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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

Nice to meet you, Emiliya)).
Yes, there is symbolism, I wanted to make erotic fantasy. The second part could be opened deeper, but it would increase its size. Well, I tried to sustain the story format.

You recently, I looked at the site. Therefore, I wish you success and grateful readers)). Your stories, as time gets, I will certainly read).

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

Thank you, dear critic, for a detailed comment, as always!)
According to the comments:
1. I know a person who specifically with the first group consciously decided to live alone, without a mother. Worked nonetheless and even arranged a personal life. The human character is capable of and not like that, but the hero of the story wanted to study in the capital and had to get out himself.
2. With Vera, it seemed to me that it was obvious even in the first part - he changed her life in hindsight. There was a phrase on this subject.
3. It is a matter of principles and perception to be considered as speculation by a person with a major disability.
I'm surprised that it seemed to you that “Santa Claus” was forcing Vera to scream, and that he was forcing someone into something. All the characters did what they thought was necessary, he only created situations. And in the last story, he basically did not participate, about which he also spoke to the guy.
Well, what would all reveal and answer all, probably need a whole novel)) ...
Thanks again for reading!)

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

Special thanks to those who financially thanked the author.

And also my special congratulations to the one who sculpts the story "Coke" all the way!

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

Beautiful movie you watched a colleague! I remember him. All were able to make a movie about love in Soviet times.
And I call my shorts, yes, “panties”!)))

Thank you, Nefertiti, for the feedback! Nicely!

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

The original ending you proposed!))
I admit, for each of the story novels there were two options for how to finish, but I did not have time to think for a long time, I had to release a story at least for the old New Year)
And the name - yes, this has already been applied both in the cinema and in literature, but it pushes this work into a trend that I thought up, therefore I chose this. Let there be my version.
I agree with you - making movies is an exciting experience)).

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