- Vacation. First days
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- Vacation. Day four
- Vacation. Fifth day
- Vacation. Sixth day
- Vacation. Seventh day. Part one
- Vacation. Seventh day. Part two
- Vacation. Day ten. Part one
- Vacation. Eleventh day
- Vacation. Thirteenth day
- Vacation. Day fourteenth
- Vacation. Fifteenth day
- Vacation. Seventeenth day
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of air.
- Here, Lech, look right! Clear, concise and clear! Take off your clothes - The last word was addressed to the woman.
A little taken aback, she nevertheless began to take off her clothes. The blouse, skirt, bra and panties alternately lay on the gazebo bench. Her breasts with excited nipples swayed in the air, and Alexey really wanted to run her hand over her bare ass and legs, which were tied with stockings. She remained standing next to him behind Gennady, he continued to follow the fire, which began to lick raw meat with flames.
- Under the table! - The cook commanded in brief, realizing that the current situation can only be corrected by an orderly tone.
Having trampled on the spot, without taking off her shoes and not looking at Alexey, Lisa knelt down and crawled under the table she knew. After sitting there for a couple of minutes, she saw a glass of rum appear from under the tablecloth, which she dried in a few sips. The woman was already very drunk and was looking forward to further developments. Alexey, who handed over the glass to her, also drank a similar portion and offered the drink to Gennady. He rarely refused alcohol, so he sat down at the table and began to drink it in small sips.
- Work! - He said in an empty space and in a few seconds Alexey heard the sound of an unbuttoned fly.
Gennady did not give a glance at the moment when Lisa’s hot mouth half-swallowed his cock. Yes, and subsequent manipulations under the table also did not appear on his face. He phlegmatically picked up another piece of cucumber and crunched them monotonously. After swallowing, he still broke the silence, during which the obscene sounds that the woman’s diligent mouth made came from under the table.
- Lech, I will speak directly, as far as I understood, for Lisa I’m just a tough mentor and a disposable resort lover, and you are a man for her for a longer period. Therefore, my advice to you: be harder with this bitch. She is driven, weak and pliable. She loves being treated rude and tough. If you pity her, she will simply walk away from you to another, who has more horseradish and a firmer arm, it’s just a matter of time. Do not be afraid and do not hesitate to hurt her, as it turned out, masochism is also in her style, as well as fucking with debauchery.
The man with his mouth parted listened to Gennady's revelations, marveling not only at them, but also at the tacit consent of Lisa, who continued to suck diligently, smacking loudly from under the table.
- I will turn the meat, and you, do not slow down, take it by the hair and let it in your mouth.
Gennady got up from the table and Alexey's gaze fell on his big and shiny cock from saliva, which he held on his stomach, so as not to burn himself on the grill. The discouraged man groped Liza’s head under the table and gently pulled toward his crotch. The woman was fascinated by her wet hole, in which she actively worked with her fingers, excited by the words of Gennady and from the mere fact of his hero in his mouth.
A member of Alexei stood for a long time and he himself freed him, buried in the face of a woman. She immediately hugged him with his lips, assessing his size losing a member of Gennady.
Having dealt with the meat, he turned and, barely holding back a laugh, appreciated the stupid expression of the reddened face of the guest. After giving him a couple of minutes to receive oral sex, the organizer of the next group sex, sipped a bitter drink and ordered:
- Enough, get out! - The woman obediently got out, squinting from a bright fire a couple of meters away. - Back on the table!
Pushing off a foot from the edge of the bench, she clumsily climbed onto the table and assumed the desired posture, after having pushed back the glasses and plates. Gennady, with visible ease pulled her legs to the edge of the table, leaving them hanging down.
- Give a cucumber! - The man ordered Alexey to give him only one uncut cucumber on the table. Taking it, Gennady sent him straight into the mouth of Lisa. - Lick it! Ass cleared?
“No ...” she said with fright.
- Your problems! Lift your legs! Now scout! Ass higher!
Lisa prepared herself for further action, but to her misfortune, the cucumber, although it was small, but it was pimply ... Alexey watched with horror, her grin and grimace of pain reflected on his face, when Gennady forcefully and without pity brought him a vegetable on two thirds in the constricted ring of the anus. Lisa groaned, and an experienced man immediately grabbed his penis with his hand, sent him into the second hole.
The horror on the face of Alexei was replaced by surprise, when the big dick quickly and completely disappeared into the vagina of his mistress. A drop of grease appeared on his head of the penis, which did not go unnoticed by Gennady, he, picking up the woman by the hips, moved her to the edge of the table and, turning her face to the side, said:
- Fuck her in the mouth!
Alexey immediately executed the order and with great pleasure inserted the member into Lisa’s open mouth, which was already shaking with her whole body from Gennady’s powerful pushes. She wanted to grab the bouncing tits with her hands so that they would not interfere with her with their erratic jumps, but immediately received a palpable slap by the hand and instantly abandoned this thought.
Torn in the crotch by a strong member and a cucumber, she tightly closed her lips and this brought her lover to the next fast orgasm. The woman swallowed the sperm and heard the voice of Gennady:
- Turn the meat over, or else I'm busy, lightly.
Alexey rushed to the brazier, and a rude man turned the woman on his side, putting her legs on one another. Without taking out his penis, he continued the rough use of her holes, occasionally putting tangible slaps on the thigh, which quickly turned red. Not a stamina lover, trying to keep track of both meat and a pair of fucking at the same time. Lisa was already moaning and shouting in full voice.
Sharply taking out a cucumber, Gennady tried on and began to squeeze a member into the ring of the anus that did not have time to close. He forgot that a woman forgot to prepare for anal sex. From the painful cry of a woman, he finally felt like a predatory male, and he accelerated his movements, roughly rubbing the walls of her anus with his movements. Lisa whined like a hurt little dog, and Alexey, from what he saw, forgot about his duty at the brazier.
Quickly and sweepingly fucking a woman, Gennady even swept slightly, sweat appeared on his forehead, but he did not slow down. A few minutes later he felt the approach of an orgasm, and seizing the moment, he grabbed a cucumber and immediately drove it completely into Liza’s current vagina. This was the last straw for her and she, shouting even louder, began to shake with her whole body in a stormy orgasm. Feeling how her rubbed anus squeezed his dick, Gennady also supported her, filling her rectum with hot sperm. And only Alexey, with admiration and surprise, watched this picture from the side.
Recognizing himself, he began to turn the meat over and, to his joy, did not see what a man’s member looked like after unprepared anal sex. Gennady swore and hurried into the house to wash the smeared device. Lisa remained lying on the table on her back, with her legs wide apart. Holes continued to pulsate faintly, and the anus slightly burned from rough penetration. Recovering, she nevertheless got up from the table and, wandering, wandered into the house.
Having put herself in order, the whole trio drank the rum and eagerly gnawed into the slightly burnt meat. Of course, the men especially tried, and Liza fidgeted more on the bench, trying to get used to the burning sensation. She sat at the table naked. Having finished the meat and alcohol, Gennady began to lose interest in the company, so he said primly:
- Lech, glad to meet you! Lisa, tidy up everything here, and prepare your ass for tomorrow, and I think we will meet again! Good luck, and I have a business call.- Leaving the guests once again in perplexed confusion, he went into the house, remembering that he had not resolved the issue of his visit to the businessman with Katina tomorrow.
He found a telephone and, to his own frustration, did not detect any missed calls. There was only one left. He dialed Katya’s number and, without greeting, said:
- I wait tomorrow at nine in the morning. Get ready, let's go to our friend businessman to clarify the situation. - Having received confirmation from the girl of her intentions, he ended the call. The day was not the worst.
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Well done. It's time for Lisa to take.
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I think you, as a fan of Liza, will enjoy the following series;)
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The story does not tarnish. The author again and again mixes familiar characters, like a deck of cards, making it easy and easy. The behavior of all the characters are logical, but not predictable. This day was very good for everyone))
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Thank! The last days of the "vacation" will be even more saturated with various events. ;)
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Interesting. The plot and the scene. Development!)
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I am wondering whether Gene will find a life partner for himself or not?
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Are you sure that he needs her?)
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Master Carlos, I would take off my hat to you if I had one! The story is gorgeous! Saying that you are an incompetent writer, you either underestimate yourself a lot or you are deliberately modest)) Here, no one expects great literary works on a par with the works of classics, and compared to modern fiction, such as criminal or erotic novels, your story is quite high (and on this site it is probably one of the most readable). The heroes are, indeed, very lively, and the development of events evokes many emotions, from simple interest to wild disgust. True, for me personally, some of the actions of the heroes are a real bust (especially considering that you focus on realism), although this may be due to the fact that I do not fully understand all the details. By the way, I really liked how you write about Alexey, it turns out to be a bit comical, and this somehow discharges the atmosphere. So 10 out of 10! Keep up the good work, looking forward to further developments.
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Elena, thank you very much for such a nice and volumetric review! I will answer you in order: I really consider myself an incompetent writer, if only because I myself feel, as it is sometimes difficult for me to describe this or that action or nuances of feelings. There is a lack of perseverance, mood, vocabulary and hundreds of different trifles. Some readers (to whom I am very grateful) pointed out the main shortcomings and shortcomings of my story. I completely agree with them, I try to work on myself, but I myself understand that so far it turns out badly. Again, not enough plodding and free time.
When I re-read my stories and sketches myself, then in 99% of cases I don’t like them. But fundamentally change them and rewrite I lack neither talent, nor, again, assiduity and time. This can be very annoying.) Sometimes it is even difficult to check the written part for errors and inconsistencies.
I agree with you that no one expects great literary works here and most readers on this site are interested in one or two page stories on the topic “this is a 18-year-old virgin nympho childish look with a 6th breast size, so she got to 8 blacks in captivity, etc., etc. ”But since I took to writing a long and original story, I want to keep it “on the level” and not to go down to the mere enumeration of sexual partners and platitudes.
That the story evokes a gamut of emotions is wonderful! He was originally conceived precisely for this. And not all the manipulations of the heroes of the story are pleasant, and to me, a rather experienced BDSM player. Even my wife said that she did not expect that I would describe such rude and somewhat perverted things, because in life they do not attract me.)))
In terms of the fact that some of the actions of the main characters - this is too much, I also agree. But each has its own concept of "busting". For someone, sex other than missionary posture is overkill. For someone, golden rain is the norm and just a game. Someone easily tolerates a hard whipping and may experience an orgasm from her, and someone has tears from their eyes from pinching their skin.)
Alexey is conceived in the story as a character who brings the theme sexwife and cuckold into it. His character should contrast sharply with Gennady. I will make a “spoiler” and say that it will remain in the story until the end of the “holiday”. ;)
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Master Carlos, I know several people who have written more than one book, and none of them said that everything was written easily and naturally. Every author has weak points in the creation of his creation. The important thing is that you end up doing this. As for the old stories ... So it should be! This does not mean that they are bad, but that you are developing, as an author and as a person as a whole. Only the one who stands still is pleased with himself. With errors you are not so scary. You, at least, the grammar is not lame, but it is very difficult to read stories in which one sentence contains verbs for a rhinestone in three tenses, even if the plot is interesting. Speaking about busting, I rather had in mind not actions of a sexual nature, here it really is, to each his own, after all, at the very head of a cockroach the size of a palm. But the fact that Dima just gave his wife to some peasant! I would have such a husband on the nearest tree for personal belongings vzdёrnula! Well, they also just kill me, their public games, although, again, I understand that the taste and color of the markers are different for everyone. But reading you is really interesting!)))
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Another thanks!)
I meant that even reading the story written yesterday, I don’t like him 100%. How to make sure that he “hooked”, interested or aroused at least himself, I do not know yet.)
The situation with Dima is just not the most, so to speak, strange. Many couples who lack sexual impressions and sensations are beginning to look for happiness in the so-called sexwife and cuckold relationships. And here, Dima was also offered to have fun with Katya and Sveta, young, sexy and accessible, in exchange for a bored wife. Of course, he could not resist.))) Well, and publicity, too, a very specific thing.)
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The expression “at least oneself” would be appropriate here if you wrote poetry, lyrics or, for example, music, that is, tried to convey to people the real feelings and emotions of a living person. In the case of fictional characters, it is often easier to hook the reader than myself (I’ve come across this more than once).
I have nothing against the so-called sexwife and cuckold relations, even though this is not my format, but in Dima’s action I was enraged that he made this decision for his wife! Just in my life there was a similar situation. I was also “forgotten” to ask whether I want this, only now my reaction turned out to be completely different.
And, by the way, it still seemed a bit unrealistic that all the main participants in the events came from one city, but this, of course, is not critical.
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Yes, unfortunately, real life is always different from fiction and fantasy, so the analogies with real life are in any case irrelevant.But I am glad that you also noticed that I am trying to recreate an atmosphere of realism in the story. Let it be for everyone and their own.
And in terms of "coincidence" of vacationers from one city, I would say the following: Moscow is still a very big city, so it is not surprising that both Liza, Katya, Gennady, Nikolai and Sasha, and the businessman turned out to be "neighbors." Plus, I introduced this “coincidence” into the story not accidentally, but in order that the story could always have the prospect of continuing in another “location”, but with previous participants. In the event that readers will convince me that they want to see the new adventures of the main characters after the end of the holiday. ;)
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