1. Wife rent. Part 1
  2. Wife rent. Part 2

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wife.
- So what kind of panties should I wear, for the groom? She added immediately.
- Take the grandmother's pantaloons. - having squeezed a smile out of myself, I said and quite loudly, slapped her on the pope, from which my wife screamed.
- What? Where I will take them to you - said the wife and laughed.
- Well, enough! Take normal, more modest and in general ... * my further monologue, interrupted the call of the mobile phone * - I answered more seriously. I looked at the phone screen - Diman.
- Dimka calls, apparently already arrived. - I said.

I picked up the phone and accepted the conversation.
- Are you already here or what? - I asked.
- I'll be in 15 minutes, are you ready? - he said.
- Almost ready, drive up, wait below. - I answered and uncoupled the call.

- It will be 15 minutes later, let's take a shower, while I put the things in the bags. I told my wife.

It was obvious from Vika’s face that she wanted to ask me about a phrase that I didn’t say, which the telephone call had interrupted, but apparently understood ... that I don’t like jokes about the groom and panties.

- Come on, I ran into the shower - said Vika and quickly got out of bed. She walked into the shower, in one T-shirt, collected by the neck.

We quickly got together, took the bags and went to the car, Dmitry was already waiting in the yard.
Diman greeted us, his mood was excellent.

- What are you ... like in the "soap", I prevented you? He asked us with a smile.

We laughed.

- Yeah-hh, you have only one problem! - Said his wife and laughed.

I opened the trunk and began to clean our bags in it, Dimka looked at it somehow wrong, apparently wanted to say something, but said nothing. Then we sat down in cars, we drove out of the city, again getting out through traffic, but as we got onto the track, we flew, Dmitri rode ahead, I followed.

“I’m worried ...” my wife said, taking my left hand.
- I, too ... But now it’s too late to turn, and so far nothing bad has happened ... if anything, you know what will happen. - I replied.
- I know ... but I do not want a fight ... oh, they got into the story. - said wife.
- Everything will be fine, I love you. - I said, squeezing her hand, a little stronger.
- And I love you. - responded wife.

We kissed on the lips.

- I'll take a nap, I'm tired at work. - Said his wife and turned to the window, dozed off.

In the middle of the way, the phone rang, it was Diman, I picked up the phone.

- Let's stop at the cafe, get some coffee. - I heard in the tube.
“Good,” I replied.

I stopped in the trail, behind the machine of our "lead".

- Have you arrived? - woke up, asked his wife.
- No, cafe, let's go, have a snack. - I said.

There were few people in the cafe, there were plenty of free tables. Having sat down at a table, we made an order, and began to wait for him silently.

- Let's discuss the legend. - said Dima.
- What? I asked, exchanging glances with my wife.
- Well, how is it that, as we met, suddenly Olya asked. If I begin to ask, I will speak. And you, Vika (he said looking at my wife) - give a damn, about Andrei she knows that we are old friends. If you ask, how did you ... get to know each other, tell me - how did you relax together in nature, by a common company. - Diman pushed his speech and looked at us.
- Combinator you are our ... fucking! - only this I could say ...
- And if I stay with her alone and she asks me about something, about that ... what did you tell her earlier, what should I do? - asked Vika.

- Um ... km ... I wanted to suggest that the rest of the way, Vika went in my car, we are like ... a couple, almost husband and wife ... - said Diman with a more serious face.

I wanted to argue, but ...

“And how strange it is that my bride is driving in a car with my friend, and her luggage, in your car ... well, since you agreed to an adventure, then it’s time ... to start portraying her.” - added Dima.
- Well, then he is right, how strange it will look like such a visit to Ole. - said Vika, after we silently exchanged glances with her.
- Well, well, you're right, after the cafe we ​​will shift the bag. At the same time, discuss the answers to Olga's expected questions ... as it is not a hunt, having done this way, fall asleep on a trifle. - I said.
- Wow! Yes, I look - you yourself, detective straight. - with a smile, said my wife.

We laughed, but honestly ... in my heart I was not amused. Coming out of the cafe, we shifted the bag of his wife, in passing, she pulled out a hoodie from her, it was already pretty cool. We decided to go in sports, I was in sneakers, sweatpants and a T-shirt. Vika was in slaps, which perfectly emphasized her beautiful legs, with a red pedicure, pants that fit the ass, and in a light blouse that fits perfectly to the pants. Of course, the sweatshirt was not very suitable for the wife’s outfit, but the cool weather dictated its conditions. I got into my car, watching my wife sit in the front seat of Dimka's car ... and I thought - well, that's all, the game started, there is no way back ... just an emergency option. In order not to load myself with thoughts, what Dmitry and Vika are talking about there, I turned on the music louder, and tried not to think about it. After 3 hours, we got to the place (to be continued) ...

94 comments
  • April 14, 2016 10:25 pm

    Something like this was like, though not much has been written. Let's see in this the wife will give a friend or all the same another story will be.

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  • April 15, 2016 8:21

    Thanks for the comment! In fact, there are a lot of similar stories on the web, if you search.

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  • April 14, 2016 10:35 pm

    Firstly, plagiarism, secondly, such a number of mistakes makes reading just unpleasant ... Improve, semi-author ...

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  • April 15, 2016 8:37

    Thanks for the comment!
    First: I want to apologize for grammatical errors, yes - they are present ... unfortunately ... I was not an excellent student at school. But, if you look in the network for stories of other authors (especially on the chair *** e), then even my writing ... will come out just a masterpiece, on grammar. This fact does not justify me, I said it ... by the way.
    Secondly: about plagiarism, in principle, I read many stories on the net, very often there are similar ones. I had free time and I decided to try, to write the first story consisting of several parts. In what you are right, I apparently subconsciously ... took the idea from another story.
    Thirdly: regarding perfection, it certainly is necessary ... only I will think ... whether it is worth tormenting the reader with its illiteracy.

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  • April 15, 2016 10:13

    "Subconsciously" and the story is called almost the same)

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  • April 15, 2016 13:32

    Well, I would call the Weekend story or “So and so ... rest" - much would this change?))

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  • April 15, 2016 11:24

    If you improve, then definitely worth it :)

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  • April 18, 2016 13:15

    Can the question be, how to a more experienced author?) After writing the first part of the story, do you write the second part only on the basis of your “plan” or somehow take into account the comments to the first part? Commenting want a different story of events, how to guess everyone?)

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  • April 18, 2016 13:28

    I write, if there is to this mood, fantasy, excitement. And not on request. Accordingly, I write what interests and excites me, and not one of the readers.
    But as you can see, these three components I rarely meet together)))

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  • April 18 2016 13:41

    Thanks for the answer ;)

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  • April 14, 2016 10:38 PM

    There is the same story, with the same title and plot, but that one is more conveyed, both grammatically and meaningfully.

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  • April 15, 2016 8:47

    Thanks for the comment!

    As I have already written, the comment above is my first story, generally the first one. Before that, I read various stories and maybe ...I remember the story of a similar story. To challenge your opinion - I will not, about the plot, as I see it, actually I am writing, of course, someone will like it, some will not.
    For grammatical errors - I apologize!

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  • April 15, 2016 5:50

    Almost exact, but very stretched copy of the story "Wife for rent" from a similar site sex story. Very ugly.
    Many errors. A lot of unnecessary small parts.

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  • April 15, 2016 8:57

    As for the copy - I already wrote above. For mistakes, once again - I apologize. As for the details - for someone they are needed, for someone not, I wrote it the way I "see." The very presentation of the story, the same who may not like it, but to someone on the contrary, we are all different ... and I am far from a writer (straight very, very, very far). To be honest - I would like to look at your presentation of thoughts, at some of your story ...

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  • master (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 9:55

    Unsatisfactory. Firstly for mistakes, secondly for plagiarism, thirdly for excuses. Need to learn, learn and learn again! No further parts needed.

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  • April 15, 2016 10:37

    "No further parts are needed." - Lord ... do not read, I do not force anyone.

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  • alex (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 10:28

    In general, the story is not bad !!! But I immediately remembered another story. As a result, Olya’s sister will not be a sister at all, and Dima will be muddied up with all this to fuck Vika =)

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  • initial (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 11:00

    And I want to continue)))

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  • April 15, 2016 11:23

    ))) And I just insist on the continuation! And soonest !!!!! Errors, if any, are not affecting or distracting from reading.
    A large number of details and length of the narrative introduces an element of believability. If only the ending would be ... Well, not too banal !!! In the sense that everything was fine ... and they lived happily.

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  • April 15 2016 12:58

    Yes that, all of you on rushed on the person, after all it is his first story. Who doesn’t like it can really not read, but there are a lot of those who really liked it and are waiting for the continuation. Yes, if there is a similar story, then why can not it be done to others. Yes, a lot of mistakes, but he just learn and over time it may be more literate to write your own stories.
    And thanks to the author for this story. We are waiting for the continuation.

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  • Cat (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 13:13

    Yes, my God, another “kulnuyu story”, when the husband is all husband, he is pumped up, his wife loves him, he is VERY jealous and does not see his girlfriend with another at all, in an instant will begin to fondle the sperm of another and pull the segment until “ loving wife will ride a foreign member.
    From such a story, you just want to spit and feel like it, because SUCH cardinal changes with the characters take place on one stroke of the magic wand of the author, who doesn’t really try to justify.

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  • April 15, 2016 13:29

    With such requirements, read not porn stories, but erotic books, the same Emmanuel.

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  • Cat (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 15:04

    What are "such" requirements? Logic and rationale? Dude, you tell a story about possible exciting cases in reality you write or become like schoolchildren with their wet dreams, when a mother rushes to her feet for no reason, rips off her pants and immediately makes the student fucking blowjob, calling him “Lord”, “Lord” and so on. P.
    Although what am I teaching you? If logic is an empty word for you, then I have nothing to talk about with you.

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  • April 15, 2016 16:17

    I agree completely, but it was in that story. I still can not understand how my wife could fuck with a friend, knowing that the husband is near and that story is more fiction than real life, let's hope that the author will choose her own story, completely different.

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  • March 24, 2019 0:10

    and where is the story in general, or rather its entire part

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  • April 15 2016 5:09 PM

    Wait a minute. Maybe there will not be everything. What prematurely to boil. I personally hope that the Author will not make such a schmuck out of her husband.

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  • April 15, 2016 19:51

    The fact is that this is just a story and nothing more! If I were in real life, a friend suggested this, he would at least cut off his face and that would be the end of a friendship. But ... it's me, I'm in a relationship - the owner, in our time, there are a lot of couples practicing swing, forgiving adultery, etc. Just the same, no matter how trite it sounds, but in real life ... there are places to be: a wife - in secret, cheating with her husband's best friend, or a husband - cheating on his wife, with her best friend.
    It was in my judgment that Andrei (husband) was already a schmuck, just because he agreed to this.

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  • April 15, 2016 21:27

    There are who practice, I do not argue. But practicing or hiding or discussing it all. But no wife begins to fuck with another when her husband, not knowing his opinion.

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  • April 15, 2016 21:37

    As far as I remember, according to the story, it was with him - she didn’t fuck)

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  • April 17, 2016 14:16

    I meant the description of the husband, which was given by the reader "Cat". I understand that you will not offer such a husband to us. Still, the continuation and the final would be different than in the story to which the readers refer. I also read it (and continued) so I will say that there are many omissions, and you are much more interesting.

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  • April 17, 2016 15:06

    Honestly - while I think about it, but whatever the final (continued) is - not to be misunderstood to everyone, and somebody will pour mud)

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  • April 15, 2016 16:52

    The story is not bad. Until. But if the plot repeats a similar story, it will not be great. I hope the author will not make a rag from her husband.

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  • April 15, 2016 20:01

    I could be wrong, but it seems that in the story you are talking about, the husband was not a rag. That is, he did not just give his wife a “use” to a friend, but he silently masturbated at that time. He, as I recall, fucked my friend's sister more than once.
    I can turn the sequel to another steppe, they say, my husband defended his wife with honor, he quarreled with a friend, and they left. But the publication on this site, "initially" involves sex, and not a detective story)

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  • Vatnik (a guest)
    April 16, 2016 1:23

    They will come, at first they will behave within the bounds of decency, fight back from everything, then a turning point will come, first she and Dima will fuck, then he and Olya will know everything about each other, and Dima and Olya will say that everything was planned in advance . I know in advance that you will write in advance, I read it a thousand times these thousands of phrases. And you will tell me that this is only your endeavor, what will everyone laugh at you in the face, and they will write that it is a second-rate, second-rate, and most importantly a fake creation!

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  • April 16, 2016 10:10

    If I'm wrong, correct me) But for any story on this site or similar, you can assume both the plot and the ending, just by looking at the "tags" and "categories" of the story.

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  • April 16, 2016 12:34

    But who says about the fact that the husband defended, etc. If you write this, then the story will not work at all. I only say that the husband should not be dragged from all that is happening.

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  • April 16 2016 12:44

    I will think ... Even in the same comments - wishes dofiga) Someone for the fact that his wife was torn off in full, and with the participation of her husband, someone for the fact that her husband was all disgusted, and so on. to guess)

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  • Felix (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 19:04

    Also, like most commentators, I read the story of the same name in full (just the end of it was on a paid basis), and I also ask the author to slightly change the ending. The husband and in another story didn’t seem to be a rag, so I’m keeping silence about it, but this is what the wife needs to unleash this time on the full program for sure (besides, the hint of it was higher, allegedly double with his wife, they sometimes practice comrade the protagonist may end up not even single-handedly corrupting the “true” spouse of his friend)! Otherwise, why were the prerequisites indicated in the first part of this epos?

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  • April 15, 2016 20:43

    I do not know about any other story you say, but I liked it, super. I really want to read the sequel))))

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  • April 15, 2016 21:25

    After the author's judgments, it is already clear what will happen)

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  • April 16, 2016 12:30

    I have not yet decided what it will be until the end, but sex (by default, the format of these stories) is required to be present)

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  • St1 (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 21:25

    The author in fact copies the story “Wife for hire”, and he himself knows that very well. He changes a lot, I hope that he will change that debility outcome, where Olya was not a sister, but Dimon is a bastard bastard! The author knows what story is being said!) He even has a “legend” Dima, the same one!))) And it was possible to turn on the fantasy and come up, for example, that Dimona’s mother or father is terribly afraid that he is gay because he’s uncle, for example, was so and he never had a girlfriend. And now Dimon does not start a relationship with anyone, he does not meet. Dima is not blue, he changes the girls like gloves, but his mother, well, or his father, from whom he lives separately, can’t believe that this is the case. He or she is afraid that his son went to his uncle. Dima knows this and has told them about the girl he met and who moved in with him. But this is not enough - a joyful parent simply demanded that his son come to visit with his c. wife)))
    This option seems to me much more interesting!
    And so we are waiting for the continuation! And I would also like to add - do not make your husband chmoshnik and sperm suck, let him end up dragging himself away from the game that has gone out of control!

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  • Myg (a guest)
    May 3, 2016 19:54

    A link to the original who can throw?

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  • to turn (a guest)
    April 15, 2016 21:39

    oh how many komentov already, it would be possible to lay out the second part, and most importantly the last one, since if you wake it up to stretch it into several parts, it will not be interesting, as long as you put 10 and then it will be seen !!

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  • April 16, 2016 10:39

    It just became interesting ...
    Did you write this story alone? Something tells me that he was done with the participation of the ladies or the lady herself wrote.

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  • April 16, 2016 10:58

    It just became interesting ...
    Did you write this story alone? Something tells me that he was done with the participation of the ladies or the lady herself wrote.

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  • April 16 2016 12:11

    I wrote one and I am not a lady) I wonder ... why did you think so?

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  • April 16 2016 13:03

    The style is peculiar.

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  • April 17, 2016 12:50

    At the expense of style - I do not even know what to say)

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  • April 17, 2016 13:47

    I just write it myself, but other things on other topics. Pure from observation and practice.

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  • April 16, 2016 11:20

    And I was hooked up, an approach to the revolution in consciousness was made very precisely to help a friend. So - 10 points.
    And I look forward to continuing!

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  • April 16 2016 2:29 pm

    sex_master do not listen to you grief authors! They just envy you, the story is just great, much better than the original!
    I’m wondering if you have a continuation, and how many parts there will be, and, of course, when will you give us the second part?)

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  • April 17, 2016 12:44

    Thanks for the feedback! I think within 10 days there will be a second part, while there is no time, unfortunately.
    I had sketches for a continuation ... but after a few comments, I began to partially change and in vain ... now, "Damn it and on the side of the bow!", I will either return to the initial idea or else make adjustments.

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  • April 17, 2016 13:19

    Buddy, do not pay attention to the stinging comments, here 80-90% are frank trash, and now the authors of this trash also manage to criticize good, interesting and very intriguing stories, to which, of course, your story also applies. And I really like the fact that you describe and convey all the emotions in such detail. This is the whole point of such stories: to convey the atmosphere, create intrigue ... And not like most authors stuck, stuck))

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  • Dim08 (a guest)
    April 16, 2016 19:02

    I liked the first part. So I am waiting for the continuation !!!
    As for the plagiarism of the story "Wife for rent" it is not easy. The story does not reveal the whole essence and the process all like that one-sided all the time you have to guess. We read the author, but do not play the game What Where When !!!
    Write to the master do not pay attention to these critics ...

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  • April 17, 2016 12:49

    I deliberately found that story and bought a sequel (paid), reread it several times ... Everything was somehow broken, here is an example:

    The beginning of the story - it is clear that the husband is jealous, BUT there the decision about the trip itself goes on page 1 (if not less), that is, they immediately decided, such an “acute” question, then I quote: “the trip was scheduled in 2 days ". What did they do these two days - generally a mystery? They must have a fact of doubt, excitement, etc. - this is not described at all ...

    Personally ... from my point of view - this is very ... brief!

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  • April 17, 2016 13:12

    In general, the author is one of my favorites, but in this story he clearly did not reveal himself, but here you have the first part turned out to be just a masterpiece! I have never waited so much to continue)

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  • Anonymous (a guest)
    April 16, 2016 20:05

    It is easiest to criticize. You try write. Author well done, go on

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  • second part (a guest)
    April 16, 2016 20:17

    Where is the second part !!!

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  • April 17, 2016 12:41

    I have a “mini-shift” method of work, now there are working days, not yet when)

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  • April 17, 2016 13:48

    The first part is really written better than the “original”, there are no questions here. But, from my point of view, the continuation should still be different. No need to just repeat the storyline of the story, but it will turn ugly. Moreover, the second part there is significantly weaker than the first, and the ending, again in my opinion, is frankly weak and does not fit with the characters of the characters. So don't repeat the mistakes of others. The author of inspiration.

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  • April 17, 2016 14:14

    The paid part of the story - I did not like it at all (in vain 135r spent)))
    The very idea that the wife of the protagonist became pregnant, I don’t like) Well ... this is not enough, even if she gave herself to Oleg (a friend), but ending up in her is insanity.
    Again, when Oleg's wife reports that she flew, the author just misses a piece of reconciliation and writes the ending ... that they say that now the wives are pregnant by other husbands and they fuck from time to time, exchanging with each other.

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  • April 17, 2016 15:09

    Here I am about the same. There, after all, it’s not completely revealed from whom the wife became pregnant. She assures that from her husband, he does not believe her, so why they reconciled is unclear. Again, what a garbage, a jealous husband, and suddenly they hit a swing, implausible. I hope you come up with a more elegant ending. There is no need for reconciliation in my opinion, it will incredibly work out.

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  • April 17, 2016 15:24

    According to the story - the wife became pregnant by her lover, in my opinion, this is for sure, the husband considered this in time, so she does not believe. And they made it up, because Oleg's (friend's) wife got pregnant from the main character, that is, each wife is pregnant by another, and apparently ... in this regard, they decided to continue the relationship. Although, personally, I ... had a question, okay, Katya, she could really fly from Oleg, but why the main character believed that Tanya was pregnant precisely from him ... this is a mystery.

    Reconciliation will be accurate, it provides for the beginning of the story.

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  • April 17, 2016 15:36

    I meant reconciliation with a friend. And with my wife - sure, otherwise the story will not succeed. Good luck.

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  • April 17, 2016 15:14

    Thank you all for the comments! Continuation - will be within 10 days (approximately), now there is no time, for waiting - I apologize;)

    I’ll say right away - no matter how I continue the story, not everyone will like it, judging by the discussions ... opinions were divided and everyone couldn’t guess. Just say that the sex scenes will be present;)

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  • April 18, 2016 11:09

    Hello author! I did not read the second part of the original, but that author I threw the idea of ​​continuing. Kin and you! 1. Definitely a sister should remain a sister and until the very end should not be aware of her deception. She did not let her husband to herself. 2. A sister (assuming that her brother and the “bride” are almost married) in every way contributes to their privacy and corruption, forcing the “couple” to curl up, kiss, imitate sex, etc. 3. Drive an embarrassed nude “couple” into the steam room with a friend, wait delicately in the waiting room, periodically monitoring the washing process). The husband has double feelings: jealousy and powerlessness (he has already accepted the game and now cannot bring a friend). 4. The sister really “wants the nephew” and now in every way terrorizes the couple for the continuation of the family in her home. As a result, the “daughter-in-law” in the morning demonstrates an obsessive sister (and during the story the sister somehow psychologically manipulates the heroes and they do not dare to object to her) the successful ejaculation of her brother in her piece and her sister retreat contentedly. Something like this. In the end, it turns out that this adventure has led a couple into the “seksvayf” way, which they fantasized about.

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  • April 18 2016 13:09

    Thanks for the comment!

    Too many suggestions, how to guess everything?)

    To be honest - I didn’t think about such a development of events. About "seksvayf" - you surprised me! In my understanding, seksvayf - when the husband dreams / wants his wife to cheat on him. If Andrei had dreamed about it, he would have gladly agreed to the trip, and would have been just glad and not worried about her. In the story, the couple’s fantasies about the MZHM is a threesome, with all partners, In this format (if you take not the story, but the life situation) the husband can play a dominant role, so to speak, the main thing, i.e. in his presence, and so - he is to his wife, he will not let anyone in and just for treason - he will tear off his little head.

    “A husband has double feelings: jealousy and powerlessness (he has already accepted the game and now cannot bring a friend).” - I will think about such a turn of events ... But I still adhere to another option - a jealous husband, and he could throw a scandal , and it can be restrained by the fact that he himself has betrayed his wife, that is, he is jealous, but at the same time realizes that he himself has committed a betrayal.

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  • April 18, 2016 13:02

    P. S. And of course, the most creaky “dvuhpalka” (heard from all rooms) went to a pair.))) Specially.

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  • April 18 2016 13:18

    It's very simple with this) Sister gives them her room with a big double bed, in other rooms there are beds made of other material - forged, they do not creak in principle)

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  • April 18 2016 5:45 pm

    interesting story, I will wait for the continuation

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  • a guest (a guest)
    April 20, 2016 18:51

    Let's continue the sequel!

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  • Anton (a guest)
    April 20, 2016 10:16 PM

    The story is very good, I liked the fact that it is real, while other stories clearly convey the author’s violent imagination and by this they go too far. And here everything slowly floats, and the husband apparently cannot manage to influence the situation, it also aggravates that he does not adjust everything himself, and that the wife herself may initiate betrayal and take everything into her own hands. And of course the hunt so that a husband, for example, doesn’t specifically burn them, but for some reason, dirty laundry or the most indisputable proof of a squeaky bed. And even the hunt for her husband to forgive her, but for her to become a whore after all, and her husband would put up with it so that she would impose it on him. So thank you very much to the Author, Sex Master, waiting for the continuation, the story hooked.

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  • April 21, 2016 5:39 PM

    Thanks for the feedback! Maybe I will disappoint you ... but it is about the whore wife, there will be another story (there are ideas). In the same story - the husband was originally a different person, which is why he was worried about the trip. It is in this story, the wife of a whore (sexwife) - will not, not with such a stock of character ... my husband.

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  • Evgen (a guest)
    April 21, 2016 18:15

    Clearly, well, here's a koment was about the sauna, it seems to me it would be great to fit into the story, well, and most importantly, when the second part?

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  • April 21, 2016 18:18

    Now the second part, in the process of writing) How will be ready - lay out! Similarly, in terms of - I will not say, there are many things besides the story)

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  • April 23, 2016 0:56

    I liked the ideas of Lavana, especially with the sauna-steam room! Maybe uchёsh?)

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  • April 23, 2016 13:15

    Perhaps I will consider) his ideas are good, but not for Andrei, not for his character.
    To translate his ideas, the husband should not be so jealous, and secretly dream of a wife - sexwife. In order to forgive his wife the first betrayal and stand "under her heel", allowing her to walk further. On this topic, there will be another story, but not with this couple.

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  • April 23 2016 14:56

    All together we are waiting for the continuation of the history of this particular pair! We look forward to the author do not torment)))

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  • Vovik (a guest)
    April 26, 2016 23:32

    What is there with the continuation? Deaf like that))

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  • April 27, 2016 18:43

    All will be! About the sequel, I have not forgotten!

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  • Maksim (a guest)
    April 27, 2016 4:40

    Really looking forward to continue, the author lay out soon)

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  • April 28, 2016 19:56

    Coming soon!

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  • Oleg (a guest)
    April 28, 2016 19:18

    something silent utterly!

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  • April 28, 2016 19:51

    I wrote two comments above - the sequel will be written almost completely, now there is no time at all

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  • kiska_mara (a guest)
    May 2, 2016 16:22

    We are not waiting for the continuation

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  • a guest (a guest)
    May 2, 2016 20:31

    I want to know the denouement already!

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  • Eugene (a guest)
    May 4, 2016 21:40

    Dear author, the public has been waiting for)

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  • Sky (a guest)
    May 5, 2016 12:32

    What are you writing the second volume? Long

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  • May 5, 2016 4:54 pm

    Sorry for the wait ... repair, cottage and other problems! The second part is published, now the story is “awaiting verification,” as the site administration checks it will be available for reading.

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  • Max (a guest)
    May 6, 2016 12:28

    Specific plagiarism. You could honestly write that remade someone else's story. The story from which the author copied off is called: Wife for hire.

    My old friend looked at my reaction and shrugged.

    - ... Here is such a situation. Will you help? He asked me.

    Oleg was sitting opposite me, my friend. He came to my house to ask me about one very important service for him. And at the moment he just finished his story.

    My name is Maxim, I am 35 years old. IM married. My wife's name is Kate. She is 5 years younger than me. Medium height, long hair, slim physique, despite the fact that we already have two children.

    What Oleg told me now was a bit unexpected for me. Oleg was going to his sister, who lives in a nearby town, and invited my wife and I to visit. All nothing but one. He asked my wife to rent ...

    No, no vulgarity. I'll try to explain. It so happened that Oleg and his sister were brought up without their parents, more precisely, neither Oleg nor his sister remember them, since they were very small then. Then a tragedy happened ... They lived with an aunt until they grew up. Then Tanya, that was his sister's name, got married, and Oleg, who was already 34 years old, was still alone. Tanya, only half a year older than him, was for him not just her older sister, but practically her mother. Oleg told me all this. I knew that he had a sister, but never saw her.

    His sister, based on the story of Oleg, constantly asked him - when he finally gets married. And then one day that she was behind him, he said that he has a common-law wife. They saw her and her sister very rarely, but they often called back often. And the other day, Tanya invited him to visit her for a week with her wife.

    And so, the role of his civil wife, Oleg, offered to play my wife. My Katya all this time sat beside her and listened to his story.

    - You do not think anything ..., we just pretend that we are a couple ...and everything, - Oleg glanced at my wife.

    Kate sat with a surprised look.

    - I do not know ... to deceive is somehow ..., - the wife thoughtfully looked aside, then at me. - Katya, all my friends are married friends, husbands, I do not know them. None will not let her husband somewhere for a week. In general, the hope for you, - Oleg periodically looked at me, then at his wife, - and you, Max, will be my friend. Here we will not deceive my sister, - he smiled. “Why don't you just tell her the truth ?!” - Katya asked Oleg. “I can't ... It's hard for me to explain, but I don't want to upset my sister.” We have always been frank with this before and she just may not understand me and the relationship with Tanya will deteriorate. But I do not want this, - answered Oleg and thought. - Katyusha, well, let's help Oleg, - I looked at my wife questioningly, - if we agree, in what room will my wife sleep? - now I looked already at Oleg. - I will try to resolve this issue. In any case, we will be in different beds. Or on the couch and bed ... think of something, - Oleg said confidently. - Well, dear, how are you? - I asked Katya. - Well, just do not flirt, understand? - Katya looked menacingly and with a smile at Oleg. “No question,” he smiled, “thank you so much for helping out ...”

    The departure was scheduled in two days.

    ***

    Oleg's sister lived in a private house, outside the city. We went by car Oleg. He sat behind the wheel, and next was my wife, that is, now his wife, as it were. I was sitting in the back.

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  • May 6, 2016 13:58

    Do not read! Nobody forces you!

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  • May 8, 2016 2:05 pm

    This is plagiarism. Slightly modified previously published story. And the original was more literary. Author - drink poison or think of something your own.

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  • May 8, 2016 15:18

    You didn’t like that fact - the author is from God, you couldn’t write anything, I don’t force anyone to read. And yes, poison - buy yourself, do not forget to buy.

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