- Old friend
- Old friend. Part 2
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nose and closed her eyes.
Victor hit very hard. Buzzing her face in the pillow, the woman tried her best to drown out her screams.
The very first blow forced Irina to bring her legs together. He ordered them apart. The second forced to catch the air with his mouth, the third to make an attempt to wipe the sore spot with his hands.
“Silly cunt, you've just earned five more hits.”
And he started his account.
She moaned louder. The belt now and then whistled over her.
After the 24th strike, when Irina was already hoping for the end of the execution, with the 25th stroke, he hit her right on the vagina, so she squeezed from the pain and immediately cramped her legs. Crying, he turned it over on his back and ordered her legs apart.
- Get ready, I will ebashit right on pussy.
Now he purposefully hit the lips of the vagina, so Irina just howled in pain. After four more blows to the crotch, he placed the strap in front of her face.
- Thank him.
Crying softly, with tears running down her cheeks, she reached out on her elbows and kissed the black skin in several places.
“Thank you,” she whispered. - Thanks.
It was all over.
- Have a drink?
Irina did not even understand at first what was being asked of her.
- What... ? Drink up? She sobbed after a few seconds.
- Are you completely stupid? Booze do you have
Irina ran her hand over her eyes.
- There is nothing...
- Forward to the store, buy vodka, yes livelier ...
And after a second after hurried Irina added:
- Do you still have that dress? Well, what I gave you?
Irina entered the bathroom and stood over the sink. I looked at my reflection in the mirror and seemed to see myself, a girl seven years younger — her hair was disheveled, tangled and stuck out in different directions, her face was wet with tears and snot, black mascara, spread around red eyes, scarlet lipstick was smeared around lips Every part of her body ached from the strain. Traces of the belt burned with fire. The red-striped buttocks contrasted sharply with intact hips and back. Bruises and bruises from feeling, squeezing and hitting were as red as the bum, tender nipples, systematically twisted and squeezed, were inflamed, but hard and sharp. Juices flowed from her battered and swollen vagina.
For all the past seven years, she has not experienced sensations more than on this one day. Sex was enjoyable, but it was never like a wild jump, a storm, an explosion, a volcanic eruption. And she did not want more. Until I met Victor again. And once again I didn’t feel how my head was spinning from a sharp mixture of feelings, where there was pain, pleasure, shame and an electrifying feeling in the lower abdomen. Right at that moment Irina felt an incredible desire to put a finger down between her legs and touch herself.
Standing, Ira continued to look at herself in the mirror.
By the age of 30, she looked like she was at twenty. The age when I met with Victor. But what will happen in 10, 15 years? Of course, she still remains attractive and desirable. But it will definitely not be the same as she saw herself in the reflection. Interesting, - the woman thought, considering her body covered with marks from the belt, hands, teeth: - if our meeting did not happen today, but in fifteen years, would he decorate me as well?
The woman quickly turned on the cold water, bent down and began to rinse her face. Having washed and put her hair in order, she went out into the corridor, looked into the wardrobe and began to dress hastily.
“You look great,” Victor, lounging, lying naked on Irina’s matrimonial bed, was eating grapes brought along with other fruits. He looked pleased and majestic.Through the open bedroom door, he watched at the same time the hallway where the woman was dressed, and watched what was happening on the TV screen. At the request of a man, Ira found a disc with a porn movie and put it in a player. Oddly enough the movie was tough. - But no, wait. For whores you have too many clothes. You don't want to break my rules anymore, do you?
Ira hesitated. He looked at her expressively. Leaning down, the woman quickly pulled off her thin lace panties, blushed and hurried to give them to Victor. She suddenly realized that she was worried about this shameful situation, she was involved in their long-standing game and was looking forward to the continuation with interest. She fell to her knees, buried her face in his legs.
- Forgive Vit. I forgot...
Three kisses were supposed to each of his legs.
- Here you go. It seems that now everything is as it should be in a whore - the man, laughing, crumpled the damp cloth into a ball and then put the women's panties to his nose, took a deep breath.
- You do not like something?
- All good...
- Don't forget the cigarettes. And further. Lavuha today I need, take off.
Hurriedly gathering, taking a plastic card from the bedroom, Irina shod herself, grabbed her handbag along with the keys, jumped out of the house and, banging her heels, ran to the store.
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This scum is right in one thing: a stupid lustful bitch this woman, the story is not so much started as in disgust drove.
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Agree. Absolutely
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Norm story, go on !!!
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the author has a passive homosexual complex hike. And this fagot from the story, I would ebashil to death
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waiting for the continuation, cool story
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... I wanted to puke ... why does any scum in such stories constantly win? the author has forgotten that he himself may be in THIS place, or his children ... the work should not only excite, but also teach and give direction in the RIGHT sex education, and not describe how good it is to be a criminal and a geek
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I agree, definitely!
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story shit
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The story, of course, is not bad written, but somehow it’s all too much ... It’s too messy, and the dirt isn’t that in 99% of the fantasies that are here, but some kind of too nasty and bawdy. In short, this story, apart from disgust, did not cause more H & H E G O !!!
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For just one thing everywhere, you need to pussy the author pissing rags ...
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1. Everything is set out in a beautiful literary language.
2. both images in their contrast: beauty and the monster, turned out bright, interesting, realistic.
3. the whole indignant public: there are genres everywhere, and there are lovers for any genre. There are good children's fairy tales, there are films of Tarantino. The fact that hard porn has a place to be, and like millions of people, is a fact. The fact that millions of people don't like hard porn is also a fact. Do not like it, do not read. Personally, the topic of beating and flogging is unpleasant for me, so I stupidly missed such places, which did not prevent me from appreciating other things that I VERY liked.
4. And it is quite naive, ridiculous, opinions about the educational factor of the work, or projections of the characters on real people, look quite hypocritically. Let's not read this story to children, if you have an unhealthy psyche - do not read it yourself, and in any case, do not be like the heroes of this work in real life, but breeding moralism on the basis of porn is utter nonsense.
The author you are well done !!!
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Alain, thank you for a very flattering assessment of the story and bravo for your opinion in general! You completely anticipated my answer. See the root of what is called) And by the way - the working title of the thing was just that: beauty and monster;))))
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Written beautifully, the pressure is, passion, but the essence, leaves a residue. Unpleasant sediment. One thing that pleases everyone is to strive for balance, and such a fool will still get his own. And how they sing beautifully with operas or investigators. Although you can’t do anything. Rats are rats, they work on instincts))))))) Of course, the author writes beautifully, but you still process the idea.
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although about "fart in a dream" is already superfluous-)))
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I didn’t expect such a flurry of emotions. Actually I thought, was the site wrong? Maybe this is not a porn resource, the category of the story is not correctly indicated "Submission and humiliation" - or is it a gathering of hypocrites and moralists? Although it is believed that the thing is partially successful, if it causes a lot of polar evaluations ...;)
I am glad if someone liked it, thank you, who supported. Who did not like it to different degrees - well, thank you for reading, and as I understand it to the end?)) In fact, this story, though fiction, is based on real people and not invented relationships in REAL! BDSM is. Pancake. I do not know whether to say, but most interesting. Now, if I had written the truth that the villain is not poor, but rich, he goes to LBH, a hot brunette, his nose is big and with a crook, and the name is far from Vanya, but the character and tastes are the same ... - would it be less disgusting? ;))) So I see - "the author glorifies the power of visitors over the Slavs, etc., etc." - so I still softened a lot, which did not suit me) I see the fictional image of the disgusting bad guy, even too much recognizable in our post sovok life - forever bookoy reptile, living at the expense of poor women, etc., etc. But is it not enough reptiles in literature and kinema Fargo, Che my then pouncing, he is worse than all those ?;))) Although I like and do not describe any killings, dismemberment, cannibalism ... no rape and even that is not present. The real was also not a model for anything, but as they say the love of evil ... The girl was catching a S & M rush. Despite the fact that I was not even a bit close to the description of extreme things in her sex life. Moreover, she was also married and her description in general was accurate.
The fact that porn works (stories, films) of different genres and directions should teach something, to educate sexually is a complete nonsense. Although various people's representatives (and not so) will agree with you - they are ready to ban anything.
What can teach a show bdsm relationship? Or fisting? Or gangbang? Technique?))) Everyone looks and reads what he wants. There are light there are more rigid things. I do not like rape, rape, categories under coercion - I do not look and do not read. But many love, read and watch. I do not run to them and do not blame. In the Soviet Union, eroticism was planted, not to mention porn - and there were many maniacs ... Maybe someone today is watching a post. violence, relieve tension and no longer go, someone thread in the alley knocking on the head.
Do you like easy porn, where in the end get married? - for God's sake. My position: if people are adults, on a voluntary basis, without self-harm, in specially designated places (as in this place for porn - stories) - go ahead. By the way. In the second part, the villain from the story will explain the GG, that she herself wanted everything, because she knew that he was any kind of scumbag - but not a rapist.
Threat Half of the first page was written by the master of the genre - Clara Sagul !;)))
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That's right, you write, even the brand has nowhere to put ...! I myself write in thrash style and fully understand what you are saying ... But! Your story should not teach something. It's not obligatory. Simply, there is such a thing as the story itself, but there is a description of porn and erotica. You coped with the second and without excesses as for me. But the first is not enough. That's the whole minus. The rest - little things! So in general - a normal story turned out. In the end - who are the judges ?!)))
And by the way, I completed my task - proved that thrash can also be a story of the month, well, or something like that, so keep writing, create your own unique style and don't listen to anyone. You can just take note of the criticism but still write as your intuition tells you. Only you yourself know what should be next ... Good luck to you!
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Zoi, for God's sake, forgive the stupid blonde, but could not resist, you are superb in your ... immediacy)))). I adore you-)))))))))))))))
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Thank you!))) I hope it was not figuratively! ;)
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Zoi, not figuratively, I like your imagination, and I enjoy reading all your stories, but sometimes you seriously pretend to admit that you are a writer, really touches you-)
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Well, all the same under ** I caught and my instinct felt like a dog))) I guess I just talk too much ... I need to correct the situation. No, of course I am not a writer that you are. My profession is completely different. Much more interesting. “Being a writer is like doing your homework all your life! ...” (Hank Moody);))
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Zoi, well and still, at least sometimes in their texts stylistically competently build sentences, aha-). Just do not be offended-)
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You just literally ask me not to write anything else ...) Ok, no question.
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Zoi, “keep writing, create your own unique style and don't listen to anyone. You can just take note of the criticism but still write as your intuition tells you. Only you yourself know what should be next ... Good luck to you! ”-)))))
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Thank you, very good. Life-affirming and in the case. Successes, new victories!
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The author, of course, twisted the eggs of the reflective public, even stirred up some silt in the shower. Compared with the evening air NTV sparingly, but still great, fresh. After reading there was only one trivial question: your creative plans? Betrayal, slavery, incest? I approve of any of your text in the heading "Porn Stories".
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Respect the author, described the typical Natasha, ready to surrender (for love) scum, despite the fact that it is obliged to maintain her husband tolerant.
Baba is an animal that appreciates only a strong male, the female gives birth to a strong one, and accepts a hawk from a weak one.
In a normal society, Saku is controlled by religion, in an endangered society, the female trades herself.
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Fine written. Talented.
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True. The history of 80 percent of my real life. That's just in my story, dough and drugs were not. And yet it was still crazy enough to leave the girl alone. Now here I go to the porn sites :)
“... The author has a passive homosexual complex ...” - this is what I did not understand.
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1. And she did not find a new dominant? For some, BDSM is like a drug.
2. Do not feed the troll (C);)
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it is written frighteningly realistic, therefore, the reviews are polar. felt sorry for her.
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Super!!! when will be continued
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thanks, I vomited
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Not bad ... But the antisocial element could be removed. Either in the end to kick him in the ass or to spread the heroine. In general, enter the educational moment. In the end, the same children read! :)
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Written very realistic and exciting. In life it happens. Women are given to strong men and hate them. I especially liked the description of the heroine: she is beautiful, even in sin! Bad one: violence. What do not say, and the violence was!
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Yeah, Natasha is the most ... beautiful davalki in the world
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For black dogs the best hitch is a sheep. How were you sheepdogs remained. So many years have passed and your mentality has not changed so much. Ebi further sheep and dream in their dreams about the beautiful Slav.
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come to us, we will train you a sheep, and you will have to fight your natas, you will like natashka, they will come to us for insemination, and feed offspring like you
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And then I fuck you do not need. And the point is you had to understand that the sheep I call are not cute lamb, but it is those whores who fall under you. Normal girl you nafig not needed. She is enough for normal guys. And normal guys are not necessarily Slavs. I am not a nationalist and I do not care who and how. But to be a man is the main thing, and all your comments wherever they meet. They always show that you are a Bibyzian and cannot be called a person. One word is your place in the zoophilia section.
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whores, those who, after a kilometer of hell, make it possible to feed someone else's offspring like usleps.
and ushlepki, it is those who, like you, consider the female equal to man
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Well, it’s really ... pussy to this brow from husband and pussy to her husband ..
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BDSM is the submission and humiliation that lead to sexual arousal. But when there is a mockery, this is not BDSM at all.
And here the main thing in general is exactly the mockery of the defk. Shorter defku in Durkee that the brain would be right, and the convict in the zone where he and the place.
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The story is very realistic and written with talent! Among us there are many such fools who can surrender to all freaks! The author is waiting for the continuation! Write!
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Really cool story! Starts The only less dirt.
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Good story, liked, catchy
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Dear Alex! Congratulations on your great story. I actually wrote the first half of a page once, but you perfectly captured the idea and everything developed perfectly. Do not pay attention to the statements in the comments that erotic stories should be written for the proper upbringing of children - this is complete nonsense, and only dangerous perverts can allow it. Erotica - this is for adults who may have a variety of tastes and preferences ...
I would like to see a sequel, because until now - only plot plot. If you write, allow yourself to give advice: Slower and more careful with the development of action, so that unrealistic things do not start. So far you have kept to the edge, but there is always the risk of “excesses” in this genre. Success!
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Clara, thank you so much! To the amateur author, the reward is to read such a review from a real master. Glad to have pleased!
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And this is not you wrote under the pseudonym Clara Sagul?
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Glitch with a cut-off ending corrected.
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the author read this garbage just because the review wanted to arrange more capaciously YOU MUDAK didn’t try to work ?, like normal men, Pushkin’s pervert with his hands too
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Kudynamto, pshel cattle in the stall. I don’t like the topic - so get out the zoophil here and there, they all put it on your review
author write about something else in the same vein!
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I really liked it) Alex, thanks! Quite rarely do you get from the stories of such a genre to get aesthetic pleasure, which is not disturbed by grammatical and spelling errors, nor by lewdness, or tightness, or deliberately anatomical details) Thanks again. Write more)
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I liked the story very much, deeply touched the soul and not only;).
Alex, write more, waiting for the continuation and development of the plot! Development in such a story happens, believe me! I would also like to talk with the author ... I just don’t know how ... Help someone who knows how to find the author! Online!
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Thanks again for the position. reviews, sensible criticisms, recommendations!
Nastya, thank you for your kind words, but you can simply communicate. After registering on this site, you can exchange private messages - you are welcome)
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that's why I love porn sites, so for the five-page srach about grammar and plot)))
so ... touching :)
Alex - I liked it. Harsh, vulgar, humiliating, relaxing. Yeah)
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