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Comment on publication: At night in the bathhouse. Part 4
"... massive traces of bare, worn-out legs." This is not surprising. Normal footwear after the war was not available to everyone. My grandfather told me that he went to a dance in a neighboring village with a friend. Grandfather's family was not the poorest, and he took with him the second pair of boots for a friend - to show off before the girls. Because without boots, then, as now without a cool car. And a friend walked barefoot all the way, but only in front of the club he wore a shoe. So take care! In everyday life they wore bast shoes, but they were enough for about a week. So for a vagabond it is not at all surprising to walk barefoot in the spring. Maybe he left the bast shoes in the bath. No wonder after what happened to forget.)))
Thank you for the appreciation of my work. I did not think that you follow my stories, so it is doubly pleasant. So, apparently, and will have to do the continuation of "Evening in the hayloft." All the more epic phrases I have not yet prepared for one such series.
Comment on publication: "nineteen". Part 6
Unfortunately, I did not read the remaining parts. Not my topic is these enemas (((
Comment on publication: "nineteen". Part 6
This action looks funny. Of course, twice a day to do an enema is a dubious pleasure, because the intestines will wash away the microflora completely. But for an erotic tale goes.
Comment on publication: Ancient Rome. Lodia. History Agrelaya
Excellent continuation of the story. Are you asking if you need a sequel? I think it is necessary. Because writing you get very exciting. Guy thought that Prima would teach his son the wisdom of love, and he had been singing it for a long time ... in the sense of inviting to sing before bedtime.
I give you ten stars and wait for the arrival of Mrs. Lodia.
Comment on publication: And the music of the heart has subsided
Interesting poems with deep meaning. I have such an opinion (I will not impose it on others) that when rhyming 1 and 3, 2 and 4 lines they should have the same number of syllables. This is easier to read.
For example:
And erased paint from cheeks 8 syllables
As if assigned a term of 7 syllables
You - like a forgotten doll,
And erased pain in the cheek,
So difficult, you know, to accept,
WHAT HAS BEEN DECIDED YOU
I have eight stars!
Comment on publication: Ancient Rome. Lodia
And, now it is clear. The abundance of names confused me. I hope this is just the beginning of the story.
Comment on publication: Ancient Rome. Lodia
The author, please clarify such a moment. At the beginning of the story there are brothers Guy and Denis. I quote the dialogue:
- Will bring! What kind of news, brat? That which you are today is quietly and quietly. What happened? Selina nakonets-gave you enough sleep?
- A SUSTAINABLE STERVA ... I will not wait until I send it out of the city! I have no more strength, Guy. By its disruption, in the middle of the night, it draws me from my mind.
- But not today?
- Not today! Because today I spent the night here.
- Ah, Denisius, my holy Denisius. And I spoke, that your daughter will bring it to you. And you did not listen to me. However, as always.
- Don't start. Her mother was always calm and attentive ...
- She was slaves! What was it like to be? Alright. So you didn’t say what you heard?
That is, it seems that Denis because of his illegitimate daughter is having problems with the jealous wife Selina. And further in the text is found:
And at home it is free to make your homework on the day of your stay.
And here is Sabina's wife. I was mistaken in the first comment, not Seksta, but Selina. Names, of course they had, PPC.It is possible that for such a short passage there are too many characters, it is really impossible to remember them the first time. I understood from the third reading, xy from xy. And thank you, really interesting exciting story!
Comment on publication: “Happiness is here”, or in a nudist camp. Part 9
Rabbit, when to wait for your site?
Comment on publication: Ancient Rome. Lodia
It was sealed in the penultimate paragraph: not power, but power.
Comment on publication: “Happiness is here”, or in a nudist camp. Part 9
Removed along with the story. And Rabbit for the company. Apparently, Scheherezad re-laid out.