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out head filled with scarlet color. Valya was interested in the strange unevenness on the side of the head facing her. She slightly touched her finger, and Fedka jerked, as if from an electric shock. She was frightened that she had hurt something and quickly moved her skin back. The head hid, but not completely. A helpless classmate lay with his head thrown back and breathing heavily.
- Painfully? She asked sympathetically, feeling guilty for the suffering he had caused.
“No,” was the answer, “well, please, more ...”
She thought she was doing something wrong. It was no longer a punishment of a hooligan, but rather his encouragement. It was necessary to stop, but she herself wanted to continue so much! For self-justification, she asked:
- Are you ashamed at least?
“Yes, yes, very embarrassing,” replied the punished, “just please, don't stop!”
His cock was still in her hand. Fedka sharply pulled the body, and the head appeared again, and then hid again. She understood what he wanted. It was the same movement that Faith showed and then performed the Light. Valya began to move her hand intently. The expression on her classmate's face told her the right pace. She suddenly felt funny. She remembered how, once in a village, they had wandered with a company to a dairy farm, and the milkmaids gave them a look at how milking passes. Special caps were put on the cow udder, they were funny twitching, and the milk came in thin streams through the hose into a large can - a hearth. Her current occupation was very similar, and she liked it. After a minute or two, Fedka puffed harder, stiffened, and spurted from his penis. Some more convulsive jerks, and the penis began to shrink in size, shrink, and a thick bright liquid slowly flowed from the tip to the stomach.
- Well, I went, - said Valka, hiding a smirk.
- How, and me? - exclaimed lying on the floor. - You will not untie me? - It seems he was scared seriously.
“Okay, I was joking,” Valka said graciously, “come on, turn on your side, I will untie your hands.” Well, the legs already.
Fedor did everything as said. Valka untied his hands and left. Later, they agreed with the girls that they would not tell anyone about what happened that evening. Otherwise, they all could not greet. Fedka, of course, was also silent - in his company what happened to him was unacceptable and, becoming famous, would immediately lead to irreparable consequences for him. After a year, however, some rumors were leaked at school, but no one really knew anything except the participants, and the rumors gradually subsided.
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Valya did not often recall in detail the continuation of the story with Olya. She felt that she bent over the stick, and the punishment they had appointed for Fedka turned out to be more serious than his offense. What the punished himself thought about this, she did not know and could only guess. And now she was in his power, and, presumably, he will not fail to take revenge on her for the complete humiliation.
And she had no one to consult with! With a girlfriend, they somehow cooled to each other, mothers, of course, also can not tell. And what if you talk to Simon? About abortion, he already knows, but not by hearsay, about shooting too. Perhaps, will prompt something efficient?
Valya called Semyon and said that she needed to consult him, but not by telephone. He replied that he was going to visit him today, then we can talk. This option did not suit her - she needed a one-on-one conversation. And the sooner the better. We agreed to meet at eight in the evening in a nearby cafe. Minute by minute, flowed slowly, as if testing her patience ...
Without waiting for the agreed time, Valya went outside and went to the cafe. There she ordered a cup of coffee and began to wait for the seeds. Finally, when she read the entire menu twice from beginning to end and back, he showed up.
- Well, what happened, tell me, - Simon asked instead of a greeting. Valya started talking.As her story, her companion gradually gloomy. When she finished, Simon sighed and said with annoyance:
- N-yes, I had a feeling that something was amiss with this shooting, but Igor spoke to me, dismissed me, the devil was like that. By the way, do you know that he soon retired from the clinic and disappeared altogether in an unknown direction?
Valka did not know about it. It was also useless to look for the funky Shuru, and what's the point if they even caught him? Punish, plant? Write a statement to the police, the police? And then go for long interrogations and answer the most intimate questions of the Sledak men? For some reason, she was sure that a man would be appointed an investigator for such a case. No, not only that!
The waiter came. Simon quickly made an order for two and said that he needed to think a little, and then went into himself. Valka had heard the expression “go into herself” more than once, but only now she understood its meaning. It seemed that her companion completely abandoned all the concerns of the real world and went to Astral. She could not even say for sure whether he was breathing, - the body shell that remained from him was so quiet and still.
Five minutes passed. The “shell” stirred and said:
- Give me your cell phone.
Valka obeyed. Semyon turned the phone in his hands and said:
“You will call this classmate now, as he is there ... You will say that it was you who acted.” So, he does not need to show anything. He will certainly want something from you for his silence. Most likely, or money, or sex. Well, you have no money, everything is clear. As for sex ...
- No, no way, I'm sick of him!
- In general, correctly, of course, this freak is not worthy of you. But it's not only that. If you agree on what he comes up with, you will become so addicted that your current position will seem like flowers. He will make you a slave, a toy for entertainment. You don't want this, do you?
- No, of course, I already said!
- Then try to dissuade him. Beg, tell me that on your knees you will ask him to promise not to talk about this film. You can priplesti sick relatives, remember about school friendship, about how you let him write off the task, but anything! In the end, tell me that you have hereditary syphilis in the last stage. He must promise to be silent.
Valka was a little discouraged. It was worth going so deep inside yourself to come up with such nonsense! She knows this type as flaky - he would never agree to her prayer. Simeon is probably an incorrigible idealist, if he believes that such a plan can work. Oh well, only to prove that he is wrong, she will try to persuade the bastard. And then - we'll see. Maybe the author of an unsuccessful plan will be ashamed and come up with something better.
She handed Semen a piece of paper with the number recorded. He dialed and handed the phone to her. The conversation began.
The hardest thing was to admit that on the obscene video, it really is. Then it went easier. Still, Simon was not really a fool - Fedka seemed to read the text of his script. Reassured that she really had no money, he immediately took the bull by the horns and offered her a “all-inclusive” date at his home - for keeping silent. Valka entered the role of a petitioner, remembered all the ideas that Simon had thrown at her, and this way she begged the bastard, but he was unmoved. When she lied in despair, according to the scenario, about hereditary syphilis (Simon frowned for some reason), the shrewd bastard did not believe her at once:
- Yeah, syphilis. Hereditary. And the doctor said the tests were good. Something you, madam, do not meet the ends. Or maybe the ends with what other converge? - he loudly grumbled over his unpretentious barracks pun. - In short, bring a certificate of syphilis - then, perhaps, I believe. But no, I wait tomorrow after seven. Well, chao, see you tomorrow.
It was a disaster. She, alas, was right, and Semyon’s plan was no good. Ponuro looking at him, Valka suddenly noticed that her vis-à-vis was cheering up. That was too much. Feeling sobbing, she asked:
- Well, why are you so happy? I said that nothing will work out - and it happened. What to do now?
- Valya, do not worry so. Everything is in order - the plan worked. Well, do you want, we will go to him right now and settle this matter, so to speak, amicably?
- I do not understand. You said he promises to be silent. And he did not agree. And I said so. And you say - the plan worked. How is it, explain ...
- Well, you clever - all correctly said. Only if he agreed, the plan, I fear, would have failed. Because it would not hurt him to break his promise. And now we have a trump card that we can present to him. If you want, right now. Are you ready?
Valka nodded. The sooner you finish this thing, the better. She did not really understand what kind of trump speech, but Simon spoke so confidently that she decided to trust him.
“Call him, tell me what you thought and decided to come today,” he ordered, “just do not say that you will not be alone.”
She called. Fedka seemed surprised, but agreed to postpone the meeting, asking for half an hour to prepare. The delay was very useful for them - after all, in solving her problem, they did not have time to eat. Then the waiter arrived just in time with the finished order.
Having completed the meal, they left the cafe and on foot went on a "date" with the villain. For some time they walked in silence. Valka wanted to ask Semyon what kind of mysterious trump he wanted to use against her classmate, but did not want to stop him from thinking. In the end, curiosity won out, and she asked her question. In response, Simon asked her for a mobile phone. And then she understood.
This story is a pure fantasy of the author, all the coincidences of names, events and other things are random and have no real basis.
© Crazy Grunt 2014—2015
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The story of the documentary is not bad. Although not enough more detailed description of the body of the girl during the inspection.
The story with Vostryakov somehow is not very good for me. And it's not in femdom, just somehow unreliable, I can not believe.
I hope to be sold.
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Thank. I will try to take into account the desire of readers to read detailed descriptions. It is only important not to overdo it).
Are you sure that this is not femdom? Regarding reliability - there may be different opinions. It happens that such strange events happen in life that they would never have believed it. Like Gaidai, “in the neighboring district, the bridegroom stole ... a party member.” By the way. However, your will, I guess, I agree - it is unreliable. But I still tried to make at least a little believable. Those atrocities that sometimes make the younger generation in life (not only it, of course, but here we are talking about it) are far superior to the easy execution perpetrated by a group of loose girls over the young ruffian. Well, the fact that five or six girls, besides armed with a shocker, can twist their peers, I think, will not cause doubts.
Continuation to write was not going to. In the same topic it is unlikely to work out - my heroine is not inclined to step on a rake twice, and I have not yet begun to master other topics. Thanks again for the comments
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Yes, it seems to me that there is a lack of descriptions for pornography. For example:
“From excitement, the girl's breathing quickened and her young chest heaved violently. The office was cool and the pink nipples crowning her knolls hardened from the coolness of the office, and the skin on the girl's body was covered with pimples ... ”Something like that.
It is a pity that the prody will not. The end is intriguing.
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The ending of the story, inspired by the ending of the first novel by J. Chase, translated into Russian - “Stronger than money” (What’s Better Than Money?), As I thought, is understandable - Semyon records Valka’s conversation with Fedor on the recorder and threatens him with criminal prosecution for frank blackmail (taking into account the difference in the age and experience of these two, such a threat is likely to be effective). The details of this meeting were not very interesting for me, and I omitted them. As for the further fate of the characters, options are possible. , Valeria and Sam Yong will get closer after this story even more, and then they will go to distant lands, where no one knows them and no one can identify the changed image of Valya (Leroux?) in a specific video.Maybe this story will even wake them addicted to certain role-playing games, which they will indulge in together (or maybe in the company of like-minded people). On the other hand, the paths of providence are inscrutable, and the life paths of Seeds and Vali may disperse, and after a while, emboldened Fedka will resume his harassment, or some of her other acquaintances (school? College?) Will take over from him. In any case, it will be a different story.
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Here it is necessary to determine prose with the elements of erotica you write, or pornoroshkaz.
Role playing I adore. It would be interesting to read how Semyon (or Fedor) break her, humiliate her, drive her into the role of slave, disenfranchised, weak-willed. And she suffers from this. But at the same time with suffering, lust overwhelms her (her nipples harden, her pussy is moisturized) and she likes it. Like to be a doll for sexual pleasures, powerless toy with tits, machine-hole to please the Masters. And in this she finds herself.
Yes, and I did not read Chase, sorry :)
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Sorry, the confusion came out again - my answer is in a message dated August 4, 13:50
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Monsieur knows a lot about female names. Valka, Valya (Valentina), but not Lera (Valeria).
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Signor wants to say that Valia is often called Valentin (as well as Valentinov), and Valery is usually shortened to Lehr? I think this thesis can claim to be a discovery in philology. Just kidding Excuse me.
In fact, as soon as our compatriots do not abbreviate the names of the children! Valentine can become Tina, Ribbon, Other, and even Marusia. Lera can be not only Valeria, but also Kaleria. And how to reduce any Valencia or Valkyries, God only knows. I don’t think that the case when her close relatives call Valeria is so exotic. I knew one such woman, although she had nothing to do with this story.
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By the way, here is a possible background. Leroy called her heroine father, before his mysterious disappearance. The mother was so annoyed with this (disappearance) that she even began to call her daughter differently, without changing her documents.
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Good story) Is it possible that the story with Vostryakov did not seem plausible to me, but the author warned that these were fantasies)
And the ending (to me) seems somewhat crumpled ...
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The answer is below. It seems to be a buggy site engine. I press some key combination and fly out of the comment. The “back” button brings me back to the already typed text, but the message does not appear as an answer, but as an independent
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Thank. Perhaps you `re right. Initially, I did not plan to write a femdom episode, this idea arose spontaneously and turned out to be less elaborate in terms of credibility. The meaning of the final I explained in the answer intr. The final itself is really laconic - in fact, the topic has already ended, and I did not want to tire the reader (and myself at the same time) with a long boring epilogue
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It seems to me that many works that brought fame to their creators were written without taking into account the need to follow the rules of one genre. Of course, I do not pretend to world fame, but I think that a rigid framework is not necessary here. However, of course, you can have a different opinion. By the way, I wonder, can you clearly articulate the difference between pornography and erotic prose?
Role playing in life and on paper are different things. You can love one and not love another. I think that the story of “breaking” a newly-born slave is no longer a role-playing game, since the latter implies voluntariness (and at the same time a stop word).I didn't plan to make a slave out of the heroine of this story.
Well, as for Chase, so is God with him. I just remembered where I got the idea from (blackmail - anti-blackmail). I read this novel a long time ago. In those days, besides the classics, it was not much readable - the publication of an interesting book was an event
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"... By the way, I wonder, can you clearly articulate the difference between pornography and erotic prose? ..."
As in the movies, erotica is just a feeling of mild lust, porn is already a member begins to erect and you want to drain the sperm.
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Agree, however, that such a definition is quite subjective. The same text (or episode of the film) causes one person to have a romantic mood, and another - a full erection. And it's not only in their physical condition, but also in their mentality, level of education and culture. Usually erotic is understood as a sublime, ennobling image of the relations of the sexes, while pornography is considered to be an emphasis on base passions, detailed images of the genitals and a detailed description (image) of sexual acts and various so-called. perversions (despite the fact that the very concept of perversion is dictated by the morality prevailing in a given society and changes depending on the place and time). Although this understanding is also vulnerable in the sense of blurring borders, it is still less subjective. However, in life, the sublime and the low are often encountered, and it can be very difficult to separate them. Take, at least, Andreev's "Abyss", which caused a scandal in the literary world of the early 20th century. Why, then, stories on this resource must meet the requirements of the purity of the genre?
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Should not. All that I have said above is my subjective opinion. You don't have to listen to him, you don't have to read him. Nobody owes anything to anyone here (except for the requirements of the administration of the resource).
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