- "With love. Your P. ". Part 1
- "With love. Your P. "Part 2
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looks like I don't care about her anyway. There was no girl, more intelligent and sexy. Yes, sexy, although we did not even kiss!
She constantly attacked doctors. She demanded that I be brought back to life. She did not believe that I would soon be dead, that the tumor was progressing, inexorably pushing me out of the temporal - into eternal darkness. Once we walked out into the street, and she whispered.
- Now we sit in the car and drive.
- Where? - I wonder.
- How where? To walk, out of town. Don't you want to invite me on a date? - She sat me in her little car, then got behind the wheel and stole from the clinic. An hour later we were in the woods. We enjoy the smell of autumn leaves and the last pre-winter tweet of birds. She is near and I embrace her ...
- Tanya, why are you messing with me? - I decide to ask me, a blind and sick man, an attractive girl in the dark. - I'm not a tenant. And I can not do anything.
- So nothing? - I heard a playful, cheerful answer of the dark. Sounds like a challenge. She hugs me and I catch her warm, inviting lips. - Now check.
It was the most magnificent sex in my practice. In the back of her tiny car. I touched the floor of her dress with a touch; she helped me to release her from her stockings. My eager hands pulled down her panties, stroking her nakedness, open and accessible to me. A wet, slippery vagina touched the fingers, and I, feeling for her clit, began to play with him, putting into this game all the experience of a man who knows sex about a man. Now I do not need eyes, and it starts from my caress. I was worried that the penis would not rise due to constant strong medicines, but Tanechka helps me. The member fits with warm, dense sputum, and he reacts to this heat, swells, closely, and Tanya, after moving it with his tongue in his mouth, releases him. An erection does not fail me, and I insert into a tight phallus that she has inserted into a hole. She moaned while kissing me on the lips, I answered her, weaving her tongue. Blind sex for the first time in my life. I note the elasticity of her ass and breasts. Tanya is not exactly thick now. We make love by giving each other our bodies, one sick, but full of feelings, and the other healthy, and full of life, but both are close and necessary.
- I love you, - we hear at the same time, and I, discharged by the impulse of pleasure and, most importantly, elementary male demand, shoot Tanya with a stream of sperm.
Admiration causes a talent to preserve and carry a childish feeling into an adult, harsh life.
“Did I really have to die for you to come to me?” - I ask Tanya.
“You will not die,” her character replies, and I have to obey him. Returning to the clinic at night, sexually and, most importantly, mentally satisfied, I already knew that I would belong to her until the end of my days.
... Ask, what about Polinka, Lenka and Inna? Of course, everyone came to visit me. Polina and Lena - with their husbands. I heard Polina sobbing, wishing me recovery, how encouragingly Lenka’s voice sounded with the same wish, and, finally, an invitation to visit from Misha, to whom I grinned. Replied that I accept it as soon as I recover. Inna, on the other hand, invigorated me with strong instructional phrases, and at parting, right under Tanya, her student, smacked her lips. But not intimate, but as the mother kisses her son. Well, somewhere it is. And I can only think, did I finally help them at least something, all three? Women hooked the last period of my way ...
And one day the doctor came to me with Tanya.
“Well, Sasha,” said the doctor. - Get ready. You take off tomorrow. You have little time, almost no, but what we have left, we use to the full.
It turned out that Tanya was always looking for a clinic that was ready to operate on me, and found it.A genius in a French hospital received my X-rays and said that he would cope. That he did such operations is difficult, but successful. And that I have a chance to survive, to restore health and vision. The cost of the operation will cover the insurance. My metropolitan clinic had to check, believe, and with God let me go.
“He really operates according to some method that is unavailable to us,” my doctor admitted. And my hands felt the hot palm of my Tanya. It seemed to me that the darkness subsides, although it was still dark before my eyes.
... I hear the plane fly into the sky when I stand at the airport with Tanya. The operation is the day after tomorrow, and in an hour I and my bride will take a high flight, pushed by hope and feeling that has settled in the soul. Likely, for the first time. Petrovich and mother accompany me, they and everyone else want my most important victory. I mentally rise above the ground and see down the future the way I want to see it. Successful operation, return to sports, champion title. But in all these episodes, the beloved girl next to whom I kiss in the dark ...
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Well done. You have to start writing serious things. You have a talent
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Thanks, buddy))
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I am glad that I was mistaken about the teacher. Thanks for the story. She was afraid of too beautiful finale, you are clever, left innuendo, with faith in a happy future. Only 10.
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Thank you, dear colleague!)
I hope that GG will be OK.
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What a twist! When the teacher’s name was announced, I was even frightened, even though she was a worthy candidate. But I didn’t think about the “pie”, although in search of the mysterious “P”, I reread the first part about five times. But the tip was ... You would write detectives)))))
Thank you federer77, really thanks. Wonderful story. Very sensitive. Assessment, I think, it is possible and not to announce, and so it is understandable.
And the heroes came to life ...
And ... I hope GG will be fine. Only in the big sports it is not worth it back. In the end - he, as Inna confirmed, also had a literary talent, maybe he would make an outstanding writer))))
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If you would not give the reader a hint - it would be dishonest)). Thank you, colleague!).
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Buddy register for prose. There are many famous writers who also write interesting things and you need to grow very intelligent. Waiting for you big beautiful erotic romance.
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I will write). Erotic, so for sure).
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ten! Very unusually written. This thriller. I admit until the last moment did not expect who it will be.
However, if the hero survives, the path to the big sport is ordered to him. But sitting in front of a computer and writing stories, since the teacher keeps his writings, I am sure he will succeed! and a new star, but no longer in the sky of sports, but of literature, will certainly ascend!
I was lucky that I read the whole story entirely and did not have to sit and wonder who the stranger was in this letter: “P”
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Thank you, colleague Yura!)).
You, like the main character, also success in the works!
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Physical culture with sports
And writing,
As the evil one with the devil
Hand each other tight.
I don’t keep secrets from my friends
I declare directly and honestly:
- If it were not a famous poet,
I would have become a famous athlete! - In vain foolishness not toiling,
Raise your knees high:
I do all my life,
And not just seventeen moments! (parody of R. Rozhdestvensky)
And I did not hurry with my guessing, I felt that somewhere a trick, somewhere a dog slyly buried. It turns out in pie patty. Dexterously, you will tell nothing ...
But in general, for a cool detective character is not enough. Now, if the acquaintances of the letter “P” were 7-8 people, then Agatha Christie and Conan Doyle would be confounded forever.
If no joke, it turned out well (not counting the technical marriage), I even forgive the topic I hated. +10.
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Dear Critic, I can’t think up the same great poem too hard, but according to this modestly I will keep silent))). Although sport as well as literature is my weakness.
Thanks for the verse and rating!)).
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Two words: JUST MAGIC!
Hell, yes, I read a bunch of published books that didn’t hold out to allusions to this ...
After the first part it seemed much better? An there is where ...
10!
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Thank you, colleague!)
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Sneaks to the depths of the soul. It is probably ridiculous to read (about a parting), but an interesting plot, intrigue and realization with dichotomy, when we draw what we want to see. Thank you for your creativity. Keep it up ;)
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Thank you, dear).
I tried my best.
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Very good, 10 points. Not corny. Well, or almost not corny))) Insufficiency is also a plus.
P. S. “... You approach, as the father of my child ... No, do not think, you do not need to marry me and even recognize him as your own ... No obligations. Just help me get pregnant, nothing else is needed. Live your own life...".
You would know how many times you heard it))) For some reason, I always remember the slogan “Reweted the hut on the cat”, popular with us)))))
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But I did not hear from teachers?)))).
Thank you, Serge!))
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God forbid so starving))))
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I put 10 points, because the story is very good. The only thing that is not on that site posted. I came here to jerk off, and not fiction with a little admixture of sex to read. I think if you slightly change the vector (slightly remove the descriptions of sex), then you can upload to normal sites.
Well, in principle, as you wish.
Good luck.
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Thank).
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Sumptuously. 10 out of 10. Thank you.
I agree with nhk that the resource is not a bit of a story. But it is very good.
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Thank you). And about the resource - well, sex is!)).
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As they say, not having sex alone ... Well, it does not pull your story on a cool porno, this is a literary work with a soft erotic slant ...
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As mentioned above - I also read stories here to jerk off. But damn it the story really hooked me and I read it from cover to cover))) the plot and intrigue are just amazing. The author has tremendous respect. You have a huge talent. Yes, and sex was described very well, so it was not without jerking off))) except that the ending disappointed me a little. As it turned out with a hint of a happy ending. The author apparently wanted to please everyone) but much brighter and more interesting if this story would have a logical sad ending - tears of pain and grief and farewell to two loving people who didn’t really have time to find each other! Then the story could be called a masterpiece!
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Thanks for the rating and your opinion).
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Awesome story! 10. Of course, ideal for a handjob is not suitable, but it touches in full. For some reason, it immediately became clear to me who P. is. But still I read with pleasure the intricacies of life situations, human desires and descriptions of sex scenes.
Talent is obvious.
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Thank you, colleague)).
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It was worth a month and a half not to go to the site and here it is.
Vital, beautiful, sad ...
10 points, thanks a lot for the story.
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Thank)).
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I cried ... very moved ... such feelings to transfer the text through the message ... to my heart ... I experienced all the feelings of the liege, the flax ... tani ... mothers ... even Inn and the doctor .. I roar ... bravo ... let's encore!
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Thank you, Alp).
Encore will be the next story ...
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I burst into tears. It is touching. Unbanal plot, the ability to write erotic scenes, not having rolled into vulgarity. Impresses respect for women, women. A breath of fresh air among the "dirty bitches" and "be a man, to revenge her for a leftist not from a good life - make the moral and physical invalid." Thank.
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Glad if you liked it).
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I understand that I am writing late, since I have only found this story. Boy, girl, I don't know who you are. But you obviously have a gift. Your story has caused me feelings, experiences and even tears at the end. With me for the first time such that porn - the story causes something other than excitement. You're doing fine. I sincerely wish you success in literature, and indeed in life)
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Thank you).
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This site is not your level. A serious level of writing, plot, study is detailed enough, write novels or novels, I will read them with pleasure.
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Thank).
I would like to believe that someone needs it).
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Masterpiece.
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Thank you for reading, dear)
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From the heart! Thank you very much, just honey per capita
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Thank you, dear!)
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Thank you very much, very cool.
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And thank you.
It's nice when they read ...)
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