the continuation!
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Hello! I read a series of stories, I think that the author is worthy of respect. It is really strongly written, the plot is worthy for the film adaptation)) However, I think that the author prematurely deduces such a character as Sveta from the story. I think Sveta could still have fun with Liza and Natasha. For example, Sveta could go along with Liza separately from other characters, for example, to the Shopping Center, where trying on Sveta's clothes with sellers and the public would put Lisa in piquant situations. Then they could in a similar way visit a sex shop, a cafe, a cinema, and some lesbian party, where Lisa was the highlight of the program. Sveta could periodically force Lisa to fulfill all the whims of unfamiliar elderly women and young girls in these institutions. Lisa may be humiliated by a group of women and girls. Thus, Sveta will further corrupt Lisa, and suppress her will. Natalia could have prepared the same fate of Light. Light in the story is really a strong and interesting character. Also, as an option, Gennady and Natalya’s husband Dmitry could spend time together, where Natalya, by order of Gennady, demonstrated her dignity in public, and was given away to unfamiliar women and men, and the circumstances of the events in the presence of Natasha Gennady were suggested by her husband Dmitry. I also believe that both women Liza and Natasha could each separately visit a tattoo parlor. Lisa with Sveta, and Natasha with Gennady and Dmitry. And Kate at this time having fun with her husband Sveta. Later, I think all the characters could be brought together at some private club party, where Sveta would be led by Lisa, Gennady and Dima Natasha, and Sveta's husband is Katya. And women on the stage would be blindfolded or unaware that they would appear on the stage where they took part in the BDSM number, with the participation of other experienced craftsmen and craftswomen, and then were played as prizes among the public, rich elderly and young women, and men . This will allow the author to develop several plots about the stay of the heroines of the story, as a prize in the "guests". Well, then hippie end as they say. Natasha is for her husband, Sveta is for her husband, Lisa and Katya are home, and Gennady and her son are free to sail. After a while, they could all meet again. Of course, I apologize for trying to give advice to the author. You already wrote a story at a high level. It’s just that their vacation will end soon, and I would like to see more stories in this story!
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Thank you very much for the really interesting and varied story development scenarios. Something I will gladly refer to you. It is a pity that you did not express your preferences and ideas a bit earlier, because I had already turned the story in a slightly different direction, putting emphasis on another and leading the main characters to slightly different plots.
By the way, the scenes described by you may turn out to be too cruel and unreal compared to the parts already written, which can be negatively received by other readers. At the same time, the main characters in the story are only three, the rest are minor or “disposable”, like the driver Sveta or those who met at the fitness club. I am afraid that the continuation of introducing additional characters into the story can greatly confuse readers and turn it into Santa Barbara with elements of porn and BDSM. :) Most readers get acquainted with the story from part to part, and not read everything. With long breaks in the writing of parts of the story, it is easy to get lost in the characters and storylines. I myself sometimes get confused. :)
In general, no one says that the life and adventures of the main characters end after the end of the holiday, they can simply change the place of deployment. ;)
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I ask you to share other ideas on the development of the plot, because the writing of the story is in the process, but it can always be supplemented with some interesting highlight.
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Not to you as the author, of course, is more visible. Although I personally read the story, and I think that it was written quite logical. And confusion in the head does not arise, and it does not arise. What I propose to you is how different this stage seems logical. Because the fall of Liza, Katy and Natasha was gradual, and of course, it was impossible to move to such a turnaround earlier. Moreover, the introduction of “one-time” characters will not spoil the story, because they are already periodically present in the previous parts. Well, I repeat once again to you, of course, you know better. Here's another story, Kate could pay off with Lisa for spanking. It would have been possible with the hands of Gennady, or Sveta, via chat, or sms to convey Lisa to some unknown lady, whose whims would be unconditionally performed by Lisa. And in fact, she would have been Katya. As a result, Katya dominates, Liza performs, and Sveta or Gennady controls the process. Then somewhere in the end of the story, open Lisa's eyes. Let them then go home in thought.))))) I believe that you still have time to turn the plot of the story, and the fate of the characters in any direction. Well, in the end naturally hippie end. And the most important thing is to keep your masterful style of the story, describing not only erotic moments, but also the psychology of the characters. Their feelings and experiences. In any case, no matter what decision you take, thank you for the cool story.
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Thank you again. Again, you certainly know better, but the story is just at that stage when the fate of the characters can be turned in different directions, without loss. The moral fall of the heroines was gradual. And right now, they are ready to fall even further. All of them are now in thought. In addition, Sveta's husband, carried away by Katya. Sveta is fascinated by Lisa and Natasha. Gene fascinated Natasha, and in principle all. Natasha's husband does not mind. Sveta's husband, in principle, aware of her adventures. Later he could forgive her. Gene unscrewed at the expense of Katie, is fond of Natasha and Dima, he previously described the script, and then everything is logical. Besides, Katya could have revenged Lisa for whipping with the hands of Sveta and Gennady, becoming an unknown virtual mistress for Liza, and the controllers of these events could be, as I already said, Sveta and Gena. At the end of the story, you could open your eyes to Lisa, and leave this question open, that is, Lisa and Katya will go home without having decided on their status. It will then be possible to beat again. in the continuation of the story. So once again I repeat to you, of course, you know better, but it seems to me that now there is still time for the development of the plot. In addition, "disposable" characters, and so in the story are present. Generally reading the story, everything seems logical, and real. If you keep your corporate style, do not go into vulgarity, but leave the description of the plots, and the psychology of the heroines, their perception, experiences, emotions, it will only add to the story gloss. Still, I repeat, you are the author and you know better.And so I think that the story is cool))), and the author is well done !!!
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Thank you again. Again, you certainly know better, but the story is just at that stage when the fate of the characters can be turned in different directions, without loss. The moral fall of the heroines was gradual. And right now, they are ready to fall even further. All of them are now in thought. In addition, Sveta's husband, carried away by Katya. Sveta is fascinated by Lisa and Natasha. Gene fascinated Natasha, and in principle all. Natasha's husband does not mind. Sveta's husband, in principle, aware of her adventures. Later he could forgive her. Gene unscrewed at the expense of Katie, is fond of Natasha and Dima, he previously described the script, and then everything is logical. Besides, Katya could have revenged Lisa for whipping with the hands of Sveta and Gennady, becoming an unknown virtual mistress for Liza, and the controllers of these events could be, as I already said, Sveta and Gena. At the end of the story, you could open your eyes to Lisa, and leave this question open, that is, Lisa and Katya will go home without having decided on their status. It will then be possible to beat again. in the continuation of the story. So once again I repeat to you, of course, you know better, but it seems to me that now there is still time for the development of the plot. In addition, "disposable" characters, and so in the story are present. Generally reading the story, everything seems logical, and real. If you keep your corporate style, do not go into vulgarity, but leave the description of the plots, and the psychology of the heroines, their perception, experiences, emotions, it will only add to the story gloss. Still, I repeat, you are the author and you know better. And so I think that the story is cool))), and the author is well done !!!
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Some trouble you with comments.) I appreciate that you put so much effort to convey to me your ideas.
I agree, the advantage of the story at the moment is that the fate of the characters can be turned anywhere. I will try to invent the most original plots, but within reason. Thank!
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Just my opinion.
I read the first chapters with interest. Even a delightful review somewhere left. Last, I read in the "rewind" mode. Too much like Agent 007. Such an omnipotent, never stopping hero. He waved with one hand, the intoxicating cocktail dripped from the sleeve, waved the second, in the other hand a super stick. Between the legs is a long-arm multi-arrow developed by the English Institute of Hyper-Fantastic Ball Pens with Nuclear Warheads. In his head, a cunning strategist with two phrases that forces any woman to flow and completely kills their natural jealousy towards other bitches ...
Of course, all this happens. But it is very idealistic for such a gap and so many events.
The first series of “Terminator”, in which he learned about supertechnologies and the revolutionary movement against robots, looked with pleasure, went to the latter to support the company. Nothing new to the mind was there.
The author's syllable is good. The scene, the acts are spelled out in detail, completely immersed in what is happening. You understand how virtuoso inventive Gennady is in his affairs. But the general plot ... I wrote a little higher. :)
This is an opinion, only an opinion.
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Thank you, good opinion, I even agree with most of your thoughts. But, there is one thing. To make the story seem “fresh”, interesting and unusual, it should not be divided into dozens of long parts, but simply enjoy the one-page works on the site. It’s just that my story originally had other goals and narrative style. Of course, the main characters are bored and no longer seem original.
And the alpha male must be a terminator, otherwise what kind of alpha male is he?) If the scenes are not so varied, then the story will be uninteresting, the main character will look like an ordinary lover, and sex scenes will be reduced to listing partners, poses and holes.) Therefore, the characters are "bulging"so that the numerous parts of the story were at least somewhat different from each other.
Thanks for the interesting and correct feedback!
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Yes Master, terminator. He is alpha. Otherwise, these bitches are not interested. But it is painfully perfect. Drinks, does not get drunk, should get on the head, but does not receive. Remember how the Terminator constantly avoids problems. And you are too perfect. Even Bond will be envied.
But this is your idea. At least it attracted more than other local libelists. :)
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Well, of course, getting drunk, won Natasha’s rape over drunk. With any problems, it pays off or simply starts to be “rude” and “gesture”, three families are out, they quarreled. So he is not such a cool guy. Fucking terrorist he.)
It is necessary to include in the story a scene where in a dark alley ten pornographic actresses will rape him with strapon so that he does not seem so cool.)
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Well, then ... For the males! :)
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I also read all the parts. All read in one breath. Many thanks to the author for his work.
At my discretion, the author did everything right that removed Sveta, a very negative character too.
What I noticed in the last two stories porn has become less and already interest is not at the level of arousal and expectations of what's next, but simply at the level of what's next.
I look forward to the following stories from the author!
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For me, it is interesting that the characters in my story evoke different feelings and emotions in everyone. Someone more interesting to watch the adventures of Katie, someone for Lisa, someone from the first part fell in love with Natasha. Someone likes a flimsy and brutal World, and someone like you are happy for her care.
Nevertheless, I will try to increase the "level of porn", yet we have here ero - porn - site;)
Thanks for the feedback!
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I fully agree with Gennady and his plot development. Listen to him
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