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Comment on publication: Private detective number 1. Part 2
Hello! I am very pleased that you still remember me, despite the fact that I am writing slowly and have not appeared here for a long time. I am afraid it’s better not to post links to other resources, as well as their names. But Yandex and Google, it seems, are finding everything correctly, if you score in the search: Grushenka Svetlova "Glass Butterfly" :) If you don’t find it, please write to me in a personal or email:
Comment on publication: Private detective number 1. Part 2
Thank you very much, Jane, for such a warm review - it really warms the soul and is very inspiring :)
And the edited version and the continuation of this tale can now be found on another site called "Glass Butterfly". True, the sequel will not appear immediately, but it is already written :)
Comment on publication: Private detective number 1. Part 2
Very correct reaction to Sasha, in my opinion. After all, he is a negative character, and for good reason the heroine suffers from it. True, I myself was not pleased to write only the last candid scene in the office. Perhaps, I am not writing this story anymore solely on erotic inspiration, as others have written, but on the basis of logic or something. Negative characters too, of course, have their own charm, and I’m drawn to them, to be honest, but if you take the whole story seriously, and not just as an entertaining porn story, then you can only sympathize with my heroine.
Thank you, I want to read and do not remain indifferent to my work :)
Comment on publication: Private detective number 1. Part 2
Olgitsa, thank you so much for such enthusiasm, although the “literary masterpiece” is somehow too much for me)) Yes, and detective, I'm afraid, while not particularly detective, even the name seems too loud in this sense, because the story is rather melodrama. But your review, of course, charges with creative energy and helps to feel more confident. I really hope that I will not disappoint further.
Comment on publication: Private detective number 1. Part 2
Marina, how nice that you follow the development of my story! I am very glad that I did not disappoint and is very grateful for the praise. This work is not so easy for me - to admit, I myself feel some contradictions, it seems that I am bending the stick, torturing my heroine and portraying her so submissive. Apparently, my creative craving for bad guys also has an effect, which has to be somehow proved and substantiated in certain circumstances. On the other hand, I know firsthand how absurdly patient girls are, especially lovers and those who are not very confident. Retribution will still be)) And yes - even very arrogant and self-confident men, of course, have weaknesses. I really hope that the image of the Detective, who has so far bypassed, will be able to portray no less vivid and attractive than his opponent)
Comment on publication: Private detective number 1. Part 2
Thank you very much for the kind words, Aurea Mediocritas! Can't imagine how pleasant it is for the author to read such comments and know that you have regular readers. Regarding awesome things, it’s hard to answer, unfortunately))) Firstly, I’m not sure that they will definitely come out awesome)) Secondly, I write very slowly and absolutely do not know how to fit within specific time limits. The plans are still to finish Detective and continue the Night Captive.
Comment on publication: Interrogation with predilection
Marina, thank you very much for another wonderful story! Your bright style and ability to describe a real animal passion is admired. I’m afraid to ask if there will be a continuation, because you’ve got a simple start, and I already foresee that it’s not easy for you as an author (although this is rather my own author’s fears, don’t pay attention)). I am sure that you can handle as always great!
Comment on publication: Wandering lights. Part 2
Thank you very much;) With Barbara Palvin, it's fun;) Usually, when I write stories and even hard scenes, I still imagine everything is pretty vanilla and beautiful, that's why I'm not inspired by porn, but by something so glamorous;)
Comment on publication: Night prisoner
Vanilla vanilla is not so offensive, it seems)) But thanks for the support :-) Eh, I will probably have to think about continuing sometime, although I still have a lot to finish :) The main thing is that nothing new happens by chance to begin))
Comment on publication: Night prisoner
Thank you very much for such a detailed review and for praise to the style and ideas) And it is also very nice when waiting for the continuation, despite even karate :)
I will explain about the rest. I always use the category of “submission and humiliation” when there is at least some element of BDSM in the story, in this case handcuffs. Well, perhaps the hero’s dominance over the heroine, mental submission and humiliation to some extent are also present, even if in vanilla form. In general, I consider the category “submission and humiliation” very broadly and do not perceive it as a clearly marked role-playing game with appropriate attributes and hard sex.
I really share your dislike for sagas there)) At one time, I wrote devastating reviews on the work of Stephanie Meyer and Ann Rice, who really haven’t read a single book until the end) Interfered with righteous anger)) Probably because of my dislike such a literature has always dreamed of rewriting it in its own way, in some pleasant style for perception, on Russian soil, besides with a more explicit eroticism;) Vampires are still attractive material for creativity) In this case, just gave an easy age -Fantasia on this topic) That is somehow t and turned to what happened ...
The category "for teens" is prohibited by our legislation. So teenagers on 18+ sites are not and should not be :)