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- Twopence. Part 8
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- Twopence. Part 11
- Twopence. Part 12
- Twopence. Part 13: Ending
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so beautiful and desirable that a young man who emanated a passion, gently embraced her by the shoulders, involuntarily, very tightly pressed her to him. Her sweet smell took him prisoner, her elastic chest pressed against his broad chest, inflaming passion, her hips attracted and promised heavenly delight ...
Absolutely unexpectedly for herself, Christina felt the breath of a young man touch her skin, causing a tremor in her body. She felt from his chest, through her light summer dress, an extraordinary warmth, and his lips were so close that if she leaned at least a centimeter, she could touch them with her beautiful forehead without a single wrinkle. On the back of a juicy, naive blonde, a chill of anxiety suddenly ran with lightning speed.
Timur, realizing that the “most interesting” was about to begin, quickly closed the front door to the lock, plopped down on a large leather sofa, took out his phone and, hurrying and worrying, began translating it into video mode, rejoicing that, due to the bright sunshine, in the cabin of the yacht was very light.
Under the strong influence of the TWO PENSA cocktail, Christina finally began to vaguely realize that Ruslan treats her not as a simple tourist, not as the “honored guest” of her yacht, not as a solid married woman, but as just to the Woman, to the object of his male lust ...
This guess almost drove her crazy. She wanted to run out of the cabin, even wanted to run away completely from this yacht, but she understood that this was impossible. The agitated blonde was confused and worried, not knowing what to do next. Finally, unable to bear it, she said quietly and doomed:
- In my opinion, you decided to sing me. And I begin to guess - zach ...
And at the moment when the girl was going to finish her assumption, Ruslan, eagerly fell down on her parted lips, she instantly stuck her tongue in the girl’s soft mouth, desired to madness, and began to examine it with pleasure and increasing excitement. It was from the very moment he first saw The Woman of His Dream, a young man full of energy, who was madly dreaming to penetrate these beautiful and attractive, like a powerful magnet, mouth. He passionately drank saliva from her mouth, sucked and gently nibbled her mouth-watering lips like a vacuum cleaner, gently sucked the girl's tongue, deeper, deeper, deeper and deeper into herself ...
At the same time, his right hand, quickly penetrating under the light summer dress, lay on the girl's chest and began to rumple and massage a little rudely, like a man, then pinching between the fingers, then releasing, a delicate pink nipple. .
Christina felt like in a dream, as if in a fog. Never (or almost never) a stranger man touched her body before! She did not understand what was happening. After all, literally five meters from the place where she is now, asleep, her own husband! Tolley alcohol vapors acted on it, toli constant pitching on the yacht made itself felt. She, only, clearly realized one thing - that, in independence, she was pleased or not, but only one person has the right to touch her body - given her destiny, her rightful and only spouse. So she, at least, was raised!
But now, Christina’s body was in such a position that any attempt to free herself would be impossible. Ruslan, as if stuck to her, and his right hand letting go of her chest, instantly penetrated under her light dress and began to slowly rise higher and higher along the soft inner side of the thigh, powerfully squeezing and stroking the hot and tender thigh of the young woman.
Hardly having felt a strong man's palm between her legs, Christine involuntarily tried to close her trembling knees, passing by moment feeling how suddenly she felt hot and wet in her panties.Her rounded, appetizing thighs tensed and relaxed with excitement.
Meanwhile, Timur, trying to capture in all details the process of “depriving of innocence” of a naive young woman, like a gambler who made a big bet, vigorously “spun” about a couple who had merged into his arms. Having a hefty experience in this kind of filming, he then lay down on the floor and shot from one angle, then squatted on his knees and shot from the other, then rose to his full height from different sides from Christina and Ruslana who were rapidly plunging into passion! In general, he, as an experienced operator, tried not to miss a single interesting and significant moment of seduction by a blond guest!
Meanwhile, Ruslan, detached from the beautiful lips of the girl, impatiently threw the straps of her white airy dress off her shoulders and lowered it to the waist. Crouching his lips to her breasts, he began to passionately kiss and suck, in turn, pinkish nipples, from which they swelled and became hard. Her breasts looked breathtakingly - magnificent rounded elastic mounds of perfect proportion with charmingly protruding nipples.
- Do not ... please ... stop ... guys ..., - a young woman desperately begged quietly and almost without crying. - Well, please, do not ... I’m married because ... well, I beg you ... Ruslaaaan ...
And Ruslan did not think to stop! Rising his hot and strong palm higher and higher on the inside of the seductive thigh of the gorgeous blonde, he sought, as soon as possible, to get to the lace light blue panties with patterns, which are moved to the side, feel, his impatient hot palm, fleshy smooth-shaved pubis . And after - finally, get to the bleeding juices, teasing and so desirable sex slits sexy young woman. And, in order to finally break her resistance - rapidly rush her long finger like a pianist (through pink sex lips) into a “holy-holy” juicy, delightful blonde ...
And now, his palm touches the desired panties. He spends several times on their surface, feeling the openwork patterns on them with his fingertips, deftly pushes the rim to the side and with delight feels a hot, trembling, soft, fleshy young vagina under his arm. He caresses her, as if soothing, caresses in a hurry, quickly, but gently. Very carefully, but impatiently, he strokes thin petals, already wet from life-giving juices, tender small sexual lips, looking for their little “pea” clitoris on top.
Christina felt her body respond to any touch, the bud of her heart opens to meet a strong male hand and slowly begins to stand out thick and life-giving moisture ...
And while a man in a businesslike manner disposes of her body, she cannot understand to herself in any way - is she experiencing pleasure or something else?
- Well, I beg you, do not ... guys, stop ... after all, I have a family ... a husband ... well, please ... I beg you very much ..., - pleading in a half-whisper, rapidly losing strength , guest of the yacht. - Ruslan, do not continue ... well, I beg you ... nooooooooo ... ... aaaaaa ...
At this moment, a masculine, hot, impatient palm, imperiously parted the tender sex lips of a young woman and, the man’s middle finger impudently, unceremoniously and swiftly pierced the very narrow, alluring and mysterious depth of a fresh, young, expiring vaginal juice ...
(To be continued)
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super. Finally. Since March 8, you Lisa. Good luck to love and all the best! Will you post the 8th part today as promised?
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Dear Akshar! Thank you for your congratulations!
I promised to publish part 7 for the holiday and thereby make a gift to my dear readers! I kept my word!
The next part I plan to lay out strictly on schedule - in 6-7 days!
For six days (from March 1 of this year) I pleased my beloved readers with three huge parts of my novel :) It took me a lot of time and effort ... Now I am squeezed out like a lemon ...But besides writing a novel, I also need to earn money for my “bread and butter” :))) So please have patience and wait just one week ... Thank you for your understanding :))))
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Lisa do not take offense at me. Just carried away by you and your story, while forgetting that we are all people and not cars. Just for this resource now for me you are the best author who can hook.
Accept the lines as a sign of respect.
Lisa congratulate on March 8
I wish you happiness,
Do not get sick or ill
And you add a novel !!!
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For Akshar: Spasibki :))) I didn’t even think about taking offense at you;) On the contrary, it’s very nice that my “creativity” brings joy to someone :))))
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Well, finally!))) Happy holiday to you Lisa! Only there is one very annoying and even disconcerting moment - idiotic pictures of men! Why the hell are they needed here? Just because one of the readers blurted out garbage? What the hell are these moronic pictures of guys with dull patsansky physiognomy? It seems that this is a story with a category of homosexuality!
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For Sololobo: Spasibochka :))) Once a year (March 8) can I please my dear readers with caressing eyes with pictures? After all, not only you, but also we are pleased sometimes to look at a beautiful and slim body :)))
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Wonderful!
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For Max R: Thank you, gorgeous :)))
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I never got an answer! Why were these stupid naked men needed? Why do we need pictures in the story that have nothing to do with it?
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Really very female part, it is difficult to add anything. It's a little scary to leave you here alone, you are right, like a little proud girl, saying to you like this to write, and you are not, I will write like that and write, bravo! Your courage. But I have no special reason to hang here in the form of a spotter. You walk on very thin ice, in a few options, you are already starting to troll, just ignoring your novel and biased lower grades are not excluded. The only way out of all these bad developments is your active connection with the community here. Communicate, write, too, any comments, supporting each other, if you really need this rating. By supporting others, find those who will support you. And so you just expect one of the negative scenarios described above. Having fun, I just push off the onset of this.
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For fsociety: Thank you for your helpful advice and support! You are right - they are trying to troll me and give me a low rating trying to drown my novel ... And I am powerless to either defend myself ... I can't even set myself even one high ball ... But the visitors of this site are not fools - everyone sees and understands everything perfectly :) In my happiness, a sense of justice is acutely developed in our people, and seeing how they “offend” me, they bravely and desperately rush to my defense like a white powerful knight against the dark, evil and cunning forces of the “dungeon and of darkness ”:))) Thanks to this, the rating of the novel is still holding at a fairly high level, for which I am very grateful to my fair and beloved reader :))) Well, thanks to such powerful support and protection, it remains for me to calmly continue working on my novel in order to continue to please my dear readers with it ...
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And you are cool, you can probably also write erotic tales, too, there with powerful knights and sexy princesses. While I am with you, but I cannot say how long, today I once again made sure how stupid and ruthless life is, so that it distracts me now, from things that are much more serious.If you do not try to establish contact with others, they will underestimate your common ball.
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Dear fsociety! Points underestimate not only me, but also other authors! There are several "evil trolls" who run around the stories and put units to everyone in a row. I suggested to the modders only to “highlight” the NICKs of such envious persons (who put 1, 2 or 3) and then this problem would simply disappear as such! But my initiative did not find understanding and I was politely sent to the well-known address :)))
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It should not be so easily technically done or essential innovations are needed to change the structure of the site, but the best enemy of the good is known. Yes, and the fact of anonymously podgadit and leave should be also pleasant to many. And the game is not worth the candle. These are just a few of the many reasons. And yes it's nice that you love your readers.
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For fsociety! Yes, most likely you are right - it is difficult to do this ... But, if you really want to - then you can :))) I can't help but love my readers, because who am I writing for? Not for yourself the same :)))
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It is you, as the author of the young, beginning his path, so take it seriously. Most of them are just a hobby. Well, they will have plus one or minus two is not so important, they are neither hot nor cold, although some react very violently, it’s enough to read comments under the stories. So, going back to the previous one, if the authors were united and solidary, they would have leveled the impact of these couple of trolls, but I would not be surprised if the authors periodically reduce the ball to their other colleagues in the workshop. So if you bring out all the nicknames you would not be a little surprised, I think everything.
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Dear fsociety! I am not against low, well-deserved, objective assessments! I am against - Unfair !!! From the first points and comments, any author feels - he likes the story to readers or not! And if the points are artificially low, this means one thing - that readers will simply bypass this work ... And for any author, this is like a “knife in the back”!
I do not deny that the authors can, with malicious intent, underestimate each other. Therefore, she offered her “ingenious” system to counteract such a phenomenon ...
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There is no justice, generally in the world, this is the time. There are no two ideal systems, only degradation is obtained from them, and in any so-called “ideal - ingenious system” there is always a critical breach, only it is not visible to everyone.
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For fsociety! I do not agree about justice, but I will not argue wisely :))) I’m sorry for the precious time;)
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And a simple question never answered!) Just silently ignore, right?)
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For Sololobo: I answered a day ago :))) - LIZZASTAR March 8, 2017 23:33 ...
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Dear Lisa! I do not know, you just do not think that I have something against you! Not! I have not put you a single minus! But no matter what I tell you, you always have an excuse for everything and are simply ridiculous in places - just to “fight back”, so to speak!) A pleasant male body with a boy-like pedic-like physiognomy with an inscription on the penis - such as a response to the representatives of your most wonderful sex on the 8th Martha? Unheard of stupidity! Sorry! Just one kind of person expressed utter nonsense! And you, as I have already noted, are trying to break apart so as to please EVERY petty whim of any reader, if only it does not contradict your plan in your, let's say, novel! Where all these zakryuchkas and boring quirks with supposedly phishing marks are absolutely not needed!))) Yes, my, you write well - many authors would have your literacy,BUT - for starters just remove once and for all all these meaningless pictures in your parts of the novel (especially stupid pedic-like guys)! Just write as it is and how you can! Pictures nafig not needed - this is an absurd and the lowest way to raise the rating and attract the reader - just like children lure the pictures in their children's books! Just write! And at least learn a little not to listen, NO, and at least to listen to the readers - especially zealous female obstinacy painfully often looks ridiculous and is erroneous!
P. S. - I do not know who your ardent fan of the fsosieti is, but he is clearly one of those harmless men who find themselves some kind of inaccessible ideal and supposedly protect and care for him (and you are from this baldeet) but who in real life are simply not able to build normal relationship with the opposite sex. This is some kind of harmless and no one visible maniacs!
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Dear Sololobo! Thank you very much for your opinion! Yes, I really listen to the opinions of my readers and never discuss or judge them ... I'm a newbie, this is my first novel and I wonder what people think about it;)
I really do not understand your hatred of illustrations. How can they hinder someone here on this site? This is not a Children's Encyclopedia;) Just do not pay attention to them;)
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Thanks Sololobo, neighing otdushi. Come on make fun. Dyke can credit your stories better. Creativity is the territory of freedom. That you are whining only here. And leave your characteristics with you, inferior. Here I am just kidding, and you quite seriously.
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For Player: I would love to post my own pictures or cover, but, unfortunately, I don’t know how to draw ... Now, if someone would paint several illustrations for my novel, for free, I would be immensely grateful :)))
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"In the east, there lived a sage who taught his students like this:" People insult in three ways. They can say that you are stupid, they can call you a slave, they can call you worthless. If this happened to you, remember the simple truth: only a fool would call a fool the other, only the slave is looking for a slave in another, only the incompetent justifies what he himself doesn’t understand with someone else’s insanity. Therefore, never take offense at anyone, and do not insult yourself, so as not to be called stupid, worthless slaves. Parable
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For FCommunity 1 Channel: I fully agree with the parable :))) So it is ...
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You are like two virgins here. One can not answer anything, the second is trying to talk about adult life.
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One day, a teacher told a young Liu:
- Liu, you're a fool!
- The fool himself! Liu replied immediately.
- Truly, you understand Zen! - the teacher exclaimed in admiration.
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Salute to the author!
This is the part that I liked the most.
I will wait for the continuation of the novel.
By the way, estimates are not so important, the main number of views. If the first part was read / viewed by 42,000 people, and the last is only 15,000, this is sad.
Good luck in your work!
Regards, Roxy
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For Roksolana: Thanks Roxy! Well, if I was praised by myself, Roksolana, it makes sense to continue my novel :)))) The fact is that when the first part came out, access to the site was much easier than at present ... Therefore, such a difference in the number of views ;)
And I submitted my 8th part yesterday to moderation! I wanted to please the reader on Sunday evening;) But, it no longer depends on me ...
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