1. Twopence. Part 1
  2. Twopence. Part 3
  3. Twopence. Part 4
  4. Twopence. Part 5
  5. Twopence. Part 6
  6. Twopence. Part 7
  7. Twopence. Part 8
  8. Twopence. Part 9
  9. Twopence. Part 10
  10. Twopence. Part 11
  11. Twopence. Part 12
  12. Twopence. Part 13: Ending

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cover. Suddenly he felt that something was missing from his body. Lifting the blanket, he was horrified to see that he had no left leg below the knee. He gradually remembered everything and he was seized with deep despair ...

- You can not worry, dear. Get some rest, ”Christine said sympathetically.

Choking on tears, he could only nod in response. He could not speak. The girl gave him some pill, he drank it and soon fell asleep again.

Christine could not believe the reality of what is happening. Her beautiful huge eyes seemed glassy. And she, herself, is a nurse near the bed of her beloved. She did not want to see someone else’s tears, because she had not yet cried her own. For the first time in her life, she realized that she did not need anyone except this man. But even a few days before this disaster, in the reality of which she still did not want to believe, they lay on the bed and, hugging tightly, made plans for the future.

The next day, he woke up with the feeling that his strength was returning to him. The hospital ward was buried in flowers. A huge bouquet was sent by Diana and Marina, another one by the owners of the city yacht club, and, of course, Timur brought a sea of ​​gladioli from himself and his mother. Ruslan liked flowers, but he felt somehow awkward. He was not even acquainted with some of the people who sent these bouquets. No, of course, he met with them somewhere, got acquainted, was interested in how they were doing, smiled at them affably. But they were definitely not his friends.

On the chair, beside the bed, sat his beloved woman. She held his hand, and he was smiling sleepily at her, pale and weak. But it was enough for her to light his eyes so that her fears would disappear.

After the operation, in the first hopeless days, they were one. Christine was sleeping next to her, so that she could help her get out of bed at night and get to the toilet when needed. She brought him food, handed over medicines, entertained, despite the mood swings he had, rubbed her body, soothed if he was worried when something did not work. She quickly learned to put and remove the dropper, make injections, connect the necessary sensors. He was very sick and he took three types of painkillers in different combinations four times a day, but her presence gave him strength. Lying on a hospital bed, feeling a dull pain all over his body, despite the painkiller injections and the operation he performed (he had to remove his leg), for the first time Ruslan realized how little he knew about his beloved woman.

One night, Christina suddenly woke up and, glancing at him, saw that he, bent over, was sitting on the bed with his head in his hands. His chest trembled with desperate sobs. He probably did not want anyone to see him like this, but she saw. She had never seen him so depressed. A nagging pain crept into her soul, which suggested that you should not be idle. Need to do something and help him. She wrapped her arms around the neck of her man, brought his face close to hers, his lips to her lips, to protect and protect her beloved from all sorts of horrible thoughts and sorrowful experiences. Seeing tears in his eyes, she gently dabbed them with a handkerchief.

Ruslan, slightly raised himself on the bed, shook his head and said gloomily:

“I'm sorry, love, but you need to go to your home.” I am already a cripple and do not want to burden you. Why do you need to shoulder this burden, eh? You are still young, beautiful. You will find yourself a healthy strong husband and you will live happily. Think of your life with Nastya!

Ruslan's words were cut to the heart like a knife, and the most acute of them was a “burden.” She least expected it from him.How could he say that to her? She wanted only one thing, more than anything - to be a good wife, friend, companion, all understanding, reliable companion, support for their family, which she loved most in the world!

“Darling, please do not hurt me,” she said almost in a whisper. - I'll never leave you. Never! And don't tell me that again. Okay?

“Still, she will not refuse her composure,” thought Ruslan. Fear of losing Christina unsettled him, but only for a while. He tried to calm down and think rationally. Gradually, he came to himself, wiped his eyes and hid his face in her blond curls. He felt better. He was grateful to her.

- And how was I escaped? He suddenly asked. - After all, I seem to have lost consciousness.

“Diana saved you,” the young woman began to tell in detail. - When Timur dragged us onto the raft, we saw that you were nowhere to be found, and the yacht had already sank. Diana rushed into the water and swam to the place where the boat went under water. Taking off her vest and diving, she saw how you were going to the bottom. Then she grabbed your hair and pulled you to the surface. It turns out that she had been swimming at school for five years and even participated in competitions. Then we dragged you onto the raft, with a bundle from the first-aid kit we pulled our leg and waited for the rescuers. And also, the most important thing - in the bright light of the moon, we saw how the submarine periscope was removed from us, leaving behind a path on the surface of the sea. Diana and Marina were furious and said that it would not be so easy. Now they are already in Moscow.

- So, Diana, I owe my life! He said hotly. - Thanks to her! Now I owe her.

“Yes,” Christine answered warmly. “By the way, she already found you a beautiful German prosthesis.” Your doctor has sent her all the necessary parameters. In it you, not that walk - you can run. And no one would even guess ...

Ruslan thought for a moment. He suddenly felt pain, painfully pain when he imagined his future - without legs and without a yacht.

- So the submarine? - he said sadly. - I thought so. And who ... saved us?

- Already in half an hour the rescuers rushed on the boats. Indeed, in the raft there was a walkie-talkie and a rocket launcher, ”explained Christina. “You were quickly transferred to the hospital and underwent surgery.” Since that time I am here.

In a fit of gratitude, he firmly pulled her to him. She felt comfortable in his arms. She had devoted herself all to him a long time ago and knew that while she was alive, there could be no one in her life except him.

After that, the girl told him about the death of Oleg and Victoria in a car accident, dedicating him to this tragedy just now, because she suddenly felt - at last she will be able to tell about it more or less calmly. And he listened to her carefully, listening to every word. And tears flowed down his cheeks ...

She kissed him tenderly and spent the whole night beside him without closing her eyes.

In the early days, Ruslan could not walk on crutches, it was painful to sit and even lie down or get out of bed, he could not without help. He, then irritated by his helplessness, then wept for gratitude, because he knew that he could not do anything without the help of his beloved woman.

About a week after the operation, one evening, Christina went to the hospital kindergarten. Sitting on a bench under the lime trees, she listened to the muffled noise of the city, coming from behind the white wall. The young woman thought about how wonderful the gift of life is, and how to understand the true price of a gift is possible only when death comes really close. A life! How beautiful she is when two loving hearts beat in unison and when this wonderful picture of life is completed by the presence of a child in it. The young woman stayed in the kindergarten for more than an hour, and only when confidence came to her, was she able to go back to the ward.

As soon as she sat down on the chair next to the bed of Ruslan, he said sadly:

- I do not want to live disabled.

- But you have to live! Must, for me and ... for our child!

- Child ?! - exclaimed the surprised man.

“Yes,” her face lit up with a happy smile. - You will soon become a father.

Despair and joy fought in his soul. Joy won.

- Girl or boy? - He said it gently, passionately. - I want both!

- I do not know, but I am sure that our children will be very similar to us! The young woman answered cheerfully.

“Wait,” his face suddenly became serious. He pulled her close and looked into her eyes. - Honey, but now I will remain disabled for the rest of my life? Who do I need this?

“I need you, our children,” Christine answered tenderly. - We need you, and that's it!

- I? Such?

- Anyone! So it has been since we first met - she ran her hand through his wavy hair and pulled black curls from her forehead. - After all, you want it too?

“When I was not yet a cripple, I really wanted to,” he admitted, looking at her confusedly. - Then I was full of energy.

- And now, my dear? - she asked with bated breath.

- Darling, if you have faith, then it should be with me. We will be together, whatever happens!

From that moment on, Christina was absolutely sure that everything would be fine now. She clung to him, feeling a comfortable safe support under her head and, for a moment, was ready to melt with happiness. After all, her whole life is here now. New life, with all its difficulties and problems. Daughter Nastya, Ruslan, who loves her and wants to marry her, new relatives and friends. She would be good with them, because she loved them so much ...

Meanwhile, Diana, in Moscow, using all her connections, made her way to the reception of the Minister of Defense. They argued about something hot for fifteen minutes and, after that, she came out with a satisfied look from his office.

Two weeks passed. Ruslan could already get out of bed and stand for a few minutes. Every day he left the bed for an increasingly long time, and finally the day came when he was able, with the help of Christina, to go out for a walk around the neighborhood ...

One of the following days, Christina woke up early. This morning promised to be the beginning of a new era. “It is imperative to persuade him to walk around the city,” she mused, taking a shower.

Ruslan also rose early. Unimaginably vigorous, rested and eager to live. Therefore, he easily agreed to a walk in the fresh air.

After breakfast, Timur drove behind them in a car and drove to the pier of the yacht club.

“Let's go over the pier, look at the yachts,” he told his brother gently, helping to change from a car to a wheelchair.

- Do you think it will give me pleasure? - Ruslan asked sadly.

“We'll see,” Timur answered with a cheerful wink.

Christina, with excitement, took hold of the arms of the carriage. They passed the pier pier. A light breeze from the sea played the hem of her skirt, moving white curls on her head. She rolled the carriage with Ruslan in front of her right to the place where their yacht had been moored before.

Approaching the former parking of his beloved yacht, Ruslan sadly saw that the place was already taken by another one, the same white and beautiful one. From the flood of heavy memories, he tightly closed his eyes and felt that Christina had driven him to the very edge of the pier.

“Darling, look, don't be afraid,” she exclaimed tenderly, smiling as if it was the happiest day of her life.

- Open your eyes and take command, captain! - He heard a loud cry of Timur.

Ruslan slowly opened his eyes, looked at the ship and ... wept. Directly in front of him, majestically and gracefully like a white swan, swaying proudly on the calm sea waves, a magnificent snow-white yacht towering with the side sign - "TWO PENSA" ...

(Ending the first volume)

LIZZASTAR

38 comments
  • April 8, 2017 13:20

    The yacht is made from 1 year old, and the line is big there, but in general, I liked it.

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  • April 8, 2017 14:53

    For LAWD: Thanks for the feedback! I think you are the only one who liked my novel :))))
    The yacht was presented by the MoD for its "cant" ...

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  • April 9, 2017 2:12

    It is clear, that is, they removed the used yacht from the balance and presented it. Not solid. It is better to rewrite the script, and donate a new yacht, in a year.))

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  • April 8, 2017 15:29

    Hooray! "Two Penis" is finally over!

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  • Dragonfly (a guest)
    April 8, 2017 15:36

    As I understood it (the end of the first one) Well, well, Oleg got what he deserved, and Christina’s love for Ruslan “saved the world”. Lisa Starr you are a good writer. The novel (let me call it that) reads easily. Thank. I enjoyed it.

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  • April 9, 2017 1:30

    And what did Oleg do?

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  • 10 April 2017 11:08

    For Dragonfly: And thank you very much! I'm glad I gave you pleasure :)))

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  • April 8, 2017 16:01

    For Count Raven: Yes ... Rejoice ...

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  • boo (a guest)
    April 8, 2017 17:38

    It started well and ended the corner.
    Thanks to the author for the work! it does not matter how the readers perceive it, but the fact is that 99% will not be written anyway, so thanks for the story (but as for me the sequel is superfluous here).
    I do not like when praise any race with a long dick and a pure heart. as it is funny!

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  • 10th of April 2017 11:12

    For boo: And thank you! Here are just no race, I did not think to praise. This is the south of a huge country in which, as we know from history, by the will of fate many bloods, races and nationalities were mixed ...

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  • April 8, 2017 17:49

    and it was worth it?))

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  • Guest (a guest)
    April 8, 2017 18:13

    So it started well and so finished. It would be nice to introduce the function to block the author, I would not like to deal with your "stories"

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  • Den (a guest)
    April 8, 2017 18:30

    Do not need the second volume ... stop on time;)

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  • Den (a guest)
    April 8, 2017 18:35

    Liza, what is the role of the sheep episode in this novel? What features of the main characters emphasizes? Or reveals the storyline?

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  • 10 April 2017 11:19

    For Den: The second volume is already being written with might and main, I don’t intend to stop, but you don’t worry - you’ll not see it personally, because here it will not be published ...
    As for the sheep, if you carefully read the novel, you would understand that there was an urgent need for “a hero for defusing”, who would not complain to the police, relatives or friends ... That is, an absolutely harmless, dumb creature that even and bite-it can not defend itself ...

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  • April 8, 2017 19:01

    oo it was also only the first volume ... War and Peace are writing?) Next will be the name Three Shilling and the main character in agony will choose between a dream woman and a sheep? Uwe Boll hurries with the adaptation ...

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  • 10 April 2017 11:39

    For united: I am writing, simply because there is a desire;) The name will remain. Those who read carefully from the beginning are the ones in the course;)
    Because of the malicious comments and the low rating, I had to significantly reduce the first volume and suspend the introduction of new characters, throwing out scenes on the plane, homosexual, in restaurants, etc., they all “migrated” in the continuation ...

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  • Sololobo (a guest)
    April 8, 2017 22:35

    Mdaa, I finally read a big scribbling of Liza's Stars!) There is no point at all and the typical end of a cheap series!))) Rating estimates indicate how many people agree that this is not a novel but a complete garbage! I thought that Oleg would die!))) And okay, everything else is there, but tell Lisa for goodness - why the hell did she need bestiality with sheep?))) What is this hidden meaning or chip she carried?) Is it really all yours? "Novel" so needed her and depended on it?))) And by the way, and where is the guarantee that Nastya is Ruslan's daughter? I remember Timur once also finished in Christina!) And apparently, conception happened just in that interval! Liza, and this is a thought for the plot - in the second volume it suddenly turns out that Nastya is Timur's daughter - and then events and passions will turn around?)

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  • 9 April 2017 0:43

    Thank you for your work, like the series, the level is high.
    The episode with a sheep - - this is very good, it seemed to me that it was completely out of place. Many things, of course, are not very realistic, but some of the details are very good: I liked the short but succinct work of the waitress.
    Constantly, however, the mention of brands hurt the eye, also in all capital letters. At the same time, if you don’t read the names, you might get the impression that everything is very luxurious, although, for example, when it smelled of Royal Leather perfume - this is a mass market. It would be better then if Shanelevskie Cuir de Russie, if the skin. Although, perhaps, it is connected with some specific memories of the author.
    In short, I didn’t like many aspects of the style, but I still didn’t like Ruslan’s type and Oleg’s behavior (who so easily agreed to become a prostitute’s security guard, even being in love with her; some kind of social elevator’s downfall) and a good product. Let's see what happens next :)

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  • 10 April 2017 11:28

    For Shadow-Zero: Thanks for the tip! When I decided that I would publish my novel, it was precisely such comments that had foreseen. Feel feedback :)))
    In something I agree with you! But, as for Oleg's actions - love at first sight, an explosion of man’s irrepressible passion, etc. - not only pushed men into reckless actions and destroyed families, but even the bloody wars started because of this ...

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  • Dragonfly (a guest)
    April 9, 2017 1:03

    Yes, Sololobo Nastya is the daughter of Christina and Oleg.

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  • April 10, 2017 11:33

    For Dragonfly: That's why I am angry that, only because of the inattentive and cursory reading of my novel, then there are stupid cavils ...
    Working on each paragraph, thinking through each sentence, changing one hundred times one word - I hoped that readers would also be attentive to my work ... At least those - who then decide to comment or write a review ...

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  • Sololobo (a guest)
    10th of April 2017 5:33

    Dragonfly, sorry, damn it ugh!) I mean that child that she supposedly has with Ruslan! He may be from Timur!)

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  • April 11, 2017 0:47

    A promising beginning, and so it all went to the end. It's a pity. It is necessary to think over the overall structure. You yourself noticed how very high grades at the beginning and went down to frankly low at the end. It’s pretty obvious that the author almost ends up with all the glamor ñ completely out of place and constantly inserted brand names, so much more flashyly in big letters ... A little ridiculous) "The author's dream.)
    And about the submarine and a generous gift from the MO, that's all ... like a fairy tale about hobbits and dragons)
    I really, really recommend more work on the story itself, on the logic of events. Descriptions of sex is much better than the rest.

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  • April 11, 2017 5:43

    For Sailor Kotyarov: Thanks for the feedback! After looking at your profile, I realized that you are not a novice here, but an experienced commentator;) Just because of that I decided to answer you in more detail :)
    First, two or three (not ten or even five) referred brands of brands in one part of the novel have absolutely no effect on perception, but are necessary to complete the description of the character of the hero. Capital letters - to accent. So glamor has nothing to do with it :)))
    Secondly, the detailed description of the yacht was vital, since subsequently on its board many events occurred and the reader clearly and clearly had to represent the entourage of the scenes. As for the “wet” dream of the author - yes, honestly, I dream to have a yacht too :))) And a jet plane, and a solid bank, and an oil well in the Tyumen region :))) Dreaming is not harmful;)
    Thirdly, have you never heard about the collisions of submarines with civilian sea vessels? And about compensation for damage, too? I really do not want to write a banal - "google" ...
    Fourthly, I partly agree with you about the plot and logic. Due to the flow of criticism and unfairly low ratings, I had to change a lot during the publication of parts of the novel and throw out descriptions and scenes that would logically justify the chain of events, although the whole novel was already written. I could not stop publishing on this site, since I considered it unfair that most of my regular readers would suffer from a handful of lazy commentators with dubious intelligence. Therefore, “clenching my teeth”, but having thrown up many scenes and some new interesting characters, I nevertheless published the ending of the first volume. And now, with a clear conscience, I can calmly say goodbye and “create” on resources where my work is treated with respect ...

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  • Den (a guest)
    April 13, 2017 0:33

    Can you guarantee us the absence of your writing? And then in addition to pretentious announcements, and scenes with sheep nothing interesting. And somehow it does not work out beautifully ...

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  • April 13, 2017 8:49

    +10
    Try to write such a voluminous work.
    I do not like much, but this is not a nomination for the Pulitzer Prize.
    Many characters, lines. Well done!

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  • April 13, 2017 11:26

    For Aleks74: Thank you very much Alex!

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  • Night (a guest)
    April 14, 2017 1:22

    yeah well, a funny little romance) is not normal anyway. everyone can find parts or chapters he likes. and to pour a shit on someone (in this case, the author) for this a lot of mind is not necessary. Want a perfect story for yourself? No question, pay a chocolate bar. And no, so neh drive on people. The author does not owe you anything for free. There is not a single author in the world whose manuscripts would be loved by absolutely everyone. I, too, critics ... Lisa, do not listen to anyone. Write further. We are with you PS: I did not want to write, and I never write comments, but I could not resist. A bunch of clever men attacked the author

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  • April 14, 2017 9:03

    For Night: Thanks for the support! This is very important for me;) I have already written in the comments earlier that an aggressive minority “rules the ball” here. And normal, adequate readers are "shy" to rate, write a positive review, support the author! Therefore, for me it does not make sense to publish here the continuation of my novel ...

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  • Night (a guest)
    14th of April 2017 22:45

    Well, I do not know ... I am sure many read you here. Yes, even the same insolent, after all, have read every part of) stop writing because of 2-3 “smart people”? But what about an adequate audience? You are right, the absolute majority do not leave comments. But this does not mean that they do not support you. I would like to continue to write. And if nevertheless not, then I would be very grateful if you tell where it will be possible to find your creativity further.

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  • April 18, 2017 12:36

    For Night: Estimates for my work suggest that it does not make sense for me to publish the continuation of my novel here ...
    Knowing my NICK, readers can easily find my work on the vast expanses of the Internet;)

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  • April 15, 2017 8:33

    It seems to me that you are wrong.
    A small connoisseur of such sites, but here you can get feedback, feedback, understand the punctures in the story.
    Most other sites have no comments.

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  • April 18, 2017 13:02

    For Aleks74: Feedback has shown that my stories are out of place here ... Unfortunately ...

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  • 19 April 2017 8:58

    3842 readers of your stories

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  • 19 April 2017 9:16

    For Aleks74: I think there is a wrap up of views here ... The number of readers has been many times less ... Even at the local forum, the old-timers of the site think so :)))

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  • Anonymous (a guest)
    May 1, 2017 12:19

    When is 2 volume?) Och. good romance, waiting for the sequel!))))

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  • May 2, 2017 5:43

    For Anonymous: Thank you! The second volume will not be published here ... It does not make sense ...

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