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Comment on publication: Cheerful night. Part 2: Morning for the hostess
Maybe bi. If only it turned out interesting. I still consider various options and welcome all ideas.
And thanks for the high praise. I am definitely pleased.
Comment on publication: Cheerful night. Part 2: Morning for the hostess
It seems to me that the things you offer will not correspond to the behavioral model of the characters. At least at this stage.
For me the important point of this story is that it could well have a place in real life. That is her interest. And this plausibility would like to keep.
The situation when families-friendly couples make (or are thinking of making) a similar exchange is not such a rarity. Having lived in a marriage of 5-6 people are still young enough not to lose their desire to “judge” and have already “got enough of each other” to want some kind of diversity. The game with the exchange becomes a kind of way out. Someone is enough just to talk about it, some (like my heroes) get to the experiment. But, as a rule, only in "their" narrow company. And usually "miracles" in their circle and everything is limited.
Attracting strangers, strangers to these activities is a much more distant stage of swinging than the first experiments. This is not about my heroes. And it is completely incomprehensible why they engage in sexual games in any crowded places? This, in my opinion, is entirely from another opera.
Comment on publication: Mistress Part 1: Alien
I read the first part. You write well, read easily.
But perhaps you are right - this is a bit not mine. For me, sex is love, joy, celebration. You have another. Completely different emotions.
However, I was curious to get them. Thank you.
I wish you further success.
Comment on publication: Dimkina painting
Drop by another time. Read on.
Comment on publication: Upgrade categories on the site
I don’t know what “my case” you are talking about, but I repeat once again - not in all cases you can find streamlined shapes. Your advice is obvious, but not always applicable.
In addition, the matter is not only about the possibility of stuffing a young one into the story. There used to be a category in which young heroes discovered the world of sex for themselves. And who wanted to read about it went exactly there. And now? Shovel all the stories in search of interest?
It would be nice to find some variant with a category.
Comment on publication: Upgrade categories on the site
Not all, unfortunately, so simple. There are a number of stories in which adolescents are either necessary in the plot, or are so visible on indirect moments that you don’t write about age, all one and every moderator will not fail.
Now, if they were not a violation of the law of remembering some quite solid Stepan Stepanych about how, being a teenager, he loved in different poses one, now also quite adult, Marya Ivanovna, this would solve many problems. And the tag name, say, "my memories" or "in the days of the former youth." Formally about respectable, adults. Well, everything else ...
Comment on publication: Cheerful night. Part 2: Morning for the hostess
Oh. I do not even know what to answer you. Of course, I left a hint of a sequel at the end of the story, but have not yet decided whether I will write. I like this company, but I don’t know what to do with it in the next story.Repeating about the same process only by rearranging the figures is not interesting, but I have not yet invented something original.
Comment on publication: Cheerful night. Part 1
Very glad you liked it.
Look at my page.
Maybe other stories will be interesting.
Comment on publication: Cheerful night. Part 2: Morning for the hostess
According to my observations, people tend to communicate with each other, hence the dialogue. Especially since the action takes place in a limited space in a short period of time. What else do the heroes? They can not stupidly and silently fuck. Who is interested in?
Comment on publication: Cheerful night. Part 2: Morning for the hostess
Thank you, Lady, for your appreciation. Glad you don't forget me and look in.