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- Your little head, my ex-girlfriend, is much softer than that of this cleaning lady! Under my beautiful leg from it all the cake will remain! As you can see, I do not need sharp studs. The slightest disobedience - and you find yourself here! - Mrs. pointed finger at the bloody crushed head.
There was no need to order anything until the frightened Svetlana died. She fell at the feet of Julia and thoroughly washed them with blood with her tongue. From that day on, the licking of the feet of the Lady became the daily duty of the slave. The strength of the spirit of the latter was suppressed completely and completely!
Most of the jewelry and luxury goods, including crystal shoes for 25 million pounds, Julia took herself and sold, placing funds in bank accounts with a fairly large monthly dividends. Under pain of death, Svetlana forgot about her former life forever. She had to work hard at home, as well as study, to recover at the university. In the people of Ivanova and Klokun, they continued to look like friends, but within the walls of the house a slave was always on her knees before the Mistress. Even minor misconduct in life or lack of diligence in school was physically punished. As a rule, one slap in the face of Julia Light fainted.
Oddly enough, slavery benefited a restless girl. She recovered at the university a year later, showing an unprecedentedly high result in the entrance certification test. Svetlana's parents turned to Yulia with great gratitude for what she had done for many years which she had not succeeded. However, on their proposal to free the daughter from slavery after graduation from the university, the Mrs. promised to give them an urn with her ashes, if they ever dare to ask for such a thing. Miss Klokun never saw these people again, and Sveta Ivanova remained her slave forever.
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The supreme judge of Bira I was no different from her predecessors. She was happy to receive such power, but did not abuse her. Regularly handed down final decisions in respect of convicts recognized by all appellate instances deserving the death penalty, and also directly decided the fate of the perpetrators, who were not reached by ordinary justice. When making decisions, Bira fully relied on inner conviction and her intuition, which were never deceived.
Her feet were kissed, taking office and taking the oath of ordinary court judges, major politicians and presidents. Many people tore their veins without sparing themselves, risked their lives to become heroes of the country and to have at least a hypothetical opportunity to bow down before Her honor! She really was at the very top of the world in the literal sense of the word!
It is possible to talk about an exclusive vehicle for safe movement received as a gift from the state palace, several battalions of personal guards and slaves for a very long time, but this can be missed.
Only once, in the fifth year of my service, I allowed myself a slight weakness and liberty - she simply chose ten innocent people from different parts of the country, who were sentenced to execution in a humane way.The reason for this decision was the Supreme Judge was not obliged to voice, just she so wanted. Conscience allowed a woman only once to amuse themselves with unlimited power, taking the lives of ten innocents.
There was a strong desire to avenge his brother, including Svetlana Ivanova in the top ten, and at the same time her friend Yulia for the company. However, after thinking a little bit, Bira decidedly decided to do it. After all, a brother from early childhood dreamed of becoming a slave, to be at women's feet - his dream came true. And he died happy, under the crystal heels of the young Lady. So she should be grateful to this girl!
Bira herself became the Supreme Judge! Dreamed about it, dreamed, and her wish came true!
Long live Mingavia - a happy land of dreams and wish fulfillment!
P.S.
When Bira I’s powers expired, she left Julia Klokun in her stead, who by the time had turned 35 years old. Svetlana Ivanova in the same year became the President of the country, replacing another lady in this position - 60-year-old Anna Rivers, who traveled from chief inspector of the education department of the city of Barov to President of Mingavia. The latter, despite its age, was full of strength and looked twenty-five years younger.
Svetlana was grateful to Julia for taking her into slavery, putting her brains in place and forcing gnawing at the granite of science. Proper use of hidden potential once allowed windy girl to reach the heights of society. Having received a high position, Svetlana remained a slave to Yulia, which did not contradict the law, because the Supreme Judge of the Chief President. At official ceremonies, the new lady-President Svetlana Ivanova already with great joy kissed the feet of the Supreme Judge Julia II and her Lady in one person, she was so familiar to her!
Too much will be. Do not even know whether to read. What is the story about?
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About men - slaves kissing women 's sophisticated legs, heels cleverly smashing skulls.
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Not at all like me ...
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Sergey, break into chapters, no more than 5 pages in volume and lay out, the local readership is spoiled by a couple of pages of short-lived stories, they will master more than 5 pages, but it's too lazy to read more
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This story is the story of the life of one man and several women who determined his fate in a fantastic country with a pronounced matriarchy. It is very different from most other short stories, where, as a rule, one sexual episode is described, real or fictional.
It makes no sense to break up parts by part - in subsequent chapters there are constant references to events and characters from earlier sections, so reading from the middle will be uninteresting and not entirely clear.
Well, for those who can not manage more than five pages - there are many other stories. I am sure this will also have its own audience. The topic of unlimited female power and the gradual arrival of men into this world is quite interesting.
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The author, why did not add the category Humor? He wrote that Russia is one of the leading countries in terms of development. Unless we are talking about space or the military industrial complex, I did not master the story, to be honest. Otherwise it is too obvious flattery)
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Discussion of the place of Russia in the modern world is not an appropriate topic for this site, although one can argue about its backwardness. In the field of information technology, it undoubtedly takes place. However, in the sphere of military power, world influence, no other state apart from the United States will become a competitor to it.
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From the first lines it is already clear that very primitive and narrow-minded people live in this “country”, for they can immediately see what nonsense they have done by placing the capital on the coast. The story is really a bit too much. I support the previously proposed idea of breaking the story apart.
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Dear Sergey!
As an author, I perfectly understand your desire to show your work entirely. But still it is necessary to take into account the specificity of readers CT. 61 page is more than hundred Vordovsky. Agree, this is a serious product. It does not read long texts. They are very difficult to perceive from the screen. In the end, what happens? Someone — for example, I begin to read you gradually, stretching pleasure for a few days. But during this time, your text ceases to be relevant in terms of assessments, it has already been moved and not evaluated.
Therefore, I advise you exactly as an author - divide it into chapters and post them in a week. In this case, you will be read immediately (approximately, one / two parts per day). And you will appreciate adequately.
I read the first two pages. It seemed to me interesting, though damp. I will give you +9 (in this case I emphasize - I did not read to the end). On two pages I am able to assess the ability of the author. I put the assessment now, in advance, while your text is whist on the main one, just so that you take part in the contest of stories of the month.
And I will read you gradually and for a long time)
Sorry for the long comment)
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Thanks, I'll think about it.
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Given the large size of my story, I will try to write a summary about it, reflecting the essence and very brief content, so that each particular reader can immediately decide whether he should read it.
The main idea is the world of femdom, where a strong man turns to dust at the feet of a beautiful lady. If in real life it is just a game that can be interrupted at any time, then in my fictional state the fate of a slave depends entirely on the will of his Mistress. In this country, strong women "rule the ball", and for men it is a great honor to bow to them.
The story describes the life of the protagonist - Green Scott, as well as several women who determined his fate.
In the first part, little Green discovers in himself a passion for worshiping a lady. Accidentally being at the feet of a beautiful girl who punished the older comrade who beat him, the boy painted in his mind the image and ideal of the Great Lady. Due to the inaccessibility of the latter, the guy, becoming older, partially realized his fantasies with a nearby adult woman - a family friend. For the sake of achieving the cherished dream, Green is endlessly improving in study and sports, becoming the first everywhere.
In the second part of the guy's dream comes true. After graduating from the best university and winning several world-class sporting achievements, Green becomes a slave to Emma Eis - one of the richest and most powerful women in the country. He continues to strive for perfection in everything without sparing himself in order to be as close as possible to his Goddess, even if for this you have to part with life. However, it was not Emma Ice who interrupted Green's life.
At the age of thirty-five, by the will of circumstances beyond his control, a man goes into slavery to a little girl of eighteen and becomes a toy, ending his life at her feet a year later. This is the third part of the story.
The fourth part describes the tragic end of the Great Emma Eis, who was identified by another, more influential woman. The other women were lucky, their wildest dreams came true. The theme of coercion and submission takes place in all parts of the story.
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Sergey, you don’t need a summary, most will not master it either, yes, I'm afraid, and they simply won’t understand, do as they suggest, break it into pieces
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Thanks for the summary when you read in fragments and from the end is not entirely clear.Now the whole idea is clear, alas, I will not read completely - not mine.
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Almost all the comments - about the size of the story. I was not embarrassed by the size, I read it at a time. Moreover, the further - the more interesting it was. Of course, everything is rather harsh and bloody, but I was pleased with the thoughtful plot and in general this whole unusual social system. About the main character was unexpected, I wanted some other kind of completion, but nevertheless everything seemed to me quite solid. So thanks to the author! :)
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Thank you very much!
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Ahaha, at first I wanted to underestimate the mark for blunders, but I couldn’t - it’s all so childishly written. And then, this is probably the best anti-femdom story read recently :) 10
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Thank!
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All dying ... Some kind of nonsense, just sad and disgusting.
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I read this story, and ... what can I say: Very good, except for the ending.
It was interesting to read, only the characters were merged just like that. For no objective reason.
For example, YG, which has been perfected in the course of history (which, in fact, is written) - well, it is cut very well.
Personally, it is not clear to me why the whole story was letting him survive (considering what queens he came across in the course of the story), and after that just kill him. Could the same Mio give it back at the beginning of work. And successfully cut it. Besides, it's not clear to me why Emma is also given so much attention. She appears in the third part of the story, and the fourth in general about how she herself is given to the court. It seems to me that the fourth part could be omitted. She is not the main character, and appears at all, almost at the end of the work. And I wanted her to revenge Sveta and her friend by making them slaves. The behavior of his sister, too, to be honest - disappointed. No, I certainly understand that they are the rules, and so on ... But, like - family ties, no? There, her relative died, and in general ... It's funny, but how it all began ... After all, it was because of her that everything started.
Oka-her ...
No, the story is good, but now cutting out the characters is in vain, it seems to me - crazy.
Moreover, the one who sawed out the GG, while violating the law, took the place of the main one at the end. Well this, of course, mda ...
Today you cut out crowds of people, and tomorrow you are put to control the most powerful country.
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