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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

Yes, Serge, the story is specific, I agree with you). It needs to be read carefully, without skipping lines, otherwise nothing will be clear.
Mixed, you say?) Well, that was intended).

Thank you for reading my reading this time).

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 2

The tag “fairy tale” I still marked as “fantasy”. I admit, this is my favorite genre in literature. If I had written a “fairy tale”, readers would have been waiting for some fairytale characters.)
Thank you, Rinat, for reading the second part).

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 1

Yes, Marat rolled, but not in my story)).
And the second miracle is not over.

Thank you, Critic for your attention. As always, you are perspicacious). And still, I will try and surprise you.
Continuation is not far off. I hope to finish well)) ...

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 1

Thank you, Nefertiti).
Your literary experience gives you hints where to go without it).

I hope the ending is like.

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Comment on publication: The executor of desires. Part 1

Thank you for the detailed feedback, Rinat.
Santa Claus is not as simple as many have already guessed).

Continuation is already being added - a couple of days, and lay out.

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Comment on publication: Gossip

The world of office glamor in sexy colors!) Very modern writing.

Good work, colleague! Liked).

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Comment on publication: Durcomeron (New Year's story)

And cho, cool!)

Good job, Jura.

The reality of the situation is ridiculous to discuss, and this does not happen under the New Year mood, but it is written vividly, with emotions and in your healthy literary style.
The excitement of reading is exactly as much as you need from such a reading. I liked the girls, but I'm not ready to marry such people)).

Excellent entertaining and erotic story, which and place on this site)).

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Comment on publication: Happy new year dear friends!

Dear editors, dear colleagues and beloved readers Happy New Year! I wish the best erolitsite team to discover new talents in authors, new bright creations for authors, and excitement and pleasure for readers!). And ALL - happiness, warmth near the beloved body and close soul!)

• Rating: 4