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arched with a cat when he filled it and now droplets of sweat protruded from her back. Dima entered her with the force of driving his trunk into her pussy. His fingers squeezed her ass, already completely surrendered to continuous movements, gradually dispersing himself more and more. Running one hand over the back of the hair, reassembling it in the tail, he wrapped it around his fist and pulled it over so that it would be a pleasure for a slight pain that contrasted and emphasized pleasant sensations. With the thumb of the other hand, putting it on the Irochkina lower back, I began to massage the asterisk between the buttocks.
She moved her hips, all accelerating the pace towards Dima, who was powerfully gouging her, forcing her to arch. Irina raised herself up, resting her hands and now swaying from the strong pushes of her breasts, touching the table surface with her strained nipples.
The touch of his finger to the anal hole made the girl scream - no, she was not afraid, it brought new sensations, new pleasure.
- Aaaaaaaaoooooooo !!! mmmmmm !!!
Her reaction, her moans, breathing, movement towards - all this excited the guy more and more, and he felt the trunk swell, stretching her pussy. He wanted for the moment to be everywhere at once, to master her completely and completely, to enter her ass, her mouth and take her bosom, gently and passionately, in strict order and all at once. Obsession subsided, as soon as he opened his eyes. Her buttocks swayed to the beat, the thumb that teased her ass, slid into her already half ... Her hair was loose, she spilled over her shoulders and back like a red flame, and Dima grabbed her girlfriend's chest with her free hand, squeezing her. He no longer simply put his trunk into it, he pressed it with all his weight, threatening to tear the table firmly screwed from the floor.
Ira's elbows buckled and she dropped her head in her hands. For her, only this man now existed, strongly driving his matchless trunk into the pussy, which he so willingly accepted, so vigorously enjoyed and pulsed on it ...
From his hand, squeezed chest, girl like a shock sibanulo, she again arched and howled ...
- Aaaaaaooooyyy !!! - his finger went even deeper into the ass, and this almost double penetration made the pussy shrink from pleasure ... - Oooyyy, Diiiiimaaaaa !!! - Ira already screaming from pleasure.
This sex seemed to melt everything around the couple. Dima owned it, took it frantically, but at the same moment he sensitively followed her mood and reaction to his actions, ready to change tactics at any moment. His breathing turned into a roar, her moans sobbing, they moved as if they were one ... so different. Slapping an open hand over the pope of the girl, forcing her to squeeze the phallus inside of him, he brought himself and her closer to the moment of the highest bliss. The guy felt like moisture was boiling between her legs, she was getting hotter, and, squeezing the muscles around his trunk, she burned, causing unthinkable pleasure. Her bosom fluttered in anticipation of a speedy completion, and the boy, slipping into her once again, shot tight jets into her pussy for the second time this crazy evening.
Irochka was already shaking from the approaching stormy orgasm, her vagina throbbed rhythmically and the rhythm was growing at a crazy crescendo. She howled, screamed, sobbed - but continued to move in this rhythm, surrendering to this male, this man ... Who now growled at her from pleasure, and gave him, not sparing either herself or her.
- AaaavssssAAAAAAAAAAA !!! - from slapping the girl seemed to snatch, she screamed and finished. Pussy clenched, milk poured over the table, but she didn’t care anymore ... It was as if Paralysed Irochka - only her tender pussy was frantically shrinking, squeezing all the juices out of her partner, the world for which she had stopped around. The planet has ceased to rotate. The arrows stopped their move and wet, such necessary air with the smells of sex and the ocean became unimportant and unnecessary now ... He felt it — that was what really mattered.Exhausted and dried, deprived of all forces, they enjoyed every moment the consequences of their passion.
- You are just super. You're so cool ... just ... super ... - for something more was missing him now. Dima tried to break away from the girl, with great effort, succeeded. His trunk did not want to leave her warm cave, her skin resisted myriads of goosebumps at the lack of intimacy with her body ... Drawing the girl into his arms, he kissed her again on the lips, but not trying to arouse her passion, but with gratitude for this unexpected and such passionate sex.
Catching Irishka in his arms, Dima moved along the corridors and decks to her cabin, grabbing clothes. Wet from sweat and completely exhausted, she simply clung to the guy who carried her away. Irochka was no longer interested in anything but his strong hands. The kitchen was empty again, and only a puddle of milk now reminded of what happened here recently.
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Wow, just wow!
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Mmmmmmmmmmm !!! What an appetizing romantic rendezvous at the fridge. Incredibly, but a fact, we have half the country at night in this magical kitchen item. Although very rarely, these meetings are limited to milk with cookies, but do not go too far. Most often, our midnight desires are satisfied only with cold snacks ... A pity! At least, a hot burning dish called “sex”, at this late hour for eating food, would have noticeably saved our figure already exhausted by all sorts of diets ...
Eh! I kindled my appetite with my fantasies. After your story, I am not sure that now I want more, whether it is cold milk for the night, or hot and fiery passion ?! I will go, at least open the window, ventilate the room, and then in the air again smelled of sex ... Aaaaaaaaoooooo !!! mmmmmm !!! Ёёёёёёёёёёёёёёёёё !!! Well, here I also succumbed to this inarticulate vocabulary! We urgently need to relieve the tension and “share cookies” with someone !!!;)))
In general, everything is very cute, beautifully and romantically described. For completeness of affection, there is not enough of a mimic cat in the final, on soft paws who came up to the spilled puddle of milk, while the happy couple in the background slowly moves away into the distance, along the dark corridors of the ship decks. The viewers would cry with delight! I certainly cry and give the highest rating !!!;)
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So cute
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Solidarity with you, Eugene)
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Excuse me, Zhenya, but I do not agree with you in everything. Why do you think that there is no plot. Of course, not so hot, but quite traceable. In addition to the category of "case" is the most. After all, what is the case? This is a joke, bike. Almost every bike begins with the words “but I had a chance ...” And here the plot, written according to all the laws of the art genre, is not at all important, it’s just a torn-out and retold piece of someone’s life. And it makes no sense in the bike to describe all the details, who, where, why and why, and how the fate of the heroes will be.
And most importantly, it was in this story, a sudden outbreak of passion, between two almost strangers. And do not tell me that this is not realistic and this does not happen in life. And you shouldn’t immediately hang up the moral cliché on the heroine: “Twirling, overgrown girl, ready to fuck without question.” It is one-sided and offensive to the female half. If we’ve even begun to scold her for this, then scold and fucker, otherwise you think he doesn’t have to ...
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Good, good !!!;) Almost convinced. You can only without the "uv." Contact, but it is too official. Like a subpoena. We are not going to share something;)))
Well, yes, I missed through myself not only your words, but also the heroine of the story, in order to feel from the inside. So it's better to perceive the text ...
And the epigram, in my opinion, is not very pleasant, even evil. And I am against brief characteristics. Any person, a difficult person to describe it in one line ...
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Ahh, mighty Evgeny)) you so poorly laid out the heroine, as the hero didn’t think of decomposing her)
Interesting - and you personally had a lot of questions at the age of 19-20 about sex? And you also sternly gave rebukes to the young ladies you were tempted by? “Ready to fuck without questions” - it is interesting to hear something like that even now, at least one YOUR friend wants to continue communicating with you?
But yes, an attempt at a review is complete. Almost successful))
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And yet, I see that it is off topic, and, perhaps, out of place, but I can not help but comment on the "dry" treatment ...
Write the word "respected" in abbreviated form, it is a manifestation of disrespect.
We have assumed that people are usually sent in three letters, but most often in life they are sent to these two letters "uv." ... sent in a dry bureaucratic language. I understand, sometimes it’s too lazy to strain your hand, once again knocking on the keys, but still, you shouldn’t take an example from bureaucratic bureaucrats and save “ink”.
I am generally opposed to all sorts of abbreviations in messages. From this, the effect of live communication is lost and, as a result, it is difficult to perceive the interlocutor on the other side of the monitor for a real person.
I already understood that you are defending yourself against possible “harassment” with such dryness, but, to be honest, I was not going to be in love with you, lisp and kiss ... at least here, “capricious” ...
But, as you yourself put it, let us return to our sheep ...
For the time being, tossed aside the moral aspects of the passion that had accidentally flared up and my personal attitude to the main character.
After all the reviews and critics, I wanted to re-read the story, which I did. Maybe I'm blind and do not understand something, but I have not found in it gross flaws. Read easily and without tediousness. I apparently slipped by, without noticing, that notorious joint of two parts, which was mentioned here. In my opinion, everything is harmonious and logical. And although, in my opinion, a little lack of violence of feelings and experiences for the romantic component, but still it is the best story in the competition, written quite professionally and exciting.
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I'll go for the liver :) Instead of milk, there will be yogurt, it's a pity I’m alone at home all week, otherwise the kitchen would definitely turn into that very galley. Written alive, easy, sparkling.
I will not spoil the review verses. I do not consider it necessary to divert attention from the self-sufficient work. And I will not eloquently crumble in compliments. I'll just re-read it again, lick my lips from the aftertaste, and remove it, leaving ten.
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Good. Though not to my taste.
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I also liked it, I also put 10. Still, there is romance - even with unbridled lust and all-sweeping passion.
But I only hesitated ... did the girl jump “in one slipper” or did she “in one slipper”? "Slippers" in units including - a kind of masculine word ...
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8!
In my opinion, the story, though very good, is very long. I confess to the end began to skip phrases. Purely for pornography rather weak. For erotica too descriptive. I had the pleasure of one scene describing a sudden, violent seduction. Further could be limited to a couple of paragraphs. But this is my opinion and it is of course wrong)))
First of all, the story impresses me with the name of a little girl. This is my favorite name, I use it in almost half of the stories. Ira I always see funny little girls. Laughing and ready for recklessness and unexpected adventures. In the story it is this.
For some reason, Dima seemed to me to be an extra in this fiery story about the sudden love of two hearts. Most likely I am wrong and the author, I think this is a woman, I will not guess who described herself. Perhaps a real adventure from his life. But erotic fantasies may well occur. Too much described how and what happened.
I admit I did not believe such spontaneity in relationships. They do not go on the train, so that after the hectic romantic sex they go out at the following stations and dissolve in the maelstrom of life, so that they never meet again. But there will be something to tell friends or girlfriends.
I understand that they will work together in the future? And as the saying of the ancients says: “Do not get fucked where you live and do not live where you get together” (c)
But this is just my opinion, I repeat. And it is certainly wrong. The author absolutely did not want to express in his story. But I see it THAT. I would have had two pages, not because brevity is the sister of talent, but because after the second everything was said and stretched, it was not worth delaying.
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I agree with Yuri on all 100 !!!
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Also agree.
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They agree to both-two \ mutters under his breath \ And Ira, too, your favorite name?)))
No, that won't do! My dear, beloved and almost dear, Roxy and Queen. Let's give your opinion already. Let it be also wrong, like mine. But its.
The author, I am faithful, is waiting for a variety. Different from others. I am sure that the author is not important to assess. And you, by the way, my dear girls, they are not identified. Or also the eight?
I appeal to all readers, a couple of extreme found))))
Write whatever you think about the story. Each Who participate in the competition. Do not get rid of duty phrases, like: "Well, but not in my taste" @ Chelovechenka (I also love her), you will be the third)))
And Valerino: “Wow, just, wow”, you can't get into any gate at all. Killing Boy, too, was not pleased with his short review.
Take an example not from me, but from Eugene, Just Eve, Aluette. And advice: at the very beginning of the review (kamenta, critics) write your assessment. How I did it.
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Wow, give!))))
I would give you, Yura, the first place, as the most cheerful and skillful critic.
I was attracted by the name Dima)))) It is in my top three of the most beloved male names)))))
As for this story - I, like Eugene, did not have enough plot. Not appreciated. Somehow everything was sluggish, without uuuuuhh)))))))))))))))))) I did not knock me out in one word.
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Well, here it is! You can, you want)))
It is a completely different thing!
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Language readable, easy. Some illogic behavior of the characters suggests that they tried to stick at least some string to the already written porn element. Introduction - the top five, Sex - well ... you can also top five. But the transition from one to another - spoils everything. If you want to post this story again, please pay more attention to this.
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I really liked the beginning, but as stated above, the rest is very stretched. And it always surprises me how the girls like to lick the dick after being fucked in the ass, and whoever is their first comer. But this is just my opinion. So that 7+
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From me 10 ++ (maybe with a slight stretch).
I do not remember which of the Russian fans was outraged about the names of the genitals, but in this story I agree with him:
When “the fingers slipped into the girl's pussy,” I directly introduced the girl, her cat and the pervert boyfriend. I’m apparently already accustomed to the pussy, but the pussy catches my eye and tries to scratch all my excitement.
By categories:
humor - 6
romance - 8
case - 8
the erotic component of 8-9 ... no ... my dick right requires you to put the top ten. And it’s hard to argue with him, otherwise he will completely turn off the brain ... Let it be 10.
There were a couple of moments when I wanted to shout “I do not believe” according to Stanislavs. There were a couple of paragraphs that I wanted to skip because of the monotony (or tightness) of the description of sex. But the story is easy to read and leaves a pleasant itch a little above the knee.
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What I liked - author's anonymity)))
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Class !!!
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Thank))
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