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Sharp-eyed Falcon

Publications: 5

Comments: 122

  • August 6, 2018 11:34

    Comment on publication: Ancient Rome. Lodia

    Great story! I love the subject of ancient Rome, so I paid attention to your creation. Put the deserved top ten.

    Question to the author: first, Denis was amused at night with Seksta, and his wife was Sabina, and he was obsessed with loyalty. I re-read a couple of times: I did not understand.

    Masta was strangled by a pillow after she had used the power of Guy and his wife Lodia? Unclear.

    But in general, the coloring of the debauchery of ancient Rome is transmitted perfectly well. Bread and circuses in the form of continuation require readers!

    • Rating: 0
  • June 25, 2018 19:11

    Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 2

    As the saying goes: "The book without pictures is not interesting." To draw illustrations for the stories is quite laborious, and talent is needed. It is much more interesting to search for something on the topic on the Internet. Without a doubt, the process of picking pictures expands the horizons.
    About Hicks look interesting artist. Kisses are so different and not repeating. Not only one fuck to describe!

    • Rating: 0
  • June 24, 2018 21:45

    Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 2

    The atmosphere of the story is created from trifles. I understand, for 95% of readers do not care what hair color of the characters in the picture and in the story. But come across interesting facts. For example, I was looking for a long time, as the picture of Ron Hicks is called, depicting a kiss on a bench. Imagine, this artist with a dozen paintings kissing. And every kiss is different. In the end, the name on the Internet did not find. But the work of this artist with pleasure studied.

    • Rating: 1
  • June 24, 2018 21:35

    Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 1

    Thank you, dear Ficus, for the comment and evaluation of my creation.
    Recreating the atmosphere of events of the past is the most difficult task. Something took from the stories of relatives, about lingerie - from erotic films and photos. Glad your night story smiled at you.

    • Rating: 0
  • June 9, 2018 23:46

    Comment on publication: Moscow Noir. Eight months ago

    A worthy continuation of the story. I want to know why Tanya appeared. It was Marina. What happened? Not Tom, Belomor.)))

    • Rating: 1
  • June 9, 2018 16:41

    Comment on publication: Moscow Noir

    Great black and white story. I wonder what will happen to the main characters three years later.

    • Rating: 0
  • June 1, 2018 10:17

    Comment on publication: Futurama

    Lately, porn is gaining popularity, taken not by professionals, but by ordinary people. Let the scene is not always cinematic, and the source of light often floods the colors in yellow. But in the frame there is so much life that even the most professional actors will not pass it.

    The only thing that is lurking about the bad in such content is the disagreement of the participant of the video on its replication. For example, a couple shot a home video for viewing on long winter evenings. And then back to back, they parted, and the guy puts on such public evidence on the former girlfriend.
    So to conclude a contract in such a reality show is very necessary.

    • Rating: 1
  • May 31, 2018 18:36

    Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 1

    Thank you for your opinion. I am just starting to work hard at sales, so I wonder what the local audience likes.

    The first part is flowers. Story history. And then the tracks of the heroes converge, in the second part. And at the end I plan to add a little tin. Not only kiss and love. Life is harsh, and sometimes you have to pay for your actions.

    The historical theme with a rural bias is very much for the amateur. Especially among the modern youth.Although one of the readers may learn a new word. Here is a pen friend who unsubscribed that he had never heard the word “kunka” in his life.

    • Rating: 0
  • May 31, 2018 10:11

    Comment on publication: Someone else's bride. Part five

    Good. I will wait.

    • Rating: 1
  • May 31, 2018 7:14

    Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 2

    Accurately noticed. It will be more difficult to write stories about another time. Because it is necessary to compare historical details and try to avoid the things characteristic of the modern era. In fantasy, you can think of any world you wish.

    What did I like about sexitails? So this is an opportunity to attach pictures to the story. In the first part, the paintings First Love (by V. M. Vovchenko) and the nameless canvas (some call him a kiss) by contemporary artist Ron Hicks were presented. In the second part, a fragment from the painting Russian Venus (by B. M. Kustodiev) is attached. When I added images, an interesting moment was revealed. On the originals of the pictures in the "kiss" the guy is blond, and the Kustodiev beauty is fair-haired. And in the story they are, on the contrary, brunettes. Therefore, I had to fool around in the graphic editor a little by painting the characters. Well, not the story is ready to rewrite!

    In the names of the fabrics could make small blemishes. Thanks for the comments.

    You say you liked the flavor? Very nice to hear, I tried!

    In the Volga region, the word “kunka” is used colloquially, although not very often. Such an association has arisen because the shaggy intimate part of the female body resembles a furry little marten ;-).

    Thanks for the comment left, Belomor!

    • Rating: 1
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