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sure that I rest on the sea ...? In the best case, they will say about me that I am overwhelmed with grief.
“But my love, for three more days!” - the woman begged: - If you need rest, we will part, but a little later. Say in half an hour?
- And you believe in what you say? - A young man asked her with a smile.
“Well in an hour,” said the countess, exposing his shoulder and dropping her lips to him.
“And you hope to quench your passion in just an hour?”
“I danced all night, and therefore in an hour I will simply fall exhausted,” the woman frankly answered, shifting her caresses to the other shoulder.
“Well, I slept well, and in an hour I would just break up,” said the young man, starting to free a woman from her dress.
“And you, my boy,” the woman answered him, freeing himself from his arms: “Do not let go. I will delight you, and you will lie motionless. And so that your imagination is not too inflamed, I will remain dressed. Even, perhaps, I will put on a veil so that you cannot see my face. Imagine you are lying, and you are a fully dressed woman. And you do not even know - maybe she is ugly?
“My beloved, but that has already happened,” the young man remarked.
- How? And with a veil?
- And with a veil, - the young man confirmed: - It was when ...
- Stop! Do not continue further! - exclaimed a woman gripped by memories: - So. I promised you that I will not repeat? So now think of something ...
“I have already invented it,” said the young man, and, responding to the goggled feminine gaze, continued: “Countess, once again I dare to remind you of my love, so that the rest will not seem audacious to you. I ask you to take into account that your passion, when it wakes up in you (and it seems to me that it does not fall asleep), - with this remark, the woman smiled rather: - Makes you unbridled, completely resist taming (you yourself know what to the one who got into your arms at such a moment). But, as we have already decided, today you should not bore me ...
- My dear, I promise you ...
- Yes, and then they deigned to push me down, - the young man remarked to her: - And in the most unceremonious manner. I can not resist the lady.
“It wouldn’t be enough for you to resist,” the woman said with a laugh.
- That's exactly why I want to offer you ... And this has never happened between us ... No, I even insist on it ...
- Well, so what?
- I wish that you could not take possession of me just like now.
- It's easy. I promise ...
- And in a fit of passion, forget how it was already.
- But you liked it?
- But now I would like to have another.
- So what?
- I want ..., - he deliberately made pauses between the words, and therefore they seemed to sound with some magical power: - That you were ... connected.
In a moment the woman recoiled from him.
“Leave your desires with you, sir,” she exclaimed with anger.
The young man looked so bewildered that the countess took pity on him.
“Listen, Etienne,” she said: “Let's not spoil our relationship on the last, perhaps, day.” Let's assume you didn't say anything?
- Countess, you yourself told me that the most important thing in our relationship is mutual understanding. Remember how you warned me (and more than once) “if something is wrong, let's discuss it right now.” Now I am telling you this (I think I have the right to do this). Let's discuss it now.
“Well, my boy,” said the Countess, sitting down on the bed again: “Since you insist so ...”
- You do not believe that I love you?
- From what? I believe.
- Then trust me ...
“Listen, I will tell you,” the countess interrupted him, putting her hand to his lips: “If it is not enough that I was kneeling in front of you, I am ready to offer you more.” Do you want me to dress as a servant, and give myself to you as a commoner? You can fully enjoy your power and my humiliation.
- I did not expect such words from you, - said the young man: - Such reproaches. To have power over you - yes.But not in order to humiliate, no. I long to caress you. I studied this science under your guidance by studying your body, but I have never been able to realize everything that has been studied, because every time you took the upper hand. Now I want to deprive you of such an opportunity, so that you can only enjoy my caresses. That's why I want to tie you up.
“But I ...” answered the countess in confusion: “Understand me, my friend, because I never allowed anyone and did not think that I would allow that.” You ask too much.
- Of course, - the young man answered in his turn: - After all, I ask - you.
- I do not know. I would like to, but I can not decide.
- Trust me.
- But ... how do you imagine it?
- Very simple. I will tie your hands behind your back - and he folded the woman’s arms, showing her how, and kissed her: “That will be enough,” he said.
- And nothing more? Asked the countess cautiously.
“I told you, trust me.”
- But my clothes?
- I will undress you with pleasure myself.
“But if my hands are tied?”
“Then we will have to undress you a little now, then I will bind you and, when you are already in my power, I will continue.”
He helped the woman, and when her shoulders and chest were already exposed, he tied her hands behind her back. He did this with extreme caution, wondering if the knots were too tight. (Especially for eroticspace.info — sexitail.ru) The voice that answered him sounded duller and duller every time. Finally he finished, and, bypassing the countess, found himself face to face with her beloved. A proud woman looked completely unhappy.
“Etienne, I implore you,” she whispered, her voice breaking in fear: “You aren't doing anything wrong with me, are you?”
- I do not understand you, my love, - the young man was surprised: - What can I do wrong with you?
- How what? All that I expect from you, of course. And I expect a lot from you. And, since you have finished all the preparations, let's quickly move on to all this bad ...
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Written beautifully. But, not only is there no end here, but rather the opposite, everything is just beginning. I am wrong?
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Why continue? Let the reader better speculate himself, and the story will remain in the category of "Romance"
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Nuuu, I still don't see romance here :)) I'm sorry! It seems that everything starts more or less RELATED to romance, and then - if DOMING is another category :)) Yes, and I don’t feel like thinking. Not enough "raisins" in the characters.
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Hello Cat! You have probably already noticed that I comment mainly on the stories of the local rude "gurus" who write "masterpieces." You, I do not belong to this category. I do not venture to comment your stories. The first did not read, I do not accept violence, and the second? Probably I liked the second one, but there is nothing to think about or not, everything must be thought out. Are you tired of writing? You were afraid to spoil everything further developments? Imagine you get in a taxi, and the chief gives you the steering wheel. And if you do not know the road, or do not know how to drive at all. And he says that the car is in good condition, the tank is full and even the ignition is on. You are cruel to the reader. This is my personal opinion, not a theory, and of course, not an axiom. As for the Pornograph, this is a pompous peacock. He is not a polyglot. He had pierced several times already. (As for Latin and Greek. According to Cerberus, Yandex gives 600 thousand results. According to Kerber, 500 thousand. Quite equivalent) I immediately had a version about the Internet, and here he confessed in plain text. Maybe he is a philologist, maybe a philosopher, maybe he attended a literary circle. It does not matter. He is modest, shy, unsure of himself and does not know life at all. He likes the attention. The best way to deal with it is to ignore what you brilliantly did in Alinka's comments. Something like this.
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Pornographer strongly presses that he is a reader here from the foundation of the resource. Yes, there are plenty of us like this (even if I really do not have time to be a regular reader - where does the Pornographer find him? Is he unemployed?) - but the main thing is that we don’t put pressure on other authors. And he - puts pressure on everyone, especially on beginners, carping over trifles - and this already looks like intellectual rudeness
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No, I'm not tired of writing. It's just a story from the category of romantic for women - you know, just one where the action breaks off at the most interesting place, and the lady reader speaks coyly "ah" and blush :-) Composed specifically for this category of readers, and as experiments with such readers, he satisfied them completely - they really do not need more details, they think so much by hints ... Not all women are like that, not at all. But some with a particularly perverse fantasy - yes. I specifically emphasize here a particularly perverted fantasy. Which, by the way, completely accepts violence and even in very cruel forms - and with respect to itself (almost with joy). That was my first wife and some of her friends.
You are a direct person, you may not understand this. You know, I have some other fairy tales for adults. True, I am not sure that you will like them, but still, if there is a desire, take a look at these links:
https://hansbosch.com/private/rebel.html
https://hansbosch.com/private/PalaceDarkElves.html
https://hansbosch.com/private/orcwoman.html
All this has been written for a long time, because it was not laid out here (the rules of eroticspace prohibit laying out what was already laid out somewhere). But I wanted to write these fairy tales as I wrote them. And they had their enthusiastic readers (including one professor of Oriental studies, well-known in the Russian Internet). That give me hope to consider them as a whole relatively successful. In general, if they are not in your taste, then at least they will still be able to entertain you a little.
Separately about the Pornograph. As my father told me more than once, “there is a difference between criticism and criticism.” How many authors he had already hurt here with his cavils - and the mountain itself ... gave birth to a mouse. And now everyone can look at his own stories and see how the person showed himself ;-)
And now there are two magic spells against Pornographer: “Cerberus” and “Postmodernism” - tell them when you meet him and he will appear again in all its glory, like the peacock you mentioned: -)
Just the case when a man in the army did not serve, so he does not understand the simple truths (which now exposes himself as a clown). By the way, on this occasion a case comes to my mind, with one of my colleagues, during his cadetism — but more about that another time
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I am just a woman VERY ROMANTIC :)) But I didn’t touch me, I don’t want to speculate, either.
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So the author turned out to be more romantic than you :-)
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Apparently, if she can see romance in something strange :)
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If you are interested, the images are written off from real people, only transferred to the last century.
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Yes you?! Well, maybe, but still not romance :))) I myself quite well perceive the story. I am confused by the category. I advise you to change it, and everything will be fine.
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At the top of the page on the left are listed all the categories that are on this site - which one should be changed?
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Fantasies :)) People will think at least the execution, even the submission and humiliation. After all, it is not clear - maybe the hero is now LOWERING the heroine :)) Yes, in fact, at least he can do anything, just not romantic to love.
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Then the “raisins” will be, since no one will look for romance in the characters :))
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I agree, romance does not smell here.
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Good evening Cat! I will surely read your fairy tales and accomplish your goal, I promise.
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Cat, this is gorgeous! Do not add, do not subtract a single word! to tell you honestly mentally a dozen times went from dialogue to action and every time, with surprise, I found out that I had mistaken the prediction of the plot. This is a unique description of bed passion, separated from lust! Very inspired!
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And yet, not everyone likes this story, as evidenced by a very mediocre assessment. But I wrote it that way. And I am glad that there are those who liked this story - it means that it was not for nothing that I wrote, since this made it even more fun for someone to live
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You're right)))
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I did not like this story at all.
But your stories listed on the links, did not leave indifferent. Thanks for them.
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