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Comment on publication: Christie. Part 1
Thanks for the criticism :) I do have problems, and with blocks too. Sometimes you don’t know how to accurately describe two actions at the same time, and there’s something like a phobia when you get a lot of small blocks, so it turns out that it turns out :)
Comment on publication: Christie. Part 1
Oh, and excuse me, yes, who comes over, that this story has the same name as one of the stories on this site. In this malicious intent was not and it was noticed just now: (.
If the moderator wishes, you can rename the story from "Christina" to "Christy."
Comment on publication: Christie. Part 1
Just a postscript.
This is a try of the pen, after the break. The story, if it suddenly continues, it can develop in any direction, for me there are almost no taboo topics.
And yes, I basically do not participate in competitions on the site, because first of all, I write first for myself.
If you suddenly wish to continue, just vote / criticize, this will only add a chance, but does not guarantee it, since inspiration or simply desire is a capricious thing.
Thanks for attention :)
Comment on publication: Katya. Beach
Unfortunately, the continuation of the “Farm Girl” is not planned yet, there is too much to rework and finish (too crazy it went further) :) including the old parts, which is almost 100 pages.
But a new story, but of course in a similar style, may soon be over, at least the beginning of the story.
Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7
Ninth abandoned in the draft, as the story itself was partially reworked, but the hands and the desire to finish it all yet.
Comment on publication: Katya. Beach
Not bad, but a little advice, in your story, too fast transitions, some scenes should be slightly stretched, focus on the little things, for more eroticism, awkwardness.
For example, this story could be divided into 2 parts, the beach and the store (as was done with the first part), and more attention should be paid to each of these parts.
But in the end it’s not bad, I hope that you will delight us with more stories :)
I will tell you in confidence that you pushed me to try again to write a story, from scratch, a new story (there is one interesting little idea) :).
Comment on publication: Katya. Start
Not bad for the first time. Some points in the story indicate that you clearly read my stories or stories from Nick. Avtor, it is very tempting, I hope you will continue in the same spirit and do not give up this business, as unfortunately we did (thanks to the new rules here as well)
Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7
Part 8 may appear on the Internet before the new year, depends on the queue for its publication (if not lost on the site). Part 9 may start writing for the new year or after, depending on the situation, for now there is simply no time left for the story.
P. I didn’t really like the 8th part, because I should have entered 7th part, but didn’t have time.
Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7
The continuation is written, maybe published in a month, somewhere on the Internet.
Comment on publication: Farm girl. Part 7
Continuation unfortunately is unlikely to be published on this site. Due to the deletion of the section "teenagers" and sending all the stories for re-moderation. Where I will continue to publish them, you will surely find through the Internet.Most likely the 8th part will appear on another site, in a month, if I have time to finish: 3
P. S If you know similar to this site, sites where you can communicate with readers, then write about them to me in a personal message.
Thank you all.