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Publications: 10

Comments: 56

  • December 28, 2018 10:58

    Comment on publication: Pregnant Daughter

    Too many mistakes: (And so not bad.

    • Rating: 0
  • November 29, 2018 10:54

    Comment on publication: From a virgin to a real Russian whore. Part 1

    Yes, the story is rather weak, but a tougher pre-moderation will finish off the site, and so he lost a lot of authors and stories that have become classics long ago and all because of moderation. And now there are mostly stories about adultery and wives ...

    • Rating: 2
  • November 29, 2018 10:44

    Comment on publication: A small piece of my life

    I liked it, I hope the continuation will be no worse.

    • Rating: 0
  • October 17, 2018 9:14

    Comment on publication: Christie. Part 2.2: Entrance

    Thank :)

    • Rating: 0
  • March 31, 2018 0:12

    Comment on publication: Christie. Part 2.1: Entrance

    It is still difficult for me to decide how best to write from the first person or from the third, so to speak, while experimenting.
    Yes, and it seems to me to interfere with their story in a bad tone, until I know, we must try and see what happens :)

    • Rating: 0
  • March 29, 2018 1:39

    Comment on publication: Christie. Part 1

    Thank. :)
    With the following parts in terms of errors is much better, they help me to fix them :)

    • Rating: 0
  • March 16, 2018 3:33

    Comment on publication: Christie. Part 2.2: Entrance

    Yes, actually - it’s in plans to start from the next part or through the part.
    I will try to lay the foundation in the next, in the plans to invite a girlfriend for tea (: (If nothing changes)

    • Rating: 0
  • March 4, 2018 19:19

    Comment on publication: Christie. Part 2.2: Entrance

    (? _?)? (:

    • Rating: 0
  • March 4, 2018 13:29

    Comment on publication: Christie. Part 2.2: Entrance

    I hope not to have to wait a whole year (:

    • Rating: 0
  • March 3, 2018 22:03

    Comment on publication: Christie. Part 2.2: Entrance

    Thanks for the feedback. I will think about your idea, maybe in some thread of the future parts, while I can’t say for sure, and how the plot will go on too.

    • Rating: 0
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