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half-tones went for a walk around the chamber again, creating the best music for the ears. It seems that from my head, mad shocks even the walls trembled, I developed a decent speed. And so that the symphony of sex did not stop for a moment, put his fingers on the pubis, found the clitoris.
- Karpov ... Karpov ... - interspersed with moans in unconsciousness repeats my witch ...
She even stood on tiptoes to get taller and it was more convenient to fuck her. And tenderness mixed in me with anger from the awareness of my weakness towards this woman. The witch, the witch ... was pounding in the head with each new punch in the wet depth. Even now, in the fog of pleasure, I understand that I can never forget this camera of passion.
- Kaarpooov ... ooo !!
- Cum, Cum, baby ... Cum for me!
My thighs with a loud slap beat on her soft buttocks, poured female vagina slutty slander, taking a member of herself, and Christy's pussy paused, lurking in anticipation of an orgasm.
- Oooaaaa ... ah ...! - here it is, the highest, most difficult chord of today's musical performance - her orgasm, a whole series of exhalations, whines and whimpers, which were accompanied by jerking of the female body in my hands and depraved movements of the penis in the female perineum ... God, vagina diminishing in orgasm I added pleasure! Damn, I'll win now too, ending! No, I want to empty the eggs, looking into her face. Sharply turned Christie to her. After orgasm, my witch's face resembled the faces of saints ...
- Christie, throw your hands over my neck.
- What?
Dark, oily after the experienced pleasure, his eyes looked uncomprehending ... I wanted to growl at her incomprehensibility. Impatiently, he ran his head into a ring of hands bound by handcuffs, lifted Christie from the floor, leaned against the wall, again planted her, still cutting, on her penis, wrapped her waist with slender female legs and began to fuck again, furiously fucking, trying to quickly get a discharge and finally deliver the final chord in today's chamber music explorations. The walls seemed to tremble again under the influence of the strength of my pushes ... Christie was still erotically howling. And I, practically pushing her body into my body, finally growled, exploding into a fountain of sperm in the hot, still pulsating, female depths. He exhaled contentedly into the female ear, and a shiver ran down her skin again ...
- My girl ... lu ...
My stupid unnecessary whisper interrupted a mobile phone call ...
What the hell someone needed, did not give to enjoy the full so sweet moment. However, even good, but it would be like a mattress, now blurred in the explanations of love. He tore off Christie's body from the wall, emerged from the hot crotch, carefully carried it to the bed, separating our bodies. Came to the table with the phone. Sasha calls. Damn, did it take three hours?
- Yes, Sash, I listen ...
- How are the testimonies there? Have you bothered to take them yet?
With her, I never get bored. True, I said aloud something else ...
- Already almost finished ...
More precisely, I finished it twice, but it’s not necessary for the friend to know ...
“The suspect admitted everything?” - Sasha laughed.
Involuntarily looked at Christie ... She sat on the bed, leaning her hands, bound with iron bracelets, to her neck, covering her chest and carefully watching me with her witch eyes ... And what's in them, only the devil will make out.
- Nearly...
- Well, otherwise I have to go home, but you are not calling. Or decided to deal with all night testimony?
To the very point. But again, out loud, said something completely different.
- In ten minutes, the suspect can be taken away.
“Agreed,” answered Kravtsov shortly.
He began frantically collecting clothes scattered around the camera. Her and mine.
- Christie, please, get dressed ...
She silently showed her hands in handcuffs ...
- Damn, I forgot ... now.
Freed thin female wrists. And he began to stretch his pants ... Christy somewhere found a hair tie, from which, I remember, I got rid of first of all, picked up dark thick hair.
- God, what is it?
My eyes came across an ugly, terrible scar not on her shoulder ... I grabbed her hand, not allowing her to dress further ... Her face reddened after sex in an instant turned pale ...
“- Karpov, just do not swear. You know, in those moments when you are looking for your criminals ...
- Christie, they are not mine.
- Oh, not so expressed. In general, so that I would not be lonely all 24 hours a day, when you are protecting our city from organized, and not so much crime, one friend did a tattoo to me ... Look. True, lovely?
- Christie, I do not like tattoos, especially on the female body, especially made by incomprehensible male acquaintances.
She smiled with her signature smile "impossible to resist"
- But now you are always with me. Karpov, I caught you on the net. ”
Despite my disgruntled grumbling then, I liked the little frisky karpik on the fragile female shoulder. Moreover, I was secretly delighted, like a boy ... because it was like a stigma, saying that this amazing girl is mine, only mine.
- Christie, honey, who did this to you ?!
Her black eyes glittered wetly, she wanted to say something ... but then she hastily closed her mouth, and the beautiful face of her eyes turned into a stretched, smiling mask.
“Tattoos are so stupid, so ugly, I was a fool to do it.” But the scars, it seems to me, adorn not only men but also women. My husband didn't like tattoos. I myself burned it ... A kind of recognition of his stupidity and love for him. In addition, you probably do not know, the scars on the female body are now generally a new trend. Of course not, because you don't understand fashion at all.
“Was it really that I got so sick and tired of you then that you decided to get rid of any reminder of me? ... Yes, so monstrously unprofessional?
“I didn't care, I forgot about you as soon as I closed the door after that conversation.”
Beautiful black eyes, now looked at me with mockery, and plump lips curled in a contemptuous smile.
Again she spat into the soul of a reptile, but I almost did not confess eternal love! Hands convulsively clenched ... As in the past, I can not understand I can not believe that this hypocritical bitch and woman, with such passion surrendered to me in the camera just a few minutes ago, the same person ...
“Get dressed, lively,” I said through my teeth.
He himself turned away, unable to look at her. And the anger inside was bubbling, bubbling ... then look, it would splash out of the body in streams of rage. So strong that I will peel everything in this damn cell. Even the walls break his stupid head.
- Bitch! ... - and with all his strength fist on the wall.
Still could not hold back. Hand shot in pain. There will be a science donkey in love. Somehow pulled on his clothes. Looked around ... Christy, too, already dressed. Elegant, beautiful, unattainable ... Creature!
Humble yourself, Volodya, you may have briefly attracted her in the past, but such girls are not your teeth ... not for you.
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Marina, thank you very much for another wonderful story! Your bright style and ability to describe a real animal passion is admired. I’m afraid to ask if there will be a continuation, because you’ve got a simple start, and I already foresee that it’s not easy for you as an author (although this is rather my own author’s fears, don’t pay attention)). I am sure that you can handle as always great!
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Thanks for the comment. There will be no continuation. Let us regard this text as a separate image, which I dreamed of.
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Great story, thanks)
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You are welcome.
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Will the mood I read you Marina. Do not forget to thank me for it
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Nizheishe thank yasnovelmozh pan for having decided to cast my light on my writings.
But seriously, then perhaps it is not necessary, I have a "Babskii story" that does not suit such a Super duper macho as you are.
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Let us leave in-depth literary comments on the site’s website - Eugene ...))))))))))
Personally, I am pleased to realize that our talented Marina has returned to the site with such a wonderful sketch!
Marina, for telling the highest score!
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Dear Dym thanks for the comment and rating. I do not know whether this can be considered a return. Let's say a nostalgic attack on the old days and the old atmosphere.
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Well, throw Marina elephants out of flies, I’m macho only with your mouth. Spank would you, if you arrogance to your asking for it, but I'd rather cry over your woman's story so that you become ashamed of your words, you are unloved of me.
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Are your tears from the “macho cry too” series or “the mice cried, injected, but continued to eat the cactus”? A bored male tear misting over hot eyes and rolling down a sculpted cheek that can be more heartfelt.
And about not love, it's not your truth, I love all my readers, and even those who left two comments at once under my story, and this time also abstained from the mat, so generally immensely.
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You have loved me early Marina, I have not read your story yet)))) but you are pleasant to me today, despite the fact that you rely on love with your readers. (And by the way, my cheeks are quite alive, and the macho of me is the same as of you a bitch)
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Oh, you're right, surprisingly kind, Super Duper, early, oh, early, I confessed love to you, and wrote down in Macho. You are probably a whale only to fool the girls' heads, I really lost everything in anticipation of a verdict, and you did not even read :)
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Here is my verdict to you, in anticipation of which you are exhausted Marina. Although it was necessary to write this: Here is the verdict in anticipation of which the writer Marina Dmitriyeva exhausted, caressing her lustful consciousness with dirty thoughts.
Fortunately / unfortunately, I am not familiar with the work of respected Marina, but this is not her, but my fault / merit. I recall only the story written to her about knights and subjected to general ridicule, because of their representation as divine creatures, and not uncles with an unpleasant smell from the mouth. But now is not about that. In the story “Interrogation with an Attack”, Marina already in the title focuses on the feeling that dominates the main characters from beginning to end (these fun frills), thereby stirring up the interest of readers. Despite this, personally in me, after reading it, he almost did not cause sexual arousal and this is due to the fact that there is practically no entry. Who are they? I asked myself a question. Who is she? Should I pity her? For what? After all, she is only the conclusions of the main character about her. I languish anticipating how it will be punished? But sexual domination over a woman “without a face” does not cause satisfaction in me. Rather, sympathy, because thoughts are creeping in that she is innocent and forced to helplessly obey the scum. And I could not fully feel the feelings, just seeing the investigator, who came to have sex with a suspect. There was a feeling that this man, who was drunk with his dominant position and was burning with passion, was fucking a doll inflated by himself, but not a woman.
Fortunately, there is a small, but seductive prelude, where Marina tells us about a beautiful and successful woman in the past, who because of the prevailing circumstances helplessly awaits her fate for a serious crime.Of course, the image of the rich who went to jail will warm up the readers very much, forcing her to hope that she will have to atone for her fault in full, which will include all sorts of sexual punishments. After the introductory prelude, all this actually awaits us. Investigator p
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... The investigator will come to the suspect, scroll through the memories of her and his difficult fate, after which he will move towards sex. Sadly, their sex will be dragged out over 4 pages of ST format, to the very end, in which, after the second orgasm he has tested, she rasschaet him like a man.
Actually, in the middle of the story, I caught myself thinking that no global action would occur. In the future, the only moment when it seemed to me that the storyline would surprise me was the moment with a hair band. It seemed that it was not for a reason and now she would strangle him with this seemingly innocuous female accessory. But Marina writes romantic stories where there is no place for corpses with severed members)
I liked the style of writing, although there were moments where it was read a bit complicated. Marina, in my opinion, did not pass that line when romance becomes just a tag in a story and sexual actions in it were not perceived as something vulgar, but showed the beauty of the vicious interaction of two bodies. Amen.
My assessment for the fact that Marina gives me the honor and for the interrogation, which she conducted with an attachment of 8 balls. And this is largely due to her skillful way of suppression and the honor of me. And so the real score could be one point less. I wish you health, success and more often delight readers with new stories. (Actually, I have DR at the end of the month, so that at the time of you write something that my eyes will please)
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Oh thanks for such an extensive review of this little thumbnail. For the eight, too, thanks. Only for some reason, the total number of estimates has not changed. Or did you put it in absentia before reading this story? You are right from the text a lot of incomprehensible about the heroine, let it be my fault. It is just an excerpt from a rather extensive text that there was no point in publishing here. Let this text be a miniature in which I threw out on paper my secret erotic fantasies, about sex in a cell, with a representative of the law, and with handcuffs.
And you didn’t read the story about knights, I was right in my guess. Since it was not about medieval warriors at all, but again about the dominant male, from the modern time, by the way. I have such a weakness towards dominants, so apparently I see Macho in every counter. Well, everyone has their own fetishes :)
Thank you very much for the wishes, I hope success will be.
But I can hardly congratulate you on your birthday. Firstly, I don’t know what sex scenes your eyes rejoice at (unfortunately / fortunately you didn’t bring you sexual interrogation in the camera), and secondly, I don’t write for this site anymore. And since my story almost did not arouse interest, with the exception of your person and some others, it can be stated that my nostalgic attempt to feel the old atmosphere failed. The site has changed, few people remember Dmitriev Marina, and most importantly, the former people and commentators left for whom I missed. All this, to be honest, does not make me want to publish further here. I hope that there are other authors who will delight you on your birthday.
Wish you all the best.
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Marina, you are our sun. No need to leave. Just think of a few ratings, but now such rules. Everything changes, etc ... And without you, without you cute but good stories, the site will fade. After all, you are one of the titled authors.
I liked your story. Yes, this cool guy Super Duper, too, judging by the number of letters, which he was not too lazy to dial on the phone (hardworking guy, appreciate). Yes, for the sake of such detailed comments you can stay.So stay Marina with us, be our queen. Your story deserves 10 only for language and style. Take it from me.
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Dear Dima, thank you for your feedback and comment. Do not worry, where did I go without Alma Mater. I have already promised Artem, and I also promise to other readers that I will rarely, but sometimes look, aperiodically publish individual scenes that fit the theme of the site. In addition, I am gradually editing my old stories, some of them return to the site and will be available to everyone, some return already in paid mode. So I will be a little present ... Well, besides, I never hack hot, I don’t go out loudly slamming the doors ... everything can be, and maybe someday, I will write something else specifically for ST. After all, only on the PT you can write without any censorship, even the darkest and most vicious of your fantasies.
Thank you for the Queen, only to me. I am rather not a very happy parishioner in the temple of vice.
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Yes, I probably did not read about the knights, only comments to the story. Yes, now a few good people left here. There is no Jura who knew how to pour sweet compote into the ears of writers, he held on to it a lot. But I do not think that you need to close the door of this site. You still have time to leave forever, so don't rush. Just take a vacation. By the way, if I didn’t like the story, I wouldn’t read further on the first page. It just had little action. But I immediately guessed that this is a small fantasy dear to your heart) Due to the fact that it is small and not so much for reflection, but for a pleasant immersion in the depraved world, I would have liked a happy ending. My eyes rejoice ... so now I'll think about it ... Actually, I love the long stories in which the characters live, and not the specific situation in which they are from the very beginning. This does not mean that I don’t like short ones, it’s just that in short ones everything is usually easy to predict. In the long it is more difficult. I love fairy tales, fiction, fantasies like yours. if you do not take into account the history where you want to see the hero of the idiot who will chop off all the arms and legs and so it will be funny, you’ll rather like to read stories where there will be domination, but I don’t like it when they dominate the defenseless girl and she has to endure. Rather, it will only cause sympathy, the same as at the sight of a cat that any idiots are dropping from the 5th floor. I will like domination for something bad or someone bad. Therefore, it is interesting to read about the struggle between good and evil, figuratively speaking, where there is a hero and there is an anti-heroine. By the way, the lesbian theme also seduces me, and the girl heroine often likes me more than a man. Here, for the most part, I tried to tell my preferences. but I don’t want you if it’s not interesting for you to spend your time for me, it’s better to spend it on what you are interested in. and I quite enough from you and a little rhyme) just so you remember that there is another ST and you are not forgotten
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You opened to me right from the other side. Admit it thought that the Super duper is a bully matershinnik, asserting himself at the expense of humiliating others. And how you can be different.
And yet scolding the story, even without reading it, is ugly.
But your eyes and my love a little different things, so I would hardly be able to please you. Regarding the lesbian I had only one story, I would ask him to return from those who were removed by the end of September. Maybe your eyes will be a little happy. Although of course the main thing is the relationship between husband and wife and a joking struggle for their family happiness.
At the expense of ratings, it seems that only registered users can put high ratings. In any case, one of my friends, who were not registered on the site, did not manage to give me a ten. And he tried with different computers. And there is no result.
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And I did not give a rating, since I’m from the phone mostly here and from a mobile site it’s normally not possible to give a rating. somehow I tried to set 8, but I got 5-6.
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No, I'm a bully and a matershinnik,
asserting due to humiliation
others) Macho) and see me, behave as befits, I watch you. GUESTS below 5 spoiled can not deliver. Registered can put any assessment. Why did not work with two computers is not clear. Maybe he brazenly lying)
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And how befits?
I specifically logged out of my account to see what's up with the ratings. Written "ratings can leave only registered users." Now I understand why everyone is so quiet.
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Listen to the older, younger do not hurt, with
be gentle with me and always smile like
as if she had a little laugh. And if I find out
that you disobeyed, that is what awaits you:
- How does a writer lead? -
I asked my friend.
- Silent, reads all the books. You know what
surprised me? She asked for a pen and
paper.
The brain has replied to present this picture
- Marina Dmitrievna, more precisely Dmitriev,
and
Ordinary writers drochery near.
There is really a pitiful sight.
- How do you think, to satisfy her with a request?
- favored my good sign.
- I do not think that this is a good idea. She
not a regular writer
a bunch of prizes won on the ST, suddenly kto
decides to retreat or to move on it
by putting a count and sending it to the cart. Welcome
it can be - mama not burning. A whose
Will the head fly first?
A friend nodded, agreeing with me
by the words.
- Right, someone's.
However, not only has anyone forgot
cause of my words. Damn it surely
fucking lying bitch, but I don’t want,
that such an author would leave with ST. From
Whose stories then excited?
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Artem, the dominant male in your performance I generally liked :), and the alteration of the beginning of my story smiled. Thank.
I promise oath, behave well, and publish sometime on the PT, another passage suitable for the subject of the site. Only it will be very, very soon.
As for the ratings, why are only the authors, and other registered visitors of the site .. So in order to put Coke, you need to be legalized :)
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This means that now only authors can give marks. Did not know. Regrettable. The administration is doing everything to the interest in the site faded by readers.
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I will wait and I am sure you will not let me down. I hope we still talk and this is not our last conversation. Good luck.
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Fabulous vivid images, great story! thank
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Many thanks to Farfallina. for comment and rating. I am glad that you liked my "Interrogation with an attachment."
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I remember ... read the author's stories ...
I will support ... you can read
Good luck and creative success)
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Thank you for the feedback, thank you for reading and consider what you can read :)
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Very interesting story, thanks
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Glad you liked the story.
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Very beautiful, artistic and sensual writing. Nice to read written by Marina.
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Thanks for the comment. Glad to be appreciated.
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Yes, it is well written, professionally even, beautiful syllable, read easily.The difference between the narration and the video, that it reflects the depth of human experiences, and how it will be expressed, directly depends on the skill of the writer. You succeeded, hats off!
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Thank you for the feedback and compliments. I agree with you one hundred percent, I also prefer to read rather than watch. Thoughts and feelings are difficult to convey a picture. Much better, in my opinion, when with the help of reading, you have the opportunity to climb into the hero's head, see and feel everything from the inside.
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DISASTER OF PASSION ...
The first couple of pages you read in anticipation of a famously twisted plot. Before his eyes, there are still shots from the film “Basic Instinct” by Paul Verhoeven, mixed with Georges Lautner’s old psychological thriller “Ice Breast” with young Delon and Mireille Dark in the lead roles. In both films, the fatal beauties kill their husbands (well, or are suspected of murder) and in both cases avoid responsibility, but the shadow of the murder is behind their subsequent lovers and the chilling horror of death is closely intertwined with erotic lust and sexual arousal.
In the sketch of Marina Dmitrieva, the plot is also gloomy, but sketchy and simple, which does not negate the acute psychologism in the relationship of this couple. The characters behave surprisingly understandable and predictable, but uncommonly and in their own bright.
Personally for me, the main character, Christina Kalashnikova (Shvets), looked with her wholeness. If with her counterpart - investigator Volodya, everything is more or less clear: the rejected lover, makes up for the gap and dreams at any price to assert itself again in the arms of the former mistress. That Christina herself behaves, albeit not consistently, but with dignity.
From the plot intrigue it is unclear whether she actually killed her spouse, or simply turned out to be hostage to circumstances. But this, apparently, does not matter. The investigator to look for the killer if he is going, he is not in a hurry. The only thing he wants is you & b @ Christina.
Not that she is disgusted, but it is clear that a girl with much more enthusiasm would be at home, in a hot bath, than in the arms of this dork.
Investigator Volodya, in turn, the character is simply a textbook, a sort of neurasthenic-loser, reveling in random power over those under investigation. Such people are usually envious, petty, and vindictive. Sometimes it is called professional deformation, but in fact it is an ordinary manic obsession multiplied by its own complexes. Karpov from those who believe that everyone around them is obliged. On every occasion, they will beat themselves in the chest and shout “Yes, I fought!”.
Such a man may be interesting, his obsession, and inspire their pressure, but in bed they are usually monotonous and boring, and genuine aggression can entertain, but quickly get bored. The worst thing is that it is impossible to get rid of such a guy without a conflict. As soon as you say - No ..., his bar falls, feelings flare up and he immediately begins to glow with love passion, even if before that he just looked at you like a disposable piece of meat.
If you do not send such a figure quickly and in plain text, he will ring at night and whine into the phone, walk under the windows, watch after work, provoke skirmishes and do minor nasty things to all your boyfriends.
The saddest thing is that such people sincerely believe in all their fantasies about unearthly love. How, it is asked, to explain to a similar character that you turned out to be in his bed simply because it was easier to give than to refuse. A crazy night, which he can not forget, is not from a great love for him, but from a modest love for himself ...)))
- I do not like men, honey, I love with them tr @ heats ...
How else to explain that selfless sex, in fact, a man may not have a relationship, and he was in bed only because there was no quorum without him ...)))
I do not like to operate with personal experience, but I always believed that it is impossible to divide men into first and second grade. If you have already decided to undress, then you need to "tumble" "with a twinkle."
And if they return to the story of Marina Dmitrieva, I can not help but admire how elegantly and toughly Christine put this moron sledak in place:
“... - Tattoos are so stupid, so ugly, I was a fool to do it. But the scars, it seems to me, adorn not only men but also women. My husband didn't like tattoos. I myself burned it ... A kind of recognition of his stupidity and love for him. In addition, you probably do not know, the scars on the female body are now generally a new trend. Of course not, because you don't understand fashion at all.
“Was it really that I got so sick and tired of you then that you decided to get rid of any reminder of me? ... Yes, so monstrously unprofessional?
“I didn't care, I forgot about you as soon as I closed the door after that conversation.”
Beautiful black eyes, now looked at me with mockery, and plump lips curled up in a contemptuous smile ... "
It should be noted that the real person, is manifested only in extreme situations. Show gonorok in greenhouse conditions is not difficult, it is called Ponte, and you try to stay yourself when you are thrown into a cage, handcuffed to the battery and in front of you shines for life. I just want to say banality: - Fuck my body, it does not mean to fuck my soul ...
Fortunately, this moral monster, called the investigator, if not immediately, but guessed that the girl sent him.
“... Again she spat into the soul of a reptile, but I almost did not confess eternal love! Hands convulsively clenched ... As in the past, I can not understand I can not believe that this hypocritical bitch and woman, with such passion surrendered to me in the camera just a few minutes ago, the same person ...
“Get dressed, lively,” I said through my teeth.
He himself turned away, unable to look at her. And the anger inside was bubbling, bubbling ... then look, it would splash out of the body in streams of rage. So strong that I will peel everything in this damn cell. Even the walls break his stupid head.
- Bitch! ... - and with all his strength fist on the wall.
Still could not hold back. Hand shot in pain. There will be a science donkey in love. Somehow pulled on his clothes. Looked around ... Christy, too, already dressed. Elegant, beautiful, unattainable ... Creature! ... "
Men in general, greatly overestimate their importance in the life of a woman, and neurasthenics, even more so. Something tells me that Christina Kalashnikova, acting intuitively and impulsively, caught this guy on such a hook that he never dreamed of. This sledak will carry chestnuts out of the fire for her, and will do everything possible and impossible to pull her out of this fornication ...
To bail, fleeting insight:
"... Humble yourself, Volodya, you may have briefly attracted her in the past, but such girls are not your teeth ... not for you ..."
It turned out amazing, I was crying ...
What would be so bright, a few strokes, to prescribe the characters in the banal porn, you need to be born a genius. Marina respect from me and a dozen with three crosses.
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ahahaha, it turns out she put him in his place))) He fucked her, and most likely fucks every day this pretentious bitch in the tail and mane, while he did not help her.
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LOL, she behaves with dignity ... What is her dignity? Worthy sucking and sweeping when fucked?
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The advantage is that he fucked her, but did not raped. She showed by her behavior that she wasn’t as such and isn’t his woman, and even in her position she didn’t stoop in front of him, while enjoying sex. Such women are the dream of every man, the happiness of being her man.
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Dear Anfisa, thank you very much for such a detailed analysis of such a small scene.
Honestly, when I wrote, it was somewhat different, or rather, in general, differently, it represented the images of the characters and in general the relations between them.
However, it was curious to read your feelings from the read and thoughts about the main characters.
Regarding Volodya, you can agree :, yes, indeed, to a certain extent, a loser, yes, she hooked him on the most do not worry, planted tightly on a hook, and yes, not only chestnuts for her will carry, but if you need to climb stars from the sky . However, he himself realizes this: “Christina was silent, and it is impossible to read, understand anything about her witch's face. I hate this silence. What's wrong?! What have I done wrong?! I love her too much, apparently. Or maybe it's a game? An attempt to soften me and her next words will be: "Darling, in a pre-trial detention center so badly, do something, please find a scapegoat on whom you can hang the murder of Robert Yevgenyevich." And I will do it, I will do everything! ”
But Kristinka you do not fully feel. Or maybe I was not able to convey, and perhaps your personal experience and ideas about certain people and situations left an imprint.
But I think some moments in the text should have alerted and showed the actual attitude of the heroine to the moral freak of the investigator.
“Slowly came closer. She did not back down and looked into her eyes. Hot, very hot. Who plays with whom, fucking bitch? Raised his hand, touched her cheek. Christine closed her eyes and rubbed against my palm. Gently, blissfully, as if this caress gives her pleasure. "
In addition, the excerpt from past memories
("- Karpov, but do not swear. You know that during those moments when you are looking for your criminals ...
- Christie, they are not mine.
- Oh, not so expressed. In general, so that I would not be lonely all 24 hours a day, when you are protecting our city from organized, and not so much crime, one friend did a tattoo to me ... Look. True, lovely?
- Christie, I do not like tattoos, especially on the female body, especially made by incomprehensible male acquaintances.
She smiled with her signature smile “impossible to resist” - But now you are always with me. Karpov, I caught you on the net. “), It is not clear where the tears come from when they were lying on each other’s arms, and, most importantly, the passion with which she was given to the unsuccessful investigator, it seems to me that they should show the real feelings of the prisoner to this person. Well, or to show that all women are fools and do not always love lucky and good men. So Karpov is not so much exaggerated its importance in the life of this woman.
And before Christie sent him the text:
“- Christie, honey, who did this to you ?!
Her black eyes glittered wetly, she wanted to say something ... but then hastily closed her mouth, and the beautiful face of her eyes turned into a stretched, smiling mask. "
It seems to me that he should have alerted him, saying that, at the very least, Christie did not finish speaking. But then, I agree, the investigator is a moron, hurried to get upset, decided to compete with the wall in sustainability, there would be no good brains.
Well, it's a little about how I saw this situation.
However, Christina in your performance, I also liked.
Thank you Anfisa. It's nice that my work interested you and prompted you to write so much.
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Loved the story. Everything is described colorfully. Yesterday I put the 10-ku, but did not have time to leave a comment. The story is excellent, keep writing)
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Thanks for the tip and the ten, glad you liked my sketch.
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I want to publish your story on one of the resources from the social. networks and, of course, so that everything is within the bounds of “legality”, give a link to your mail so that readers can communicate with you.
From SW. L.Fury
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And you sent to your mail message))
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Strange message did not come. Did you enter the address correctly?
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I wrote in a personal, that is, in the world)
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Understood ..
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The story is good, but it seems to me that all these pink snot about unfading love here are clearly superfluous. In my opinion, the story would be more fascinating if he just rudely fucked this beautiful and rich fifu, which in normal life was not his equal.
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