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Comment on publication: In the evening in the hayloft. Part 1: Two Carrots
Good day, Julia. I suspect that you are here for a reason, and you want to try your hand at sticking text erotica or pornography. This is quite an entertaining lesson, but you need to understand what you want to receive as a result.
If your goal is money, I’m warning you: it’s hard to make money on pornopus, but you can. The largest portals: pornorasskazy, sexitails have already moved away from the practice of paying for the stories sent. The libst mentioned by me imposed a ban on pornography in newly published works, so the choice is not so wide.
If you just want to just share your fantasies, memories, or stories told by someone else, then the dream is quite feasible. And there are those who wish to read, do not hesitate.
Comment on publication: In the tale hit
Looks like some kind of scary dream. I also remembered the fairy tale “Geese and swans”, they also wanted to shove a shovel into a stove there. But there was an instructive ending that good triumphs over evil. You have only an episode with cheating added. Who would be interested in reading this? Difficult to answer.
The story is not enough peppercorn. If this is a fairy tale, then you need more fairy tale characters, and then only Baba Yaga is all. At first, I thought that the glavgeroy credited it, and here the category “Weirdness” is quite suitable. If the story focuses on eroticism, then we need details. Tits, pussy, and then only "fried eggs." For me, as a man, this causes unpleasant associations.
Think at your leisure who will be the target audience and what they will want to read. Good luck on your creative journey!
Comment on publication: In the tale hit
This makes no sense. Why is it all to write and share?
Comment on publication: No, Ivan is flawless
I apologize for the flood in the comments, but I keep my promise to send you the text of my story. Link threw in a personal. I would appreciate your opinion.
Comment on publication: Flame of passion
I personally did not have enough details, because almost no adjectives describing them. Diminutive pet nouns are not everywhere appropriate: “anusik, buttocks, uvula, mouth, face, leg” - looks too cloying.
Your style is original, but reading your creation is hard. I hope you take my recommendations into account in the following stories.
Comment on publication: In the evening in the hayloft. Part 1: Two Carrots
Hi, Bayun! Sorian, who answered for a long time, but the site persistently did not send me a notification about a new comment, only today I accidentally noticed your post.
I have never called myself a “keen eye”. On different sites I sit under different nicknames: Observer, Sharp-eyed Falcon, just Sokolik, and in the world my name is Volodya. As you like, call. I will not be upset. I do not know how these nicks suit me, because the themes of voyeurism and Indians in my stories are rarely viewed.
On this site in the comments under the stories is not very convenient to correspond, if anything, I registered on pornorasskazy com, bestweapon ru, taboo-story com, libst ru, s-story su and vkontakte uchetka special there. Again, I can send my materials, but specify where. I will reply in the message text:
“It seems to me that many who write here exactly consider their presence here as an opportunity to speak publicly and get an operative response. Because it is almost impossible to publish the usual prose, not promoted by the author.Even if you publish at your own expense and distribute it for sale in stores, it's good if you return the money spent. If, however, to give to the printing house to adjust, make a layout and acquire for your book ISBN, then with a small draw you will definitely be in the ass. "
Self-expression drives people, the thirst for money in the background. And how do you learn, if there is no experience? The 21st century and the Internet gives a unique opportunity to express everything and everyone (the criticism of the authorities does not count, it has been cruelly suppressed at all times). Print your erotic fantasies on paper, make a lot of effort to print, distribute and sell the written, while understanding that low-grade eroticism is now abound. Sex and the associated with it attracts people's attention, and if there is not enough writing talent, then you need to “bare boobs”, and there is more advertising and advertising. Remember for example "50 shades of gray."
But on the other hand, there are little-known writers who have got a hand on this kind of reading matter, and not requiring an award (or a purely symbolic amount) for an interesting plot. Unknown worlds, fantastic characters, a lot of fucking. Oddly enough, many, even with an obvious excess of porn films, are still attracted by text erotica and pornography.
“Yes, and the response from the readers is unlikely to wait. But, in principle, you can earn on the site of paid erotic stories. There, as a rule, the beginning of the story is laid out for free, and for the sequel, readers buy for viewing. "
Quick response allows you to understand the needs of the market and change. A friend of mine first wrote about incest, and after the needs of the readership changed, likes and views went down, he quickly changed the topic to violence and coercion.
Another comrade invited me to his online magazine, promised to pay, but you need to be suitable for the plot format. I still keep promises to readers to finish the job. And then I think, maybe I will write for the magazine. If there is an interesting series of stories, you can earn on libst ru. You set the price yourself, 75% earned to you. You can sell the entire book at once (including not yet written) and separately in parts. Let's say one part costs 10 rubles. Ridiculous money, but with a large audience, hundreds, thousands of rubles can run up. The first part - introductory, distributed for free. At first I wanted to work there, but then I realized the scantiness of the amounts received and while I was gaining an audience, publishing wherever possible, for free.
Comment on publication: Masha Davasha. Lowered fucking
Here I like your stories. Stimulating and with humor! From me 10 stars.
Comment on publication: Masha Davasha. Young wife lingered at work
This is how the boss ot the heights, so there is no need to beg. And how to serve newcomers, I immediately began to insist on safe sex. Women's logic!
Comment on publication: In the evening in the hayloft. Part 1: Two Carrots
Yes, no question, you can discuss history, religion and literature. I am subscribed to stories from Yuscha, and you can write to the PM.
“Actually, I think that you have a good syllable, and you could write ordinary prose. For example, about teenagers ... "
Porn theme - a niche is very narrow, but surprisingly, even the most mediocre pulp fiction will react. That's why I started it. In the future, it is necessary to switch to eroticism, which is not mine, savoring, to describe how the male organ comes in and goes out into various holes. I wrote about teenagers, I often have the image of a young student girl. My first story on "pornorasskazah" was devoted to this, there is another dramatic work of the latter, though he has not published it anywhere else. If interested, I can send by mail.
Comment on publication: In the evening in the hayloft.Part 1: Two Carrots
I quote a message from Bayun who came to me in the mail:
“The fact is that in those years I was interested in the topic of the presence of rudiments of ancient pagan rites and beliefs in Russian fairy tales. Now I do it again. And that means - I will look for and read old tales. Perhaps the old syllable will return, and with it interesting topics.
As for the guys who banyat, so everything is clear. Here sits a drocher, preparing to relieve stress ...
And how can you take it off, if in the story, the word “cunt” doesn’t even occur once? Fuck those fucking tales! Give pussy pohlebat like a cup!
P. S. I wrote to you yesterday about another story about your scribble, but it seems that I sent “to the village to my grandfather”. What I want to add. If you want to revive the story with illustrations, but look for amateur erotic photo sessions, and not girls from the covers of glossy magazines (so to speak, be closer to the people you write about). And so that the same faces and bodies would appear there. And in general, it would be nice, first to find photos of guys and girls that you would like and could become heroes of your stories. And already their faces will tell you in which direction their sexual relations can develop. ”
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I will answer on the first part of the message on the story "There is no Ivan without flaw."
https://www.eroticspace.info/story/2018-11-20/net-ivana-bez-izyana.html
In Russian folk tales borrowed a lot from the pagan past. For example, Baba Yaga in the modern view is an old woman with a bone leg, with ugly warts on her face, flying in a mortar and living in a hut on chicken legs. And in Slavic mythology, Yaga was the embodiment of spring and beauty and was depicted as a young girl with a wreath of wild flowers on her head. Why did this transformation happen? The spread of the Christian religion, which exhibited previously popular gods in an unfavorable light. For the same reason, the goblins, the brownies and the mermaids also acquired a negative connotation. Each new belief rejects the postulates used in the previous one. It is no coincidence that the first of the ten Christian commandments says that besides this there should be no other god.
Some manifestations of the pagan past are still present. For example, when relocating to a new dwelling, when leaving the old one, you must say: “Brownie, come with me!” And after sure you remember where it is. When published the first part of the Bathhouse, on bestweapon. ru I wrote a comment, quite remarkable, let me quote it:
“In the village houses live brownies, bathhouses, too, in the people they are called a bannik. In the bath you can not swear, otherwise you can stink, but you can engage in sex. Oh, how much each bannik has seen in its own age, and the century has not a hundred years, but more ... ”
On the second part of your comment concerning the illustrations in my stories. Sometimes, it happens that you meet people who are suitable for your heroes by description, and this helps to awaken your imagination and continue the story that has come to a dead end. Visual images, randomly dropped phrases, behavior patterns. One day, while swimming in the pool, I saw a girl who, according to the type of hero, my bathhouse Oktiabrina, very precisely fit the type. You look at her and you understand, she in my story should be just that!
You propose to move from images to text. Sounds reasonable. I have not tried it so far, I first have the text, then the graphics are selected under it. And so the pictures may enter into dissonance with each other. I tend to think that illustrations in large quantities harm the text. One or two for a story of 10,000 characters is enough.
And the last. On November 22, I received a personal message from Yuscha: “I read your stories about the bathhouse. ... (further many letters) ... However, against the background of most authors, you are a good fellow. ”I answered him also in a personal. And this time some kind of error occurred, I received an e-mail notification about a comment, but I cannot read the comment myself.Maybe from what is written from the guest account.