- Twopence. Part 1
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- Twopence. Part 4
- Twopence. Part 5
- Twopence. Part 6
- Twopence. Part 7
- Twopence. Part 8
- Twopence. Part 9
- Twopence. Part 10
- Twopence. Part 11
- Twopence. Part 12
- Twopence. Part 13: Ending
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on her, not wanting to leave.
“Well, see you later,” said the stinging brunette. - Satisfied? Now - go and think ...
Oleg quickly went outside and walked toward the suburbs. It was already getting dark. Inside him everything was boiling and it seemed as if the earth was slipping from under his feet. He had never hurt so much, and he never felt so stupid and lonely. "What to do? Throw everything and disappear, dissolve, go far? There is enough money for the first time, ”he thought. He was overwhelmed with anger, and urgently needed to do something. His body at that moment resembled a steam boiler that was about to explode. It was urgently necessary to find a valve to release steam. “Can give pussies now to some village jerks” - the boxer thought viciously. For him it would not have been difficult to lay a couple of trained beats of three, or even five, healthy men. "Not. Then problems will arise with the cops, ”he said. “And can rape any aunt? And even better - a teenage girl! Break it inside her there all its powerful member to fucking mother. And in the narrow virgin ass to fuck at the same time ... "- a sweet thought visited his feverishly working brain. But she also had to be abandoned - “Problems may also arise. They will catch them in prison. And there, and my ass zeki ripped to shreds for it ... ".
These are the thoughts that filled his brain, while he was going without knowing where. Unnoticed by himself, Oleg was on the very outskirts of the city. There were unpretentious little houses with small areas, which were visible gardens and temporary shelters for livestock. Far below, the endless azure sea was amazingly planted, right above the horizon the tired setting sun gently said goodbye, it was getting dark. Suddenly he saw a teenage boy of about fifteen, driving a small flock of sheep into the courtyard of one of the most extreme houses of the street. Coming closer, the former boxer, through the open gate noticed a small house, sheepdog, where the sheep obediently ran. Having driven the flock inside the sheepfold, the shepherd closed it on a wooden bolt and entered the house. The yard was deserted.
Oleg remembered how even in the army, one village colleague in secret told him that in his youth he had banged a sheep. “Once, when I was grazing a village flock in a field, a strong thunderstorm began and heavy rain poured. So as not to get wet, I drove the cattle under a lonely tree and pressed myself against its trunk, ”Oleg recalled a colleague’s story. I had in the herd one beautiful, appetizing lamb. White, fat, long-haired. Just at that moment, she stood to me with her back with a raised tail. Her cunt was so temptingly "looking" at me that I could not resist. He made sure that no one was nearby, pulled out his instantly “cudgel” and inserted it into the alluring hole for the very eggs. It was a thrill - I tell you! She first twitched, bleated, and then calmed down. I held her tight and quickly fucked. Inside, she was so hot and soft that I immediately ended violently ... But after half an hour, my dick stood again like a water pump in our village, at the sight of her delicious ass. I stuck it all the way again and this time I fucked it a long time and with gusto. Pleasure, I tell you, is unreal. I was like in heaven ... But, suddenly, something hit me hard, I flew off to the side and woke up only in the hospital. Then they told me that they had found me about ten meters from the tree with my pants down and that lightning struck me ... They thought it was my pants that fell off of her. Nobody guessed anything. After that incident, I'm afraid to deal with animals. I think - God punished me like that ”...
Remembering this conversation, Oleg decided - “This is who will help me to discharge and“ let off steam ”. The desire that had suddenly arisen somewhere in the depths of his being became stronger. It spread through the fire through the veins.His entire body was literally burning with anger and indignation, and he finally decided to do this.
Cleverly jumping over a low fence, he, sneaking, ran up to the cattle house, quietly pushed the wooden bolt and quietly slipped inside, tightly closing the door behind him. The smell of manure hit his nose, but, oddly enough, he did not feel disgust. In the sheepfold it was still quite light due to the small windows in the walls. Looking around, he saw all the small herd in a wooden pen. These were sheep of the breed MERINOS, with amazing thick fine-wool. Straw was scattered everywhere on the wooden floor, and fresh hay lay in the manger.
Entering the pen, Oleg, among all the sheep frightened in a corner of the crowd, in an instant saw HER. White, fluffy, with appetizing fatty rounded sides, slender slender legs, a beautiful pointed muzzle and amber-yellow eyes. From her appearance he had a powerful erection. Heart pounding like mad. Gulping impatiently and trying not to frighten him, he gently took her by the withers and led her into free space in the very center of the sheepfold ...
(To be continued)
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Sheep will stop better. Not in the steppe went.
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Why did Christina rent an apartment if Ruslan was left alone?
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well-deserved score of 4 for what is there to hide PURGU. Take pills to calm the brain and not write more like that.
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Well, that was the beginning of the banalism, the husband of the ragkakun, the whoop and the moral monster, and the wife of the Dartanyan
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The end is already clear: she lived happily ever after with her lover, and her husband fucks the sheep. Do not be surprised if just my husband and die in this story. It seems the author is trying hard to refute betrayal
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For everyone: Thank you very much for your feedback! It’s not long before you have to suffer and read what I “wore” :))) Be patient, please;)
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Thank you very much for the wonderful story !!!
Please continue writing, I beg you !!!
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Thank slonyashik :) The end of this novel is in the section of romance here;)
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Why do you have such a reaction?
99% of stories do not write reviews at all and do not read, after the first part, actually.
The story is good, voluminous, with colorful descriptions.
Well, the sheep and the husband with a sprained psyche, I do not like it.
Although your decision is how to write.
Good luck!
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For Aleks74: Thanks for the only adequate comment! Unfortunately, many do not understand that they are reading a work of art, and not a documentary story ...
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Lisa seems to be doing everything on purpose against the reader on purpose! This stupid carrot love of Chris and Ruslan was only further sold out, and the sublime description of this Ruslan goes on and on - a handsome man, a thick and long phallus and all that! A zoo theme is generally sheer slag! I was hoping that some dog would jump on Christina!) And here it is ... if before that the novel was falling into the abyss, now he is already deep in her!
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For Sololobo: Thanks for the opinion.If you have such a subtle nature, then I earnestly ask you and everyone with a similar psyche feature - in no case do not read the next part of my novel. It turned out to be very difficult and is not recommended for everyone to read ... In the absence of comments, I will understand that they listened to my words ...
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Ovceeb ... What a nightmare!
+1
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Liza, I have a very stable psyche. Yes, you did not write anything that could shake it!) Simply, there are some things that annoy to death and completely spoil the attitude to the novel and its characters. No realism! No point! Ruslana's oversized image - a handsome man with a huge phallus - a typical fantasy of sexually unsatisfied and inexperienced girls! I have a beautiful young wife, in her experience, and he knew a big cock, and the usual average, and even small. Therefore, I know what I'm saying. And you stubbornly stand on your own and write about a stupid, mean-minded handsome man with a big phallus. To God it is ridiculous and disgusting!) And to normal experienced women this also seems ridiculous and stupid. Because as soon as inexperienced jerks 16-25 and sexually unsatisfied women dream of these very strokes and huge penis!)))
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For Sololobo: I already answered you that Ruslan has many positive qualities! And if you do not notice this, then just because you have not carefully read the previous parts ...
As for the "inadequacy" of people, I did not write anything ... Where did you get this from?
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And what are his positive qualities, except for muscle, member, and brand points?
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By the way, it’s funny that for the Author, the only adequate comment is the one where the feedback on her novel is generally positive! And everyone who condemns and finds many disadvantages in him is inadequate people!)))
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Lisa, God bless you, what was there to read carefully?))) Dismiss and don't make me laugh, dear!) What are some positive qualities? Cattle deserving death! Overly painted and overpriced handsome man with muscles and a big dick! Yes, my, this is the most typical fantasy of the women I have mentioned above!))) Too much of it is embellished! To nausea it's already worn out!
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Adequate not adequate? ... Zoophelia is not my favorite reading matter ... But, if you don’t focus on this, the author keeps the brand. Adequacy is a loose concept.
What can I hide sometimes I read stories about animals and most of all write about dogs, sheep, horses. And not once did the goats not involved. This is probably because the goat would not have given.
And leave Ruslan alone.
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I can give you a positive feedback, too, if this is the case. What about the experience of your young wife, is this a joke?
But seriously, such a large, diverse work deserves a positive assessment.
With all the pluses and minuses,
rather than documenting, like stuck in, pulled out and went.
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Speaking of a young wife, I did not mean that she was 20-22 years old!) My wife is 27 years old!) As for the work, it’s not about documentation, as you put it. This is not a diverse work, but an indiscriminate illogical porridge!) The author from the very beginning urged her readers in some hidden meaning and logical chain of events in the novel, but there is no sense - it is clear that the Author floats his thoughts a huge pile, calling it all a novel. And at best, this is only a meaningless soap opera with elements of porn.
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Lisa Starr, the rating of your novel speaks for itself. Fully agree with Sololobo. The writer does not listen to anyone but herself.Roman slipped into the abyss. Complete failure. The image of Ruslan is actually a fantasy of inexperience and dissatisfaction. And the character itself just sucks, deserving nothing but contempt and death. The events of the novel no sense and logic, stupid soap opera with porn, and only. I liked the image of Christina, but the farther away, the more she appears before the reader as a complete fool. The most foolish and most naive. A zoo with sheep is the most complete nonsense and the height of idiocy. No logic and common sense. This is nothing but a novel.
P. S .: "... Ruslan has many positive qualities ...". Nonsense! This is what? Beautiful body and big phallus? Ha ha ha :-)
And this: "... - said a handsome man." It was quite enough and correctly "said the man." Already out of place in this example, the word “beautiful” can be drawn appropriate conclusions about the person who wrote this novel. Yours - Reader!
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I envy a person who has so much free time to write such nonsense with a loud title Roman)
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Comments to the point! Especially the latter. There is nothing to add =) just one question: what kind of stupid name "2 pence"? What figs pence? Is it really not enough for a normal decent title? United handsome! A lonely and inexperienced woman dreaming about a handsome man with a big phallus full of time to write all this rubbish =) if you used to dream of a prince on a white horse, now it’s a jock with a huge cudgel!)))))))))
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For united and others like him: I want to warn everyone at once that the next, 13th part, of my “nonsense” you will not like much! Therefore, a huge request, please - do not read it (do not even open it) and do not leave your abstruse comments! Thank you in advance!
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Listen, the author expresses what he likes. Do not like it - you can not read. For example, I do not like bestiality ... but another topic excites me. There are still moments for which you can find fault. In general, I like the way Lisa writes! Lisa, write on - express yourself!
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For Alex from Moscow: Thanks for the support! How can you write further and “express yourself” with this attitude? An aggressive minority “rules the ball” and inattentively reading my work gets mad, and the indifferent majority is lazy to spend a fraction of a second on the evaluation ... Because of all this, I had to shorten my novel a lot, throw out many scenes ... that when I started writing the first line - I already knew the last! Seeing this behavior of some readers, any desire to create disappears ...
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Lisa simply has nothing more to say and nothing to refute the “abstruse comments”!))) And now she just stubbornly writes in defiance of everyone!) And what is there that we don’t like much? Ruslan will increase his penis even more?))) By the way, this whole type of fashion for jocks and big cocks went mainly because of porn films of recent years, in which they specifically began to get pumped up actors and with a penny more. If you think about it and pay attention, you can see that in the porn films of the 90s and the first 10 years of the 2000s there were a lot of NOT recruited actors and with rather modest aggregates. And in general, in general, the porn of those years were much more interesting than the current stuff. Artificial stupid fuck now, no more. Some pitching and big penises and all already to death from this sick. What else is interesting is that the most beautiful women in 80% of cases are married just to average folded men, and all these stupid muscles are of little interest to anyone, except for inexperienced and unsatisfied!)
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For Sololobo: Why did you get those jocks? They are people too and have the right to privacy :))) And if you want to read only what you like - please place an order, pay and I will write so that you will not tear yourself away from your monitor with your “boyfriend”: )))
And remember - never a single author will go to the reader on the occasion! At least, also because real readers will cease to respect him, which, fortunately, the majority ...
P. S. And, please, do not open my 13 part when it appears on this resource. You don’t like it, you’ll be mad if you read it ... I warned you ...
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Lisa, make the 13th part of the paid. Thereby you will find out how many real readers you have and what your high creativity is generally worth. At the same time save yourself from the stream of criticism. Maybe even on the bottle washes the money cut down
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For Den: Thanks for the tip! I thought about it, but I came to the conclusion that you should not do this, because not all of my readers have the opportunity to pay for my novel. And it will not be fair when innocent people suffer because of a bunch of “tovarischy” belching bile ...
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Liza, for God's sake! What rabies?) I read with laughter!) Just write sincere comments, that's all!) Let's start with the fact that you have only one solid excuse. You have a rating below the baseboard, and you refer to some majority there, which supposedly reads and enjoys but does not support you!) Dear, well, really!))) And then, what other payments are there, you what? Yes, for nothing in the world!) By the way, a writer working for money is not a writer, remember! Further, you speak about your writing as about creation!))) Well, by golly!))) And that, you see, they did not read attentively! And what was there to read something? What is it that everyone missed? Personally, I read everything from cover to cover. And I can directly say that this is not a novel, but complete nonsense! The real fantasies of an unrealized person! And I also read many great authors of great literature. This is me to the fact that since their works could understand some kind of porn series there are seeds!))) And as for the jocks, I don’t care about them, it’s ridiculous and really annoying that they now become some brand in the stories, when in real life, everything is quite the opposite! And yet this moronic fashion for huge phalluses. The plot of the plot, but there must be realism! And everywhere in the stories alone pitching and big penises!))) As if everyone at once went crazy from a contagious disease!)
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He wrote, wrote, analyzed, argued, warned, but the author did not heed the advice ... This is her right. But - apparently - in vain ... He wrote in vain and did not listen in vain ... :)
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For Max R: Thanks for the tips! You knew perfectly well that the novel was written long before the publication and it was already impossible to change something;) But in the second volume I took many of your advice :) And thank you for reminding yourself and all the golden words - “This is her right "!!!
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)) yes, well, yes ... Liza, you kind of said that you "sculpt" chapter after chapter ...
However, drove)
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For Max R: Lost already :))) I said that I’m “building up” :))) Although, now it doesn’t matter anymore ... I realized a long time ago that “I got the wrong address” ...
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in the sense of "wrong"?
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