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! - Once again the man asked.
- But she can not answer? - The maid tried to explain. The poor unspoiled girl took everything at face value.
- I do not care, maybe or can not! - said the man and hit his fist on ... by what hit. The pain has echoed all over the stomach and a groan escaped from the member’s throat, “If I told you to ask, you ask.” If you do not answer - therefore, nothing is required. And if so, then there is nothing to waste time. I'm waiting for you. Quickly my tea and knife.
Heels pounded quickly, quickly. A lover suddenly gently clung to her there below. He caressed her, and she felt strung on both sides. Or in both holes. She was now ready to be a hole for him. Or a set of 3 holes. As he wishes.
And she almost resented that he had suddenly become so gentle with her. So neat. So gently touches and caresses - when it's time to just use. She is only a body designed to satisfy him, and he should not show the slightest indulgence to her.
- Sir, - a girlish voice rang out: - Here, I brought everything you asked for.
- BUT! - he broke away from her pussy and sat down, so much so that he advanced the dick even deeper, although a moment before that she was sure that there was nowhere else to go: - So, come here. Yes, not all at once. But first a knife ... And where would I shove it? Yes, here I will stick it, - and he stuck it right in front of him into a woman's stomach. The maid's eyes widened in horror, but he did not notice it, he continued: “Well, come on here with my tea.”
With trembling hands, the girl held out a saucer, on which stood a cup. The victim heard the china jingle. And even had time to think: “Now also tea will spill”
How exactly it happened. Boiling water scalded her entire crotch. The pain was worse and worse than anything that had been experienced during that night. She could no longer scream, and the body, it seemed, would no longer respond. And only the voice came:
- Well, cheered the girl. And then lay down and drag, and she forgets to deliver pleasure. Yes, by the way, - the voice seemed to float off somewhere to the side: - Do you look like she is there, in the mind at all?
The heels began to knock again and female legs appeared before her eyes. This time the girl's face approached her. “Poor scared girl,” thought the unfortunate victim. She tried to smile, but it was not easy with a cock in her mouth. The girl recoiled in fear:
- Sir, she ...
“He’s still moving, I know,” he calmly interrupted her: “You can rest for now.” Then I'll call you, clean up here. For now go.
When the heels retired, he stroked his wife's hips and told her:
- Well, my love, today you quite pleased me. Only a trifle remains and I will let you enjoy. I will pour into your throat, everything will be as you love. But, in fact in your pizdenochka something was stuck isn't it? And we can't leave it there. Need to pull out, but how? So, my dear, you can suck, and while I barely suck your lips - there. Maybe then get to extract, without causing you serious damage?
Oh, yes, that was what she needed now — his sperm. Delicious, hot, even sweet. Her biggest sweetness. And all that he demanded for it from her is to sacrifice his cunt? Yes, after she had already lost her breasts today, it was utter nonsense.
And she began to suck.
The first incision slid down her thigh from the inside.
“Sorry, honey, just checking to see if the knife is well sharpened.”
Of course, he can check whatever he wants. And how he wants. Suck, suck even more enthusiastically!
The second cut. He seems to be doing something with her hips there ... maybe cutting off pieces of meat? It's funny, you need to quickly suck so as not to miss the most interesting. Yes, she herself was already interested in seeing how he carves it.
- What are your juicy lips here? How I loved to kiss them. But now, alas, I am too inexperienced a surgeon, and only rags are left of them.
She started up in earnest. Faster, pull in.
- And here is your clitoris ...
She dug into it.And the sperm gushed into her throat, there deep. She did not feel the taste, he could be anything now, but how sweet she was.
Then she recovered a little. Dick, already slightly softened, crawled out of her mouth. She drew him with her lips to the last, but finally he left them with a loud smacking sound.
And both of them — the torturer and the victim — laughed.
He sat down at her feet spread. She found the strength to lift her head. Oh yes, he tore skin from her beautiful hips in some places. And what's up with pussy?
- Do you wanna take a look? He asked her.
“Yes,” she answered as simply as if it was a question of something completely ordinary, like a new intimate haircut.
He supported her under the shoulders, he helped half. There was a knife wound in her stomach. The lower jaws were crushed. The clitoris is excised. But something has not yet been completed.
- And the club? She asked.
“I knew you would ask,” he grinned. As if there were other options and she would say "Nonsense, leave it there."
They laughed again.
- Well, my girl, my favorite, I am glad that you have a good mood. But just one more thing, ok?
“Of course,” she agreed easily. “I always agree.” I have such a failsafe.
- That's great. See this knife?
- Wow! Yes, this is a whole saw! Good thing I didn’t see what you chop me with.
- Now you see. Come on?
- Well, come on, - she agreed cautiously: - Only, mind you, not teeth?
“But who cares about your opinion,” he snapped. And thrust a knife into her pussy.
She screamed. Not so much from pain as from horror. And he turned the knife inside her and led him higher and higher, ripping open his stomach. Terrible teeth tore the tender female flesh. Then he dropped the knife and clutched the edges of the wound with both hands. And broke it. He pulled out guts and dumped them on her body.
“I have long wanted to do this, honey,” he smiled.
- Ooh yeah. I am shocked ... - she answered, looking at her own torn body: - How do I look at all?
- Amazing! It would have fucked you, but I do not want to break such an idyllic picture. Lie so, my love, and do not move. Sorry, I'm not an artist, you would have to capture.
“Only this picture cannot be shown to anyone,” she cooled off his fantasies: “Dear, people will not understand.”
- Yes I know. But now I do not care about them. Only up to you. And that's what I'll do with you.
He climbed beside her and directed his hose to her body. There was a murmur and urine splashed on her wounds. She laughed and threw back her head, waiting for those splashes that would surely fly into her mouth - and the expectations came true. She continued to recline, leaning on her elbows, when he pulled a club out of her wide open gut and with all his strength sucked her on the jaw.
Then he threw the baton at the limply wilted female body and, not embarrassed by its nudity, walked away.
At the door, as he had expected, he caught the hand of a maid.
“I ... You ... But ...” she began to cry.
“Go clean up there,” he said firmly, looking her straight in the eyes.
She did not dare to disobey. But as soon as she stepped under the gloomy vaults, she rushed backward like a headlong rush. And again she was in his hands:
- Sir, I beg you, do not! - but he did not let her go and was silent: - But you killed her! She is dead?
“Stupid, what are you saying,” he said tenderly, and stroked the silly head: “She has not been alive for a long time.” Have you forgotten?
“Oh, I'm sorry, sir,” the girl sobbed: “I really forgot.” When she stirred ...
- You see now! All is well, she is already recovering. Go help her. And then, ha-ha, she herself will find it a bit difficult to collect her guts, - but, noticing that the poor thing is not in such a condition to appreciate the subtle humor of his joke, he added softly: - Well, go on!
With another sob, the girl entered the mausoleum. He stood a little longer at the door, listening to the voices. In the quiet of the night, reflecting from the walls of the castle courtyard, they were heard quite clearly:
- Sorry, madam. I just can't get used to ...
- What are you, girl. I myself can not get used. Please help me, not my wounds will heal until the next full moon.
He breathed the coolness of the night air and enjoyed life. It is good, however, to have a vampire wife.
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Oh, you fucking ... bue, how disgusting> :( would kill this man and feed his remains to cockroaches.
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g ... about the story ... the author in a mental hospital ... !!!
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Nightmare! It is an honest sadism! I read one page and I want to puke! In addition to disgust, no emotions can be experienced! In my opinion, the author has very big mental problems! Fu !!!
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I apologize to all those who were shocked by the tale. But - there, after all, at the very beginning it is written that she is cruel, isn't she? And related to the relevant categories ...
So why do you spoil your mood by getting into those categories of stories that obviously cause you irritation?
However, in order to improve, I promise someday to post my more decent tales here. Now they are on another site.
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End pleased)))) But still tough.
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Awesome story
Very interesting what is waiting for the heroes next?
And will there be a sequel?
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In general, there is an idea to continue. But if the public reacts to the first fairy tale ...
Although, my wife found it even funny. But it’s in fact full of stories where the vampire commanders - and then the opposite, the vampire masochist. In fact, what's stopping her? She is immortal ;-)
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Oh my God. How annoying people are to come here to write an angry comment with their unnecessary, subjective, unprincipled opinion.
THE COCOCOKO OF THE AUTHOR IN A PSYCHUS WOULD KILL.
On the topic, the story is good, except for the porn itself, it is clear that the author is not a spermotoxic student and writes diligently. From me, plus. I'll wait for more.
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For example, I liked the first one and a half pages, but further and the truth is too much.
Category as a category, but if you, dear author, describe in your story the infliction of fatal injuries to your partner (even if it is your idea that it suddenly turns out to be safe), such creativity should be included among other things in the category of strangeness or the rest. I, for example, in that case would not read and would not be distressed by the bloody details drawn by the imagination.
But the idea is really interesting, it is a fact!
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In my defense, I can only say that, honestly, I wanted to do just that. But, for some unknown reason, after selecting 4 categories, the site did not allow me to choose another one. Why so, I do not know. Perhaps it was just some random temporary failure and I just had no luck: - (And more about the categories:
Personally, it seems to me unclear the purpose of the category “The Rest” - this is, by definition, anything can be, including quite innocent things. And if you really talk very strictly, then the category of “Weirdness” is not quite specific. That is why, being forced to choose only 4 categories for my story, I chose those that I chose, and not some other.
I promise, the next story does not shock anyone
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Creepy
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Go ahead! In the spirit of the first two honors!
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Read it. I do not even know how to formulate more accurately ... In order:
Minuses:
- You definitely went too far. This kind of porn as you described, I certainly saw the case ... But you describe how to say it ... A lot of cruelty and little eroticism. That is, the share of cruelty must be “topped up” with eroticism and sex so that excitement flashes along with disgust. And you get out in places that just dude wife "fucked" (sorry for the expression) - believe me, this is definitely too much!
- The plot is undoubtedly there, especially the ending. (I liked it) But is she some kind of “acquittal” or something? As if you are hiding behind it, saying that, well, guys, it was certainly harsh, but that’s how it should be ... Work on the plot more.10% of the story is the plot and 90% just he rolls it ... It will not work.
Of the benefits:
- Everything is written very competently, as for me. It is read very easily in principle. And this is an obvious “+” - this means that you can write something really cool. If it were the other way around, it would be sadder.
- Dialogues are not bad. I liked but again - the words are beautifully chosen but emotions are not enough. Add them - revive the story.
You asked what is the difference between what I write and you: I have everything completely based on the plot and just great emotionality! This is a trump card. The heroes of my stories are practically all tantrums and mentally ill in something))) But I write almost disgustingly, just as the author ...)) Stylistically, everything is wrong. So it turns out that everything is exactly the opposite.
Be sure to write more - just think up a cool storyline. And with the execution you can roll a lot of things)) Ta trolling do not pay attention, but still listen. My “Writer” was also craped out - it’s written: the plot is not original, the story didn’t catch))) Well, if this isn’t hooked, I’ll probably go and invent something about aliens ...) Good luck.
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Zoi, please do not slander yourself! You write beautifully exactly as AUTHOR. Of course, flaws can be found at all :) But still ...
This story - I don’t even know how to say ... I saw “Old”, but didn’t understand - for what it all :)) Although it’s written well. I was very scared.
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I apologize to the author ... but I didn’t have enough strength to finish reading ... the legs shook ... on the stage with the cutting, I just trembled like an aspen fox ... being a man of fantasy, go through what I read and feel the hard way ( even at the level of consciousness) it was beyond my powers ... scary ... eerie ... beautiful, young ... and I got caught up with such a rapist ... who killed everything in one night ...
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Yes, this is a terrible tale in the middle - but the truth is, everything is good at the end. So, apparently it was necessary to just immediately look at the end. Nobody died there.
And in order to cheer up a little, read my story “Secular Love” - there is no violence, only romance
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For some reason, people who write like this are maniacs. Or mentally ill.
Tell me, pzhst, dear author, you are probably not a maniac, but an ordinary person with a normal, seemingly life?
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No, not private, but an officer (retired, if you are interested). Accordingly, it is fully fit for the drill, including the mentally the same (and if you knew how many of these medical commissions I went through in my life - so the medical error is absolutely excluded). And my life is not so completely ordinary, at least at times ;-)
And the idea of this fairy tale very much pleased me and my wife and even my mistress the same. Probably because the stories where the vampires are dominant have rather become boring as a hackneyed topic. But the vampire masochist is, if you like, even somewhat amusing. After all, what will she have?
Why should dark force necessarily torment someone? This is illogical, do not you find?
As it was there, at Dr. Faust: “After all, we are not playing out of money — only to spend an eternity.” However, if you have not read Goethe, then these lines are unlikely to remind you of something — well, read it sometime at your leisure it is very entertaining. And honestly, much more interesting than my story.
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Thanks for the answer.
It was very interesting to learn a little more about you. That there is a wife and a lover - it certainly pleases, because it is not at all like the life of a maniac :)))
As for the concept of a vampire-masochist, then everything could be just fine if you told this interesting fact right at the beginning of the story. Then the reader would be easier to cope with the thought of all the torments that are happening to her.
I, as an experienced viewer of vampire films, completely do not react to the injuries occurring on the screen that happen to vampires.
But the very thought that what you described could have happened to some person leads to indescribable horror.
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I assure you that if I did, as you advise, you would be disappointed. I would have had tons of reproaches like “Vampire and masochist - where is realism?” (Just how vampires are real, evil critics would not pay attention).
The whole point is that it is a п parody_ ’to the horror genre, but the parody is tricky, copying their techniques to the very end ... and suddenly, instead of the inevitable guillotine blade, the trusting reader (who has already tried everything on himself) collapses the dusty bag and clown giggles behind your back. So you understand this and therefore are very angry at the clown (that is, the humble author of this story) ;-)
To make amends for this dusty bag, I suggest reading my other tales. True, they are old, so they did not lay out here (the rules of this resource prohibit laying out things already laid out somewhere).
But if you like, you can find something interesting for yourself at the link:
http: //hansbosch.cpm/private
By the way, there are also some articles of my wife on historical topics. It is possible that you will be interested to get acquainted with this side of our interests with it.
And of course, we are always open for communication. Our mail:
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I am sorry, it was sealed up - the correct link to our page:
https://hansbosch.com/private
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Valeria, the mentally ill are those that are implemented in practice. Although ... if some elements like two partners, why not.
And those who read this, can also be attributed to the mentally ill?
Fuck, I'm unwell along the way ...)))
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Healthy! Healthy as a bull ... uh, it's to blame, you're a woman, so healthy as ... Ops, sorry. Well, in short, you are healthy, just read it in the morning of my unhealthy stories
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Thank you for the bedtime story.
Experienced fans of fantasy from the first lines, about ideal forms, were initially suspected that the creation was not simple ... That is why reading was interesting and fascinating, thanks to the author once again. There is something to learn ..
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I have been looking for something similar after “Yulenka” for a long time. The author, thank you very much. write more. There is not too much. Although in some moments like parts. But one of the best sadistic works read by me. Written beautifully. No mat, what a big plus. Write also listen to no one. If they do not want, then let them not read.
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in defense of the author!
indeed, they warned everyone from the start. about the realism of speech did not go and the author warned. To be honest, I understood the alignment of things somewhere in the second - third paragraph. the only question remained was which of the immortal creatures would the author introduce the heroine.
Honestly - I'm against the chosen creature, for one idiomatic reason - vampires and blowjobs are not compatible. Plus, the possibility of executions is much wider, although you can always write a sequel)) (I understand that the main idea is emphasized from the blade - also had a couple of ideas on this subject) Author, you will not be understood by the masses, but you will appreciate the narrow circle of admirers, I say that as a man who has known such persecutions in his own skin.
at the estimate, I put 10, to maintain the direction, but objectively - 9.
h s. perhaps we should turn to the administration with a proposal to allocate a separate item for such stories, something like “sadistic tales” or just “tin”
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With both hands for the introduction of the category of stories "tin"! Or you have to go from here to another site (more specific).
But about the fact that vampires are not compatible with a blowjob - not at all! Actually, the idea was not suggested to me by the “blade” (I did not bother to look at it), but the memories from army youth — the comrade then very soulfully told what pleasant impressions he was given by a blowjob from one walking girl who had a pair of upper front teeth missing — and in the customers of this girl was not. So as far as physiology is concerned, here the main coincidence of the distances between the canines and the diameter of the penis. Von girls make their jaws vampire and have fun to the fullest, including blowjob.
From the point of view of the esoteric, sperm is closely related to blood. And - here we turn to the work of Prattchet, he has there in his Flat World a league of tied vampires. Now we’ll supplement this with the idea of Makkaviti about falling and elevation - it is obvious that vampirism will become a dark gift, if you follow it, that not every vampire can like (well, if only because such a gift always has many unpleasant backsides).
And now look at my heroine. She is primarily a woman, she wants to give herself to her lover. Well, he likes her. The fact that he causes her torment - she likes. And instead of blood, she consumes his sperm and thus supports her strength without harming anyone.
The continuation was conceived, but at first I was discouraged by the reaction of the public, and then there was no time - but I did not abandon this idea, and as soon as I find time and mood, I will write
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I am a supporter of Stoker’s classic vampirism school, where the animal power of blood over vamps is great, that Dracula himself with great difficulty resisted when he first met Velgelmina. As an expert in this field, I would advise you to choose for subsequent stories, a creature more intricate in its history and physiology than vampires! I hope that the behavior of these creatures will not be dictated by the Twilight film or the series of Vapir diaries in the stories of current or future authors.
A cat, if you are ready to follow my advice on changing the race of the main character, or if you have any questions about vampyrology, I will help you with pleasure, I will also understand the position that you adhere to when writing the following stories
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I am not an expert on vampires :-) Twilight and others do not look, for there is simply no time. My main interest is the real story, and in it the vampires are somehow weakly developed :-)
But 10 years ago (and maybe more, I don’t remember exactly), when I got acquainted with the theory of Makkaviti, I liked it because of its logic. Actually, she considers not only vampires, but any characters subject to the Fall, as a result of a conscious choice or combination of circumstances. As a counterbalance to the Fall, the theory allows for the character Elevation (although the Elevation process was then considered in it only in the most general terms). It is on these considerations that I relied.
Attached to vampires, this just means that until the stage when the animal power of blood becomes insurmountable, there are milder stages that still have a chance to hold on. Ultimately, the perverse enjoyment of one's own pain can provide powerful forces to resist a fall — instead, eternal life and beauty. Not a bad exchange for an exalted lady ;-)
The fact that my views on vampires are significantly different from the classic - I know. I chose vampires from Warhammer as a model (as lightweight as possible) for classics - yes, it looks primitive compared to real vampire classics, but I liked the game itself (I mean the board game, as well as its reduced version under called “Mordheim”, which at one time enjoyed playing and even wrote tales for each game, so the cycle turned out) and the fact that the vampires in it were not super-creatures - besides them there were plenty of other heroes who represented vampires are sometimes pretty gray oznuyu threat (particularly interesting it seemed to "Mordheim").In short, the world of Warhammer is balanced - and rightly so.
But the fact that I have imagined has nothing to do with Warhammer. This is just a fantasy.
However, I am really interested in what race I could replace my vampire? Dark elf does not offer - will not survive! Yes, and the goals of the dark elves are definitely different (the same elf SS!) So I just do not see an alternative
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glad to see...)
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I was exhilarated ... probably it was just such a hard reading that the sutra was too early for me and was not enough ... In principle, it is very disturbing only if you don’t forget that the main characters are vampires, not people, but it really becomes weird when reading scenes with rips ...
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At first, the reaction of the public was cold, but now, I look and think - but not to write a sequel? What do you think - need? or abstain?
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Write ... to be continued ... and then the maid there is somehow not fully involved ...
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In the continuation will be involved, and even as, so this I can promise you
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A cat, and here is the idea that came to me - what if done, something like the arrangement of a ball from the “master and margarita” with the theme of rebirth and elevation. That is the same castle, tezhe characters, plus new ones, and here it may be those whom we discussed, and all this is a sadomaso orgy for cleansing. Here the style in which “secular love” is written would be very useful. Try to combine it and do not be afraid to gesture.
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Here you set the task! Yes, if I only think about attempting to "The Master and Margarita" (on the sacred!) But they will betray me at once (and say instructively "Don't Zamany" - most likely this will complete the gravestone speech over my grave: - 0)
But if I do it again, and as you propose, it’s necessary to be a genius so that ...
But I didn’t say no; -)
I was thinking about something like that - just not right away. Just not right away. Here I still need to think thoroughly
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Definitely not an arrangement ... cooler Bulgakov will not work anyway ... but something like that ... will really be overwhelming ... Cat, think, think ...
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Most likely it will not be like Bulgakov. And even perhaps nothing at all. But for now this is not a final decision. So even as a result I will not even know myself. I do not know how to extort a plot - but suddenly everything happens in a clear picture and then all that remains is to write down
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Well, you can do all this in a veiled way, that is, without obvious references and undeniable facts, but so that the thought would creep in that the main local characters are the very ones ... I confess that I myself like to use this trick. One kind of not very noticeable phrase here, a little fact, there, and a shrewd reader will notice, compare - usually people like the fact that they have been given the opportunity to feel like deep-minded readers. Our rockers like to use this technique. For example, an aria has two-thirds of the songs, these are rhymed descriptions of films, books, or events. The same banal "kalizei", because without a small insert in the middle is just a song about gladiator fights, but with it this is a retelling of the movie "Gladiator". Or "burning arrow" - just a retelling of the film, though I do not remember what it is called (not "under siege 2"))), it seems there was Tom Lee Jones. And “farewell to the nordfolk” is about the first use of chemical weapons, in 1915 the Fritz tried to travane the British with chlorine, and it was just under the village of Nordfolk.
Something I suffered in some unnecessary details ... In short, do not write in big letters "Begimot" and those who still guess, I think, will be satisfied.
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"Aria" - holy, on Zamay! :-) My wife plays almost all of the bass lines from Aria, I have a chair at home, on which sat the only twice Aryan, Maxim Lvovich Udalov. According to him, my children climbed, like a tree! Here!
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Well, I don’t pretend I don’t blame anything and I myself am guilty of the same))
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The ending is just awesome! Bravo!
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