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Comment on publication: No, Ivan is flawless
To continue the story, you need to tune. For ten years, how much water has passed under the bridge, but, I think, if possible, you should take up this business. I have subscribed to your stories: the syllable is very unusual, not typical for modern stories. At first I thought, maybe from some old book taken. Classic Russian fairy tales + erotic story people will go. The kingdom of glorious Moudon, erotic mermaids with big boobs, and nearby Baba Yaga, Nightingale the Robber and the Koschei immortal in the hut on chicken legs gangbang decided to stir up ...
Several people put this story on a single star because the plot about Ivan with the clitoris instead of a member is not too exciting. Still, the people are waiting for the malabs to flow, and the women in the end will also enjoy themselves.
Comment on publication: No, Ivan is flawless
I read your creation, and I say, I liked it. An erotic tale, with a humor, I myself create in a similar genre. Here your tale was unwarrantedly zaminusovali: from two reviews, both 1/10 stars. A written well. Looks like copied from some book. Here and there hyphens are left. I hope your authorship and you will write a sequel. It is a pity that the story with the virgin waterman did not find development. And what, she has a tail, he has a small whistle, sex options - the sea! Perhaps she will give him a blowjob, and his friend will come to life, and fuck bars will begin in the village.
I will quote some points:
“They called friends and our Ivan on the foots of those young, but he didn’t go, but he looked away, and more and more wooded around the coop. It would take, by the way, to the heels on the sixes and let them skip them, all more and more, the chicken Ryaba, the eu of gold. And whether the deed, that is, his judgment, was seen, trustingly settled by Ivan on the wings. ”
I correctly understood that this is a hint of zoo - Ivan's preferences?
“Then they fell on a mattress, they began to love to twist. They twist, twist, twist, twist ... in the end, they perverted, and the necklace - the powder - one salt piece will fly out. "
Originally stated. Fierce plus ;-)
"Teperathe rue-rue - so great is your mountain, so good is yours."
Goyle, I mean a synonym for the penis, I hear for the first time.
If you are interested, come to my page, I will be glad if you read my tale and give your opinion. From me 10 stars.
Comment on publication: No time to wait. Part 1
I believe that in such a situation, the GG should demolish the roof on the basis of permissiveness. And each previous episode affects the previous one. Remember about the development of the plot, the reader should be intrigued, what will happen next. Fucked a woman - she woke up, fucked another - she, too. Ladies begin to wander randomly around the city in search of a mysterious maniac, and GG confuses traces. He can go to the peasant, hang a lyuley foe or even create something (everyone has different fantasies), and then he meets a crowd of raped victims and declares that he knows who did it all. In short, the field is plowed for literary thought. Dare and you will be happy!
Comment on publication: No time to wait. Part 1
I read your creation, I will share with you my conclusions.
The first, as for me, is a more compelling outfit. To stop time, one could invent some event, for example, the glavgeroy (GG) fell in a dream into a temporary anomaly and sleep turns into life. And that beginning with urination can repel the readers who have opened the story.
Second, I want action. Well, you * ball GG insensitive body, so what? But if this fact affected the anomaly, it would be more fun. Intrigue, so to speak. For example, at the moment when GG finished off Lenochka's young body, he heard the clock on the wall ticking away. And the girl began to slowly recover. In short, wherever the fucking happens, the anomaly retreats.You can fantasize a lot of funny things.
Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 4
Well, when there is a new product, I will gladly send you.
Comment on publication: Fucking world of Masha Dawashi through the eyes of customers
Well written. Exciting and realistic. From me 10 points.
Comment on publication: Brother and mother of a prostitute
I think these are small things. Mostly people here are not to find fault with grammar. And I liked the story. 10 stars
Comment on publication: Masha Davasha. Funny cases from the life of a prostitute
Interestingly written. I read a lot from you, and sometimes it delays more strongly than erotic stories. From me 10 stars!
Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 4
Thank you for your kind words !!! It is very nice when the fruit of your work is waiting for the readers. I promise, the continuation will be. Perhaps, under a different name, there are ideas, as time appears, I will continue. Subscribe to a mailing or RSS feed. Or send me your email address, I'll let you know when the new one comes out.
Comment on publication: Song about separation
Interesting poems. Only the question arises, on behalf of whom the story goes.
In the penultimate paragraph:
The carriage of a friend of his will in the field openly -
A verse zakanivatsya:
Dissolve in the heavens, as I myself dissolve in love ...
Does this turn out to be a guy with a guy or what? in separation ... It is clear now why they published on sexitails)))