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Comment on publication: "My dreams are in your head"

Thank).

I will try and surprise you with the following stories).

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Comment on publication: Woodstock kids. Part 1

Yes, this is fiction.

If you, the author, want to write about this, then be sure to write. You just want to find your reader. Here it will not be massive, but this is not the main thing. The story took the way you conceived it, and there is nothing to criticize. Let the comments that it was necessary to make a sharper ending, dynamic climax, I believe inappropriate. Written clearly and with a deep understanding of the subject.
Success in creative work)

+10

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Comment on publication: "My dreams are in your head"

I do not know).

If it leaves, it will be a completely different story.

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Comment on publication: "My dreams are in your head"

Thanks again!)

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Comment on publication: "My dreams are in your head"

I wonder what you saw in the behavior of his wife revenge). He reread after writing, and did not feel. I wanted to simulate the relationship of his wife to her beloved, which is higher than the insult for treason, although such was). And jealousy, mixed with admiring his wife, yes, of course, moved his behavior.
Thank you for carefully reading the story)).

Always at your service).

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Comment on publication: "My dreams are in your head"

Thank you, dear. The story is specific, and it's nice that he found his readers.)

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Comment on publication: "My dreams are in your head"

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you liked it).

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Comment on publication: Temptation

I wanted to “drive off” the quatrain in a hurry, but decided not to ... ... oh, to discuss))))

And therefore just bravo Poet!))

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Comment on publication: "My dreams are in your head"

Yes, and my knowledge of Kukolde is not quite practical)))

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