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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 2

In the morning I read your comment, all day in thought: why are they unsuccessful? What is the concept of a “successful” family for you?
My close friend divorced her husband after 6, 5 years of marriage together, having learned about his constant betrayals. Rather, they parted earlier, and divorced more than a year. In the period of divorce, I met a wonderful person, with whom, to this day, they raise two children.
I know other families, in which the marriage was concluded for a great love, as it seemed, and then they stuck with life, or the relatives too actively climbed ... And I also know a family that came together by pure calculation, but in the end they lived very well for over 15 years . In general, everything is so individual ... and regarding the future of the heroes of the story, I would like to be more optimistic))

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Comment on publication: Peter Pan and Wendy. A dream in a summer night

How do I like your stories ... And with Peter Pen, you hit the target directly - the object of my girlish dreams)) Of course, at that time I had not dreamed of sex ... But adult Peter is something!))

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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 2

And thank you for your attention)) I, of course, expected criticism, but more constructive))

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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 2

Thank you very much for your feedback !!! Such words motivate to write further))

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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 2

Thank)))

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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 1

The continuation is already on the site) However, I corrected it already after putting it out - and in the end it was somehow clumsy ... Just the extra “water” and cleaned up))
In general, it was necessary to lay out one story, and I divided it by inexperience: in the Word it seemed that the volume was large, but in fact only 5 pages came out))

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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 1

Thanks for your kind words! Honestly, wrote for the first time. Just wrote a couple of months ago, and then periodically rewrote and polished. And tonight decided to stop the persecutionist torment and published. Now I worry that I laid out early, it was still possible to refine))

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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 1

Thank! I really hope that the climax will not disappoint ...

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Comment on publication: Personal motivation. Part 1

Thanks for the high marks. I am afraid that the second part (the end) turned out to be chaotic. Very worried, this is the first "first attempt at writing."

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