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Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Ding used dust from harm and from jealousy to make Wendy dishonor herself.
And Peter is all so unpredictable - he had not planned to take the girl to Neverland in advance, it just happened :) And Wendy - she suddenly remembered, or saw in a dream that she was in Neverland and knows Peter and once fell in love with him . In addition, her heart is broken - she needs love urgently, and here Peter is an irresistible handsome man :) I do not know how convincing it is ...)) But I will try to make all this worthy and obscene :) In moderation :)
Thank you very much for the recommendations and clarifications! I do not promise to continue quickly, but I work.
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Thank you very much for the feedback :) I wish you success in your own creativity and ideas :)
About the plot. The effect of Ding dust both times was the same, just the first time was the impact not in a dream, but a second time during sleep ... We assume that the peak of its impact fell on a dream, but over time it weakened)) And then if Wendy herself pounced on Peter, it would be somehow not comme il faut, in my opinion;) Well, in principle, not quite her mind is damaged. Still, almost an unfamiliar man in the bed of an innocent girl !!! 1)) And I needed the dust to make sure that Wendy didn’t wake up for a long time, despite manipulations with her;) By the way, I mentioned that a lot depends on the amount of dust - Peter asked Ding with anger how much dust she had piled on Wendy.
In the original, it is also not clear why Wendy. All children fantasize, after all. So it was a random choice (well, or in my story - I just chose the beautiful woman to my taste). As to whether the original adventure. So this is only the first part of the story - wait for further explanations;) I do not know how to write briefly and succinctly, unfortunately ... or fortunately.
Was she the first, last, only, and so on? Of course, it was not the first - I indicated at the beginning that he was a hangover, and the original plot hints that he is forgetful, that he is quite capable of changing friends like gloves, so why not girls?
As for the adventure of seducing an innocent girl, so here it is - the taste and color, as they say;) Deprivation is my favorite category;) Female temptation is not so attractive for me, however, like male innocence, for example :) For the same reason, I would not like to reduce Wendy’s motivation to the desire to get into a country of erotic dreams. This is not the dream of young innocent girls;) Although this is also about it, love is the main driving force. But let's see how I can still make it all come true :) Plenty of plans;)
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
I was just going to reflect the cynical approach in the “Wandering Lights” for a start, although, apparently, in “Peter” the curve will also lead there;) I am a bit tired from “Christina” ... Well, and I feel a certain completeness in it why Something ... Bye :) Maybe it’s really worth continuing, once it’s done successfully, it’s probably better. I’ve got a blush on my eyes: - / In continuations there is always a big risk of slipping into some kind of triviality or burden ... I don’t want an unpleasant aftertaste from a good start;) they feel like :)
Thank you for your recommendations, advices and good luck :)
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Yes, I seem to be hanging out with girls at the stage of seduction;) Apparently, something personal, although I have no idea what it is)) Well - I will hope that my fantasy will not fail, but that, judging by readers' estimates , my progress is not noticeable;)
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Thank you very much, Mara! :) To hear such praises from you is worth a lot. You usually always have something, but you will find;) But always on business, by the way, although I also love to hurt myself in return))) I will try not to torment the girl very much, but I’ll ruin my reputation for nothing (: I think))) By the way, about gay / bi - this is an IDEA!)) True, I don’t see Peter in this role, but pirates ...)))
Incest of parents and children is somehow not at all mine. Is that Peter come up with a sister like ... ummm ... Peppy Long Stocking))) To them there rustle brought on the island))) For nothing! :)
Many people on the forum are now complaining about the technical failure - readers put the authors of 10s, and the rating not only does not grow, but sometimes it falls. It seems that the team is working on it.
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
The film was watched for a long time :) But in my view, as you understand, Peter (and Ding, by the way) should have been completely different :) Although it should be reconsidered, by the way. Good film.
Thank you for your appreciation! :) I am working on the continuation.
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Thank you very much for the support, for the gratitude and for the praise! :) Continuation will be required. In the fairy tale genre for the first time I decided to try myself, inspired by other stories from this category. I did not think that someone would not be pleased, and even more indignant, but you are right - you will not please everyone, although I will try :)
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Of course, from Peter Pan you can make Arthur Gray, but why? These are different images and I chose Peter myself ... However, until I finish everything, I cannot guarantee for one hundred percent how my story will end, but I would not like to idealize Peter. I do not consider him a positive character ... Wendy - yes, but he - no. But let's see ...
Marin, I do not take offense at you, that you. You always write sincere comments, including with constructive criticism, and at the same time very delicately - so your comments and valuable. So thank you for your opinion :) I'm just trying to convey my idea :)
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Sema, Marina, thank you for your opinion - I, in general, understand your dissatisfaction with Peter;) But, honestly, this is how I see him in adulthood, and this, with all due respect to the original work. I’ll say a seditious thing now, but why is Peter James Barry really that good? I mean his human qualities, not the quality of the realization of the image. A spoiled, selfish boy who did not want to take responsibility for anything in the world, who was absorbed solely by his own games and fantasies and did not spare anyone in them. He often was cruel, indifferent, arrogant and arrogant, he constantly forgot all ... Yes - just a child, you could be different when you grow up ... Just why would you? Peter as an idea is a boy to whom everything is permitted, because he is left to himself and because absolutely all his fantasies come true. So I suggested what it would turn out to be ... First, in childish pranks, and then?;) What happens to people who do not want to grow up, learn to love, learn to take responsibility?
And unless from Barry's fairy tale there is no sediment? I always stayed.Yes, now from the first lines: “All children (except Peter Pan, whom you will soon hear about) eventually become adults” to the last: “And while we look at Wendy, her hair turns white, and she herself is getting smaller, for all this happened a long time ago. Now Jane is an adult, like everyone else, and she has a daughter named Margaret; and every spring, except for those when he forgets, Peter flies over for Margaret and takes her to the Nowhere with her, where she tells him tales about himself, and he listens and admires. When Margaret grows up, she too will have a daughter, and she will also fly away to Peter Pan, and this will continue until the children are cheerful, ingenuous and heartless. ”
I don’t understand the negative reaction to my alternative version of the fairy tale - as always, I can’t and I’m not going to write about the holy one - they are not interesting for me, especially men, especially in porn, especially on PT ... I have planned three parts this way. It is a pity if they do not succeed;) But, hope dies last.
As for whether Peter will come to his senses ... Wendy will try))), but it’s better not to forget about the end of the original story, since I took it;) And I have my own plans for pirates))))))
Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night
Thank you very much for the rating! Very nice:)