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Comment on publication: Bandit

I want to insert my 5 kopecks. The story is very short and the truth is not about anything, there is no goal, no beginning or end, just something taken out of context.
Perhaps I would advise to read some of my stories, but they are removed from here, for the reasons of deleting one section: 3 Some, such as “Farm Girl” you can find on the Internet.

What I advise the author:
1. Read any fiction to at least see how the work is written.
2. Create a plan, from A to Z and gradually move towards it, in the story pay more attention to details, smooth transitions, etc., in general, all this you can learn from 1 point.
3. And most importantly, do not use obscene words in the story, if they are not used for excitement. Your swear words in the story, immediately spoils the whole opinion about this “work”.

I hope 2 story will be better.

And about my stories, on this site I’m unlikely to publish a sequel: 3 for a reason that weighs in the top of the site, in a brown wrapper. Look for the continuation on the Internet :) which the truth will not appear soon. This is for my fans to say: 33

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Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7

I cannot promise everything, and I will not: 3

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Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7

... but the censorship of the editorial board did not come, and I don’t like it myself: 3, therefore, I have so far put it indefinitely.
Thank you, I hope I have enough strength to finish this cycle and the moderators do not put: 3

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Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7

To tell the truth, I don’t much bother this cycle .: 3 There are a lot of ideas in my head that one can’t fit in here (of course, if you can try, by entering for example a new main character, but I’m afraid then I’ll get confused in all this). It was originally planned to meet the 10 parts, but it does not work, I will try in 15 (maybe even earlier). Also, the whole cycle will be only from one person, perhaps with attempts to describe actions from 3 people, so far it's easier for me. In the future I will try to change the style a little, there are sketches, but the editorial censorship did not come

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Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7

Just appreciate, well, write wishes (if any), it will be enough for me.

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Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7

Thank you :) True, I don’t think so: 3 I feel like writers like the moon, but thanks anyway.
Although you can change your opinion in the next part, it looks like I didn’t go too far in the beginning: 3

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Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7

Thank you :) ended like this, because not much is not there. We need to come up with a transition line to continue, because in this part we could not put all the planned scenes. When will be continued I can not say exactly.

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Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 5

Well, if you read the end of this part, or at least the beginning of the next one, you would understand that everything in part 5 is her nightmare :)

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