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the female body, the lips lightly touched the nipples, causing quiet moans and sighs.
Without opening his eyes, Lee gave himself up to strange, new sensations. He knew that the female body is very sensitive - but so much so! Every touch, every kiss responded unknown before the bliss and warmth. Anxious and sweet expectation raged in the blood, like sparkling wine, forcing you to breathe more often.
“So these are what they are! That's how THEY feel it all! ”
Dexterous fingers, in the meantime, were already dragging his trousers and underclothing, leaving no last protection. A light breeze blew over the naked body, covering the tender skin with goosebumps.
Lee did not open his eyes, but by a pause he realized that Edyri was undressing. Clumsily coping with the zipper on the jeans, she threw them on the floor and again bent over the girl's body. His body, inside of which now was the soul of a man.
And it was necessary that such a thing would happen that at that very moment Alanna Pace decided to call her husband to say good night to him. The phone was in the pocket of the jeans of the actor, at the time of the fall, something was plugged into his electronic brains - and the line was connected.
- Hello, sweety! I'm calling to ... Honey? Is it? - in response, she heard strange rustling in tense silence. And then moan. Female Numbly, Alanna listened carefully, trying to understand what was going on with her husband.
For a while, Adair stood, looking down at her lower abdomen, sensing an erection in surprise. Then she gasped convulsively - this part of her new body was pushing her for certain actions, she bent over the female body and again began to gently kiss her nipples. The fingers of her hands easily penetrated between her slightly spread legs to the source of pleasure. Surely stroked the hot folds, and touched the clitoris between them. Of course, she knew what to do and how, because it was her body. And already the first cautious touch caused a loud moan, which Edyri drowned out with a kiss.
She hung over him, slowly and gently pushing the slender legs with her hips. The head of the penis touched the wet entrance of the female body, Edyri convulsively sucked the air through her teeth - the pleasure was keen, the desire became almost painful.
- I'm ready ... And you? - the answer was a new moan and a slight movement of the hips towards.
Pressing the phone to her ear, Alanna heard it all. Rustles, light creak of furniture, quiet female moans. She could not believe herself, but the last straw was the phrase:
“I’m ready, and you?” Li said, she had no doubts, she would always know her husband’s voice. Bursting into tears, she threw the phone away, the fragile thing shattered into smithereens.
And in the living room of their house, in the meantime, the tension was increasing, sexual energy literally flowed around two woven bodies.
The first careful push made the girl squeeze and quietly oyknut. The man froze - he himself realized that the size of his body was great for the tender bosom of a girl.
- I ... You ... He ... too big ...
- And you yourself? Can not?
- I will not enter into myself a man's member!
- But this is your dick! And we introduce it to me actually!
- Stop joking, you're gonna fuck me!
- Or are you me? - they looked at each other and sprinkled. After that, Lee lifted his legs apart a little higher to his chest and began instructing Adair.
- Take it in your hand, and pull the skin on the head. Yes, like this. Better even gently squeeze the head with his fist. See, on it, too, the grease made?
- And how long will it be for me ... to compress?
- How much will it take if you do not want to leave everything as it is. But then you have to “compress” it periodically all your life!
- Ok, convinced. What's next?
- Now hold the tip of the phallus at the entrance to ... me. It's wet there, take a little more moisture on the head. Cccher! - he sucked in the air through his teeth - from the actions of Edyri, pleasure spread in waves over the whole body.
- It seems that I am doing everything correctly ... Mmmm, I didn’t know that men feel that way!
- From ... well, you de ... do everything. And now - slowly enter the head. Oooh! Yes, like this ...
Slowly, carefully, the member entered the vagina, froze. He moved a little deeper, stopped again - and a man and a woman got used to new sensations. Another slow push inward, then gently outward. Both froze, and then exclaimed in unison:
- Holy tangerines! So that's how it happens with you!
- Fire and rain! So that's how it happens with you!
After that, the room was filled with completely different sounds - rapid breathing, groans, a quiet creak of furniture. Two enjoyed sex, discovering more and more new possibilities of their bodies.
Both were not new to sex - but right now, with a strange twist, fate gave them a chance to find out what other body feels like. How can it react to familiar touches, confident actions, being their object. Mutual excitement intensified the fact that everyone knew for sure - which touches, movements, kisses bring the greatest pleasure to their own body.
A sharp deep jolt suddenly made Lee grimace and shriek from a severe dull pain in the lower abdomen.
- Careful! Does it have to hurt?
“I don't know,” Adair stopped. - Am I doing something wrong?
“Looks like you walk too deep.” He rests on ... I realized what it was.
- I, too. So what to do? I can not restrain you ... in me - so nice!
- I guess. You know - come on, I'll be on top. Then I can control the penetration myself. But now you need to explain everything to me.
- Mmmm ... If you are sure. Well, - the man raised himself on his elbows, releasing the girl. He lay on his back, and his partner threw a leg over him and settled down. - Command.
- Hook over him. Yes, like this. Take it with your hand. Why are you? It's still your dick!
- Yeah. For all my life I have kept him millions of times - but for such a purpose!
- I think this goal is more important now - if you don’t want to lose it forever. Take it, and as advised me ...
- I know how to handle it, let's continue.
- And now, too, gather moisture, but spread your fingers sexual lips. Do not be shy, I allow.
- She resolves! Insert into these same sponge - you do not need permission!
- Because it is my lips. OK, ready?
- Probably.
- Slowly enter it into yourself. And now - go down, ooo, for sure! Like this! Fire and rain, how do you guys endure this?
- Mmmm ... what are you talking about? - slowly sitting down on a member, the girl barely restrained moans.
- And about that!
- Oooh! If I knew how sensitive you are, cher!
- So, you do not sit down the whole length - be careful. While you feel pleasure.
- Well, yes, that's enough, perhaps. So what is next? - girlish hips raised, and a member almost slipped out of the gentle bosom.
- Not this way. Not up and down, but as if back and forth, then he will not jump out. I will help, - male palms lay on the girl's hips and began to confidently guide the actions of the girl.
And again the chaotic movements at first gained a rhythm, again the silence filled with moans and sighs.
Suddenly, the male hand lay on the pubis of the girl, and the thumb began to stroke the swollen clit. The girl stopped, staring in amazement at her partner:
- What ... why are you ...?
- I like it when they do it. Are you uncomfortable?
“Crazy ... Go on,” she began to move again, faster and faster. Her face flushed, strands of brown hair stuck to the sweaty forehead, closing her eyes, she seemed to listen to herself, sensitively catching the pleasure.
The man admired her, how they trembled with each movement of his chest, how his abdominal muscles tensed.
An orgasm covered them at the same time, a low throaty feminine moan sounded in unison with a male roar, after which the girl flattened herself on the man's chest, taking a breath.
Lee opened his eyes and stared at the ceiling. He glanced lower - and with delight he saw the top of the girl.
- Adair! We made it!
- What? - she raised her head, blinking in bewilderment, - That's right, it worked out! Ooooy! - smiling happily, the dwarf threw a leg, letting out a limp male member, and settled down next to the actor, resting.
- Hmm. It seemed to me - or did you doubt the result?
- Well ... Actually, yes. This spell is used only for irrevocable exchange, so ...
- Holy tangerines! And you say it only now ?!
“By the way, it’s not my fault!”
- Okay. I'm sorry. And now - do not you think that we need to take a shower?
- What to accept? - the thin brows of the girl rose in surprise.
“Come on, I'll show you,” he turned on the water in a huge bathroom, showed Adair how to use, and he got into another cabin, listening to the enthusiastic squeals of the girl with pleasure. From the shower, they left at the same time, Lee handed her a towel, not missing an opportunity to admire the elegant body of Adair.
In the living room they silently dressed, Lee picked up the phone, which managed to discharge, and pulled back the curtains. Outside was a clear moonlit night, and for some time the actor stood looking at his reflection in the dark glass.
Adair approached him from behind - and he was amazed how small she was, just above his elbow.
- I have to go, Ligrinnerpeys. It was ... a wonderful adventure, - the actor hugged the girl by the shoulders.
- Yes, it was wonderful, Adair. Will we ever see you again?
- I do not think. I'm going home, - she opened the door to the terrace and went out, the actor went after him.
- In Erebor?
“Erebor is just a legend,” the dwarf smiled, “but it doesn't matter.” Lean down please.
When Lee leaned over her, she hugged his neck and kissed him hard on the lips.
- Farewell, Ligrinnerpeys.
Her graceful figure disappeared into the thickets, there was a soft pop, and everything was quiet. Somehow, Lee Pace realized that he was alone on the lawn.
He returned to the house, looked around the living room, sighed softly and waved his hand - the cleaning could be postponed until morning.
In the bedroom, the actor put the phone on charge, and fell into bed.
The morning was terrible - he was awakened by a squall of messages from his wife, the first of which sounded like this:
“We're getting a divorce, Lee Grinner Pace!”
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+ 10 - my assessment of this story.
In principle, all declared tags are disclosed. There is here and treason, and humor, and a fairy tale, and the traditional presentation)
I liked everything. Separately, I want to note the theme - the exchange of bodies. It would seem that we have repeatedly met this. But the author managed to write in his own way. The frank scene was very pleasant) The ending was funny. In short, a good story. And I congratulate the author - you succeeded.
In general, I was very intrigued by this tournament of two knights))) I look forward to further development of the competition.
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Great review, my Queen! You, as always, the first! I'm waiting too...
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I promised a comment, I write ...
Written well, but the topic is not at all mine. I love stories about reality. In support of the author +10
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Thanks Roxy! The author will be pleased ... and me too)))
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The theme is also not mine, but I feel, a couple more of these stories and I will love the tags "fantasy" and "erotic tale".
I'd like to read the sequel. And I really want to express respect to the author for the masterful development of the plot and intrigue, and of course to praise the literary language. Alas, this is not enough on ST.
In general, my score is 10, if someone has not understood :)
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Lark! I am glad that the author has aroused in you a love for erotic fairy tale and fantasy! He is doubly pleased, I think, to hear such an assessment from you)))
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With the exception of treason, all my favorite categories. SS I put +10.
And no, reviews will not be, Yuri.
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Valera, but judging by the assessment, is this exactly what you wanted to read? I'm right)))
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I really liked it except for treason. I didn’t dare to read for a long time, but in support of the competition I had endured this terrible tag. From me 10, excellent writing and one sentence approved my assessment.
- But this is your member! And we introduce it to me actually!
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Tefida, thanks! I didn’t choose tags, but duelists or new knights of pen and ink)))
Perhaps neither one nor the other does not like betrayal, but also in duels, people who did not tolerate weapons were offered to choose. And they chose ... And where do you go?))
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I understand that everyone knows everyone and one should sing praises. But this is still a competition.
From me 8. There will be an assessment to the following author I do not know better or worse yet.
As for the tags:
The story "hooked"? Not. Technically, everything was, but the descriptions do not cling. At least me.
Originality of the idea. In principle, possible. Although the exchange of bodies is not new ... and the dwarves, elves. But let it be
Ease of reading Yes. The story is read easily and naturally.
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And in my opinion, commentators are cunning. They rate one, and write that they put the top ten :)
Bad comrades. When I read the story, there were 5 comments and in each it was written that they put the top ten. But the average score of 6 ratings was 7.4 :).
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Yura wrote on the forum that evaluation is not the main thing. The winner will be recognized by the number of comments. And with a rating of yes, wrong. And why am I not surprised?
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The right way go Comrade Roxy! I have my own calculation methods. It is a pity that the stories did not come out both at once. But I hope the second one will also be read and appreciated. Although I wrote in them to put both at the same time ...
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I put the top ten and would ask not to blame indiscriminately.
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Yes ... I put it from the tablet ... I pressed 10 and the number dropped to one.
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This glitch has long been discussed on the forum. It seems it did not fix it))
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I therefore do not appreciate from the tablet.
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The main thing is not in the assessment, and the review of the story.
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Nuuuuu, do not forget about the blockers. For some reason it seems to me that these are lovers of homosexual stories. Look what sort of estimates there are. Completely close to dozens.
They are in the life of pi-and-and-and-and, tihushniki. That's why they put the stories that do not fit into their erotic perception.)))
That is why I never pay attention to ratings.
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Instant, I do not pay attention to the estimates. I read kamenty. and write down my grades in my book, my points, which the reader actually assigns to the story. Reading between the lines is easy. not only me, but anyone))
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I do not know who the author, but I did not like it. On this site I have read erotic fantasy several times, and very high quality ones. In the same story there is no fantasy, no reality, no juiciness, no color. There is no intriguing transition from one reality to another. The story is not hooked.
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No fantasy at all. Not an ounce
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Valera, I will ask you simple questions, as a connoisseur of the fantasy genre, I confess, I am blunt in it:
1. Who do you think Lee Grinner Pears is?
2. And do you know the name Adair?
3. And why did the author in the preface make a statement that Mr. Lee is not married?
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I will answer the points:
1. I have no idea.
2. Not familiar.
3. That the category “Treason” takes place
And maybe I, of course, am mistaken, but someone can not in sarcasm)
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Three times no)))
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And the transition from one state to another, dear Kappa, is that your way?
Fantasy is. Or are gnomes in your world real characters? And by the way, do you have a different concept of intrigue, or did it seem to me?
The story could not catch, your right to think so, but do not write something that you did not see.
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Maybe you will not tell me how to comment or not to comment on the story?
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These two comments by Aluett and Kappa, I do not take into account. I will not minus. But I do not like them!
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Sorry, Kappa, that is not your story. Everyone is entitled to their opinion. And negative kament is no less valuable to me, especially since he explained why he didn’t like the story.
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I note that the use of gnomes, fairies, etc., does not make the story a priori fantasy or quality.
By the way, just like the fact that this story was published by you, or that someone from familiar knights wrote it.
I'm tired of adjusting to all vulnerable, lovers and sensitive. I do not like my comment, ask him to remove it, and I expressed my opinion as before, and I will continue to do so, even if none of those who read it agree with it. I do not prove to anyone that he is wrong.
Well, I did not give a rating, and I will bypass a certain group of users with my opinion. Have a good tournament.
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And you yourself are the type in armor, never sensitive and never vulnerable, yes, you were remembered as such.
Comment on the stories as you want, who am I to tell you?
Good luck in your search for quality works, in your opinion.
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Alouette, I think the answer to your opponent is violating the passage of the tournament. You minus on my part.
Yes, I am angry, but principled and for me there are no friends in it. I will stop any attempts not related to the tournament.
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Delete all my comments, Yura
I expressed my opinion, I liked the story, this is important.
I will not adapt to anyone, I appreciated the second story without comment.
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It's not obligatory. Let it be. Anyway, they have the truth of life)))
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Kapp with all respect but the story does not have a fantasy tag. This is an erotic tale.
You allowed yourself to try to guess who the author is. It breaks my rules. You minus from me.
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I did not see the humor, but with taste and knowledge, they discuss the turn of the head and the rustling in the bushes ... a lot of unimportant. about fantasy))) you can take a palanik with his lullabies and someone there trolls and gnomes, get the plot. further, sex is described by the author, or who else? the language went easier. can the holy mandarins make me think? nothing that I'm sitting sideways to you and my audacity discourages?
although such unbridled sexuality can not but rejoice)))) fucking gnomes under the table. 7
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Charming! Charming! Snezhana. Honestly and frankly! I like this review.
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Unfortunately, not all curl up. Alas and oh!
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It is given to me, I cursed and more than once))))))
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What a generosity from the comic all ST!))
And for what 7, if not that there is no obscene language, but not even a single grammatical error?))
I was discouraged not by impudence, but by Snezhana Petrosyanovna’s irrationality - she first comments on the story here, and under the second she writes that this one will not be read!))
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too lazy to piss ..
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Well, the same peisatil)
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but what about valeron, but what about)
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She is not Peisatil - she is here)))
What are the turns of the head - Petrosyanovne ethno skuchno)
Well, mat, yes, congruently!))
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There is either fantasy or the real world. To put it together you need a big story, not just sex, that's why it's hard to call it a fairy tale. I don’t know who reads easily; at the end of the first page I began to run my eyes over the lines by jumping over paragraphs. 10 a lot, I think 7 just right.
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Thank you for the review Kalash. I do not think that fantasy must necessarily be a great story or even a story. In addition, the tag is not "fantasy", but "erotic tale"))))
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FINALLY SOME OF THE SECOND TOURNAMENT STORY “Path to Arico”
Waiting for comments and reviews there.
https://eroticspace.info/story/2015-08-03/put-v-ariko-turnir.html
But do not forget about this)))
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the moment of betrayal, yes, I would not really need to be here, but the author knows better.
The relocation from body to body is not a new question, but it’s interesting) I liked it)
well, I’ll put an emphasis on the bed scene, the author seemed to take the scene from my head, I like such an intimacy between the author and the reader, you know, when you see your thoughts expressed by someone ... it may have coincided, but I am impressed. Where are your grades?)) Dozen))
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Thank you, 6aMIIeP. There is a paradox here. Tags were required for the tournament and the authors did their best, as best they could. Whether they like it or not)))
I confess that in my story I saw a deja vu. But the author beat it turned out much better)))
I consider all kamenty ...
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I feel heavy fantasy. I basically do not read it. Moreover, fantasy sex with humor. I do not put anything. Simply, absolutely not mine. There is an ease of description, not bad, there is a style. But I just can not shove in someone else's imagination - I have my own fountain over my edge. Sorry.
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Che, but your kamenta is enough for me to evaluate.)))
And again - this is not fantasy, but an erotic tale))
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Oh, how disgusting, you can break the tongue. I agree with those who liked the story. Everything is worthless and probably the author can put it together in his head, but as for me it’s from that category:
- and not to remove us comedy?
- and if we fail?
- and if it does not work out then we glue everything into pieces and let everyone think that this is an art house!
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Commentary from the series: "Whom fate cheated by talent, they went to the critics!")
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Valera subscribe to every word))
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Super Puper, thanks for kament. A little is not clear agreement with those ... and then hesit)))
I have not missed you, and even counted.
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Very funny comment)
Even my imagination somehow could not help me to imagine exactly what I was reading the Super-Duper, which almost broke my tongue)
As far as I know, even people with disabilities read by hand - but with the tongue!))
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Well, if you blind-armless, it is quite))
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(I agree with those who liked the story.)
It will be correct - I agree with those who did not like the story. I quickly write and forget to check. By the way, another story will be more interesting to compare with this, it’s the spirit of the fairy tale that is felt, and in this story there is no such thing. Freshly shorter.
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Super Puper. Well, what's stopping to rebuke? Be consistent. One obkhayal, the other oblahodor)))
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I do not understand the meaning of this tournament! That's the thing. In tournaments, the winning knight received an award, but here as a reward what? Now, if for example more people took part in the tournament and the winner went to the semifinals with the winner of another qualifying tournament and so on. And in the final, the winner received something significant, for example, the status of some sort, that his next stories would hang on the main page for a few days, or money, then it would be interesting. And this is a less interesting activity, writing on topics that, for example, are not interesting.
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Not so simple, Super Puper, but you are right about something. At first there were four knights. But the first one, which nakerosinil rest, merged when the others took heart and wanted to participate.
I called him all the printed and unprintable words, because I had already signed up to be the second. And he was even ready to throw a call to sponsors. To reward the story you like. It took a little time ... and the third, hoping for the summer, cottages and holidays, also refused to participate.
Two left. The best of the best with a hard heart, ready to go to the end! Respect! I supported them as best I could. But ... in these stories the participants-commentators non-volunteer advertise themselves. For example, it is enough to poke around the commentator's login, how you get into his world ... the world of his stories or poems ... Or you will see a familiar person on the forum.))
This tournament actually has two arrows. One strikes the loser, and the second shows itself in all its glory. It is interesting!
And money, material prizes. Well, if someone is eager to financially thank the winner of the tournament, his business. When the masks are removed, let them put him a certain amount on the phone or some other webcam. I don't care anymore.
But if he wants to declare it for all to hear, I will correct the story, I will put his name at the very beginning. So it was on other resources. But on this one? I doubt it. And yes, it would be four knights, maybe it would be worth it?
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Yuri, so thin that already thick)
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Valera, on that stand, stood and will stand ... And if someone comes to us from a standpipe and perishes!))))))))
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It looks like the reviews have been exhausted, then read the second story of the tournament, it's here
https://eroticspace.info/story/2015-08-03/put-v-ariko-turnir.html
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The story is gorgeous! Excellent presentation, great humor and very correct presentation of the bed scene, especially considering the chosen idea. Special thanks for Lee and the dwarf) As a dwarf I say) Grade 10+
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Thank you, Witch! And now, I have a request, read the second story and leave the kament there too)))
https://eroticspace.info/story/2015-08-03/put-v-ariko-turnir.html
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Put a topic on the forum about the gender predisposition of the authors of this tournament
https://eroticspace.info/forum/threads/806/
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Perhaps my ten here is well-deserved ... Not only the original, but unusually funny plot with the exchange of bodies ... Although, in the beginning, he did not impress me ... I had to go back and re-read everything anew to feel the course of the story.
I do not like to read about adultery ... But here, it seems, practically, there was no betrayal ... Was it possible to change with yourself? Yes, and betrayal is rather forced ... ridiculous and ridiculous ...
In my opinion, there is little description of erotic feelings in a strange body ... the heroes pay more attention to the purely technical side, helping each other with advice on how to properly treat their bodies ... But, probably, this is what gives the ridiculous scene realistic .. .
Honestly, I can’t even imagine that I would feel in a strange body ... and even a male body ... I cannot even describe it ... therefore, my respect for the author)))
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Eva, you're right, but you see, the characters have no feelings for each other. They are forced to have sex, and that is why they pay attention only to technical details)
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And here, Eva wrote an excellent review above all praise. Sumptuously! To put it mildly! Bravo! Probably better fit)))
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If this is a tournament, then I vote for this story. I really liked him. And the style of writing and the syllable and sequence in the presentation and disclosed or touched only a hint of the topic ...
This is a complete and easy story, but still touching on topical and challenging topics. Score 10 points.
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Thank you Yolochka in July! Your author will be read by the author and he will rejoice!))
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I do not like erotic fantasy at all. But this is wonderful.
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Thank you, Stepenwolf! And what will be the summary of the second?
https://eroticspace.info/story/2015-08-03/put-v-ariko-turnir.html
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I thought to run my eyes, but did not. Read and enjoyed. ten.
Interestingly written by a man.
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Thank! Thrushbeard! I am pleased to author too!
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Somehow lacking punctuation marks in the last sentence)
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Where exactly? In the latest?
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In the very latest))
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Ok, I'll tell the author ...
Thank you for your comment!
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The syllable is very pleasant and fascinating) I liked the description of the situation, the description of the characters of the characters)
Well, the bed scene is perfectly spelled out) Thanks to the author!
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I am pleased to! Well-wisher. I am sure the author will also hear such speeches about his story.
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TOURNAMENT IS ENDED! WINNER AND AUTHOR OF THE STORY YAKO-KHAN!
Read the forum
https://eroticspace.info/forum/threads/806/
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Yako, from the very beginning was sure that you wrote it)
Very glad to read you again. Thank!
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Thank you all for your support and comments))
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As for disputes about whether it is fantasy or not, I am not a literary scholar, but I still think that in normal circumstances the dwarfs (even pretty ones) do not visit every day)
Yes, and with the counterparts, hardly anyone changed at dinner)
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In short, their own, as always, 10+ set. Well, in this case, the comments riveted. Even a very great suspicion of fairness is creeping in. The only true comments here are Kappa, and the rest are pathetic flatterers. If you evaluate the story on a ten-point system, it is on 5. And this is an honest assessment. But here the rating is determined unfortunately by other criteria.
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And how did you consider it, if you read the language?))
However - from you, Super-Duper - even five unheard of, as far as I know)
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I understand that you wanted to be 10+, but I am not your close friend, and I appreciate the stories as opposed to them honestly and don’t put dozens for friendship. And that five points from me to you are many, this is true, but considering your ugly character, I decided to add a ball so that you would not throw mud at me for the next ten years))) and stop clinging to my language.
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I do not cling to you, my dear))
If you think that the story is bad, and you are convinced that you evaluate everything honestly, you would have put it, then what the story deserves, but did not turn out))
I don’t know what my character didn’t please you - here they asked to rate the story, not the author))
As for watering with mud - this is the best for you, I have not yet seen a single friendly comment from Super-Duper-Donito-Pasha-guest) And not only for my stories - on the website in general.
If my stories are so bad - why are you chewing a cactus and reading them again?) Yes, and bicker in the comments, it is not clear what trying to prove.
The cowardly Donito started this thread with a duel, but he quickly faded, I don’t know why. Arrogantly envious Pasha for some reason does not give rest to my work, and he stubbornly climbs with his splashes)
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You see how poisonous you are, they managed to bite everyone and me and Donito and Pasha and so on.)))) Can you still remember some boy from childhood who looked askance at you and put it in your black list of bad people?))) It is strange that this time you did not remember one woman who is guilty just for the fact that she has high self-esteem, and limited only to men. but izvivatsya and vyvorachivatsya it is more on your part, not mine. And do not flatter yourself, this is your first story that I read) now if I want to read your other creations, I will approximately know that you have fresh stories with a boring plot and a lengthy description of sex scenes. interesting tales are the slightest written in light sentences, and the rapid development of events makes the reader plunge into the world of this tale. You have a constructor from heavy sentences in which there are a lot of details that you use to force everyone who reads from beginning to end. Representing these details, you completely forget about the fairy tale and its plot. Imagine that in this your nonsense, there would be no sex at all, would anyone else besides your buddies read it? You understand that no one. That's where the low score. And in the village, I will give you advice snake, do not waste your poison, otherwise you will spend the whole, and without it, it will be difficult for you to live a day. By the way, better listen to my words and try to write something interesting, and not something like that, because you understand that you cannot get far from your friends and high self-esteem. The reader will not be fooled by this.
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Yes, you are in love with me, my dear))
So persistently strive to get my attention - but, unfortunately, in vain) My heart is occupied, do not waste your efforts)
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I apologize for the stupid question, but why humor in porn? How do you order to be excited? Having fun laughing? Or are these stories for a contest of young talents?
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Artificially somehow ...
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Or not something imagined while reading or something else. But first, the girl's eyes were green and then turned brown.
Good tale.
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The girl's green eyes as they were, and remained. Lee Pace, Tigger's brown eyes.
There was an exchange of bodies.
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Yes, it means a little confused.
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